War by Little_miss_angel

, Submitted: 2006-07-26, Updated: 2006-07-26, Chapters: 1, Size: 1K, Words: 142, Comments: 7, Views: 165
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This is yet another poem about something that everyone fears so please listen to what I write and I hope u like it R&R ^_^

7 Comments

by: RumikoAkura on Aug 4, 2006 03:53 AM chapter 1

That's really cool. My brother was a soldier (luckily, he's out of the Navy now) but my sister's husband is still in the army, and he's a battlefield technician. He got sent to Afghanistan 3 days after they got married, but he's home safe now.
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It's always nice to know, and quite ironic to know, that the younger generation have more sense than the elder. Seriously, we should rule the country.

by: RikusShadow on Jul 31, 2006 06:46 AM chapter 1

wow that poem really TOUCHED THE SOUL! *sniffle* i wish i could write poetry! lol i tried once and it sucked really bad but it was just for a joke.

by: jamacainprincess on Jul 30, 2006 11:40 AM chapter 1

omg u should write poems more often this is really sad i love it *+favs*

by: AmayaAsakura on Jul 29, 2006 02:23 PM chapter 1

You have a strong Talent For writing Poems! ^_^ I really loved this one! It was really Sad though :( *fave* Keep Writing! ^_^

by: KillerPanda on Jul 28, 2006 07:16 PM chapter 1

Oh wow!*Sniff sniff*That's so so sad.Waaaaaaaaaaaaaa!What a good job!Your so awesome at poems!

by: inuyasha_naruto_lover on Jul 27, 2006 02:18 PM chapter 1

dude, this is making me almost come to tears!
And I NEVER almost come to tears!
this is awesome!

you are very good at poems!!! -favs-

by: Sparkly_Bubble_Butterfly on Jul 26, 2006 01:29 PM chapter 1

Wow. Awesome. You might as well have posted it since you didn't get to read it in the talent show. And even though I've said this before, it was amazing.