Wild at heart by Flashthehedgehog

Aug 17, 2007 06:00 AM by: MrGimp chapter 16

oh whoa, keep em coming! need next chappie!!1 >W<

Aug 9, 2007 10:25 AM by: ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 chapter 16

Yay new chapter! I know what you mean about Shadow's line, I heard thatÂ somewhere too, just...don't know where...Hate it when that happens -_-"
Like always, can't wait for the next!

Aug 8, 2007 07:52 PM by: nextguardian chapter 16

Great work Flash!

Jul 18, 2007 03:36 AM by: alchemest1 chapter 3

Awws. Poor Mischief! He has such a sad story. Damn Eggman! He always has a hand in peoples misery!

Jul 18, 2007 03:30 AM by: alchemest1 chapter 2

So! Lard boy is at it again. He never learns. Cool chapter. I'm definitely going on to the next chapter!

Jul 18, 2007 03:22 AM by: alchemest1 chapter 1

Sweet chapter. I can't wait to read on. By the way. I know what ora is! I'm a furry and my animal of choice is wolf. So. I have trained my self as you put it to use my ora. It is a pretty cool feeling.

Jul 17, 2007 10:25 PM by: nextguardian chapter 15

Great ch Flash! Gotta love Shad's personality!

Jul 17, 2007 07:35 AM by: ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 chapter 15

But the last cookie is a very important subject! Well, only because I seem to always get X3 Good chapter by the way! I like where the story's going :>

Jun 29, 2007 07:54 AM by: ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 chapter 14

GAH!! I need to know who it is! Before I--*asplode* Aah, too late... :) Can't wait for the rest!

Jun 28, 2007 11:45 PM by: nextguardian chapter 14

Now THAT's a surprise! Keep it coming!

Jun 25, 2007 09:02 AM by: MrGimp chapter 14

oh whoa! I didnt see that one coming! Now i wanna know what happens next!! SUSPENSE IS KILLING MEEH!!!11 >w<

Jun 20, 2007 08:15 PM by: nextguardian chapter 13

Flash's abilites are unique and cool, really great job!

Jun 20, 2007 08:13 PM by: nextguardian chapter 12

lol, the hat rocks!

Jun 20, 2007 09:35 AM by: ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 chapter 13

Glad to reading again! Another fine chapter I'd say, and first comment!*parties* Ch 10 did clear things up a little too, thanks for the notice. Can't wait for more :)

Jun 4, 2007 12:08 AM by: nextguardian chapter 11

love the randomness and the "Pirate" line. It's fun to use that in real life too!

May 29, 2007 12:59 PM by: ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 chapter 11

Where may I purchase a electric chainsaw? ^-^ Even the pope could not deny having fun with a toy of destruction like that! Good work I say, and sorry about comment on the last chapter...I got rushed off the computer because my mom wanted to check prices of stuff at the store -_- damn you, online shopping!

May 29, 2007 03:49 AM by: MrGimp chapter 11

nice chapter! keep 'em coming!! >w<

May 24, 2007 09:42 PM by: nextguardian chapter 10

That's Ekyt. Stubborn as a mule and sharp as a bowling ball, lol!

Great chapter, keep 'em coming!

May 5, 2007 10:11 AM by: silvercat chapter 1

Good Start! *goes to read the other chapters*

May 3, 2007 06:01 PM by: MrGimp chapter 9

hehe, great story so far! keep it coming!! >W<

May 1, 2007 02:03 PM by: ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 chapter 9

Aww poor Ray, girls can be so mean....I can't really say that cause I've stolen money from people to too. That lava and ice thing is so contradicting -_- How can hot mean cold!? Stupid scientist and their theories...
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Splendid chappie by the way, looking forward to more!

Apr 28, 2007 07:30 PM by: nextguardian chapter 9

Nice work here! Poor Mischief, can't blame him for disliking lava. I myself avoid lava whenever possible, lol.

Apr 24, 2007 12:43 PM by: ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 chapter 8

Ha, Mischeif is all "OMGWTF!?!" I did that today too, my school had a random lock-downÂ becauseÂ of anÂ 'intruder'.Â AfterÂ what seemed to anÂ hour of haidingÂ inÂ aÂ dark corner with classmates, we were alerted that theÂ lock-down was only aÂ drill...Well besides that,Â great chapter!Â I takeÂ RayÂ dosen'tÂ talkÂ much, but beingÂ with Flash,Â he willÂ eventuallyÂ =)Â

Apr 25, 2007 10:37 AM by: Flashthehedgehog chapter 0

Ya don't worry he'll talk about a sentence more in the next chapter when I get the time to make it

Apr 23, 2007 09:54 PM by: nextguardian chapter 8

Great chapter! The last line got me, lol!

Apr 9, 2007 08:43 PM by: nextguardian chapter 7

Whoa, you even added my char's chao! I really appreciate this!

