The Innocent Can Never Last by xJemx

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Aug 26, 2007 07:31 AM by: XxAnarKissedxX chapter 10

OMFG! OMFG!!!!
WHAT?!?!
NOOOO!!!
Did...did...did that REALLY just occur?
OMFG!!
WTF?!?!
NOO!!!
BAD TRE BAD!!!!!
-beats Tre with a new paper-
BAD!!!!!
OOoooohh....suspense!!!!

Aug 26, 2007 07:18 AM by: XxAnarKissedxX chapter 9

Is it Jimmy as in St. Jimmy?
I thought so...
lol.
Haha, you might as well have named the other ones Whatshername and J.A.R.!!!
This is amazing!!!!!
<3
<3
<3

Aug 26, 2007 07:00 AM by: XxAnarKissedxX chapter 8

Sorry I stopped commenting mid-story.
My mom ripped me off the comp to go to New Jersey for a while...
I have no clue why...
it was fun anyway.
I really like this!
I always carry a tape recorder with me because it's just something you pick up on growing up in New York and New Jersey...
Smart Boy!
<3

Aug 22, 2007 07:34 AM by: XxAnarKissedxX chapter 6

-points to the comment with all the hearts-
Wow....she....or he....Umm...it?
Yeah, let's go with it.
It really likes your story!
I like the story too!!!
It's awesome!!!
The story, not the it.
What?
I'm confused now...

Aug 22, 2007 06:44 AM by: XxAnarKissedxX chapter 4

I LOVE THIS SO FAR!!!!
-thinks about Billie masturbating-
....
I'm a lesbian now...
Wait, no, I always was....
Or am I bi?
Wait...what?!
I'm so tired I don't even know my sexual orientation and I'm trying to follow a plot?!?!
-looks at a poster of MCR-
Okay, Gerard's hot, I'm bi...
dodedodedo....
I LOVE YOUR STORIIIIIIIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!

Aug 22, 2007 06:13 AM by: XxAnarKissedxX chapter 3

Wow...
I just had to get on here after doing my make-up for like an hour, didn't I?
Well, that was a waste of an hour.
-wipes eyes-
this was so sad...
I LOVED IT!!!
-runs to read the rest of the chapters-

Mar 20, 2007 04:09 AM by: sailormoon93 chapter 9

omg i was like inlove woth frankie damn you!!!1

well anyway, i have to go to BED!!!! theres 2 chapters to go, damn damn mdan!! angry now, anyway byeo!

Mar 20, 2007 03:56 AM by: sailormoon93 chapter 8

that was short, why was he saying his plan IDIOT MUCH!!!
anyways im hooked, bout to read more..

love ya!
lol
woot
triplllets
how funny am i triplets and i did 3 L oh haha

Mar 20, 2007 03:49 AM by: sailormoon93 chapter 7

I LIKED THAT ONE....it should have been neighbours not home and away, also i like our uniforms.....and that was freaking awsome, i wish you hadnt written the rest yet, then i could have made u call the baby, sophie, but ah ha i know what they are going to be called alrady...

Mar 20, 2007 03:37 AM by: sailormoon93 chapter 6

awsome! EMMA THAT WAS GREAT LOVED IT, I WANT THEM TO DO IT NOW!
LOL I WANT FRANKIE!! HES MINE dog!

Mar 20, 2007 03:16 AM by: sailormoon93 chapter 5

OMG I HATE JO, SHES GRRR,, LET ME KILL HER FIRST! DAMN HER, WHERES MY KNIFE?

Mar 20, 2007 03:04 AM by: sailormoon93 chapter 4

awsomeness, loved it!! loved it loves it!

Mar 20, 2007 02:51 AM by: sailormoon93 chapter 3

great!! loved it!

Mar 19, 2007 12:10 AM by: sailormoon93 chapter 0

wow em, loved the story, loved it loved it loved it!!!!

it is soooooo good, :D lol not read it al yet, i plan to though, but yeah so far its great!!!!!!!!

