Can I agree on this one! I'm a writer myself (although I've never writen fanfic) and your style of writing is... excelente. But making a story about incest and more important brother-brother is crazy! It's not sane! It's and 'alternativism' as I like to say about a situation that derives from the real thing! And believe me that is not pleasant, an 'alternativism' i mean.

Oh, and by the way: How do you know what seemen tastes like?! XD

WHOOT! ELRICEST! >w< *dies of the smezzehness* Ooh, I wub this. Great job! Its very sexy >:3

THat was great for your first time wirting a lemon! ^____^ YAAAAAAY ELRICEST! MUAWAHAHAHAHAHAAHHAHA

*faves as soon as it freaking loads*

Another Elricest fan!! I had no idea><
We must unite! *Holds up sword*

Thankies!!!! SQUUEEEE

for me?


YAY! ELRICEST LEMON!

a bit full-on though lol ^^ still HOT! i loved the way you did this! my pic for you is taking a while so i mite come in tomorrow, sorry *cries* hehe, loved it how you described his shirt off, and "will you be my valentine?" mwa ha ha h ha! *faves* great work! your better than me!

Elricest? Full on? I don't think so!

*Giggles* I know, eh! I'm so perverted.
Oh I bet it turned you on Perri. Lmao

Admit it! Admit it! *Chants* O_O

Okay. This is totally wrong! Apart from that, you have a good writing skill : ]
Nice work, gross story. lol.
Would be good if it was ... Like, Roy and Ed. But ... being brothers makes it weirddd! XD If they weren't brothers it would be okay! XD 'Cause I luurve slash! *wiggles eyebrows*

No, 'Tis HAWT!! *Wiggles eyebrows up and down*

OMG! I should write Billie x Tre slash *Giggles* O_O
Really? THANKIES!! *Glomps*