Akatsuki Tales by Kouni46892742

by: KionaKina on Nov 7, 2007 07:31 PM chapter 11

FINISH IT!!! It's so amazing the way you wrote this.

NARA FIGHT It!!!!

by: Kouni46892742 on Nov 7, 2007 07:31 PM chapter 0

*sigh* The ending is too hard to write!!!

by: KionaKina on Nov 7, 2007 07:29 PM chapter 10

O_O Oh...my...God...

Well, Kiba probably had this one coming

by: Kouni46892742 on Nov 7, 2007 07:31 PM chapter 0

Of course he did!

by: KionaKina on Nov 7, 2007 07:26 PM chapter 9

cool...WHAT'S TOBI LOOK LIKE WITHOUT THE MAS?!

I seriously thought it was a void of some sort when I first saw it

by: Kouni46892742 on Nov 7, 2007 07:27 PM chapter 0

I know!!

by: KionaKina on Nov 7, 2007 07:23 PM chapter 8

NARA!!! *Hugs her* You are not a filthy demon!!!

KIBA!!! *Goes and starts beating the bloody hell outta him* HOW DARE YOU!!!!

by: Kouni46892742 on Nov 7, 2007 07:27 PM chapter 0

Something's telling me you're gonna like

by: KionaKina on Nov 7, 2007 07:18 PM chapter 7

O_O Awesomeness...

Aww, reunited. ^_^ It was a cute moment. Sasuke is married? O_O *Shocked*

And Hina-chan is there! ^_^

by: Kouni46892742 on Nov 7, 2007 07:20 PM chapter 0

Le gasp!

by: KionaKina on Nov 7, 2007 07:14 PM chapter 6

Ohhh, so THAT'S what happened. I've been wondering about the Kiba thing.

by: Kouni46892742 on Nov 7, 2007 07:16 PM chapter 0

Yes!

Um...you realize I meant the other fan-fic, right? ^-^"

by: KionaKina on Nov 7, 2007 07:24 PM chapter 0

O_O There's another fic?!

by: Kouni46892742 on Nov 7, 2007 07:25 PM chapter 0

"No Day but Today!"

by: KionaKina on Nov 7, 2007 07:27 PM chapter 0

aw fudge nelly...how'd I not know that?

by: gaaralover1 on Oct 26, 2007 10:30 PM chapter 11

Please hurry up!! This is good!

by: KionaKina on Oct 26, 2007 04:56 PM chapter 5

O_O NARA!!!!!

by: Kouni46892742 on Oct 26, 2007 04:58 PM chapter 0

Something tells me you're shocked...

by: KionaKina on Oct 26, 2007 04:54 PM chapter 4

Aw crud, she;s got a demon? this can't end well...

by: Kouni46892742 on Oct 26, 2007 04:55 PM chapter 0

Nothing with demons ever end well...but they're never boring!

by: KionaKina on Oct 26, 2007 04:49 PM chapter 3

Itachi...you weirdo HOW DARE YOU! ...I don't know what oyu've done BUT HOW DARE!

by: Kouni46892742 on Oct 26, 2007 04:51 PM chapter 0

Itachi is a weirdo...It's fun to make him a weirdo...

by: KionaKina on Oct 26, 2007 04:47 PM chapter 2

cute, I like Nara. She's really cool ^_^

And Teneka seems nice

But how did Nara realize she wa sin the Akatsuki? Did she recognize the robes?

by: Kouni46892742 on Oct 26, 2007 04:50 PM chapter 0

Yep! And when you see Tobi there, you kind of assume these things.

by: KionaKina on Oct 26, 2007 04:44 PM chapter 1

I know nothing of the Akatsuki but now I know it's a mask on Tobi, not his face which looks like some void...thing

Well, aweosme, it's well-written

by: Kouni46892742 on Oct 26, 2007 04:46 PM chapter 1

I know! That's what I said!Â And I know what's under Tobi's mask! *evil laugh*

by: KionaKina on Oct 26, 2007 04:41 PM chapter 0

O_O Dun...dun...DUN!!!

