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RANDOM YGO STUFF THAT I WROTE! >_< by IluvAtem
View as PDF, Submitted: 2006-11-01, Updated: 2007-07-04, Chapters: 39, Size: 148K, Words: 32362, Comments: 171, Views: 1821   
Anime/Manga (0) > Yu-Gi-Oh! series (1984) > Crossovers (179)
meh...
Chapters
1 - blah...blah...blah... - Submitted 2006-11-01 Updated: 2006-11-01 - 160 views, 654 words, 3k
2 - *yawn* -_-' - Submitted 2006-11-02 Updated: 2006-11-02 - 102 views, 437 words, 2k
3 - BREAKING THE HABIT SONG FIC! - Submitted 2006-11-02 Updated: 2006-11-02 - 114 views, 696 words, 3k
4 - LOOOOOOONG chapter?! - Submitted 2006-11-30 Updated: 2006-11-30 - 110 views, 722 words, 3k
5 - HE SLEEPS NAKED?! O_O - Submitted 2006-12-02 Updated: 2006-12-02 - 139 views, 682 words, 3k
6 - sleepy... - Submitted 2006-12-02 Updated: 2006-12-02 - 86 views, 390 words, 2k
7 - um... - Submitted 2006-12-03 Updated: 2006-12-03 - 84 views, 404 words, 2k
8 - HIC! - Submitted 2006-12-03 Updated: 2006-12-03 - 98 views, 378 words, 1k
9 - *cough, shuffle* - Submitted 2006-12-05 Updated: 2006-12-05 - 99 views, 463 words, 2k
10 - random chappie, set after the final ep of YGO - Submitted 2006-12-09 Updated: 2006-12-09 - 92 views, 697 words, 3k
11 - getting away - Submitted 2006-12-10 Updated: 2006-12-10 - 92 views, 442 words, 2k
12 - Too far away! - Submitted 2006-12-10 Updated: 2006-12-10 - 91 views, 669 words, 3k
13 - Random X-Men-like stuff >_> - Submitted 2006-12-16 Updated: 2006-12-16 - 82 views, 673 words, 3k
14 - ...o-o...! - Submitted 2006-12-18 Updated: 2006-12-18 - 85 views, 678 words, 3k
15 - Every time we touch - Submitted 2006-12-20 Updated: 2006-12-20 - 86 views, 492 words, 2k
16 - Bad luck, Pharaoh! - Submitted 2006-12-22 Updated: 2006-12-22 - 107 views, 750 words, 3k
17 - KUNG FU PHARAOH! HI-YA! - Submitted 2006-12-25 Updated: 2006-12-25 - 92 views, 586 words, 3k
18 - OW! - Submitted 2006-12-29 Updated: 2006-12-29 - 83 views, 439 words, 2k
19 - randomness - Submitted 2007-01-01 Updated: 2007-01-01 - 91 views, 498 words, 2k
20 - Tea's secret - Submitted 2007-01-01 Updated: 2007-01-01 - 93 views, 588 words, 3k
21 - *shrugs* (lack of better title) - Submitted 2007-01-04 Updated: 2007-01-04 - 80 views, 633 words, 3k
22 - Don'y give up - Submitted 2007-01-16 Updated: 2007-01-16 - 89 views, 665 words, 3k
23 - EEK! VAMPIRES! - Submitted 2007-01-16 Updated: 2007-01-16 - 100 views, 680 words, 3k
24 - blood! - Submitted 2007-02-14 Updated: 2007-02-14 - 80 views, 910 words, 4k
25 - final chapter of vamps! - Submitted 2007-02-14 Updated: 2007-02-14 - 94 views, 882 words, 4k
26 - umm...i dunno... - Submitted 2007-02-15 Updated: 2007-02-15 - 93 views, 874 words, 4k
27 - Egyptian-y chapter - Submitted 2007-03-12 Updated: 2007-03-12 - 97 views, 817 words, 4k
28 - Duality - Submitted 2007-04-02 Updated: 2007-04-02 - 92 views, 1184 words, 5k
29 - Haunted - Submitted 2007-04-05 Updated: 2007-04-05 - 76 views, 1018 words, 5k
30 - Bat Country - Submitted 2007-04-09 Updated: 2007-04-09 - 67 views, 1567 words, 7k
31 - Coming Undone - Submitted 2007-04-14 Updated: 2007-04-14 - 69 views, 1795 words, 9k
32 - Anubi - Submitted 2007-04-28 Updated: 2007-04-28 - 88 views, 1230 words, 6k
33 - Hybrid Theory - Submitted 2007-05-20 Updated: 2007-05-20 - 70 views, 1638 words, 8k
34 - Leave Out All The Rest - Submitted 2007-05-20 Updated: 2007-05-20 - 75 views, 1239 words, 6k
35 - Highschool Never Ends - Submitted 2007-06-02 Updated: 2007-06-02 - 67 views, 1880 words, 9k
36 - The Sharpest of Lives - Submitted 2007-06-02 Updated: 2007-06-02 - 66 views, 1015 words, 5k
37 - Nemo - Submitted 2007-06-02 Updated: 2007-06-02 - 65 views, 1422 words, 7k
38 - Intro to a new story!!! - Submitted 2007-07-04 Updated: 2007-07-04 - 71 views, 393 words, 1k
39 - *Insert wolf howl here* - Submitted 2007-07-04 Updated: 2007-07-04 - 64 views, 1182 words, 5k

