Betrayal by Summer_Winds - Fanart Central

Dec 23, 2006 10:15 AM by: AmmyK chapter 5

I luved it but this chap was way too short. funny, but short. WRITE MORE!!! EVERYONE LUVS YOUR STORIES! They have real life stuations.......IN A COOL WAY!!!!!!. I am not gonna beg. 10 min later. (On my knees saying "Oh please writer more. Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaassssssssseeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!) end of freakiness. ;)

Dec 23, 2006 11:18 AM by: Summer_Winds chapter 0

dont worry i have been working on them

Dec 23, 2006 10:09 AM by: AmmyK chapter 4

Wow, very detailed. i still luv it. again, write more!!!!

Dec 23, 2006 10:07 AM by: AmmyK chapter 3

Still luv iut. write more please. xtremely enjoyable.

Dec 23, 2006 10:05 AM by: AmmyK chapter 2

i still luv it!!!!!!!!! write a lot more. *HINT HINT*

Dec 23, 2006 10:03 AM by: AmmyK chapter 1

true luv. lemme guess. in this story, kouga plays good guy right? I luve inuyasha but, this, this is a real stupid dog we're dealing with here.

Sep 18, 2006 03:38 PM by: Momo-chan chapter 5

WRITE MORE PLEASE!!! *my best chibi eyes* please, i wanna read more O.o

Sep 18, 2006 03:22 PM by: Momo-chan chapter 1

cute ^^... poor kagome.....baka inu >:(

Sep 11, 2006 07:21 PM by: inuyasha_naruto_lover chapter 5

:O wooooooowwwww write more please!

Aug 22, 2006 10:37 AM by: 1_lover_of_the_fluff chapter 0

yay!

Aug 22, 2006 10:36 AM by: 1_lover_of_the_fluff chapter 5

i didnt know that it was possible to write that many 'i wanna know!'s in a row. but seriously, write more.

Aug 1, 2006 06:44 PM by: Chibi-chan chapter 5

OMG, I should kill YOU!!!! you have to put the next chap quick, I wanna knowI wanna knowI wanna knowI wanna knowI wanna knowI wanna knowI wanna knowI wanna knowI wanna knowI wanna knowI wanna knowI wanna knowI wanna knowI wanna knowI wanna knowI wanna knowI wanna knowI wanna knowI wanna knowI wanna knowI wanna knowI wanna knowI wanna knowI wanna knowI wanna knowI wanna knowI wanna knowI wanna knowI wanna knowI wanna knowI wanna knowI wanna knowI wanna knowI wanna knowI wanna knowI wanna knowI wanna knowI wanna knowI wanna knowI wanna knowI wanna knowI wanna knowI wanna knowI wanna knowI wanna knowI wanna knowI wanna knowI wanna knowI wanna knowI wanna knowI wanna knowI wanna knowI wanna knowI wanna knowI wanna knowI wanna knowI wanna knowI wanna knowI wanna know

FAST!!!! please? *chibi eyes* sniff sniff, tell me when u do it

Jul 3, 2006 08:08 PM by: sasukeluver chapter 5

CONTINUE!!!I'm not a freak who sits in a coner chanting continue....five min. later.(Sitting in dark corner chanting continue over and over.)

-:- Blue -:-

Jul 2, 2006 02:26 PM by: bigguy chapter 0

great story please continue the story

May 11, 2006 01:43 PM by: Chibi-chan chapter 4

oh and thanks for the dedication, I just notice it.XD
and keep doing the lemon cut, I don't write lemons and I'm 16 but I do read some when the story is good. I mean the base of the story....

May 11, 2006 12:48 PM by: Summer_Winds chapter 4

I could have added somthing sexual but u see im 12 so i put my sick thoughts to the back of my head... for once XD

May 11, 2006 12:23 PM by: Chibi-chan chapter 4

O.o oooooookkkkk. nice way to cut a lemon XD. need another chap soon, also from your other story

May 10, 2006 02:29 PM by: Chibi-chan chapter 3

ok now im confused, I'm not a kikyo or Kagome fan but now I don't know who is the bad one...anyway, good story, love it and I hope that Kagome and Koga stay together.

May 8, 2006 04:38 PM by: Chibi-chan chapter 2

Perfect. Just need to make longer chaps.
*favs*

May 8, 2006 04:35 PM by: Chibi-chan chapter 1

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
HOW CUTE!!!!

It makes me feel something weird inside of me ☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