Cool story so far! AAA! The suspense! Please write more soon Zopp! I want to email you soon, I'll try, though I have very little to say. Nolifenolifenolife, that will be my email.
Luv ya!
Cat

Yay! I don't have to talk to myself to hear that my stories come out suspenseful when I try to make them that way! Haha, that was a long sentence...Thank you very much!

Zoppy! I love it! I'm curious to see what happens next so please start with the next chapter as soon as you feel like it! Of course if you'd rather draw pictures of the characters first that'll be good too I'd like to see how you picture them.
Good job girl keep it up!
Cat

Zopp! Hey girl! Great start to your story I like it so far. The shirt gig is funny, I like it, lol. Is the orange-haired girl the character you asked me for a name for? Just curious.
Hey I agree with SKLS in that Hatori is pretty sweet. Though I prefer Kyo or Hatsuharu as a general rule, and Shigure when he isn't being too awkward.
Anyway as I was saying I love the story, please continue I wish to see what happens next! You are now in favorite author and favorite story.
Luv ya!
Cat

Well, I could tell you that, but it would be a little bit of what you call...you know...a spoiler, so I can't tell you.
Good to know you're alive and responsive and your profile's working better than is did earlier.
Thanks for the faves!

Rawr! Hiss! Hatori is mine! Rawr.
I'm a Hatori fan-girl. But not like the generally ones who go "He's sooo dreamy!" Straw just love Hatori-san.
Back off.
XD I actually like your story. Mine has Hatori as a rather important character as well, but as I haven't actually read this chapter yet, I had better go do it.

Uh, no. No. Nonononono, no. NO. It's not like that. You can have Hatori. I guess I should clarify, though. Okay, so Hatori, to Haruka, is more of a role model. More so, her parents want him to be her role model (it's kind of complicated, and her parents are kind of insane.) And she also looks up to him just a little anyway, because he's pretty cool that way, but...NO. No crushie. He just shows up a lot in her past. More than anyone else. And for very excusable reasons. Really. I guess I can barely do more than hope that the first chapter is a little clearer about those reasons. I'll try to make that just a little clearer in Chapter 2. But really, no. No. It's really an extreme coincidence.

On a completely different note, thank you for the comment, and thank you also for the praise. Really, it kinda does make a bit of a difference for me, this being my first story. Thank you very much, I'll probably do something nice for you at some point for whatever reason I can think of at the time.