150 Comments (Most recent 10). Show All
perfectpureblood
Jul 16, 2007 12:40 PM by: perfectpureblood chapter 39
awesome!!! love it!! great descriptions and ideas!!
 
IluvAtem
Jul 17, 2007 11:35 AM by: IluvAtem chapter 0
Thanks again! :)
 
perfectpureblood
Jul 24, 2007 03:29 AM by: perfectpureblood chapter 0
np! ^^
 
perfectpureblood
Jul 16, 2007 10:39 AM by: perfectpureblood chapter 38
^^ sounds good!
 
IluvAtem
Jul 16, 2007 11:51 AM by: IluvAtem chapter 0
Thankies! *huggle*
 
perfectpureblood
Jul 16, 2007 11:57 AM by: perfectpureblood chapter 0
^^ your welcome! :)
 
yafoolin
Jul 4, 2007 01:01 PM by: yafoolin chapter 39
Poor Atem
 
IluvAtem
Jul 5, 2007 10:27 AM by: IluvAtem chapter 0
Thanks for the comments!
 
yafoolin
Jul 4, 2007 12:58 PM by: yafoolin chapter 38
Poor Atemu he cant escape the girls
 
IluvAtem
Jul 5, 2007 10:26 AM by: IluvAtem chapter 0
I know. That inclues us! *chases Atem*
 
fairywarrioress
Jul 4, 2007 10:58 AM by: fairywarrioress chapter 39
Awww!! Poor Atem!
Dont worry Tea will make him feel better! ^^

Neat chapters - i look forward to your next update ;D
 
IluvAtem
Jul 5, 2007 10:25 AM by: IluvAtem chapter 0
Thankies! *hug*
 
perfectpureblood
Jun 5, 2007 01:20 PM by: perfectpureblood chapter 37
wow. that chapter was awesome!!! I really loved it!! keep it up!! ^^
 
IluvAtem
Jun 6, 2007 07:38 AM by: IluvAtem chapter 0
thank you! ^________^
 
perfectpureblood
Jun 6, 2007 08:17 AM by: perfectpureblood chapter 0
^^ your welcome! :D
 
IluvAtem
Jun 6, 2007 07:41 AM by: IluvAtem chapter 0
Oh! I did a pic of it!
 
perfectpureblood
Jun 6, 2007 08:18 AM by: perfectpureblood chapter 0
oh! you did? i'll have a look at your gallery! ^^
 
perfectpureblood
Jun 5, 2007 01:16 PM by: perfectpureblood chapter 36
Tea is a cat?? Atem is a wolf?? omg!! awesome chapter!! :D cliffie!!
 
IluvAtem
Jun 6, 2007 07:38 AM by: IluvAtem chapter 36
lol yup! :)
 
perfectpureblood
Jun 6, 2007 08:16 AM by: perfectpureblood chapter 0
^^ :D
 
perfectpureblood
Jun 5, 2007 01:14 PM by: perfectpureblood chapter 35
haha! love this bit! "Atem, A, Ren, F". "HA!-" I slap a hand over my mouth. :D lol!! and "Atem's got girl's hair!" Kaylee announces. "No I haven't!" I snap. LOL! ^.^
you have some fantastic lines in yours stories.
really effective last line, and just great chapter!! ^^
 
IluvAtem
Jun 6, 2007 07:40 AM by: IluvAtem chapter 35
lol
Thankies! *glomp* ^^
 
perfectpureblood
Jun 6, 2007 08:15 AM by: perfectpureblood chapter 0
^^ your very welcome! :)
 
fairywarrioress
Jun 3, 2007 02:47 AM by: fairywarrioress chapter 37
Wicked!!
Sounds good so far ^^
 
IluvAtem
Jun 3, 2007 02:48 AM by: IluvAtem chapter 0
:)
 
fairywarrioress
Jun 3, 2007 02:45 AM by: fairywarrioress chapter 36
Noooo!! ^^
They have to stay together!

