Naruto, Kiba, Sasuke, Shikamaru, and Neji are best friends. But what heppens when the element of romance gets thrown into the mix? sorry not yaoi. Naruhina, Sasusaku, Nejitenten, not sure who shika gets yet.
OMG!! and Haku was in it too!!! "...dude that's a guy" HURRAY FOR HAKU'S PRETTINESS!! <3 And he's with Zabuza too! I blame you for getting me into that ^^ not that I mind... you know... *twirls a strand of hair* they're just perfect together!!!! >.< I'm so glad you put them in this chapter too ^^
YEAH BABY!! BRING OUT HINATA!!!! amazing chapter!!! >.< as usual. Your chapters are always great!! it was hilarious too. "Hey dobe. Love you too.." I laughed SOOO MUCH at that part!! I was able to picture Naruto just throw a phrase at Sasuke and then completely ignore him and start jumping up and down talking reallyfastinanexcitedvoice. ^^ I can't wait for the next chapter!!!! I'm going to start jumping up and down myself. XD
OMG!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!! XD hurray for hinata's cuteness!!! that was so worth waiting!! awwww *produces high pitched squeal I can just picture her in the skirt, TOO CUUUUUUTE!! that was so cool! temari reading Inu-yasha, you know the more I think about it, the more it seems like it could happen, I don't know why, she seems to be like a person who would like reading it, and I can so see her wearing jeans with a whole on the knees and stuff, wow, that seems so temari-like!! AMAZING!! T.T I'm not even kidding about that!! oh, and I like how you followed hinata, that was cool :) YAY!!!! TEMARIXSHIKA WINSSS!! *punches air dramatically* boo yeah grand-ma!! WOO HOO!!! overall, this chapter was great!! abd KEEP UP THE GREAT STORIES!!!! XDD
=) yay, I like this so far! Now write more, and dont procrastinate! I want some really great romance to happen!!! you should totally make Hinata and Naruto be together forever!!!!
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I luffles this! I soooo knew that was Temari when I got ta the ponytails part. Yay! ShikaTema!!!!! That is the best match up evah! Although I'm a little surprised that no one's expiremented with the ShikaIno pair.... I wanna see one with that. *trots off with a wolfish air*
YAY!!!! KAWAII NARUHINA!!!!! That was an awesome chapter. So cute! Once you said the four ponytails thing, I was like "Yep, that's Temari." Mmmkay, keep going! Don't take as long on the 3rd chapter! ^_^
*Scampers off*
Please write more! I think there should be a little bit of both for ShikamaruXIno and ShikamaruXTemari... I mean thier both blond, fiesty, and strong! It doesn't make much of a difference! I love the story! Keep up the good writing!
AmmyK
well well it's looking pretty good. yay Hinata finally broke from her shell of shyness. ahem anyway as for who to pair Shikamaru with...my suggestions are either Temari or Ino.
OOO! I VOTE FOR SHIKATEM!!! WHEE!!! Okay, awesome story, I LOVED the beginning. XD Yeah, I'm with ss125, I thought the beginning was real too at first. Then I was all nah its probably a video game. Anyways, I can't wait for you to update and yeah, Bye!
I LOVE IT!! its great how all the guys are friends, even NEJI *gasp!* :O and i like it how hinata is not that shy anymore and sticks up for herself to neji!! its so cool, lol that was really funny when at the beginning naruto and iba were playing the video game and naruto had the entire house set with bombs and explosives, ^^ i actually thought it was for real...somehow in my distorted mind XD i think shikamaru should be with temari ^^ keep up with the great stories!!
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Submitted: 2006-08-04, Updated: 2007-07-27,
Chapters: 3, Size: 50K,
Words: 9573, Comments: 39,
Views: 1501
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