thank you... You're the third person to read it(besides the ones who don't comment), even my friends thought it was too long to take the extra time to read it... It's only 9 pages!!! I've written 40 page stories, and thier complaining about 9?!!
I made a few minor additions to this copy, but am working on completely changing it from short school style to big book style... Expect it within the next year or so... lol