Great chapter - i got a bit carried away at the end!! lol
 
IluvAtem
Jun 3, 2007 02:46 AM by: IluvAtem chapter 36
thanks!
 
fairywarrioress
Jun 3, 2007 02:42 AM by: fairywarrioress chapter 35
Whoa!!
That was a wiked chapter - That stupid kid Ren is gonna get the @$$ kicking of a life time!!

Me: KYAAAAAA!! *karate kick*
Ren: *screams like a girl* AGHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!
 
IluvAtem
Jun 3, 2007 02:46 AM by: IluvAtem chapter 0
lol
Nice move!
 
yafoolin
Jun 2, 2007 02:09 PM by: yafoolin chapter 37
Awesome
 
IluvAtem
Jun 3, 2007 02:47 AM by: IluvAtem chapter 0
thanx
 
yafoolin
Jun 2, 2007 02:05 PM by: yafoolin chapter 35
Awesome chapter
 
IluvAtem
Jun 3, 2007 02:47 AM by: IluvAtem chapter 0
thank you! ^^
 
BrazillianPaula13
Jun 2, 2007 01:57 PM by: BrazillianPaula13 chapter 37
This story(more like "stories" XP) is still very cool! ^^
 
IluvAtem
Jun 3, 2007 02:47 AM by: IluvAtem chapter 0
^^
 
BrazillianPaula13
Jun 2, 2007 01:56 PM by: BrazillianPaula13 chapter 36
Awesome!^^
 
BrazillianPaula13
Jun 2, 2007 01:55 PM by: BrazillianPaula13 chapter 35
Cool!
 
perfectpureblood
May 31, 2007 04:21 AM by: perfectpureblood chapter 34
love his uncle! he's a great character! :)

but no! Tea won't die, she'll come back as a vampire, right? right?? :(
 
perfectpureblood
May 31, 2007 04:17 AM by: perfectpureblood chapter 33
whoa! awesome start to the chapter!! great description, I could feel his pain and see the transformation in my mind! really cool!! great chapter!
 
fairywarrioress
May 21, 2007 10:36 AM by: fairywarrioress chapter 34
Oh my god
You are so awesome at writing
I seriously nearly cried at the end - thats so sad, Tea cant die!
Atems gonna go crazy now!

You really paint a perfect picture, i pretty much saw it happening :)
 
yafoolin
May 20, 2007 11:40 AM by: yafoolin chapter 34
Oh no Tea can't be dead
 
yafoolin
May 20, 2007 11:38 AM by: yafoolin chapter 33
Great chapter
 
perfectpureblood
May 10, 2007 08:18 AM by: perfectpureblood chapter 32
love all of it! ^^
love the idea of the chip to make he learn English. awesome that he's in a band! fantastic that him and Tea are together cause they're my fav pairing! ^^ and I really want to know what happens with these scientists!
haha! ^^ love the whole turning into a puppy and Yugi ruffling his hair! lol. :D
 
yafoolin
Apr 28, 2007 05:06 AM by: yafoolin chapter 32
Great chapter can't wait for the next one
 
fairywarrioress
Apr 28, 2007 03:29 AM by: fairywarrioress chapter 32
That was awesome!!
I love Atem's new style :)
It suits him :P

Yeyness for goth/emo/vampire/werewolf/bat Atem!!

=^^=
 
perfectpureblood
Apr 17, 2007 02:19 PM by: perfectpureblood chapter 31
Oooo! I love that last line! soooo cool! awesome chapter, as usual!! ^^ do not anger vampire Atem! ^^ keep it up!
 
perfectpureblood
Apr 17, 2007 02:12 PM by: perfectpureblood chapter 30
omg! wow, very intense at the end! so awesome! sooo much action and detail! great visuals! I love it so much! and yay! Tea, Yugi, Marik and Ishizu! ^^ he has friends!!!!!
grr, evil clifie! ^^
seriously good.
 
fairywarrioress
Apr 15, 2007 02:57 AM by: fairywarrioress chapter 31
WHoa!
Slow down ther Atem! ^^

That was a really good chapter - neat job :)

I always enjoy reading ur new stuff =D
 
yafoolin
Apr 14, 2007 10:33 PM by: yafoolin chapter 31
Great chapter please continue this story
 
yafoolin
Apr 13, 2007 06:53 AM by: yafoolin chapter 30
Please let Atem be ok
 
yafoolin
Apr 13, 2007 06:52 AM by: yafoolin chapter 29
I love your new writing style its great
 
yafoolin
Apr 13, 2007 06:50 AM by: yafoolin chapter 28
That is amazing
 
fairywarrioress
Apr 10, 2007 03:03 AM by: fairywarrioress chapter 30
NO NO NO!! ATEM!!
Oh god i hope he's ok! ^^
And yey you brought the gang back into it! WOOP WOOP!

