RANDOM YGO STUFF THAT I WROTE! >_< by IluvAtem

Jul 16, 2007 12:40 PM by: perfectpureblood chapter 39

awesome!!! love it!! great descriptions and ideas!!

Jul 17, 2007 11:35 AM by: IluvAtem chapter 0

Thanks again! :)

Jul 24, 2007 03:29 AM by: perfectpureblood chapter 0

np! ^^

Jul 16, 2007 10:39 AM by: perfectpureblood chapter 38

^^ sounds good!

Jul 16, 2007 11:51 AM by: IluvAtem chapter 0

Thankies! *huggle*

Jul 16, 2007 11:57 AM by: perfectpureblood chapter 0

^^ your welcome! :)

Jul 4, 2007 01:01 PM by: yafoolin chapter 39

Poor Atem

Jul 5, 2007 10:27 AM by: IluvAtem chapter 0

Thanks for the comments!

Jul 4, 2007 12:58 PM by: yafoolin chapter 38

Poor Atemu he cant escape the girls

Jul 5, 2007 10:26 AM by: IluvAtem chapter 0

I know. That inclues us! *chases Atem*

Jul 4, 2007 10:58 AM by: fairywarrioress chapter 39

Awww!! Poor Atem!
Dont worry Tea will make him feel better! ^^

Neat chapters - i look forward to your next update ;D

Jul 5, 2007 10:25 AM by: IluvAtem chapter 0

Thankies! *hug*

Jun 5, 2007 01:20 PM by: perfectpureblood chapter 37

wow. that chapter was awesome!!! I really loved it!! keep it up!! ^^

Jun 6, 2007 07:38 AM by: IluvAtem chapter 0

thank you! ^________^

Jun 6, 2007 08:17 AM by: perfectpureblood chapter 0

^^ your welcome! :D

Jun 6, 2007 07:41 AM by: IluvAtem chapter 0

Oh! I did a pic of it!

Jun 6, 2007 08:18 AM by: perfectpureblood chapter 0

oh! you did? i'll have a look at your gallery! ^^

Jun 5, 2007 01:16 PM by: perfectpureblood chapter 36

Tea is a cat?? Atem is a wolf?? omg!! awesome chapter!! :D cliffie!!

Jun 6, 2007 07:38 AM by: IluvAtem chapter 36

lol yup! :)

Jun 6, 2007 08:16 AM by: perfectpureblood chapter 0

^^ :D

Jun 5, 2007 01:14 PM by: perfectpureblood chapter 35

haha! love this bit! "Atem, A, Ren, F". "HA!-" I slap a hand over my mouth. :D lol!! and "Atem's got girl's hair!" Kaylee announces. "No I haven't!" I snap. LOL! ^.^
you have some fantastic lines in yours stories.
really effective last line, and just great chapter!! ^^

Jun 6, 2007 07:40 AM by: IluvAtem chapter 35

lol
Thankies! *glomp* ^^

Jun 6, 2007 08:15 AM by: perfectpureblood chapter 0

^^ your very welcome! :)

Jun 3, 2007 02:47 AM by: fairywarrioress chapter 37

Wicked!!
Sounds good so far ^^

Jun 3, 2007 02:48 AM by: IluvAtem chapter 0

:)

Jun 3, 2007 02:45 AM by: fairywarrioress chapter 36

Noooo!! ^^
They have to stay together!

Great chapter - i got a bit carried away at the end!! lol

Jun 3, 2007 02:46 AM by: IluvAtem chapter 36

thanks!

Jun 3, 2007 02:42 AM by: fairywarrioress chapter 35

Whoa!!
That was a wiked chapter - That stupid kid Ren is gonna get the @$$ kicking of a life time!!

Me: KYAAAAAA!! *karate kick*
Ren: *screams like a girl* AGHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!

Jun 3, 2007 02:46 AM by: IluvAtem chapter 0

lol
Nice move!

Jun 2, 2007 02:09 PM by: yafoolin chapter 37

Awesome

Jun 3, 2007 02:47 AM by: IluvAtem chapter 0

thanx

Jun 2, 2007 02:05 PM by: yafoolin chapter 35

Awesome chapter

Jun 3, 2007 02:47 AM by: IluvAtem chapter 0

thank you! ^^

Jun 2, 2007 01:57 PM by: BrazillianPaula13 chapter 37

This story(more like "stories" XP) is still very cool! ^^

Jun 3, 2007 02:47 AM by: IluvAtem chapter 0

^^

Jun 2, 2007 01:56 PM by: BrazillianPaula13 chapter 36

Awesome!^^

Jun 2, 2007 01:55 PM by: BrazillianPaula13 chapter 35

Cool!

