unbeleivable :) You have a good way with words and i'm impressed... If only I hadn't lost the knack at writing poems... *sighs* I could write so much on my experiences...

That is so awesom...all ur poems rock so much...*favs* I'm speechless...

Hey sis. Awesome poem but never ever do sucide EVER!! No matter what happens you'll always be okay and I got ur back. Remember that. Keep ur spirits up and be happy! ^_^ XD

oh wow. that was one of the best poems you ever written.^^

That was a good poem sorry if you have Asthma sorry for my lousy spelling if i spelled anything wrong you are a very good poet

That was nice and very pretty and had a lot of soul

Okay now that was deceving but good you sis a really bad driver or what?

Okay i hope you don't ever do that that was a good poem but scary

Very sad, and yet again you put such a feel into it like I was really there and saw the whole thing.

You really have a gift for this.

Try writing happy Poems too, so you will feel better.^^

Oh I'm so sorry this is very sad.

But I wiil have to say it is very well put togather.

The way it is being said just makes it pop out.

You can feel what you are feel in the poem.

It's very sad yes.

But very good non the less.

I will give it two thumbs up.^_^

I hope things get better.

And I really love how you put such a feel into this, very nice.

*Faves*

How sad....but beautiful.

oh wow so beautiful.

omg this really did happen wow is she better now.

wow that was real deep. you don't really feel like that do you? do you want a hug?

im like u with the emotions and keepin them bottled up depression is one of my main emotions!!!! i was close 2 do 2 but ive decided 2 never ever think about that again because you may want your life to end the hurtin but your family will just start a worse hurting when youve gone!!!!
im just glad im alive so see everything TT.TT you poem was beautiful

Absolutely love it. I've always preferred night over day. It's very well written too. 

I really like it. I like poems that are more personal. I really made me stop and think, appreciate my life, and yet it's kinda heartbreaking to know you went through something like that. I guess I really don't know you, but I still care.

I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! FAVES!

WOW! I REALLY like it!XD

I like it!

I LOVE IT
*favs*

but seriously, dont kill yourself

Of COURSE there shall be comments!

*glare*

COMMENT PEOPLES!

*takes a deep breath*

Anyway, this poem was very beautiful. I love the night too- it's so peaceful. There was a lot of great imagery here. Awesome job!

This is actually kind of funny. The way you wrote it, seems kind of upbeat. The rhyme sceme or something. I dunno, but I like it!

*hug*

Hope your sister gets better at driving!

DON'T GO!!! That would be just so incredibly SAD.

*hug*

It's a great poem though. I definitely think you'd make a great author.

Any comments?

awwww im sorry %glomps*

its good but DONT DIE ITLL MAKE US SAD!!!!!!!

Im sorry about your sister n.n

Please don't Do that You'll break my heart T.T *hugs*

Oh my god!!!!!!!I died reading this.oO

O my God!! does your sister drive like a maniac?? Good poem!!

ur good at writing poems... NEVER COMMIT SUICIDE!!! IT WILL KILL YOU!!!