Seriously, your writing is so good! I was hooked on that chapter and didnt want it to end

I'd love to learn egyption!
=^^=
 
perfectpureblood
Apr 6, 2007 04:18 AM by: perfectpureblood chapter 29
wow! an amazing chapter!! I was hooked!!! I loved it!! the best chapter ever!! so descriptive! really chilling!! great detail in the dream!!! this was fantastic!!! great great great work!!!
 
fairywarrioress
Apr 6, 2007 01:53 AM by: fairywarrioress chapter 29
I loved it so much i read it again!

Seriously, the detail in this is amazing!! And the way you delt with the dream was so good :)

Keep up the good work! =D
 
perfectpureblood
Apr 3, 2007 10:58 AM by: perfectpureblood chapter 28
'Sucked them dry of that crimson lifeline'
excellent line!! ^^

this chapter was fantastic!! your writing has so improved! you still need to make your sentences flow a little more instead of so many full stops, but I guess that can be quite a good effect! ^^

really awesome story line, great set up! I really really like it! love that its from Atem's point of view. I love it love it love it!!!! please keep it going!! and great cliffie! can't wait to see what happens next! in interest, is that girl Tea? ^^ great work!
 
fairywarrioress
Apr 3, 2007 12:45 AM by: fairywarrioress chapter 28
O_O That was awesome - the language you used was soooo good! I really enjoyed that read, i was practically glued to the screen!!
Whos the vampire? Whats gonna happent to the girl? AGHHH!! i wanna know XD!
 
IluvAtem
Apr 2, 2007 01:49 PM by: IluvAtem chapter 28
* relieve
* finish
* take
* children's
* She (not 'The')
^ Spelling mistakes in the order that you'll find them! If you see anymore, let me know!
I suppose that's what you get when you only use notepad to write them...
 
perfectpureblood
Mar 13, 2007 06:35 AM by: perfectpureblood chapter 27
lol! loved the ending! :D
great chapter! Everyone loved Atem! ^^
 
HikariYugiYamiAtemu
Mar 13, 2007 12:54 AM by: HikariYugiYamiAtemu chapter 27
lol...great and funny story..XD
 
yafoolin
Mar 12, 2007 09:04 PM by: yafoolin chapter 27
Great chapter
But one question... where's Tea?
 
fairywarrior
Mar 12, 2007 02:20 PM by: fairywarrior chapter 27
I loved this new chapter!! ^^

But whos Ixi and wheres Tea!!!

Great chapter anyways! You live up to your word of being very random! Lol XD
 
perfectpureblood
Feb 19, 2007 07:32 AM by: perfectpureblood chapter 26
cool! ^^ I can tell very much that you are a huge Atem fanatic! ^^ it shows through all your work, which is great!! :)
 
perfectpureblood
Feb 19, 2007 07:05 AM by: perfectpureblood chapter 25
awesome! bit gruesome though. love the romance and chemistry between Atem and Tea! ^^ love the black rose! Ooo, I want one! :D
 
yafoolin
Feb 16, 2007 11:52 PM by: yafoolin chapter 24
This is a great chapter
 
HikariYugiYamiAtemu
Feb 16, 2007 02:11 AM by: HikariYugiYamiAtemu chapter 0
all the chapters are very funny , and cool too! XD
 
HikariYugiYamiAtemu
Feb 16, 2007 02:11 AM by: HikariYugiYamiAtemu chapter 26
lol..XD
 
fairywarrior
Feb 14, 2007 10:45 AM by: fairywarrior chapter 25
Lol
Wahooo you used Fall Out Boys new song!!! Its so good ^^!
Anyways that was a great chapter!! =^^=
 
fairywarrior
Feb 14, 2007 10:42 AM by: fairywarrior chapter 24
YEY !!
i love that song!! Cool chapter i like that both Tea and Atem are wolves and not just Atem! =] Nice touch!
 
