Vampiress by demonangelgirl

Chapters

1 - The Vampiress - Submitted 2006-07-30 Updated: 2006-07-30 - 128 views, 196 words, 0k
2 - Trager - Submitted 2006-07-30 Updated: 2006-07-30 - 114 views, 475 words, 2k
3 - Lost & Found - Submitted 2006-07-30 Updated: 2006-07-30 - 94 views, 1562 words, 8k
4 - Shineria's home - Submitted 2006-07-30 Updated: 2006-07-30 - 87 views, 967 words, 4k
5 - Feelings - Submitted 2006-08-30 Updated: 2006-08-30 - 89 views, 294 words, 1k
6 - Journey begun-Quick stop - Submitted 2006-09-18 Updated: 2006-09-18 - 85 views, 879 words, 4k
7 - Again, a stop - Submitted 2006-11-03 Updated: 2006-11-03 - 79 views, 731 words, 3k

8 Comments

Jan 8, 2007 06:17 PM by: IloveTyLee chapter 1

wow thats good

Oct 21, 2006 01:06 PM by: xXMissMurderXx chapter 3

Wow This is well written! ^_^ You Did yet another amazing job with the dialoge! and the Discription was Very Detailed! =D I'm Falling in love with this story haha ^_^

*fave*

Oct 21, 2006 01:31 PM by: demonangelgirl chapter 0

Thanks!! And I promise I'll work on it sunday. agh I hope I can. I've got so many things to do on here, and going on out in the real world. >.<

Oct 21, 2006 01:02 PM by: xXMissMurderXx chapter 2

I Agree with _theater_freak_147 ^_^ You Did an amazing job with the Dialoge! =)

Oct 21, 2006 12:58 PM by: xXMissMurderXx chapter 1

Hmm It's Kinda Short but very detailed! ^_^ You did a great Job! ^_^

Oct 7, 2006 10:07 AM by: jisue22 chapter 1

I like to write stories but I'm not good at it~
nice story~
I'll read it more~
favs

Oct 7, 2006 10:18 AM by: demonangelgirl chapter 0

I'm sure you would be fine at writing stories, if you really tried. and thank you, thanks for commenting =D

Aug 24, 2006 08:22 PM by: demonangelgirl chapter 0

Oh wow, thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it. and I will try to read your story too, when I can. I'm traveling alot at the moment.

Aug 24, 2006 07:28 PM by: _theater_freak_147 chapter 2

Oh I love how you use a lot of dialoge instead of describing what they say!

Aug 24, 2006 07:26 PM by: _theater_freak_147 chapter 1

I love the discription! Have you ever read Twilight? It is about a vampire too! Really good! Hey will you check out my story called Angel...ish? I would love it if you commented on it! I like to write more than I like to draw as well!