Broken by jusedr

, Submitted: 2006-12-10, Updated: 2007-06-19, Chapters: 5, Size: 22K, Words: 4939, Comments: 12, Views: 384 Violence: Mild

Games (130) > Jak & Daxter series (292) > Jak 2 (327)

This is a Torn and Ashelin story. Ashelin tells Torn she is cheating on him and dumps him the meanest way possible. Can he ever win back the love of the person he truly cares about?

Chapters

1 - The Breakup - Submitted 2006-12-10 Updated: 2007-06-19 - 79 views, 959 words, 4k
2 - Life Isn't the Same Anymore - Submitted 2006-12-11 Updated: 2007-06-19 - 53 views, 1041 words, 5k
3 - Razer's Secret - Submitted 2007-01-14 Updated: 2007-06-19 - 54 views, 888 words, 4k
4 - Disbelief - Submitted 2007-01-15 Updated: 2007-01-16 - 42 views, 941 words, 4k
5 - Torn Saves Ashelin - Submitted 2007-01-16 Updated: 2007-06-19 - 48 views, 1110 words, 5k

12 Comments (Most recent 10). Show All

Jul 30, 2008 01:14 AM by: DarkJakAngel01 chapter 5

Very nice!! You should do a sequel

Jul 30, 2008 01:06 AM by: DarkJakAngel01 chapter 3

Wow....A lot of censors....were they always there?

Jun 10, 2007 12:12 PM by: TornsKickasskitty chapter 5

Yay Im crying still!

Jun 10, 2007 12:02 PM by: TornsKickasskitty chapter 3

This is gonna be good!

Jun 10, 2007 11:58 AM by: TornsKickasskitty chapter 2

TT^TT WRITE MORE I'm crying here!

Jun 10, 2007 11:51 AM by: TornsKickasskitty chapter 1

Jak was righht *Crying*

Torn(still crying): Y are u crying?

Me: Cuz I like u Torn and I'd hate to see u hurt.

Jan 19, 2007 09:54 AM by: firefaerie1222 chapter 0

WOOOOOOOOOT!!!!!!!!!!!

that wuz pretTY AWESOME!!

Jan 17, 2007 05:02 PM by: DarkJakAngel01 chapter 0

This Story is so *beep*in AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!! Cookies 4 u!!!1

Jan 2, 2007 12:23 PM by: firefaerie1222 chapter 2

add more. now. grrrrrr

Dec 13, 2006 11:16 AM by: DarkJakAngel01 chapter 2

;,; That's so sad.Jak's HILARIOUS!!!!He's clumsy,yes?

Dec 11, 2006 11:18 AM by: DarkJakAngel01 chapter 1

OMG im gonna cry...:(

-Katie

Um...Yea,Katie's here too.That so sad!!Ashelin's a beatch.And Jak don't Lie!!All the time....