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Finding a Heart of Snow

An original short story I must thank my Advanced Composition teacher for inspiring me to write (thank you, Mrs. Lopez! ^.^) A story about a snow spirit who is searching for the communal heart of the snow spirits, and needs a human's help to rescue it.

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Freezing Temperatures
Submitted: August 3, 2006 • Updated: September 10, 2006
Word count: 11102 • Size: 59k • Comments: 4 • views: 344

Chapter 2 - Absolute Zero
Submitted: August 3, 2006 • Updated: September 10, 2006
Word count: 12494 • Size: 66k • Comments: 3 • views: 379

Comments

Comments (8)

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InternalDemons on July 26, 2007, 10:58:17 AM

InternalDemons on (Chapter: 2)
InternalDemonsgreat ending. me luffs this story. seriously. *cannot express love of this story* argh! i really really really really really love this story. all the characters, their personalities, everything. tis wonderful!

InternalDemons on July 26, 2007, 10:28:31 AM

InternalDemons on (Chapter: 1)
InternalDemons0.0 this is very very very good! i love how you do details but don't go overboard with them. i love this story! *faves*

omiyage_umi on November 5, 2006, 5:08:57 AM

omiyage_umi on (Chapter: 1)
omiyage_umiWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW... it'll take a miracle before i can write like that but i have now commented on yet another story yay. I'm on a roll. Keep at it, cuz your fics just don't let me want to stop reading. if it were not for the fact that i keep my eye on the clock i would keep reading.

Trinity_Fire on August 29, 2006, 5:29:42 AM

Trinity_Fire on (Chapter: 2)
Trinity_FireWaaaaaaaaaaaai, I love this~!!! Wai!!!
Beautiful. ;o;

I like emotional Shirai.
I like Mar... ...Mar.
I love the way this all played out, and the details, and all that happened, and the awesome ending~!!!!!

I also kinda really like the luck spirit.

...8D

Augh. All in all an awesome, amazing, undeniably beautiful story.

I'm going to go sit and stare at the screen now.
Or perhaps reread it. O_O
ZOHYMGOD LOVE.

Trinity_Fire on August 29, 2006, 5:01:46 AM

Trinity_Fire on (Chapter: 1)
Trinity_FireO_O Awesome.
Cliche? You've broken the cliche. This is so completely original and awesome. Snow spirits, hearts, emotions... it's stunningly put together, and it's anything but the orginary read.

Love.
I think we should just have Deffy talk for the both of us. 8D

Luvluv.
Need chapter 2. NOW. I'm goin'. :D

Nilitac_Tesgrah on August 24, 2006, 10:04:05 PM

Nilitac_Tesgrah on (Chapter: index)
Nilitac_TesgrahThis is one of your best works yet, Ian! :D The whole thing is!