Deus Ex Machina... by MrGimp

Sep 27, 2007 04:50 AM by: Minda chapter 0

CURSE MY LIFE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DAMN THE TOMBOY CURSE!!
DAMN THE EMO CURSE!!
DAMN THE GAMER CURSE!!!
DAMN MY LIFE!!!

Sep 27, 2007 07:45 AM by: MrGimp chapter 0

eeh... wtf is your problem...? O_o

Sep 21, 2007 04:00 PM by: Minda chapter 1

DUDE NOT KEWL MY GUY WAS MADE BY EGGMAN!!!
DAMN I HATE IT WHEN THIS HAPPENS!!!!
*dies*i hate when i make some one and find out someone made someoneÂ like them already-_-

May 15, 2007 08:44 PM by: kittyshootingstar chapter 21

Woah. Amazing story. Amazing. Woah. I'm sorry, I really don't have words right now. Just wow.

Apr 6, 2007 06:07 AM by: Flashthehedgehog chapter 21

Ah that's some interested stuff. I'll have to use that FUBAR as a reference in school. I'm sad it ended to, every time the e-mail said "Mr Gimp has uploaded a new chapter" I was like YES!
I just hope my story can give you some entertainment while it lasts

Apr 6, 2007 06:02 AM by: Flashthehedgehog chapter 20

Ah man that is an awesome ending I actually read through it again! I can't believe you made my story fit in with yours as well. Awesome reference, Off goes Flash Sparrow to sail the seas. I'm overwhelmed. Brilliant mate.

Apr 5, 2007 07:21 PM by: ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 chapter 21

The circle of life....some African words... XP Dude, had know idea you had scars! I got one on my right wrist, because I mess with my cat too much...he's fast too, likeÂ StephanÂ :DÂ Â

Apr 5, 2007 05:36 PM by: nextguardian chapter 20

Man alive, this should be published! Great stuff!

Apr 5, 2007 02:40 PM by: AngelicZero chapter 20

awesome gimp that was the best story ever you did a great job and i hope you come up with another good story

Apr 5, 2007 02:23 PM by: AngelicZero chapter 21

halo...-kicks eggman away from the action figures and growls holding onto the flood figurines- grrr....lol nice job

Apr 5, 2007 01:54 PM by: Saluki chapter 21

lol So FlashÂ saw it in a movie, aye? lol Okie, no more questions!^^ Explains everything!!!^^ >_> Maybe I should also do a FAQ to "Experiments of pain: No Love, No Melancholy, No Mercy", when I finish it....>.> He-he... Once more, GR8 STOREYH!!!!!!~_^

Apr 5, 2007 01:45 PM by: Saluki chapter 20

Beautiful, man, beautiful.....*sniff* I think I'm gonna cry... lol Man, you're soooo TALENTED in writing these!!! Such an awesome ending. Poor Jasco... Man... I'm feeling like reading it all over and over again! Beautiful...:) I have no words, really.

Apr 5, 2007 12:53 PM by: ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 chapter 20

gorgeous ending. just plain gorgeous. The whole thing was gorgeous! Like a flower shop filled with the best top-notch flowers from all corners of the world! .....Similies are fun ^-^ I can't wait to se your next project. It never ceases to amaze me!Â Â Â Â Â Â

Apr 4, 2007 01:11 PM by: Saluki chapter 19

O_o....... Woah.. Man, AWESOME, dude!!!:D This is just sooo wickedy awesome!!!>:D Make more soon.

Apr 3, 2007 06:44 PM by: nextguardian chapter 19

Great stuff!

Apr 3, 2007 01:53 PM by: AngelicZero chapter 19

cool @_@ my guy got captured but rescued by blain...ysy...thank god...i thought id be a rat bbq...anyways nice job

Apr 2, 2007 01:23 PM by: ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 chapter 19

........*scratches head*..........*whistles*...........*glares at computer* ALRIGHT!!! STOP TAUNTING ME!!! .......I honestly don't think there's any wordsÂ that canÂ describeÂ this...besides awesome,Â but it'sÂ beenÂ used...*points below*Â I mustÂ join theÂ battleÂ field!*runs away*Â

Apr 2, 2007 12:32 PM by: Flashthehedgehog chapter 19

OMG so much action and tension. Awesome awesome AWESOME chapter.

