That's great, only that their supposed to be seperated into three lines,5 syllables on top, 7 syllables in the middle, and 5 syllables at the bottom.

thanks!nuts,when i looked in the book it was like this,you must know you're haikus!

Your welcome! And I do, thank you, but this is a really pretty Haiku, even though it's out of order. ^_^

(Note: When Japanese Haikus are translated to English, they aren't in the 3 line order, so it must have been a Japanese Haiku translated into English that you were looking at.)