~Coming~ by hirataitokyo - Fanart Central

Chapters

1 - the meeting - Submitted 2006-04-05 Updated: 2006-04-05 - 128 views, 436 words, 2k
2 - Answers and rooms - Submitted 2006-04-07 Updated: 2006-04-07 - 77 views, 585 words, 3k
3 - ~Meeting~ - Submitted 2006-04-21 Updated: 2006-04-21 - 85 views, 424 words, 2k
4 - I wonder May-ling - Submitted 2006-04-29 Updated: 2006-04-29 - 75 views, 419 words, 2k
5 - the "dream guy" - Submitted 2006-04-05 Updated: 2006-04-05 - 81 views, 872 words, 15k
6 - Watch out for trees and - Submitted 2006-08-14 Updated: 2006-08-14 - 73 views, 1159 words, 6k
7 - When are we going shopping? - Submitted 2006-09-15 Updated: 2006-09-15 - 68 views, 953 words, 5k
8 - To the mall! - Submitted 2006-10-17 Updated: 2006-10-17 - 54 views, 517 words, 2k
9 - Hitaka's Group - Submitted 2006-10-18 Updated: 2006-10-18 - 54 views, 640 words, 3k
10 - Description!!! Buahahaha! - Submitted 2006-10-27 Updated: 2006-10-27 - 53 views, 1351 words, 6k
11 - Names, Ramen, and Nosebleeds - Submitted 2006-11-04 Updated: 2006-11-04 - 71 views, 1542 words, 8k
12 - First Day of School - Submitted 2007-05-04 Updated: 2007-05-04 - 47 views, 1457 words, 7k
13 - Revealed - Submitted 2008-04-01 Updated: 2008-04-01 - 6 views, 1454 words, 8k

31 Comments (Most recent 10). Show All

by: zerotimberwolf on Sep 5, 2007 06:19 AM chapter 11

go ahead and work on the others
this chapter will have me cracking up 4 weeks

by: zerotimberwolf on Sep 4, 2007 02:41 PM chapter 12

good story

and chapter 11 was the funnest fucking thing i ever read

by: Kittenrocks on Jan 6, 2007 10:24 AM chapter 11

Coolness,love how the chapter ended

by: wolf74 on Oct 10, 2006 12:37 PM chapter 0

Its good! and thanks for commenting on my story, Shino's old Friend. I wrote another chapter, so even if it says there is still only one chapter, there's 2

by: hirataitokyo on Oct 10, 2006 07:32 PM chapter 0

Oh thank you so much!

by: Shadowkitsunedragon on Aug 19, 2006 10:28 PM chapter 6

Hahaha,Â funny ^_^. Glad ya made more ^^.

by: hirataitokyo on Aug 20, 2006 08:54 AM chapter 0

Yeah, me too... XD

by: Uchiha-Sasuke02 on Aug 11, 2006 04:41 AM chapter 5

have to agree with shadow girl it's a great story and very unique :) plz make more

by: hirataitokyo on Aug 11, 2006 08:54 PM chapter 0

thank you! Uchiha-Sasuke02! thanks for all of your comments!!! I will make more as soon as I can!

-simple tokyo

by: Uchiha-Sasuke02 on Aug 11, 2006 04:40 AM chapter 4

i feel sorry for naruto Â¬_Â¬' mistakin seth for a girl

by: Uchiha-Sasuke02 on Aug 11, 2006 04:39 AM chapter 3

cool ;)

by: Uchiha-Sasuke02 on Aug 11, 2006 04:39 AM chapter 2

this is really good :)

by: Uchiha-Sasuke02 on Aug 11, 2006 04:37 AM chapter 1

cool i like it sounds very realist coz sakura keeps on slapin naruto hahahaha

by: Shadowkitsunedragon on Aug 2, 2006 01:39 PM chapter 5

Please make more it's AWSOME ^_____^!

by: Shadowkitsunedragon on Aug 2, 2006 01:35 PM chapter 4

I Like this chapter its funny andÂ coolÂ ^______^.

by: Shadowkitsunedragon on Aug 2, 2006 01:33 PM chapter 3

YAY THIS STORY IS AWSOME ^__^!

by: hirataitokyo on Aug 1, 2006 10:36 PM chapter 0

I love getting comments from everyone!!! Thanks you guys!!!

by: Shadowkitsunedragon on Aug 1, 2006 10:32 PM chapter 0

Please make more it's cool ^_^.

by: Shadowkitsunedragon on Aug 1, 2006 10:31 PM chapter 2

It's a very very cool story ^___^!

by: Shadowkitsunedragon on Aug 1, 2006 10:27 PM chapter 1

Cooooool ^__^.

by: Lex on Jun 14, 2006 10:49 AM chapter 0

noooo..... i havent read this series and i dont wanna ruin things i havent read yet..... is this available in Manga form? if so i can order it!

by: pirichanshi on Jun 14, 2006 12:21 AM chapter 0

I wish I could write as well as you!!! Waaahh!

by: Rayne06 on Jun 13, 2006 08:08 AM chapter 0

I love it!!! Totally awesome!!! Great details!

by: hirataitokyo on Jun 10, 2006 11:44 AM chapter 0

thanks you for commenting it means A LOT!

by: Shadow_Girl87 on Jun 10, 2006 10:46 AM chapter 5

This is a REALLY good story. It's a great idea, Naruto characters coming to your house.

by: black_calm on Jun 1, 2006 07:36 AM chapter 4

I agree with them both!!! Good Chapter!!!! BUT COME ON!!!!!! More info is necessary! PLZ PLZ PLZ write more!!!!

by: animefan204 on May 1, 2006 04:47 PM chapter 4

Very Cool Chapter!!!^-^

by: anime_freakey4life on Apr 23, 2006 03:08 PM chapter 3

keep going

by: hirataitokyo on Apr 21, 2006 06:54 PM chapter 2

Fina-freakin-ly! i got some comments! go me! go me! ~does dance~

by: TailsNejiswife on Apr 21, 2006 02:46 PM chapter 2

dat is a really great story

by: goofbuggy on Apr 20, 2006 06:50 PM chapter 2

I like make more please

by: anime_freakey4life on Apr 6, 2006 01:24 PM chapter 1

keep going