May 31, 2007 04:21 AM by: perfectpureblood chapter 34

love his uncle! he's a great character! :)

but no! Tea won't die, she'll come back as a vampire, right? right?? :(

May 31, 2007 04:17 AM by: perfectpureblood chapter 33

whoa! awesome start to the chapter!! great description, I could feel his pain and see the transformation in my mind! really cool!! great chapter!

May 21, 2007 10:36 AM by: fairywarrioress chapter 34

Oh my god
You are so awesome at writing
I seriously nearly cried at the end - thats so sad, Tea cant die!
Atems gonna go crazy now!

You really paint a perfect picture, i pretty much saw it happening :)

May 20, 2007 11:40 AM by: yafoolin chapter 34

Oh no Tea can't be dead

May 20, 2007 11:38 AM by: yafoolin chapter 33

Great chapter

May 10, 2007 08:18 AM by: perfectpureblood chapter 32

love all of it! ^^
love the idea of the chip to make he learn English. awesome that he's in a band! fantastic that him and Tea are together cause they're my fav pairing! ^^ and I really want to know what happens with these scientists!
haha! ^^ love the whole turning into a puppy and Yugi ruffling his hair! lol. :D

Apr 28, 2007 05:06 AM by: yafoolin chapter 32

Great chapter can't wait for the next one

Apr 28, 2007 03:29 AM by: fairywarrioress chapter 32

That was awesome!!
I love Atem's new style :)
It suits him :P

Yeyness for goth/emo/vampire/werewolf/bat Atem!!

=^^=

Apr 17, 2007 02:19 PM by: perfectpureblood chapter 31

Oooo! I love that last line! soooo cool! awesome chapter, as usual!! ^^ do not anger vampire Atem! ^^ keep it up!

Apr 17, 2007 02:12 PM by: perfectpureblood chapter 30

omg! wow, very intense at the end! so awesome! sooo much action and detail! great visuals! I love it so much! and yay! Tea, Yugi, Marik and Ishizu! ^^ he has friends!!!!!
grr, evil clifie! ^^
seriously good.

Apr 15, 2007 02:57 AM by: fairywarrioress chapter 31

WHoa!
Slow down ther Atem! ^^

That was a really good chapter - neat job :)

I always enjoy reading ur new stuff =D

Apr 14, 2007 10:33 PM by: yafoolin chapter 31

Great chapter please continue this story

Apr 13, 2007 06:53 AM by: yafoolin chapter 30

Please let Atem be ok

Apr 13, 2007 06:52 AM by: yafoolin chapter 29

I love your new writing style its great

Apr 13, 2007 06:50 AM by: yafoolin chapter 28

That is amazing

Apr 10, 2007 03:03 AM by: fairywarrioress chapter 30

NO NO NO!! ATEM!!
Oh god i hope he's ok! ^^
And yey you brought the gang back into it! WOOP WOOP!

Seriously, your writing is so good! I was hooked on that chapter and didnt want it to end

I'd love to learn egyption!
=^^=

Apr 6, 2007 04:18 AM by: perfectpureblood chapter 29

wow! an amazing chapter!! I was hooked!!! I loved it!! the best chapter ever!! so descriptive! really chilling!! great detail in the dream!!! this was fantastic!!! great great great work!!!

Apr 6, 2007 01:53 AM by: fairywarrioress chapter 29

I loved it so much i read it again!

Seriously, the detail in this is amazing!! And the way you delt with the dream was so good :)

Keep up the good work! =D

Apr 3, 2007 10:58 AM by: perfectpureblood chapter 28

'Sucked them dry of that crimson lifeline'
excellent line!! ^^

this chapter was fantastic!! your writing has so improved! you still need to make your sentences flow a little more instead of so many full stops, but I guess that can be quite a good effect! ^^

really awesome story line, great set up! I really really like it! love that its from Atem's point of view. I love it love it love it!!!! please keep it going!! and great cliffie! can't wait to see what happens next! in interest, is that girl Tea? ^^ great work!

Apr 3, 2007 12:45 AM by: fairywarrioress chapter 28

O_O That was awesome - the language you used was soooo good! I really enjoyed that read, i was practically glued to the screen!!
Whos the vampire? Whats gonna happent to the girl? AGHHH!! i wanna know XD!