I helped kill a fat man. I've always wanted to do that

Mar 28, 2007 09:14 PM by: AngelicZero chapter 18

-my kittens play in my hair while I type- ouch ow ow ow ouch yeow...oh doing great so far...good thing you didnt make amy yell at me or hit me...thank god...well keep it up man rootin for ya

Mar 28, 2007 05:17 PM by: nextguardian chapter 18

I think this has been my favorite chapter so far. Great job, keep it coming!

Mar 28, 2007 09:55 AM by: Flashthehedgehog chapter 18

Oh wow. Again, this is awesome you can actually imagine yourself in there with them. Of course if it were me it'd be like.

Everyone: CHARGE!
Me: Er..bye...*runs in other direction*

Mar 28, 2007 07:27 AM by: Saluki chapter 18

OO........................................................................................*dies* ZOMG THIS... is....... awesome...*dies* Make more! ZOMGSUS!!!! Exciting!>:D

Mar 27, 2007 06:03 PM by: dragonwolf1516 chapter 18

so awesome i've been reading this for a while and i've got a question (cann you please add 2 of my lunarwolves in it..kainou and velvet please?)

Mar 27, 2007 04:31 PM by: ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 chapter 18

...I swear, I'm gonna wet myself...CLIFFHANGERS GIVE BRAIN CANCER!!!X_X..........er.....no words can describe the happy that I'm feelingÂ ;DÂ

Mar 26, 2007 08:23 PM by: nextguardian chapter 17

You have a way of describing carnage that is irreplicable. In other words, THIS IS GREAT!

Mar 26, 2007 12:46 PM by: ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 chapter 17

...they did a hoo-ah... :D So the next few chapters are gonna be like, filled with actiony violence? Something resembling the final boss battle at the end of a video game!? ME CANNOT IMAGINE!!! Once again, it's awesome, purely awesome!

Mar 25, 2007 02:05 PM by: Saluki chapter 17

Wow.... Man, this is SWEET!!!>:D Cool! Make more! Getting exciting!:D

Mar 25, 2007 01:17 PM by: AngelicZero chapter 17

sweet ^_^ still awesome but one thing is for sure how could Dr.Eggman have all those nukes? oh well thanks for adding meh in the story -thumbs up-

Mar 25, 2007 12:38 PM by: Flashthehedgehog chapter 17

*gawps at screen in amazement*

Mar 21, 2007 12:55 PM by: ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 chapter 16

Â¡No puedo tomarlo! Â¡Es tan emocional!
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...that says 'I can't take it! It's so emotional!'....I don't even take Spanish class, so that's worth wondering...What ever your doing, keep doing it and never EVER stop, like me, cause I stopped, and can't seem to start again!

Mar 21, 2007 10:54 AM by: Flashthehedgehog chapter 16

Wow I feel sorry for Blain. I would probably be like that if my arm was in a bionic state. Well actually I would be like "cool!" and impressed, but I'd also be like Blain. I'm just rambling now, so I'll shut up and say that was an awesome chapter. I wonder what Robotnik has in store?

Mar 20, 2007 08:48 PM by: nextguardian chapter 16

Yikes! No anesthesia (sp) even! Boy I bet that hurt!

Blain's reaction: Kills me

Mar 20, 2007 07:49 AM by: Saluki chapter 16

Wooah... Wow!! This is really cool! So much emotions in it.*thumbs up* Great job on the whole story!

Mar 19, 2007 08:30 PM by: AngelicZero chapter 16

sweetness cool im still to comment first!!! good so far and always will

Mar 19, 2007 12:13 PM by: Flashthehedgehog chapter 15

Oh wow great chapter, so many twists

Mar 19, 2007 07:45 AM by: Saluki chapter 15

Jesus..O_o;;;;;;;;;;; This is AWESOME!:D Make more soon!

Mar 18, 2007 08:12 PM by: nextguardian chapter 15

Looking forward to more!

Mar 18, 2007 08:08 PM by: nextguardian chapter 14

Whoa...I can honestly say I didn't see that coming

Mar 18, 2007 02:36 PM by: Child_of_the_feral chapter 15

Woah. Nice chapter!!! Very dramatic.

I can't wait for number 16. ^_^

Mar 18, 2007 02:16 PM by: AngelicZero chapter 15

oh also if you want you can add my character if you want too its all up to you ^^

Mar 18, 2007 02:14 PM by: AngelicZero chapter 15

woot first to comment!!! wow it seems deep in detail...I like stories like this your very talented gimp let me know if theres more

Mar 17, 2007 10:20 AM by: Flashthehedgehog chapter 14

Ah balls! Well obviously I'd be swearing a lot more than that but you know....kids and stuff

Wonderful setimental chapter, you don't mind if I use this as a reference in my story do you?

