I understand want you mean in this piece.
I try to be as honest as I can,
But I do lie sometimes,
And the guilt follows me around like a shadow.
Constantly on my back,
Weighing me down.
I love your poems.
All of them.
They are very, very, well written.
I really like your pictures too.
Your an excellent artist,
In writing and drawing.
Keep up the good work!
I hate lying, especially when I get caught out. Sometime I can be a chronic liar other times I am very honest, it depends on what the situation. Yeah this poem does reflect the guilt.. my guilt because this poem was composed after I made a huge mess out of lying... oops O.o
Another poem greatly wroten. Lies are little buggers. -_- I hate lying, but sometimes i do it. On accident of course, when I'm in a tight spot. But this poem reflects the guilt that follows. Nicely written!! Great job!!^^
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Submitted: 2004-05-06, Updated: 2004-05-06,
Chapters: 1, Size: 1K,
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I try to be as honest as I can,
But I do lie sometimes,
And the guilt follows me around like a shadow.
Constantly on my back,
Weighing me down.
I love your poems.
All of them.
They are very, very, well written.
I really like your pictures too.
Your an excellent artist,
In writing and drawing.
Keep up the good work!