Apr 2, 2007 01:49 PM by: IluvAtem chapter 28

* relieve
* finish
* take
* children's
* She (not 'The')
^ Spelling mistakes in the order that you'll find them! If you see anymore, let me know!
I suppose that's what you get when you only use notepad to write them...

Mar 13, 2007 06:35 AM by: perfectpureblood chapter 27

lol! loved the ending! :D
great chapter! Everyone loved Atem! ^^

Mar 13, 2007 12:54 AM by: HikariYugiYamiAtemu chapter 27

lol...great and funny story..XD

Mar 12, 2007 09:04 PM by: yafoolin chapter 27

Great chapter
But one question... where's Tea?

Mar 12, 2007 02:20 PM by: fairywarrior chapter 27

I loved this new chapter!! ^^

But whos Ixi and wheres Tea!!!

Great chapter anyways! You live up to your word of being very random! Lol XD

Feb 19, 2007 07:32 AM by: perfectpureblood chapter 26

cool! ^^ I can tell very much that you are a huge Atem fanatic! ^^ it shows through all your work, which is great!! :)

Feb 19, 2007 07:05 AM by: perfectpureblood chapter 25

awesome! bit gruesome though. love the romance and chemistry between Atem and Tea! ^^ love the black rose! Ooo, I want one! :D

Feb 16, 2007 11:52 PM by: yafoolin chapter 24

This is a great chapter

Feb 16, 2007 02:11 AM by: HikariYugiYamiAtemu chapter 0

all the chapters are very funny , and cool too! XD

Feb 16, 2007 02:11 AM by: HikariYugiYamiAtemu chapter 26

lol..XD

Feb 14, 2007 10:45 AM by: fairywarrior chapter 25

Lol
Wahooo you used Fall Out Boys new song!!! Its so good ^^!
Anyways that was a great chapter!! =^^=

Feb 14, 2007 10:42 AM by: fairywarrior chapter 24

YEY !!
i love that song!! Cool chapter i like that both Tea and Atem are wolves and not just Atem! =] Nice touch!

Jan 20, 2007 11:08 AM by: BrazillianPaula13 chapter 23

Don't vampires need blood because their body can't produce any? Whatever.
Awesome chappie!^^

Jan 20, 2007 11:03 AM by: BrazillianPaula13 chapter 22

So cute! ^-^
Great chappie!

Jan 17, 2007 05:55 AM by: perfectpureblood chapter 23

oh wow. Tea would do anything for Atem wouldn't she? even giving blood!

loved this qoute "Sheesh, why does Yugi have to have a brother that's Dracula's cousin?" she mumbled, turning on her heals.
"I'm not related to Dracula! He was a fictional character from a novel. I'm real!" he snapped.
"Whatever, smart @$$".
lol!!! :D

Jan 17, 2007 01:10 AM by: Avatar chapter 5

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!I wish I have a camera!*dies of laughter*
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Atem:*vein on head*I'll kill you for this!!!

Jan 17, 2007 12:25 AM by: Avatar chapter 4

how sweet!^^

Jan 16, 2007 11:18 AM by: fairywarrior chapter 23

Noooooo atem!!
i cant belive that happened !!
brilliant chapter!

Jan 16, 2007 11:15 AM by: fairywarrior chapter 22

Awwwww thats s sweet ^^!!
I love it!

Jan 16, 2007 06:40 AM by: yafoolin chapter 23

I love this chapter can't wait for more

Jan 16, 2007 06:38 AM by: yafoolin chapter 22

Great chapter

Jan 9, 2007 10:46 AM by: BrazillianPaula13 chapter 21

^-^ Awwww! So sweet. He's just so adorable! Great chappie!

Jan 9, 2007 10:39 AM by: BrazillianPaula13 chapter 19

You know. you never live a story title down...Way beyond random...

Jan 7, 2007 01:07 PM by: perfectpureblood chapter 21

aww! he's so charming! ^^ and extremely forgiving! she tries to kill him twice and he's cool with it! ^^ lol. you come up with great ideas, and your writing is improving so much! :D love the way you wrote the end. ^^
yay! I looove Evanescence. ^^

Jan 4, 2007 09:28 PM by: yafoolin chapter 21

Can't wait for the next chapter

Jan 4, 2007 11:47 AM by: fairywarrior chapter 21

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW I LOVE IT!!!
i always thought that Tea could sing!
i wanna hear her ^^! And i cant believe she tried to kill Yami again!! lol he's good at forgiving!

nice chapter ^_~!