BrazillianPaula13
Jan 20, 2007 11:08 AM by: BrazillianPaula13 chapter 23
Don't vampires need blood because their body can't produce any? Whatever.
Awesome chappie!^^
 
BrazillianPaula13
Jan 20, 2007 11:03 AM by: BrazillianPaula13 chapter 22
So cute! ^-^
Great chappie!
 
perfectpureblood
Jan 17, 2007 05:55 AM by: perfectpureblood chapter 23
oh wow. Tea would do anything for Atem wouldn't she? even giving blood!

loved this qoute "Sheesh, why does Yugi have to have a brother that's Dracula's cousin?" she mumbled, turning on her heals.
"I'm not related to Dracula! He was a fictional character from a novel. I'm real!" he snapped.
"Whatever, smart @$$".
lol!!! :D
 
Avatar
Jan 17, 2007 01:10 AM by: Avatar chapter 5
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!I wish I have a camera!*dies of laughter*
 
Atem:*vein on head*I'll kill you for this!!!
 
Avatar
Jan 17, 2007 12:25 AM by: Avatar chapter 4
how sweet!^^
 
fairywarrior
Jan 16, 2007 11:18 AM by: fairywarrior chapter 23
Noooooo atem!!
i cant belive that happened !!
brilliant chapter!
 
fairywarrior
Jan 16, 2007 11:15 AM by: fairywarrior chapter 22
Awwwww thats s sweet ^^!!
I love it!
 
yafoolin
Jan 16, 2007 06:40 AM by: yafoolin chapter 23
I love this chapter can't wait for more
 
yafoolin
Jan 16, 2007 06:38 AM by: yafoolin chapter 22
Great chapter
 
BrazillianPaula13
Jan 9, 2007 10:46 AM by: BrazillianPaula13 chapter 21
^-^ Awwww! So sweet. He's just so adorable! Great chappie!
 
BrazillianPaula13
Jan 9, 2007 10:39 AM by: BrazillianPaula13 chapter 19
You know. you never live a story title down...Way beyond random...
 
perfectpureblood
Jan 7, 2007 01:07 PM by: perfectpureblood chapter 21
aww! he's so charming! ^^ and extremely forgiving! she tries to kill him twice and he's cool with it! ^^ lol. you come up with great ideas, and your writing is improving so much! :D love the way you wrote the end. ^^
yay! I looove Evanescence. ^^
 
yafoolin
Jan 4, 2007 09:28 PM by: yafoolin chapter 21
Can't wait for the next chapter
 
fairywarrior
Jan 4, 2007 11:47 AM by: fairywarrior chapter 21
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW I LOVE IT!!!
i always thought that Tea could sing!
i wanna hear her ^^! And i cant believe she tried to kill Yami again!! lol he's good at forgiving!

nice chapter ^_~!
 
Avatar
Jan 4, 2007 10:03 AM by: Avatar chapter 1
Here are some of my replies:
 
 
 
perfectpureblood
Jan 4, 2007 09:07 AM by: perfectpureblood chapter 20
I loved every single chapter!! :D
I have to admit, very random, but very awesome! ^^ keep it up! :D
 
yafoolin
Jan 1, 2007 09:07 PM by: yafoolin chapter 19
Great chapter I love this story
 
yafoolin
Jan 1, 2007 09:04 PM by: yafoolin chapter 20
Wow great chapter
I hope he can forgive her
 
fairywarrior
Jan 1, 2007 10:02 AM by: fairywarrior chapter 19
OK i read 20 before 19!! lol but they are still both very good chappies ^^!
everybody likes a bit of yamixtea!
 
fairywarrior
Jan 1, 2007 09:59 AM by: fairywarrior chapter 20
OMG TEA!!! aghhhh where did that come from i hope he's ok will he forgive tea?? what do we do??
so many questions need to be answered!

good chappie ^_^!

xfairywarriorx
 
fairywarrior
Dec 29, 2006 10:53 AM by: fairywarrior chapter 18
ow poor atem! >.<! good chappie! XD!
cant wait till the next update
 
LOL
Dec 29, 2006 09:34 AM by: LOL chapter 5
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA......!!!(dies)
..........(respawns)...HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!
Woo... great stuff.*gasp*...heh.
 
yafoolin
Dec 29, 2006 06:05 AM by: yafoolin chapter 18
Poor Atem that must hurt
 
BrazillianPaula13
Dec 29, 2006 05:06 AM by: BrazillianPaula13 chapter 18
-_-* How come you always get him kicked there? Poor guy. Doesn't he ever get mad at you for doing that to him?
XP Hehe. Awesome story.
 
fairywarrior
Dec 25, 2006 02:16 PM by: fairywarrior chapter 17
0_0...he does kung fu and plays guitar and ...and hes a fit wolf!! XD wow hes like gods gift to women!! lol!! good chapter hope to see more soon!
 