Mar 17, 2007 04:13 AM by: xXEddyxXxLoverXx chapter 11

LMAO! I <3'd it! That was awesome!
In the list of songs, "West end riot" is like REALLY small lol
What idiot guards Ha!
Poor Samy. *Clings*
Just...Don't make HER die like you made FRANKIE DIIIEEEE! Evil potato, you!

O.o

Aug 26, 2007 07:55 AM by: XxAnarKissedxX chapter 11

A potato wrote this? Golly, I'm shocked...

Mar 14, 2007 02:53 AM by: xXEddyxXxLoverXx chapter 10

OMG! OMG! OMG! SUSPENSE! OMG! *Jumps around saying "OMG"*
The BEST twist!! OMG! It's soooooooooooo cool!
I'm a so happeh! OMG that chapter was awesome! *Is happeh*
OMG! You did well, child. O_o
I <3<3<3<3<3'd it!!!!!! OMG! It was sooooooooo awesomeeeeee !!! How many times have I said "OMG"? O_o
This is like the first chapter you haven't told me what's happened so I'm sooooooo excited! Tomorrow at coffee I'll be like OMFGSHHAMMOOQQQQILOVEDYOURSTORYITWASSOAWESOMEEOOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG
I'M SO EXCITEDDDEEEOOOO!! OMG! *Starts texting you*
OMG I <3<3<3'd it! SHAMMOOWWWW!

Mar 10, 2007 10:55 PM by: xXEddyxXxLoverXx chapter 9

O_O
Lol. Aww! I cannot beleive you killed Frankie! *Kills you*
He was my favourite character! *Growls* Billie's cute=]
Well...good thing she's getting on with her life, though, innit?

Aww! TRIPLETS! I CANNOT BELEIVE YOU FUCKING KILLED FRANKIE!! *Starts a tantrum* *Growls*
<3<3<3

Mar 10, 2007 10:42 PM by: xXEddyxXxLoverXx chapter 8

WEOOOEEEEWWWW!! Short. This one was short.
Lmao.

His eyes widened.
âHow many legs does it have?â he asked, looking confused. I laughed.
âIt takes after you, if itâs a boy,â I giggled. Adie hit me.

*Giggles* Hah! I be not commenting long. I wanna read teh next chapter:]

Feb 12, 2007 01:15 AM by: xXEddyxXxLoverXx chapter 7

Oh OH!!! *Squeals* AWESOME!! AWESOME!! AWESOME!! AWESOME!! :]:] What are you gonna name it?

Lol âItâs also heard that the bassist from Green day quit, saying heâd had enough, Lizzie!â John said, smiling. My dad peeped his head through from the other room.
âI am?â he said, confused. I laughed.

*Giggles*

Your a funny one! I LOVVEDD ITT!!!! LUFF LUFF!! *Glomps*

Feb 11, 2007 08:25 AM by: jak-n-daxter203 chapter 6

*faves story* alls well ends well! billies comments are really funny

Billie smirked and took an apple from the fruit bowl.
âHealth freak...â Tre said, and went over to the fridge and collected Esiâs chocolate bar.Youâre in more shoot, now!â I said, looking through the front window and Esi was walking in. Billie smirked.
âBillie, donât!â Tre said, but he was too slow. Esi had already walked into the room and Tre was too far away to stop Billie from saying.
âTre ate your chocolate bar!â he said and Esi looked at him. She smiled.
âTre Cool, come here,â she said, smiling still. I looked confused,but I knew she was going to kick his @$$. Tre stumbled out from behind the fridge and over to Esi.

why was tre behind the fridge? id of ran into the garden :P awesome! *faves 50000 times*

Feb 11, 2007 07:55 AM by: jak-n-daxter203 chapter 4

omg that was a col chapter... i agree with eddy

Feb 11, 2007 07:42 AM by: jak-n-daxter203 chapter 3

ogm! u wudnt put ur hand on a girls knee who had just been raped!

