Chonicles of LuCana: Kalimna by lildragonboy

Jun 22, 2006 05:53 PM by: Astri chapter 11

Sala getting drunk? O.O Why does that sound like a bad thing? Cute, but bad?

Sudden note of curiosity. If Arkin kissed an elemental, what would happen? O.O

Well, anyway, looks like the scream was adequately weathered. Time to go on...
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Oh no! No more! TT.TT

Oh well, guess I'll just have to wait...

Jun 22, 2006 05:49 PM by: Astri chapter 10

Again it went all lined :perplexed: But I am liking Nadia more and more. Whacking Shima upside the head? Feel sorry for Shima, but can't help laughing in praise of Nadia. I can only imagine what she's gonna do when Shima tells her that Naku "died"...an A-bomb'll have NOTHING on her. The whole planet will probably hear her scream.

Let me fetch earplugs, and then I shall continue on...

Jun 22, 2006 05:46 PM by: Astri chapter 9

Somebody's played Secret of Mana! ^.^ I love that game. So that's who Sala is! Sala is so cute ^.^

More seriously, I loved this:
"This is a gateway to Ethia, the realm of eternity. Nothing is eternal,even the immortal gods have their downfalls, therefore nothing is here."

That was brilliant. Even my dad liked that line, and he's...difficult to please. I am still becoming more and more interested in this story with every chapter I read.

Time to become a bit more obsessed still...^.^

Jun 22, 2006 05:38 PM by: Astri chapter 8

I like these two. Very much ^.^ Was there a picture of Kreedeth in your gallery? I can't remember...I must go look again.

And on a lighter note still--Naku is not blind! Arkin IS alive! I knew it! Haha! Good, I liked Arkin ^.^ But I did not foresee the elder returning. Now I'm getting curious about him as well...

Well, your story just gets more and more interesting. Onwards yet again...

Jun 22, 2006 05:23 PM by: Astri chapter 7

Eep. Naku has been blinded? Owwwwww...makes my eyeballs hurt in sympathy --.--

So we have Forin the cat, Cian the mouse, Seth the dog, Sanja the unknown--or no, wait. There's a wolf that is not Sanja, so Seth must be the wolf and Sanja must be the dog--and Koronis the fox. Hmm...Koronis sounds hot. Evil, but hot ~.^

Now I'm curious as to what cavalry Natami brought, as well as just how Cian is now taking care of Tir/ Flip ^.^ Lessee then...

Jun 22, 2006 05:15 PM by: Astri chapter 6

I have a feeling Seth is the dog, but I could be wrong. Guess I have to see. Umm...nothing new to report. Some typos still, but like Trinity says, the plot is definitely heating up. Oh yeah...and Shima's mother is funny ^.^

Flip the page...

Jun 22, 2006 05:10 PM by: Astri chapter 5

How sad...Arkin left alone like that :depressed:. Yet I have a feeling we might not have seen quite the last of him...despite the rather painfully good description of the action he was in.

And the cat's identity remains unknown. Hmm. Curiouser and curiouser, as they say. Next!

Jun 22, 2006 04:25 PM by: Astri chapter 4

Kissing a fish. A soul-eater forced to kiss a fish. There is at least one gem like this in every chapter of your story. "Fish-lips"...ha! Arkin must've LOVED that.

Is it Flip or Tir?! I'm getting lost in the switch!

And the cat. I must learn more about this "cat"--on to the next chapter! After I eat!

Jun 22, 2006 04:20 PM by: Astri chapter 3

"A friend with a heavy metal object." Is anything better? ^.^ Although, if my best friend had a heavy metal object, we'd probably all be dead by now.

I wonder what happened to underline and grey half of your story? :perplexed: Hmm. Also, why is Naku now calling Tir Tir instead of Flip? @.@ Confusion...

Oh well. Doesn't mean it's not still a good story. Forward!

Jun 22, 2006 04:14 PM by: Astri chapter 2

More typos, but I loved the cheerleader line ^.^ After that two-toes thing, I gained a whole new inquisition towards what exactly Hexians are. For that matter, the two toes made me think of Two-Toed Tom from the Abarat books. Isn't it weird how different people can pick out such different things from a story like yours? Star Ocean (^.^) Chrono Cross, Abarat...

Did you mean to call Flip Tir at that one point soon after we meet him, or was that a typo? Just curious...

Onwards!

Jun 22, 2006 04:06 PM by: Astri chapter 1

Ah...at last I get to read your story, and actually learn a little about the characters I have seen so often. Although...is there a picture of these two? I need to go check...

Not to be redundant, but I agree with Trinity_Fire and Midnight_Chaos. I like this beginning--you get a good feel of the characters here--and although there are a few typos, indeed, nothing major. Your Leena reminds me of Chrono Cross Leena--I can totally see her bashing Naku `round the head with a besom. Fun images ^.^

Well, onto the next chapter!

