Wow... I hardly ever cry over poems...
but this is beautifully tragic in so many ways I couldn't help it....

*sniffles* so sad...I cry (3 seconds later I start bawling like a baby) WHAT? Ohh sorry......I am still a little crazy from last night.... Okay first I remember being asleep and all of a sudden there was a big boom in my dream......I woke up and I was on the floor.......My shoulder really hurts so I better wrap up the typing.....yep.......

It is a very nice sad well written poem but you need to space a little bit more otherwise it's great

*SOBS*This is he most depressing thing I ever read!I feel so sorry  bean.

thats so sad, poor tyler and bean!

awwww thats so sad :'( it's an emotinal poem like bean said it's great

WOW.....THAT WAS VERY EMOTINAL FOR ME GURL...I MUST TELL U I DID CRY! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS AMAZING POEM...I REALLY REALLY LOVED IT! THANK YOU SO MUCH!!

::FAVES::

XXBEANXX