wow that's AWESOME!!! yeah, we should so get our chars to meet. the world that jack came from does sound similar to the Dygan's homeworld...hum de hum hum...

MORE PLEEZ!!!!

:O Awesome :D

lol cant wait for the next chapter!!!

this thing really doesn't like me. i have tried to submit this chapter in so many different format but it keeps removing my spaces and and stuff like that. grrrr. this is the best looking i can seem to get it he he.
enjoy 

..im confused sortta....IWANT MORE

Oooh Lol I love it, I cant wait for more! Pleaaaseee Lol

OOOH 'ECK!!! is it getting hot in here...???!!!

LOVE IT it's so filled with emotion, and so well written!!! can't wait for more.

hm...metrical...good word!!

I LOVE IT!!! WRITE MORE!!! MORE I TELL YOU!!! would you believe it, before i cut my hair so short, it was also long and brown...and i had freckles, and hazel eyes, randomly!!! buuuut i was a bit on the...curvy side shall we say! lol. tammi in my story's real name is...SAMMI!!! THE ONE WHO STOLE ROSS!!! GRRRRRRRRR!!!! *with teeth and claws*