Jun 5, 2006 04:05 PM by: Trinity_Fire chapter 11

Oooh, so very very interesting! Though, there are now so many characters I might need to start writing them down! XD
Ooh, so lovely. Oh, and I never mentioned this before, but I really like the names you use. pretty pretty named, yup, but not too outlandishly fantasy, y'know?
Lovely. Keep it up! ^____^-

May 10, 2006 10:00 AM by: Trinity_Fire chapter 10

Hhm, rather short chapter, but very nice. :3 Wai, such nice dialogue! And so so very very interesting. :) 3 days, 10 chapters! just unbelievable. O_O
Sugooooooooooooooi!

May 9, 2006 03:16 PM by: Trinity_Fire chapter 9

Ahahaha, beardless sneezing gnomes. X)
Wai. I luvs this! so very very interesting, with all of these different and unique ideas playing through it all...
Lovely~!! I love the mass updates you have. :D
::dies:: need more!

May 9, 2006 03:15 PM by: Trinity_Fire chapter 8

Ooooooh, more characters, and more buildup! O_______O
So very very interesting~! Wai! Flip, Naku, Arkin, I wuvs them all!!! yes'm! X)
Wai~! continue~! I'll read every chance I get. :)

May 8, 2006 04:03 PM by: Trinity_Fire chapter 7

Wai! O_____________O
The plot thickens further!! So very very interesting!!!! .__. I need more. wai.
Cooooooooontinue~!! Luvs it all! X)

May 8, 2006 04:01 PM by: Trinity_Fire chapter 6

O_________O
Cian! I'm not sure which version of him I like better, they're both pretty cool. XDDDDD Yaaaaaaaay for pixie magic sticks. O___O I wanna get high on faery. XDDDD
Wai~! poor, poor Flip~! And soft little hints of yaoi! yes'm! so very very nice! XD
The plot's really heating up! so interesting! Wai~! Continue, please. :3 ::bobs head up and down::
Sugoi!!!

May 8, 2006 03:55 PM by: Trinity_Fire chapter 5

Awwwwwwwwwww poor Arkin~!! and he's so sweet tooo!! XD [well, by my standards, anyone can be sweet. X) ]
Wai~!! Lovely! You've got some pretty nice action scenes there, I really like how things changed! O__________O
So very very interesting. Continue~!!!! XD

May 8, 2006 03:52 PM by: Trinity_Fire chapter 4

Ahahaha, little teddy bear of a brother! XDDD Shima, too!
Wai, I luvs your story~!! The characters, they're all so wonderful, and the plotline... it all seems pretty well thought-out to me. :3
Wai~! So very ver interesting. .__. And I luuuuuvs your updates! keep it up, awesome! XD

May 7, 2006 10:53 AM by: Trinity_Fire chapter 3

Ahahaha, and the characters begin to join up.
Mmmn, poor tir being seen as girl again... ...[though somewhere inside, I think he enjoys it XD] and frying pans! yay! XD
::does a dance, then falls down::
Need mroe~! I love how you've got humor and seriousness and plotline and good characters all bundled together, so wonderful~! ^________^-
Lovely story~! wai! this is going in the favs. You keep it up, you. ;)

May 7, 2006 10:49 AM by: Trinity_Fire chapter 2

Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaai~! I knew tir would be coming in somewhere! Sweet! Wai~!
So wonderful, now Tir be in story. hehehe. :3
And poor little Naku! Can't believe they left him! Wha!
::bustles off::
What an interesting story! Keep it up! Ooooh I need more! XD

May 7, 2006 10:45 AM by: Trinity_Fire chapter 1

Yay!!! Nice! I really really like the feel of the story, and the charries here and how they all act.
What a cute lil boy Naku is... tehehehehe. :3 Wai~!
And such of a wonderful plotline! I see a bit of star ocean in here, and it makes me happy. hehehehe.
Wai~!
3 chappies too! ::bustles off to read more::

May 7, 2006 12:01 AM by: Midnight_Chaos chapter 3

That was a great chapter!!! Really interesting, especially with your new character Arkin. So he's joined the little pilgrimage now? That's cool!! Kinda creepy how he devours ppls souls, but it's an awesome idea. I hope you continue this!!
~Corad~ ^-^ *favs*

May 6, 2006 11:37 PM by: Midnight_Chaos chapter 2

It's getting really interesting now!! Poor Naku though...falling off a steep cliff!! Poor thing. Lol, the scene when he woke up beside Tani reminded me of Fayt and Meena ^-^ Anyhow, onto chapter...3?...I'm wondering what's gonna happen now with Flip and Naku. Hehe, see ya in the next chapter!!

May 6, 2006 11:09 PM by: Midnight_Chaos chapter 1

Nice start!! I loved it lol. Shima and Naku have great characterisation and the description you've used is really detailed. The plot so far is awesome too. There are only a couple of typos, but nothing major lol. On to the next chapter!! WHHOOOHHH!!! *runs off screaming like a loony*
~Corad~ ^o^