Choas begins as three girls are thrown into destiny that they did'nt sign up for. With their world turned upside down they must endure it together or all will fall.
I refuse to write another chapter untill I get at least one review.
The way you right the story is good Krii just dont put detail into every little thing that happends like we didnt really need to know that the dress was a lilac dress forgotten on a Vanity Chair you could just say "a dress carelessly left on a chair in the room" i like it just lower the detail meter a bit k?
~Yuri AKA Ayu
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Submitted: 2007-01-09, Updated: 2007-01-20,
Chapters: 2, Size: 13K,
Words: 2711, Comments: 3,
Views: 106
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~Yuri AKA Ayu