A young teenage girl is kidnapped because of her heratige and forced to become a Steil, an elemental being bound for war. Will she get away or adapt to the unatural life the Steils?
Aah, Jessica. I wouldn't call this character Sierra. She probably changed the name and the character herself. *cough- sierra doesn't have blue eyes remember?-cough* Yeeah.
So I take it you swaped your protagonist to Toren, right?
Ha, you already know I loved this chapter. So I don't have to tell you a thing. ^.~
Though, there were several typographical errors. Next time, before you submit a new chapter, you should rescan your story as to not make little mistakes. Such as misusing a word and spelling errors.
Oh me God! Sierra you freakin witch I love as a friend...the prolouge if freakin awesome! *remind myself 2 screech in joy when I see you in 1st period.* ^_^
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Submitted: 2006-04-22, Updated: 2006-04-26,
Chapters: 3, Size: 37K,
Words: 7078, Comments: 13,
Views: 370
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