Jan 4, 2007 10:03 AM by: Avatar chapter 1

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Jan 4, 2007 09:07 AM by: perfectpureblood chapter 20

I loved every single chapter!! :D
I have to admit, very random, but very awesome! ^^ keep it up! :D

Jan 1, 2007 09:07 PM by: yafoolin chapter 19

Great chapter I love this story

Jan 1, 2007 09:04 PM by: yafoolin chapter 20

Wow great chapter
I hope he can forgive her

Jan 1, 2007 10:02 AM by: fairywarrior chapter 19

OK i read 20 before 19!! lol but they are still both very good chappies ^^!
everybody likes a bit of yamixtea!

Jan 1, 2007 09:59 AM by: fairywarrior chapter 20

OMG TEA!!! aghhhh where did that come from i hope he's ok will he forgive tea?? what do we do??
so many questions need to be answered!

good chappie ^_^!

xfairywarriorx

Dec 29, 2006 10:53 AM by: fairywarrior chapter 18

ow poor atem! >.<! good chappie! XD!
cant wait till the next update

Dec 29, 2006 09:34 AM by: LOL chapter 5

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA......!!!(dies)
..........(respawns)...HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!
Woo... great stuff.*gasp*...heh.

Dec 29, 2006 06:05 AM by: yafoolin chapter 18

Poor Atem that must hurt

Dec 29, 2006 05:06 AM by: BrazillianPaula13 chapter 18

-_-* How come you always get him kicked there? Poor guy. Doesn't he ever get mad at you for doing that to him?
XP Hehe. Awesome story.

Dec 25, 2006 02:16 PM by: fairywarrior chapter 17

0_0...he does kung fu and plays guitar and ...and hes a fit wolf!! XD wow hes like gods gift to women!! lol!! good chapter hope to see more soon!

Dec 25, 2006 11:29 AM by: BrazillianPaula13 chapter 17

He plays guitar, he's a wolf AND he does kung-fu?! What's next?!

Dec 25, 2006 10:09 AM by: yafoolin chapter 17

Great chapter I can just Imagine Atem in his wolfish form

Dec 25, 2006 08:58 AM by: jackie4ever chapter 17

he a wolf!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dec 23, 2006 03:03 PM by: perfectpureblood chapter 16

whoa! that thing that went down his throat freaked me out! lol! you have great ideas, I just think you need to spend a little more time developing them. still, awesome chapter!!

Dec 23, 2006 05:32 AM by: BrazillianPaula13 chapter 16

O.o Oh, s**t....What happened? Holy Jesus!
Awesome story, as always...

Dec 23, 2006 12:35 AM by: HikariYugiYamiAtemu chapter 16

-after reading all the other chapters- cool story as usual...XD

Dec 22, 2006 01:36 PM by: fairywarrior chapter 16

omg whats wrong?? aghhh!! good chappie keep it up!!

Dec 21, 2006 08:54 AM by: fairywarrior chapter 15

yey thats so sweet!! ^^!!

Dec 20, 2006 12:59 PM by: BrazillianPaula13 chapter 15

^-^Love is SO sweet! Great story! As always.

Dec 20, 2006 10:13 AM by: perfectpureblood chapter 15

aww! kiss! ^^ lovely chapter. loved the levitation. ^^ but, how can Tea do that?

Dec 20, 2006 08:50 AM by: yafoolin chapter 15

Cool Update soon

Dec 18, 2006 11:26 AM by: perfectpureblood chapter 14

haha! ^^ awesome.
what happened to the other story you were doing? the one with the band?

Dec 18, 2006 11:14 AM by: fairywarrior chapter 14

awesome i love the awesomeness of this awesome story!! lol ^^!! it was a really good chappie cant wait for the the next one!

Dec 18, 2006 11:03 AM by: BrazillianPaula13 chapter 14

^-^Can't wait for the next cgap. You just keep getting better, don't you?^^

Dec 18, 2006 08:54 AM by: yafoolin chapter 14

Awesome chapter can't wait for the next one

Dec 17, 2006 01:34 AM by: BrazillianPaula13 chapter 13

You just don't like makeing the story fit together. It's a bunch of mixed-up stories. But cool, though.^^

Dec 16, 2006 09:28 AM by: fairywarrior chapter 13

whoa that is random!! i love it!! =^_^= cant wait for the next chappie!