Mar 17, 2007 06:05 AM by: ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 chapter 14

OMFG! THEY KILLED BLAIN!!!*pulls big friggin gun* That's it! I'm going in!*runs into explosions, only to tripped by a rock* ...Ow...
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Awesomeness is unbearble! I can't imagine what will happen next!

Mar 17, 2007 10:20 AM by: Flashthehedgehog chapter 0

lmao!

Mar 17, 2007 01:35 AM by: AngelicZero chapter 14

woah...nice so far keep it going

Mar 17, 2007 01:10 AM by: Saluki chapter 14

O_o God, wow! This is AWESOME! NU!! Blain is teh dead!D:*cryes in the corner* Cool! Make more.

Mar 11, 2007 08:51 PM by: nextguardian chapter 13

...This story needs an award. Brilliant work.

Mar 11, 2007 08:43 AM by: ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 chapter 13

Damn, I'm gonna cry too...That was just magnificent man. The graphic description for Talon's death then Tala getting hanged, I was never expecting it! Truly awesome, keep it up!

Mar 11, 2007 08:16 AM by: Saluki chapter 13

O_o.................................................................................................................Uuuh...Poor Tala? Man, this was one hell of a chapter.. Cool. So much emotions.

Mar 11, 2007 03:36 AM by: Flashthehedgehog chapter 13

O.M.G such emotion. I love it, keep up the amazing work!

Mar 10, 2007 02:07 PM by: Child_of_the_feral chapter 13

Ooer!! Tala ish teh.... Dead o.O

Poor Jasco!! TT_TT *Huggles him*

Mar 5, 2007 06:28 PM by: nextguardian chapter 12

lol, this stuff never fails to be entertaining!

Mar 4, 2007 09:58 AM by: Flashthehedgehog chapter 12

Lol, some funny stuff in there and obviously some dramatic stuff. Another victory for Blain and you

Mar 4, 2007 09:36 AM by: ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 chapter 12

I just got lost at the end, flippin quotes, never know if you're saying them right!Â GoodÂ chappie!Â I'll wait silently in the bushes for more!*hides in bushes*

Mar 4, 2007 07:39 AM by: Saluki chapter 12

ZOMGÂ awesome!:D Make more! Getting exciting!!! lol So Jasco is his momma, aye? lol

Feb 23, 2007 07:47 PM by: nextguardian chapter 11

Great work man! RIP Cyrus

Feb 23, 2007 01:11 PM by: Flashthehedgehog chapter 11

sad story man, great enough to be in a movie. You sure do like saying "run like hell" a lot though.

Feb 22, 2007 11:24 AM by: Flashthehedgehog chapter 10

Absolutely awesome chapter. Nuf said

Feb 22, 2007 07:26 AM by: Saluki chapter 11

*cryes* Poor poor Cyrus.....DDDDDDDDDDDX

Feb 21, 2007 04:39 PM by: ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 chapter 11

Aww, I liked Cyrus, now he's dead...*holds a lighter in the air*
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Me and Blain have the same nervous shaking problem ^-^ Good chapter! Can't wait for the next!

Feb 21, 2007 06:57 AM by: Saluki chapter 10

OO AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!:OOOO Man, make more soon!!!!!!!!!:D

Feb 21, 2007 06:44 AM by: ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 chapter 10

I need more! I can't even think of actiony stuff like this myself! Keep going man!

Feb 20, 2007 05:36 PM by: nextguardian chapter 10

Oh man, this is the best one yet!

Feb 20, 2007 08:37 AM by: Flashthehedgehog chapter 9

Oh wow I wasn't expecting that, talk about a way to surprise me. Thanks a lot for putting Flash in dude!

Feb 19, 2007 05:23 PM by: nextguardian chapter 9

Poor Jasco, no respect!

Anyway, great chapter!

Feb 19, 2007 01:35 PM by: Saluki chapter 8

OO Woow.........OO AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!:DDDDDDDD LOOOOOL!!!!!!!!!!!*imitates* Yeah, Blain, momma tells the truth...XDDDDDDD

Feb 19, 2007 01:20 PM by: Saluki chapter 7

OO Moooooooooore*talks like a zombie*

Feb 19, 2007 10:01 AM by: Flashthehedgehog chapter 8

Er...ok quite confusing and a little Aladdin speech there. Great chapter though, you really feel as if you're in the action.