BrazillianPaula13
Dec 25, 2006 11:29 AM by: BrazillianPaula13 chapter 17
He plays guitar, he's a wolf AND he does kung-fu?! What's next?!
 
yafoolin
Dec 25, 2006 10:09 AM by: yafoolin chapter 17
Great chapter I can just Imagine Atem in his wolfish form
 
jackie4ever
Dec 25, 2006 08:58 AM by: jackie4ever chapter 17
he a wolf!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
perfectpureblood
Dec 23, 2006 03:03 PM by: perfectpureblood chapter 16
whoa! that thing that went down his throat freaked me out! lol! you have great ideas, I just think you need to spend a little more time developing them. still, awesome chapter!!
 
BrazillianPaula13
Dec 23, 2006 05:32 AM by: BrazillianPaula13 chapter 16
O.o Oh, s**t....What happened? Holy Jesus!
Awesome story, as always...
 
HikariYugiYamiAtemu
Dec 23, 2006 12:35 AM by: HikariYugiYamiAtemu chapter 16
-after reading all the other chapters- cool story as usual...XD
 
fairywarrior
Dec 22, 2006 01:36 PM by: fairywarrior chapter 16
omg whats wrong?? aghhh!! good chappie keep it up!!
 
fairywarrior
Dec 21, 2006 08:54 AM by: fairywarrior chapter 15
yey thats so sweet!! ^^!!
 
BrazillianPaula13
Dec 20, 2006 12:59 PM by: BrazillianPaula13 chapter 15
^-^Love is SO sweet! Great story! As always.
 
perfectpureblood
Dec 20, 2006 10:13 AM by: perfectpureblood chapter 15
aww! kiss! ^^ lovely chapter. loved the levitation. ^^ but, how can Tea do that?
 
yafoolin
Dec 20, 2006 08:50 AM by: yafoolin chapter 15
Cool Update soon
 
perfectpureblood
Dec 18, 2006 11:26 AM by: perfectpureblood chapter 14
haha! ^^ awesome.
what happened to the other story you were doing? the one with the band?
 
fairywarrior
Dec 18, 2006 11:14 AM by: fairywarrior chapter 14
awesome i love the awesomeness of this awesome story!! lol ^^!! it was a really good chappie cant wait for the the next one!
 
BrazillianPaula13
Dec 18, 2006 11:03 AM by: BrazillianPaula13 chapter 14
^-^Can't wait for the next cgap. You just keep getting better, don't you?^^
 
yafoolin
Dec 18, 2006 08:54 AM by: yafoolin chapter 14
Awesome chapter can't wait for the next one
 
BrazillianPaula13
Dec 17, 2006 01:34 AM by: BrazillianPaula13 chapter 13
You just don't like makeing the story fit together. It's a bunch of mixed-up stories. But cool, though.^^
 
fairywarrior
Dec 16, 2006 09:28 AM by: fairywarrior chapter 13
whoa that is random!! i love it!! =^_^= cant wait for the next chappie!
 
perfectpureblood
Dec 16, 2006 08:36 AM by: perfectpureblood chapter 13
cool! ^^
 
yafoolin
Dec 16, 2006 07:28 AM by: yafoolin chapter 13
Interesting update soon
 
HikariYugiYamiAtemu
Dec 12, 2006 11:13 PM by: HikariYugiYamiAtemu chapter 12
*after finish reading your chapters* wow! your stories are pretty cool!
 
fairywarrior
Dec 11, 2006 01:32 PM by: fairywarrior chapter 12
oh no poor atem!! hope he's ok good chappie i always look forward to seeing what you write next!!

keep it up ! ^^
 
yafoolin
Dec 10, 2006 08:38 PM by: yafoolin chapter 12
That man was horrible
Great chapter can't wait for the next one
 
BrazillianPaula13
Dec 10, 2006 03:00 PM by: BrazillianPaula13 chapter 12
I don't know if I should call tha guy who hit him evil or if I should YOU evil... (Jus' kiddin', 'k?)
If you keep updating like this, I get addicted, I'm warning you! ^-^Hehe.
Keep it up! ^-^
 
perfectpureblood
Dec 10, 2006 01:12 PM by: perfectpureblood chapter 12
wow! you update quick! ^^
yes! you did the flashback! ^^ amazing work! the whole tank thing made me shudder, and the man beating Atem, it was horrbile! but very well written. keep it up! :)
 
fairywarrior
Dec 10, 2006 10:21 AM by: fairywarrior chapter 11
yey anotehr goos chappie keep goin with it cos its really good!!

