Awsome^^

That was awsome^^

now that's a shock^^

cool^^

if i was there i would just say this...

"whatever"

"Okaaaay?"

"i hate happy endings"

"O_o ummm...hi?" "i dont look like anyone here!>_<#"

Sora:you look like Roxas! and that means me to!

"umm...shut up!i dont like you two dorks!"

Sora:HEY! thats not nice!

hay that's really good, i like.

Pretty good but i think Roxes has had too much ice cream.

thats so cute X3!!! I LOVES IT'S STORY LINE!! heehee it would be awesome if it was in a more...*thinks of shiny smart word* ah screw big words! smarticle XD terms...thats not wat i mean exactly...just not script like....i donno i think it would have made me tingle more when leon cried!! I LOVE LEON!!! (sorry if i sounded like a critict since i hate cridicts) but its fine the way it is too!! (is so confused of my own words) lol i love it muchly! *faves*

Me:awwwwwwwwwwwww thats so cute ^^ love the ending i would never guess thats your Leon er Squall 
Leon: THATS LEON >.<
Me: Fine Leon's sis ^^ loved it ^^

awwwwwww,so sweet=^.^=

Awwww!!!! How cute!!! That's a really cute and sweet ending!!!!! Great job!!!!

that's so sweet!:D

So now axel's your bf, leon's your bro, and you know your true name. Huh? Well, I'm happy for you!!!! And you know what else? I f you marry axel axel and leon would be brothers-in-law! Teehee!^^

Teehee! This is really good and you sound so surprised and amazed in the story that the story seems funny!!!! Great job!!!

Wow.....this is really emotional and good...Ilike it!!! Great job!!!^^

you made a good story!^^

you made it good^^!

wow you made it good!^^