Apr 10, 2007 01:45 AM by: Flashthehedgehog chapter 0

No problem, I thought I'd refer back to one of your earlier chapters. I'm surprised I remembered the name really.

Apr 9, 2007 08:41 PM by: nextguardian chapter 6

You're making this incredibly hard to put down!

*Is holding up computer*

Well, you know what I mean ;)

Apr 9, 2007 08:38 PM by: nextguardian chapter 5

The "blond a-hole" bit killed me!

Apr 10, 2007 01:46 AM by: Flashthehedgehog chapter 0

Lol. Well this came into my head when some teacher went into my IT teacher (who's blond) and under his breath the guy said "you fat blond prick" I thought....ouch! But then I thought "hang on, that can be used in my story!" Obviously without the fat

Apr 9, 2007 08:37 PM by: nextguardian chapter 4

Alright! Thanks for adding him!

Loved the "You've commandeered my hat!" part! lol!

Apr 8, 2007 12:37 PM by: ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 chapter 7

My mind totally went blank upon seeing the name of this chapter. But there were no drugs, unfortunately for my weird imagination ^-^ Really great work, I wish I could see Eykt's chao too. ItÂ sounds soÂ cute!Â

Apr 9, 2007 12:43 AM by: Flashthehedgehog chapter 0

Ah-hah! Well I plan to do a picture on Eykt's chao as soon as I get some work done.
And yeah the title's random. I come up with them whilst listening to music. It's like this.
"OMG I can't believe it! I've never been this far a-"
Oh! That's a good title

Apr 5, 2007 10:40 AM by: ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 chapter 6

Amy has found yet another crush, or was that Mischief thinking? Hm, just wanted to make sure is all. Once again, great job! Love the beginning, Flash is trying to hide.*hides with him* I'm invisible XP!

Apr 7, 2007 11:55 AM by: Flashthehedgehog chapter 0

Lmao. I'll have to put Kyle in somewhere, if you'll let me. Yeah that was Amy's thoughts.

Apr 5, 2007 07:50 AM by: Saluki chapter 6

WOW!!! Awesome chapter!:D Make more!

Apr 2, 2007 01:52 PM by: ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 chapter 5

For a minute, I was laughing randomly at the fruit stand thing(banana muffins, blueberry muffins....ya never know >.>) But then I became shocked at the two murders....awesome emotion transition! Haven't had one of those in a while! :D

Mar 25, 2007 09:04 AM by: Saluki chapter 5

Cool!:D Make more soon, getting exciting!^w^

Mar 15, 2007 12:36 PM by: ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 chapter 4

I love this adventure! It's so...adventurous!*gets shot*Â AwesomeÂ job, though IÂ read yourÂ profileÂ and thereÂ won't beÂ another real soon,Â this greatness will be enoughÂ to keepÂ me occupied!Â That andÂ homework....ha, likeÂ I'm everÂ gonna do that!Â ^-^Â

Mar 14, 2007 02:37 PM by: Saluki chapter 4

Cool!:D Just like I said... Everybody loves the hat..lol

Feb 25, 2007 08:09 PM by: nextguardian chapter 3

Really well done!

Feb 25, 2007 03:15 PM by: ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 chapter 3

Aww, poor Mischief...that's just sad, and ofÂ course Eggman's fault. HE IS EVIL!!! THE EVIL THAT HE IS!!! ...still, good intro for a character!
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....I caught a Dorado in Animal Crossing wild world once...*gets slapped*

Feb 24, 2007 06:05 AM by: Saluki chapter 3

O_o Wooah... Hey Mischief's story is ALMOST the same as Thunder's is... Awesome...

Feb 16, 2007 11:40 AM by: nextguardian chapter 2

Great chapter! Looking forward to more!

Feb 16, 2007 10:44 AM by: ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 chapter 2

God, another fat man is terrorizing Sonic! Nah, I know it's Eggman, the fat bum!Â Anyways,Â yet another wonderful chapter!Â YourÂ on aÂ roll,Â so keep going!Â ^-^Â

Feb 16, 2007 08:59 AM by: Saluki chapter 2

OO This is AWESOME!:D Make more!:D

Feb 15, 2007 05:46 AM by: Saluki chapter 1

OO Aaaawesome...|-)

Feb 14, 2007 10:04 AM by: nextguardian chapter 1

Oh Nice! Great start!

Feb 13, 2007 12:32 PM by: ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 chapter 1

Great beginning! I had no idea Flash was a murder...well everyone is once they have enough sugar....or maybe that's just me...Ah whatever, please continue! I'd love to see what happens next!

Feb 13, 2007 08:14 AM by: MrGimp chapter 1

Heh, great start! I get the feeling this story is gonna dig deeper... ^^

Thanks for mentioning blain!

Feb 14, 2007 12:49 AM by: Flashthehedgehog chapter 0

No worries, all part of the suspicious plot, lol