xfairywarriorx
 
fairywarrior
Dec 10, 2006 10:19 AM by: fairywarrior chapter 10
whoa what happened hes back!! yey and no cos he got hurt!!
good chapie!

xfairywarriorx
 
yafoolin
Dec 10, 2006 09:01 AM by: yafoolin chapter 11
This is a great story you should continue with it
 
BrazillianPaula13
Dec 10, 2006 08:55 AM by: BrazillianPaula13 chapter 11
I only get like that after P.E. ...
Poor guy. Well, I just hope they get out without anyone finding them! You're not THAT evil, are you?
 
perfectpureblood
Dec 10, 2006 05:48 AM by: perfectpureblood chapter 11
woot! you have to carry this story on, its awesome! I feel awful for Atem, he was once a great pharoh, and now he's been subjected to this. I think you should do a flashback thing telling us how he got there. *nod*
your writing is fantastic, it has a certain... atmosphere about it, if you know what I mean. the only tip i'd give is to lengthen your sentences, not have so many short stops, cause it breaks the flow and the pace of the story. can't wait till the next one! ^^
 
BrazillianPaula13
Dec 9, 2006 07:45 AM by: BrazillianPaula13 chapter 10
........I don't know what to say, seriously.......What's that word you always use? Oh, right. Wow. That's all I can say....Wow.
 
perfectpureblood
Dec 9, 2006 07:12 AM by: perfectpureblood chapter 10
wow. that was really good! this is the best peice of writing you've ever done! it was really awesome! I loved it! GREAT idea! the whole forcing the band to perform thing. great description, you really set the scene. it was so dark and exciting. I felt so much for Atem. amazing job! keep it up! ^^
 
perfectpureblood
Dec 6, 2006 10:07 AM by: perfectpureblood chapter 9
cool! loved the ending! *pokey pokey* ^^
 
jackie4ever
Dec 5, 2006 05:56 PM by: jackie4ever chapter 9
/,M,...............................................
 
jackie4ever
Dec 5, 2006 05:50 PM by: jackie4ever chapter 8
GGGGGGG
 
jackie4ever
Dec 5, 2006 05:43 PM by: jackie4ever chapter 7
HAHHHHHHHAAAAAA I DONT GET THE END
 
jackie4ever
Dec 5, 2006 05:42 PM by: jackie4ever chapter 6
MOOOOOOOOOOONNNN
 
jackie4ever
Dec 5, 2006 05:18 PM by: jackie4ever chapter 5
I LIKE THE LAST SENTANCE
 
jackie4ever
Dec 5, 2006 05:17 PM by: jackie4ever chapter 4
WOW RANDOM STUFFFFFFFFFFF
 
jackie4ever
Dec 5, 2006 05:16 PM by: jackie4ever chapter 3
WOW
 
jackie4ever
Dec 5, 2006 05:16 PM by: jackie4ever chapter 2
SCHOOL SUCKS
 
jackie4ever
Dec 5, 2006 05:14 PM by: jackie4ever chapter 1
HHHAAAAAAAA
 
CristyMasashi52764
Dec 5, 2006 02:45 PM by: CristyMasashi52764 chapter 9
woah!! anzu and yami makinout.....^_^ KEEP GOING!!!LOL
 
yafoolin
Dec 5, 2006 11:32 AM by: yafoolin chapter 9
I love this chapter
 
fairywarrior
Dec 5, 2006 11:14 AM by: fairywarrior chapter 9
YEY LOL! i cant belive you used my idea!! thankyou!! ^^!! do more do more its so good!!
 
BrazillianPaula13
Dec 5, 2006 09:53 AM by: BrazillianPaula13 chapter 9
Hehe...Mess with who's quiet! ^^
 
yafoolin
Dec 3, 2006 11:35 PM by: yafoolin chapter 8
I love this poor Atem he's probably very hungover
 
yafoolin
Dec 3, 2006 11:32 PM by: yafoolin chapter 7
Kind of sad poor Atem
 
fairywarrior
Dec 3, 2006 11:16 AM by: fairywarrior chapter 8
wow i absoloutely love the randomness of this it rocks!! please do loads more!! lol!! and i hope atem gets better!! yeh buggar of scotty cant believe he got poor yami that drunk!! ^^
 
BrazillianPaula13
Dec 3, 2006 09:37 AM by: BrazillianPaula13 chapter 8
I agree with perfectpureblood, it is COMPLETELY random!
Bur very cool!^^

