~Coming~ by hirataitokyo - Fanart Central

Chapters

1 - the meeting - Submitted 2006-04-05 Updated: 2006-04-05 - 135 views, 436 words, 2k
2 - Answers and rooms - Submitted 2006-04-07 Updated: 2006-04-07 - 83 views, 585 words, 3k
3 - ~Meeting~ - Submitted 2006-04-21 Updated: 2006-04-21 - 90 views, 424 words, 2k
4 - I wonder May-ling - Submitted 2006-04-29 Updated: 2006-04-29 - 81 views, 419 words, 2k
5 - the "dream guy" - Submitted 2006-04-05 Updated: 2006-04-05 - 85 views, 872 words, 15k
6 - Watch out for trees and - Submitted 2006-08-14 Updated: 2006-08-14 - 82 views, 1159 words, 6k
7 - When are we going shopping? - Submitted 2006-09-15 Updated: 2006-09-15 - 73 views, 953 words, 5k
8 - To the mall! - Submitted 2006-10-17 Updated: 2006-10-17 - 59 views, 517 words, 2k
9 - Hitaka's Group - Submitted 2006-10-18 Updated: 2006-10-18 - 62 views, 640 words, 3k
10 - Description!!! Buahahaha! - Submitted 2006-10-27 Updated: 2006-10-27 - 59 views, 1351 words, 6k
11 - Names, Ramen, and Nosebleeds - Submitted 2006-11-04 Updated: 2006-11-04 - 78 views, 1542 words, 8k
12 - First Day of School - Submitted 2007-05-04 Updated: 2007-05-04 - 53 views, 1457 words, 7k
13 - Revealed - Submitted 2008-04-01 Updated: 2008-04-01 - 11 views, 1454 words, 8k

31 Comments (Most recent 10). Show All

Sep 5, 2007 06:19 AM by: zerotimberwolf chapter 11

go ahead and work on the others
this chapter will have me cracking up 4 weeks

Sep 4, 2007 02:41 PM by: zerotimberwolf chapter 12

good story

and chapter 11 was the funnest fucking thing i ever read

Jan 6, 2007 10:24 AM by: Kittenrocks chapter 11

Coolness,love how the chapter ended

Oct 10, 2006 12:37 PM by: wolf74 chapter 0

Its good! and thanks for commenting on my story, Shino's old Friend. I wrote another chapter, so even if it says there is still only one chapter, there's 2

Oct 10, 2006 07:32 PM by: hirataitokyo chapter 0

Oh thank you so much!

Aug 19, 2006 10:28 PM by: Shadowkitsunedragon chapter 6

Hahaha,Â funny ^_^. Glad ya made more ^^.

Aug 20, 2006 08:54 AM by: hirataitokyo chapter 0

Yeah, me too... XD

Aug 11, 2006 04:41 AM by: Uchiha-Sasuke02 chapter 5

have to agree with shadow girl it's a great story and very unique :) plz make more

Aug 11, 2006 08:54 PM by: hirataitokyo chapter 0

thank you! Uchiha-Sasuke02! thanks for all of your comments!!! I will make more as soon as I can!

-simple tokyo

Aug 11, 2006 04:40 AM by: Uchiha-Sasuke02 chapter 4

i feel sorry for naruto Â¬_Â¬' mistakin seth for a girl

Aug 11, 2006 04:39 AM by: Uchiha-Sasuke02 chapter 3

cool ;)

Aug 11, 2006 04:39 AM by: Uchiha-Sasuke02 chapter 2

this is really good :)

Aug 11, 2006 04:37 AM by: Uchiha-Sasuke02 chapter 1

cool i like it sounds very realist coz sakura keeps on slapin naruto hahahaha

Aug 2, 2006 01:39 PM by: Shadowkitsunedragon chapter 5

Please make more it's AWSOME ^_____^!

Aug 2, 2006 01:35 PM by: Shadowkitsunedragon chapter 4

I Like this chapter its funny andÂ coolÂ ^______^.

Aug 2, 2006 01:33 PM by: Shadowkitsunedragon chapter 3

YAY THIS STORY IS AWSOME ^__^!

Aug 1, 2006 10:36 PM by: hirataitokyo chapter 0

I love getting comments from everyone!!! Thanks you guys!!!

Aug 1, 2006 10:32 PM by: Shadowkitsunedragon chapter 0

Please make more it's cool ^_^.

Aug 1, 2006 10:31 PM by: Shadowkitsunedragon chapter 2

It's a very very cool story ^___^!

Aug 1, 2006 10:27 PM by: Shadowkitsunedragon chapter 1

Cooooool ^__^.

Jun 14, 2006 10:49 AM by: Lex chapter 0

noooo..... i havent read this series and i dont wanna ruin things i havent read yet..... is this available in Manga form? if so i can order it!

Jun 14, 2006 12:21 AM by: pirichanshi chapter 0

I wish I could write as well as you!!! Waaahh!

Jun 13, 2006 08:08 AM by: Rayne06 chapter 0

I love it!!! Totally awesome!!! Great details!

Jun 10, 2006 11:44 AM by: hirataitokyo chapter 0

thanks you for commenting it means A LOT!

Jun 10, 2006 10:46 AM by: Shadow_Girl87 chapter 5

This is a REALLY good story. It's a great idea, Naruto characters coming to your house.

Jun 1, 2006 07:36 AM by: black_calm chapter 4

I agree with them both!!! Good Chapter!!!! BUT COME ON!!!!!! More info is necessary! PLZ PLZ PLZ write more!!!!

May 1, 2006 04:47 PM by: animefan204 chapter 4

Very Cool Chapter!!!^-^

Apr 23, 2006 03:08 PM by: anime_freakey4life chapter 3

keep going

Apr 21, 2006 06:54 PM by: hirataitokyo chapter 2

Fina-freakin-ly! i got some comments! go me! go me! ~does dance~

Apr 21, 2006 02:46 PM by: TailsNejiswife chapter 2

dat is a really great story

Apr 20, 2006 06:50 PM by: goofbuggy chapter 2

I like make more please

Apr 6, 2006 01:24 PM by: anime_freakey4life chapter 1

keep going