XD This one was very good. You captured Shikamaru's character really well! And Sasuke was so adorable! <3 Like a shy, embaressed schoolgirl . . . with a wicked punch. o.O;; XD Excellent job. This is definately a fave! ^^

wow!!! you should write more like this with Shika! you're great at this. you do sould like him! go shika!

OOOOOH! You're good. Shikamaru's so cool, it's really too bad he got hit by the person who owns just about every bit of my hate............THE UCHIHA BOY MUST DIE!!!!!
~The Goddess has spoken  

your a really great writer! i love your stories even if they are sasuXnaru. actualy i dont have anything against them in fact i read a lot of them. it's just I'm a narutoXhinata fan to the death! (^_^) i dont know how many times ive said that. oh well.

YAY! This one is as good as the story "I Was Always Watching You"! I like them both! You are a good writer!Please write more Naruto fanfics!^_^

I liked that story, it was interesting and you're good at Shika-kun's additude. I like the 'Why do I have ot have such a vivid imagination' part, that was funny. I need to get better at writing fanfics. Oh, well, See-ya! *favs*

Yes, there needs to be more fan fictions staring Shikamaru! More, I say!

THIS IS AWSOMENESS!!!! you MUST continue writing about the sasuke+naruto stuff!! *O*

hmm. i'm thinkin that maybe you were shika-kun in another life? you sound just like him..or i guess waht he'd sound like..nice ficcie it was cute ^^!