by: Sonic_the_Hedgehog on Oct 16, 2007 02:57 PM chapter 0

Wow. This story is sooooo awesome! Please continue!!! ^^

by: AnimeAngel87 on Sep 26, 2007 02:00 PM chapter 0

OMG I'M SO HYPER TODAY I HAD 2 BUTTERFINGERS, 2 CUPS OF HAWIIAN PUNCH, 3 ICE CREAM SANDWICHES, 5 SNICKERS. 5 HERSHEYS, A BOTTLE OF CHOCO SYRUP, SOME CARROTS(Those make me hyper too) AND LOTS AND LOTS OF LOLIPOPS!

by: AnimeAngel87 on Sep 26, 2007 01:58 PM chapter 0

YEYEYEYEYY!

KEWL SOTRYRYEJNDilas fhaweitf~

by: zopponde on Jul 13, 2007 04:22 PM chapter 11

O.O Stupid chapter, ending like that!

Nara, DON'T LET THE DEMON TAKE OVER! You can kill Kiba just as easily without giving your body up to some fuzzy white mess of chakra!!! >:D He doesn't deserve the quick death that the demon would give him!

by: Ryokou on Jul 12, 2007 11:14 AM chapter 0

Sorry 'bout not being able to read it. I was busy, and I'm reading it now, tho I'm only on chapter 4-5. Lol.
I really like it! Tobi. *sigh* Never leave kunai knives lying around! :p

by: crazicat06 on Jul 9, 2007 04:46 PM chapter 11

XD
NARA SNAP OUTTA IT!!!

by: YumeXItachi on Jul 9, 2007 01:42 PM chapter 11

0o...this was...AWESOME!!!!
New chapter!!! but i feel srry for Nara-San!!! >.<

by: KisaShika on Jul 9, 2007 12:53 PM chapter 11

Man, don't make us(the Akatsuki) seem so weak! Kisame alone, with just a clone,could kill 300 ANBU members easy!

But, awsome chapter! *quietly chants 'die Kiba die'*

by: DragonGirl1136 on Oct 28, 2007 08:30 AM chapter 11

This is true. ^-^ I mean, did you see him fighting Gai-sensei? And that was only with 30% of his chakra! XD

by: Kouni46892742 on Jul 9, 2007 12:55 PM chapter 0

I'm not! I'm just giving it a bit of attention. There are hundreds of thousands of ANBU and other Shinobi there.

by: DragonGirl1136 on Jul 9, 2007 12:42 PM chapter 11

YAY! NEW CHAPTER! *dances*

Oh my gosh! Poor Nara-chan! T_T

by: zopponde on Jun 5, 2007 03:15 PM chapter 10

Yay! Another great chapter! And I'm in it!! =D Great job, can't wait for more!

by: DragonGirl1136 on Jun 5, 2007 12:53 PM chapter 10

Kiba-teme! >.< How dare you hurt Nara-chan?! I'm gonna make Kisame-kun shave your head off for that!

This is really cool, Nara-chan. Keep it up! ^o^

by: KisaShika on Jun 5, 2007 11:27 AM chapter 10

Heh, cool. *Sends Teneka to kill Kiba*

by: YumeXItachi on Jun 5, 2007 09:26 AM chapter 10

wow...that was soooo freaking awesome!!! ^^ yes i'm n this chapter! ok i'm just gonna stop talking now but this was an awesome chapter!

by: DragonGirl1136 on Jun 4, 2007 01:47 PM chapter 9

Nara-chan rules! \(^o^)/

by: SonicDX1995 on Jun 1, 2007 04:13 PM chapter 15

yay pictres ^-^

by: DragonGirl1136 on Jun 1, 2007 12:41 PM chapter 15

Hey, this is really good, by the way.

by: DragonGirl1136 on Jun 1, 2007 11:51 AM chapter 9

Hey! She's from the Snow Village, myu! Cool! ^o^

by: YumeXItachi on Jun 1, 2007 09:27 AM chapter 9

cool!!!

by: YumeXItachi on Jun 1, 2007 09:27 AM chapter 8

*cries*Poor Nara-San!!!!!!!Kiba-teme,how dare u!he's an ungrateful mutt! >X< this chapter was sooo sad!

by: YumeXItachi on Jun 1, 2007 09:12 AM chapter 7

aww!so cute!this is going great!good job! :3

by: zukosavatarofthesunandmoon on Jun 1, 2007 06:04 AM chapter 0

I WANNA BE IN IT

by: KisaShika on May 31, 2007 08:28 PM chapter 8

Aww.... Sorry, it was sad. I just can't bring myself to cry right now. I just had the best day of my life. But, please continue.

by: DragonGirl1136 on May 31, 2007 06:30 PM chapter 15

Aw! Crud! I wanted to be in the story. I do know the answers though!