Dec 16, 2006 08:36 AM by: perfectpureblood chapter 13

cool! ^^

Dec 16, 2006 07:28 AM by: yafoolin chapter 13

Interesting update soon

Dec 12, 2006 11:13 PM by: HikariYugiYamiAtemu chapter 12

*after finish reading your chapters* wow! your stories are pretty cool!

Dec 11, 2006 01:32 PM by: fairywarrior chapter 12

oh no poor atem!! hope he's ok good chappie i always look forward to seeing what you write next!!

keep it up ! ^^

Dec 10, 2006 08:38 PM by: yafoolin chapter 12

That man was horrible
Great chapter can't wait for the next one

Dec 10, 2006 03:00 PM by: BrazillianPaula13 chapter 12

I don't know if I should call tha guy who hit him evil or if I should YOU evil... (Jus' kiddin', 'k?)
If you keep updating like this, I get addicted, I'm warning you! ^-^Hehe.
Keep it up! ^-^

Dec 10, 2006 01:12 PM by: perfectpureblood chapter 12

wow! you update quick! ^^
yes! you did the flashback! ^^ amazing work! the whole tank thing made me shudder, and the man beating Atem, it was horrbile! but very well written. keep it up! :)

Dec 10, 2006 10:21 AM by: fairywarrior chapter 11

yey anotehr goos chappie keep goin with it cos its really good!!

xfairywarriorx

Dec 10, 2006 10:19 AM by: fairywarrior chapter 10

whoa what happened hes back!! yey and no cos he got hurt!!
good chapie!

xfairywarriorx

Dec 10, 2006 09:01 AM by: yafoolin chapter 11

This is a great story you should continue with it

Dec 10, 2006 08:55 AM by: BrazillianPaula13 chapter 11

I only get like that after P.E. ...
Poor guy. Well, I just hope they get out without anyone finding them! You're not THAT evil, are you?

Dec 10, 2006 05:48 AM by: perfectpureblood chapter 11

woot! you have to carry this story on, its awesome! I feel awful for Atem, he was once a great pharoh, and now he's been subjected to this. I think you should do a flashback thing telling us how he got there. *nod*
your writing is fantastic, it has a certain... atmosphere about it, if you know what I mean. the only tip i'd give is to lengthen your sentences, not have so many short stops, cause it breaks the flow and the pace of the story. can't wait till the next one! ^^

Dec 9, 2006 07:45 AM by: BrazillianPaula13 chapter 10

........I don't know what to say, seriously.......What's that word you always use? Oh, right. Wow. That's all I can say....Wow.

Dec 9, 2006 07:12 AM by: perfectpureblood chapter 10

wow. that was really good! this is the best peice of writing you've ever done! it was really awesome! I loved it! GREAT idea! the whole forcing the band to perform thing. great description, you really set the scene. it was so dark and exciting. I felt so much for Atem. amazing job! keep it up! ^^

Dec 6, 2006 10:07 AM by: perfectpureblood chapter 9

cool! loved the ending! *pokey pokey* ^^

Dec 5, 2006 05:56 PM by: jackie4ever chapter 9

/,M,...............................................

Dec 5, 2006 05:50 PM by: jackie4ever chapter 8

GGGGGGG

Dec 5, 2006 05:43 PM by: jackie4ever chapter 7

HAHHHHHHHAAAAAA I DONT GET THE END

Dec 5, 2006 05:42 PM by: jackie4ever chapter 6

MOOOOOOOOOOONNNN

Dec 5, 2006 05:18 PM by: jackie4ever chapter 5

I LIKE THE LAST SENTANCE

Dec 5, 2006 05:17 PM by: jackie4ever chapter 4

WOW RANDOM STUFFFFFFFFFFF

Dec 5, 2006 05:16 PM by: jackie4ever chapter 3

WOW

Dec 5, 2006 05:16 PM by: jackie4ever chapter 2

SCHOOL SUCKS

Dec 5, 2006 05:14 PM by: jackie4ever chapter 1

HHHAAAAAAAA

Dec 5, 2006 02:45 PM by: CristyMasashi52764 chapter 9

woah!! anzu and yami makinout.....^_^ KEEP GOING!!!LOL

Dec 5, 2006 11:32 AM by: yafoolin chapter 9

I love this chapter

Dec 5, 2006 11:14 AM by: fairywarrior chapter 9

YEY LOL! i cant belive you used my idea!! thankyou!! ^^!! do more do more its so good!!