Feb 19, 2007 02:39 PM by: MrGimp chapter 0

Heh, so thats where its from! I've heard it somewhere before, but couldnt place it... But, ah well... ^^

Thanks for the comment!

Feb 19, 2007 09:43 AM by: Flashthehedgehog chapter 7

Gotta...read...more!

Feb 18, 2007 05:27 PM by: nextguardian chapter 8

I've gotta agree with ShadowsGirlfriend. Poor Blain gets no respect!

Feb 18, 2007 11:08 AM by: ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 chapter 8

Wooo! Such action! I love what Blain says when Jasco opens up the doors. Pure genius! Now I'll go sit in a corner and wait for the next chapter!*flies away*

Feb 18, 2007 05:09 AM by: Saluki chapter 6

Awesome chapter!:D Jasco looooves kids, huh? Pfffff..... Scrabble....pfff........ LOOOOOOOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!XD Limo.....OO >.> -_-''' Naw, really the Scrabble stuff is LOL-ish.XD

Feb 17, 2007 08:28 PM by: nextguardian chapter 7

Great! Looking forward to more!

Feb 17, 2007 12:36 PM by: Flashthehedgehog chapter 6

go Jasco

Feb 17, 2007 11:40 AM by: Saluki chapter 5

:DDD Awwwww........ Sentimental chapter...lol Uum.... u got a lil lil mistake there:
Blain: Go to her man...
BLAIN: Who?
Blain: Tala
Doesn't Jasco suppose to say that "who" line?

Feb 17, 2007 12:25 PM by: MrGimp chapter 0

Oh crap! Thanks for noticing, i'll go change now! ^^

Feb 17, 2007 11:12 AM by: Saluki chapter 4

Awesome chapter!!!!:D Can't wait to read more!:D

Feb 17, 2007 10:57 AM by: Saluki chapter 3

I agree with Flashthehedgehog!! HOLLYWOOD, HERE COMES BLAIN!!!>:D

Feb 17, 2007 07:53 AM by: ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 chapter 7

HOO-AH!!!*gets shot* I love the part where everyone was acting like prisoners...Sonic was in agony... :) Another good chapter! Keep it going!

Feb 17, 2007 07:38 AM by: Saluki chapter 2

OO Woow.... Like, man, WOW!!! This story kix a$$!!!:D

Feb 17, 2007 04:11 AM by: Flashthehedgehog chapter 4

Great chapter, once again. I forgot to mention earlier, well done for adding Jasco in

Feb 17, 2007 04:00 AM by: Flashthehedgehog chapter 3

bloody awesome. Good enough to be in a hollywood movie for sure.

Feb 17, 2007 03:50 AM by: Flashthehedgehog chapter 2

Wow awesome gory details and all! Great work

Feb 17, 2007 03:39 AM by: Flashthehedgehog chapter 1

wow! Just wow

Feb 17, 2007 03:03 AM by: Saluki chapter 1

ZOMGSUS AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:DDD :OOO

Feb 16, 2007 03:10 PM by: nextguardian chapter 6

Jasco: Ssh, ssssssh, donât cry! Heâs just asleepâ¦ Thatâs allâ¦

Maybe I'm a jerk, but this really cracked me up!

and the scrabble thing...

Feb 16, 2007 02:59 PM by: ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 chapter 6

....your excellency makes my brain fizzle with delight!Â All of yourÂ stories,Â so well written withÂ warÂ tacticsÂ and weaponry!Â How do you do it!?Â Do you know some oneÂ who was in a war?Â WERE YOU INÂ AÂ WAR!!!Â ....o_O....don'tÂ mind me,Â justÂ aÂ sillyÂ little kidÂ with to much info inÂ her head!^-^Â You must continue! Then I'll go callÂ some movie contractors andÂ really get this party started!Â

Feb 16, 2007 02:45 PM by: nextguardian chapter 1

Great intro!

Feb 16, 2007 02:45 PM by: Child_of_the_feral chapter 6

Awwww... Jasco's such a sweet-heart. ^_^

Feb 16, 2007 02:34 PM by: Child_of_the_feral chapter 5

Heh. Aw. Tala got a huggle. ^w^ How uber kawaii!!

Tala: STFU!!! *Bites Feral's arm off*