Better Than chips by ZeldaGirl9793

Chapters

1 - Feelings(?) - Submitted 2006-12-20 Updated: 2006-12-20 - 93 views, 1154 words, 6k
2 - another day - Submitted 2007-01-18 Updated: 2007-01-18 - 68 views, 970 words, 5k
3 - First Kiss - Submitted 2007-01-19 Updated: 2007-01-19 - 74 views, 1812 words, 9k
4 - Scary shikamaru - Submitted 2007-02-16 Updated: 2007-02-16 - 48 views, 750 words, 3k
5 - fool in love - Submitted 2008-03-10 Updated: 2008-03-10 - 14 views, 713 words, 3k
6 - why? - Submitted 2008-03-10 Updated: 2008-03-10 - 13 views, 329 words, 1k
7 - the morning of the wedding - Submitted 2008-03-10 Updated: 2008-03-10 - 17 views, 579 words, 3k
8 - the wedding - Submitted 2008-03-10 Updated: 2008-03-10 - 15 views, 928 words, 4k
9 - BIG PROBLEM - Submitted 2008-03-10 Updated: 2008-03-10 - 10 views, 438 words, 2k
10 - Baby? - Submitted 2008-03-10 Updated: 2008-03-10 - 14 views, 884 words, 4k
11 - ANOTHER BABY? - Submitted 2008-03-10 Updated: 2008-03-10 - 17 views, 811 words, 4k

15 Comments (Most recent 10). Show All

Jun 18, 2008 05:04 AM by: Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND chapter 11

That's so cool!!! Will you do a sequel with the kiddies or something? Pleeeeease? But finish this first, I want moooore!!!!

Jun 18, 2008 04:16 AM by: Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND chapter 2

AAAAWHH!!!!!!!!!!!! Thae're so cuuuuute!

Mar 29, 2008 09:47 PM by: BelleMorte8223 chapter 11

Really, I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!

Mar 31, 2008 05:49 PM by: ZeldaGirl9793 chapter 0

lol, i'm happy to hear that:-) It'll be up soon :-)

Mar 29, 2008 09:38 PM by: BelleMorte8223 chapter 6

Short but interesting. You are very talented, I can never make my chapters short and interesting. And my teachers are constantly telling us to write short stories.....

Mar 31, 2008 05:48 PM by: ZeldaGirl9793 chapter 0

awww, thankyou so much :-) No one ever really tells me that, so it means so much to me :-)

Mar 29, 2008 09:32 PM by: BelleMorte8223 chapter 3

Sasuke crying!!! Hahahaha!!! Awesomeness....the cocky bastard deserves it....

Lee and Tenten. Makes sense, it was either him or Neji and Neji's a complete asshole.....

Mar 31, 2008 05:48 PM by: ZeldaGirl9793 chapter 0

lol, thank god i'm not the only one! he soooo deserves to cry X3 and i agree about lee and tenten:-) Thankyou for the comment

Mar 29, 2008 09:23 PM by: BelleMorte8223 chapter 2

They actually are a cute couple. I'm enjoying this story...WHEEEE!!!!!

It doesn't take a cupcake for me to be hyper. I'm always hyper.....*sigh*

Mar 18, 2008 09:08 AM by: hflp chapter 11

The chapter when they tell their parents is going to be a riot.

Mar 17, 2008 02:28 PM by: kittycat256 chapter 0

wow another baby so now ino dosent feel shudent feel as bad now right

Mar 2, 2008 01:48 PM by: kittycat256 chapter 0

i love this story keep writing

Mar 4, 2008 06:06 PM by: ZeldaGirl9793 chapter 0

Awww, thankyou so much!:-)
I'm not sure if i'm updating this story here, but i have it almost complete at here
www.fanfiction.net/u/1199067/
thanks again :-)

Apr 8, 2007 12:46 PM by: XxRisyxX chapter 4

your story is really good! I never thought of this couple before, but it's pretty cool! Keep writing.

Feb 17, 2007 01:17 PM by: cherryblossom93 chapter 4

Ooooo, next chappie sounds interesting.
Still luvin' it, keep on updating!!!^^

Jan 21, 2007 08:52 AM by: cherryblossom93 chapter 3

Haha...moobs XD
Haha...Sasuke whimpering 'cause he was called ugly XD
Yum...sherbert...XD
Funny shoot, my friend!
Luvs it!

Jan 18, 2007 05:51 PM by: cherryblossom93 chapter 2

Hee hee...another awesome chappie! I think they're a cute couple, but not many share our opinions...or else they would COMMENT! XD
Yum, I just ate a Hostess cupcake and now I'm pretty hyper...ew...ELA's tommorrow...bleh...
~ttyl

Dec 21, 2006 05:01 PM by: cherryblossom93 chapter 1

XP
*faves*
Keep goin'!