Fan: Sasuke
Flower Petal: Sakura
Swirl in a Circle: Naruto
Swirl: Chouji
Flame: Hinata
Slash Mark: Shikamaru
Fang: Kiba
Leaf: Lee?
Kunai: Tenten
Bug: Shino
Cross: Neji?
Flower: Ino

by: Kouni46892742 on May 31, 2007 06:31 PM chapter 0

You can still if you wanna. Just give me a profile....

by: DragonGirl1136 on May 31, 2007 06:18 PM chapter 8

Oh! Poor Nara-chan! I actually cried! Oh, Kiba-teme! Now you've done it! >.< First you tell everyone about Nekomata, and now you hurt poor Nara-chan?! Errrrrrrrrgh....

by: DragonGirl1136 on May 31, 2007 06:01 PM chapter 1

Aw! Tobi's such a good boy! X3

by: crazicat06 on May 31, 2007 05:47 PM chapter 8

*cries* Poor Nara-chan! Kiba scratched her!
*growls* Kiba is gonna pay for this......... Even if he hates Nara that gives him no right to touch her!

by: YumeXItachi on May 30, 2007 07:24 AM chapter 6

ohh!great story so far! X3

by: KisaShika on May 29, 2007 10:44 AM chapter 7

Pretty good. Just, one questesion. How would the not know she is in the Akatsuki? If she had been gone two years, some ninja would have rechognized her, and she'd be in the bingo book. Meh, anyway. Keep on writing.

by: Kouni46892742 on May 31, 2007 06:02 PM chapter 0

Ha! I figured something out!

by: Kouni46892742 on May 29, 2007 10:47 AM chapter 0

You do have a point there...lets just say she was smart and kept away from the Konoha ninja...

by: zopponde on May 28, 2007 09:16 AM chapter 7

What can I say? It's great as always! Keep writing, please~!

by: zopponde on May 8, 2007 05:41 PM chapter 15

Wait...*blinks furiously* I won? I'm not delerious? It wouldn't surprise me if I was...whether or not I actually won ^^'

So, I'm reeally not feeling like posting my character's profile for all to see, for several reasons, so I'm just going to PM it. I assume that's okay?

by: Sofyuchiha9 on Apr 29, 2007 07:05 PM chapter 9

awesome pics 83

by: Sofyuchiha9 on Apr 29, 2007 07:04 PM chapter 0

hmmm...interesting!^^
I'll read the rest whence i get the chancE!^^

by: crazicat06 on Apr 28, 2007 02:03 PM chapter 9

wOoT!

by: crazicat06 on Apr 28, 2007 09:14 AM chapter 5

Omg! Poor Nara!

by: zopponde on Apr 28, 2007 08:54 AM chapter 5

WAA--it ended! Ah! It's...ended...and...now I can't read anything new...I'm sad...

I can't remember if I faved this story yet or not...did I?...Oh, I'll just click the button and then I'll know I faved it.

by: KisaShika on Apr 28, 2007 07:56 AM chapter 5

Cool. Sorry for the short comment, I have alot on my mind right now.

by: crazicat06 on Apr 28, 2007 03:33 AM chapter 4

*gasp* No! Bad Itachi! XD..... OMG! Ihave a MAJOR idea! But maybe you dont wanna hear it..... I's kinda stupid....

by: crazicat06 on Apr 28, 2007 03:30 AM chapter 3

Must. Keep. Reading! This is a really capturing story! (exuse the pun....)

by: crazicat06 on Apr 28, 2007 03:27 AM chapter 2

*laughs to death* Oh my God.... Go Tobi! ^.^ Kisame deserves a kunai in the foot sometimes. No offense to anyone who likes him.