P.S.: I won't hurt Riri this time^^
Riri: Finally!
Paula: But I can change my mind....
 
perfectpureblood
Dec 3, 2006 09:09 AM by: perfectpureblood chapter 8
no! don't hit Seto! wait, why would Seto want Tea anyway? very very random! ^^ cool though! ^^
 
zeldafan92
Dec 3, 2006 05:59 AM by: zeldafan92 chapter 6
love the random! ^^
 
zeldafan92
Dec 3, 2006 05:56 AM by: zeldafan92 chapter 1
heh funny!
 
perfectpureblood
Dec 3, 2006 05:11 AM by: perfectpureblood chapter 6
"Hey, Pharaoh, did you hear about the dog that went to the moon"?
that was pretty random! ^^
anyway, great chapter!
 
BrazillianPaula13
Dec 3, 2006 04:55 AM by: BrazillianPaula13 chapter 6
Really cool story! Keep it up, seriously! Don't you think, Ricardo?
Riri:...
Paula: Riri?
Riri: My head still hurts...
Paula: From what? *TRIES to look innocent*
Riri: You played golf with it yesterday!!!
Paula: *evil smile* Hehe. Hole-in-One... Tell IluvAtem what a great story this is.
Riri: It's SOOOO cool! I love randomness. And, between you and me, I'm not saying that just 'cause Paula has a basebell bat behind her back.
Paula: ...Run...
 
fairywarrior
Dec 3, 2006 03:51 AM by: fairywarrior chapter 6
kl loving these chapters kep up the good work!! lol =^_^=
 
yafoolin
Dec 2, 2006 09:54 PM by: yafoolin chapter 5
Very cool
 
BrazillianPaula13
Dec 2, 2006 02:16 PM by: BrazillianPaula13 chapter 5
I don't get randomness. Just classroom randomness. ^^
Very cool!
 
perfectpureblood
Dec 2, 2006 02:06 PM by: perfectpureblood chapter 5
certainly random, but very very cool. ^^
 
perfectpureblood
Dec 1, 2006 10:12 AM by: perfectpureblood chapter 4
cool! ^^
 
BrazillianPaula13
Dec 1, 2006 06:45 AM by: BrazillianPaula13 chapter 4
It IS kinda random. I mean, different things poppin' up everywhere. XP But it is really cool!^-^
 
yafoolin
Nov 30, 2006 09:04 PM by: yafoolin chapter 4
Very good chappie update soon.
 
fairywarrior
Nov 30, 2006 12:48 PM by: fairywarrior chapter 4
ahhhhhhhhhhhhh yey finally !!! lol good chappie!
 
fairywarrior
Nov 3, 2006 11:00 AM by: fairywarrior chapter 3
nooooooooooooo..........come on tea where are you in his time of need!?
very powerful picture i saw every bit of it in my head (that sounded kinda weird =^_^=)
 
fairywarrior
Nov 3, 2006 10:58 AM by: fairywarrior chapter 2
wicked man keep it up man!
 
HikariYugiYamiAtemu
Nov 3, 2006 01:06 AM by: HikariYugiYamiAtemu chapter 3
aww..poor Atemu
 
HikariYugiYamiAtemu
Nov 3, 2006 01:05 AM by: HikariYugiYamiAtemu chapter 2
cool story...
 
HikariYugiYamiAtemu
Nov 3, 2006 01:02 AM by: HikariYugiYamiAtemu chapter 1
cool...XD
 
yafoolin
Nov 2, 2006 07:38 PM by: yafoolin chapter 3
Poor Atem
Very well written
 
CristyMasashi52764
Nov 2, 2006 07:24 PM by: CristyMasashi52764 chapter 3
this is very astonishing!!
 
CristyMasashi52764
Nov 2, 2006 07:22 PM by: CristyMasashi52764 chapter 2
cool!!
 
perfectpureblood
Nov 2, 2006 03:00 PM by: perfectpureblood chapter 3
oh wow, that was pretty powerful! poor Atem! good descriptions. keep it up!
 
fairywarrior
Nov 2, 2006 08:52 AM by: fairywarrior chapter 1
lol i loves it!! its really funny write more write more!!
 
yafoolin
Nov 1, 2006 07:24 PM by: yafoolin chapter 1
i'M GONNA LOVE THIS STORIE
 
CristyMasashi52764
Nov 1, 2006 03:53 PM by: CristyMasashi52764 chapter 1
awww cute! i m gonna love this one!!!!!!!!!
 
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