Dec 5, 2006 09:53 AM by: BrazillianPaula13 chapter 9

Hehe...Mess with who's quiet! ^^

Dec 3, 2006 11:35 PM by: yafoolin chapter 8

I love this poor Atem he's probably very hungover

Dec 3, 2006 11:32 PM by: yafoolin chapter 7

Kind of sad poor Atem

Dec 3, 2006 11:16 AM by: fairywarrior chapter 8

wow i absoloutely love the randomness of this it rocks!! please do loads more!! lol!! and i hope atem gets better!! yeh buggar of scotty cant believe he got poor yami that drunk!! ^^

Dec 3, 2006 09:37 AM by: BrazillianPaula13 chapter 8

I agree with perfectpureblood, it is COMPLETELY random!
Bur very cool!^^

P.S.: I won't hurt Riri this time^^
Riri: Finally!
Paula: But I can change my mind....

Dec 3, 2006 09:09 AM by: perfectpureblood chapter 8

no! don't hit Seto! wait, why would Seto want Tea anyway? very very random! ^^ cool though! ^^

Dec 3, 2006 05:59 AM by: zeldafan92 chapter 6

love the random! ^^

Dec 3, 2006 05:56 AM by: zeldafan92 chapter 1

heh funny!

Dec 3, 2006 05:11 AM by: perfectpureblood chapter 6

"Hey, Pharaoh, did you hear about the dog that went to the moon"?
that was pretty random! ^^
anyway, great chapter!

Dec 3, 2006 04:55 AM by: BrazillianPaula13 chapter 6

Really cool story! Keep it up, seriously! Don't you think, Ricardo?
Riri:...
Paula: Riri?
Riri: My head still hurts...
Paula: From what? *TRIES to look innocent*
Riri: You played golf with it yesterday!!!
Paula: *evil smile* Hehe. Hole-in-One... Tell IluvAtem what a great story this is.
Riri: It's SOOOO cool! I love randomness. And, between you and me, I'm not saying that just 'cause Paula has a basebell bat behind her back.
Paula: ...Run...

Dec 3, 2006 03:51 AM by: fairywarrior chapter 6

kl loving these chapters kep up the good work!! lol =^_^=

Dec 2, 2006 09:54 PM by: yafoolin chapter 5

Very cool

Dec 2, 2006 02:16 PM by: BrazillianPaula13 chapter 5

I don't get randomness. Just classroom randomness. ^^
Very cool!

Dec 2, 2006 02:06 PM by: perfectpureblood chapter 5

certainly random, but very very cool. ^^

Dec 1, 2006 10:12 AM by: perfectpureblood chapter 4

cool! ^^

Dec 1, 2006 06:45 AM by: BrazillianPaula13 chapter 4

It IS kinda random. I mean, different things poppin' up everywhere. XP But it is really cool!^-^

Nov 30, 2006 09:04 PM by: yafoolin chapter 4

Very good chappie update soon.

Nov 30, 2006 12:48 PM by: fairywarrior chapter 4

ahhhhhhhhhhhhh yey finally !!! lol good chappie!

Nov 3, 2006 11:00 AM by: fairywarrior chapter 3

nooooooooooooo..........come on tea where are you in his time of need!?
very powerful picture i saw every bit of it in my head (that sounded kinda weird =^_^=)

Nov 3, 2006 10:58 AM by: fairywarrior chapter 2

wicked man keep it up man!

Nov 3, 2006 01:06 AM by: HikariYugiYamiAtemu chapter 3

aww..poor Atemu

Nov 3, 2006 01:05 AM by: HikariYugiYamiAtemu chapter 2

cool story...

Nov 3, 2006 01:02 AM by: HikariYugiYamiAtemu chapter 1

cool...XD

Nov 2, 2006 07:38 PM by: yafoolin chapter 3

Poor Atem
Very well written

Nov 2, 2006 07:24 PM by: CristyMasashi52764 chapter 3

this is very astonishing!!

Nov 2, 2006 07:22 PM by: CristyMasashi52764 chapter 2

cool!!

Nov 2, 2006 03:00 PM by: perfectpureblood chapter 3

oh wow, that was pretty powerful! poor Atem! good descriptions. keep it up!

Nov 2, 2006 08:52 AM by: fairywarrior chapter 1

lol i loves it!! its really funny write more write more!!

Nov 1, 2006 07:24 PM by: yafoolin chapter 1

i'M GONNA LOVE THIS STORIE

Nov 1, 2006 03:53 PM by: CristyMasashi52764 chapter 1

awww cute! i m gonna love this one!!!!!!!!!