go billie! *faints*

Feb 11, 2007 07:27 AM by: jak-n-daxter203 chapter 2

nobody likes u
every1 left u
there all out without u
having fun *eyebrows*

omg lol awesome still!
*squeals at the name Billie Joe*

Feb 11, 2007 07:20 AM by: jak-n-daxter203 chapter 1

Feb 11, 2007 03:51 AM by: xXEddyxXxLoverXx chapter 6

Oohhhhiiiiooowwww...
*Theme music*
Weird....I'm listening to Green Day nowO_O
Coincidence? I THINK NOT!!

o_O I LOVED itttt!!!!!!!!!!!! *Glomps* It had fighting, laughing, loving, Billie, Tre and Mike!!! And theyre back together!! *Squeals*

I think this is your best chapter yet!! It got my eyes glued to the screen..

Have I said that in another comment? i hope not..

That will sound REALLY cheesy lmao

*Sings* Are you guys ready to sing along? I want you to sing soo loud..that every fuckin' redneck in America hears you tonight, ALRIGHT??!?!

>.<Lol...
Well I LOVED it!! THIS MUCH!! *Holds out hands* :

an image

Jan 30, 2007 11:40 PM by: xXEddyxXxLoverXx chapter 5

Oh that's so sad! Jo's such a BIACH! Ohh my heart hurts. That was sad:<
I can't wait till the next chapter!!!!
*Squeals*
Poor Frankie, but poor Samy.But poor both of them! Stupid jo!
I sitll cannot beleive she did that! *Slaps*

Jan 14, 2007 11:00 PM by: xXEddyxXxLoverXx chapter 4

Haha That's heaps good!
I swear..Is it even possible for you to write a story where I don't laugh, cry, giggle, smile, frown, or LOVE TO DEATH?!?!?!
Lol!
That was funny with the
âWhat do you think guys do, Samy? Practically every guy does itâ¦â I shuddered at the thought of Frankie doing it. It just seemed odd, since Iâd known him since I was born.
âYour dad,â he started to say but I interrupted him.
âYUCK! NO, BILLIE! Too far!â I said, standing up and then left the room.
Aww I ABSOLUTELY LOVELOVELOVE<3<3<3 THIS STORY!!!!!
Can't wait till you get the next chapter up!!!
It's like killing me!!
I wanna see how Samy tells Frankie!!!
She told Ben...but not Frankie lol!
Nice.
Well I liked how you got some of everyone in that chapter
Coz Billie isn't in it at all usually
And billie's my dog.
LolXDXDXD
Please write the next chapter!
*Hugs*
O_oI'm in a hugging mood lol!

Jan 14, 2007 08:08 PM by: xXEddyxXxLoverXx chapter 3

*Cries*
shoot you made me cry.
Literally!
I'm crying that was so sad!!!!
Well not crying but watery eyes!!!
Sniff...I can't beleive Tre called her a slut!!
And Frankie!!!
Okies I really need to know what happens in the next chapter!!
I really hope Frankie and Samy get back together!!
Sniff...Lol great job!!
Always a pleasure reading your storys!!
But Billie and Samy aren't that close are they??
Lol Scott's an idiot with the whole 000 thing haha

Jan 8, 2007 02:55 AM by: xXEddyxXxLoverXx chapter 2

Wow that's awesome!!
You really should use more time writing it lol
Her mum's a dog!!!
Nice job with the punching lol!!!!
But I already knew what half of it was coz SOMEONE kept on telling me on msn*Crosses arms angrilly*
You really shouldnt tell me lol
Anyways see you at my party tomorrow!!
Throughout this whole thing..please tell me Frankie and Samy get it on..
Lol just suits the typa story lol
Anyways great job!
Loving the story!!

Dec 31, 2006 11:57 PM by: xXEddyxXxLoverXx chapter 1

Aww that's so cute! (The couple)
Great story! She's so lucky!! I wanna be her! Lol!
*Faves* I <3 THE STORY
It's really touching.
Seriously.
Aww I can't wait till you put the next chapter up!!
GREAT work I loved it!

Dec 31, 2006 11:59 PM by: xXEddyxXxLoverXx chapter 0

By the way...don't mind me asking
In the treehouse did they just make out or did they have sex?