by: DragonGirl1136 on May 31, 2007 06:03 PM chapter 2

No offense taken. *hides kunai behind back*

by: crazicat06 on Apr 28, 2007 03:23 AM chapter 1

Yay! Tobi! ^.^ If a friend of mine at school saw this, she would freak out. She goes nuts if you just mention Tobi's name. It's funny.

by: crazicat06 on Apr 28, 2007 03:20 AM chapter 0

O.o Poor Nara-chan. WHAT THE HELL HAPPENED TO HER THAT MADE HER LOSE KIBA?

by: royally_spooky on Apr 25, 2007 02:55 PM chapter 0

Oh okay! Yeah Tobi is cute!^__^
Keep up with the story though, nice job!

by: YumeXItachi on Apr 21, 2007 08:33 PM chapter 4

.....*cries*it stopped!!! still lol it's a great story!^^

by: KisaShika on Apr 21, 2007 06:52 AM chapter 4

Hah, you hit the nail on the head with Teneka's personality. But, I'll say this again, I love this story!Cant' wait for the next chapter!

by: KidRaccoon on Apr 20, 2007 10:07 PM chapter 2

I like it! It's been a while since I've read something worth commenting on! Tobi's a good boy!

by: SilverSea0413 on Apr 20, 2007 04:18 PM chapter 3

kyaa. suspense, keep going don't you dare stop! <(^_^)>

by: SilverSea0413 on Apr 20, 2007 04:16 PM chapter 2

very good. ^_^ *nods in agreement*

by: SilverSea0413 on Apr 20, 2007 04:13 PM chapter 1

^_^ kawaii. very nice, you already know that i don't know much about the akatsuki... ah well. i've come to somewhat like tobi. ^_^

by: SilverSea0413 on Apr 20, 2007 04:10 PM chapter 0

it's descriptive. very good start! ^_^

by: YumeXItachi on Apr 19, 2007 02:17 PM chapter 3

NYA!!!!!!soooooooo good!!!! -_- it stopped....

by: KisaShika on Apr 19, 2007 02:01 PM chapter 3

Nuuu! Please get the next chapter up soon! *kicks Itachi for being a turd and not telling Kisame*

by: YumeXItachi on Apr 18, 2007 05:13 PM chapter 2

oi!this is such a good story!!!^^

by: KisaShika on Apr 18, 2007 02:11 PM chapter 2

Oh man, not the right convorsation to be brought up. Hut, a nice touch to the story. I like it! And, hah. Kisame stepped on a kunai?! Outch.

by: royally_spooky on Apr 17, 2007 06:35 PM chapter 1

Ahhh!!! I really like Tobi *cries*
Wow! It seems as if KisaShika likes the guys I like^^
Really good story though! Keep it up!

by: Kouni46892742 on Apr 17, 2007 06:51 PM chapter 0

Hey, I am the one that likes Tobi! ME!
I see why you like him. He's so kawaii!

by: royally_spooky on Apr 17, 2007 06:29 PM chapter 0

Wow! That was really good!^__^
I enjoyed this story!
It has a very well made up story line.
I really like Kiba.. that's sad that he died, along with everyone else.:(
Oooo she was kidnapped by Kisame!!! lol
Keep it up! Really good so far^___^

by: Kouni46892742 on Apr 17, 2007 06:51 PM chapter 0

Actually, Kiba didn't die. There was an incident with Nara's demon, so now everyone that had once trusted her now hates and shuns her, except for maybe Rock Lee.

by: YumeXItachi on Apr 17, 2007 04:26 PM chapter 0

0_o....it stopped....NOOOO!lol this was so good!when's the next one coming out?!^^

by: KisaShika on Apr 17, 2007 02:28 PM chapter 1

Aww, so cute. I like how this is going so far. Your right, your wrighting is getting much better! If you need to know more about Teneka's personality when she's in the Akatsuki, just ask.

by: Kouni46892742 on Apr 17, 2007 02:31 PM chapter 0

um.....whats her personallity.....with the chap i have written out, shes like the fun-loving type.....at least whens shes not busy