Pokemon: The Journey by Tuxedo_Mini_Mask

Jun 30, 2008 10:05 AM by: mew54 chapter 16

i never commented weird... anyway pea lolz

Jun 27, 2008 05:59 PM by: Symphoniaprincess101 chapter 16

ok it was about time u updated><

May 13, 2008 04:35 PM by: Diamond2234 chapter 9

xD Yey~~! xD
But I has a BF already he is gonna be pissed :D

Apr 12, 2008 07:33 PM by: myartmaybebadbutatleastitry chapter 16

lulz [see, I'm different x3]

Apr 7, 2008 07:11 AM by: wolf-girl-ghost chapter 16

Lulz awesomeness!!

Apr 6, 2008 06:41 PM by: cooleo chapter 16

awesome!

sheath:*laughes* pea...

me:what was that?

Sheath: nevermind...

Apr 6, 2008 04:43 PM by: sapphirestar7789 chapter 16

sweet! i'm referred to as Crys in here, right? lol

Apr 6, 2008 05:51 PM by: Tuxedo_Mini_Mask chapter 0

yep ^^

Apr 6, 2008 01:44 PM by: mew54 chapter 16

lol

Apr 6, 2008 09:50 AM by: TKxKari224 chapter 16

OMg! lol that was funny XD

Apr 5, 2008 01:29 PM by: boykingkilla chapter 16

Heh, This chapter was great! Why did it take you so long to get it done though buddy? Just curious. PLEASE DON'T HURT ME! * shield myself using my arm's.*

Apr 5, 2008 01:38 PM by: Tuxedo_Mini_Mask chapter 0

well,Remember, I lost the original Chapter which was like 4 times longer than this. AND I had School crap, And I had to do a Bunch of shows. And I was failing math. And I was depressed becuz I had lost all the chapters to this story so I just kind of dismissed it from my mind. And NOW It's spring break and I promised I would add a chapter to every unfinished story. You will be able to see my to do list in a few minutes up on my profile XD.

Apr 5, 2008 10:33 PM by: boykingkilla chapter 0

Cool, Thanks! *hugs*

Apr 5, 2008 01:03 PM by: FallOutGirlAARHinder chapter 16

*blushes* Y do all the cutes one have to be younger...hey do u know a site of wut Lucky looks like...*thinking* maybe he will be lucky...Dana is kinda lustful believe it or not...hehehe

Apr 5, 2008 01:04 PM by: Tuxedo_Mini_Mask chapter 0

lol your crazy XD

Lol IDK

Apr 5, 2008 01:14 PM by: FallOutGirlAARHinder chapter 0

U SHOULD SO DO A SCENE BETWEEN THE 2!!!!!!

hey the reply system works again!

Dec 21, 2007 07:17 AM by: TKxKari224 chapter 15

thats ok just dont forget about it! haha ^^

Dec 21, 2007 07:16 AM by: TKxKari224 chapter 14

UWAHH! chris is a sicko! >.<

i wanna hear more about lucky and milli ^^

i like those two :3

Dec 21, 2007 06:58 AM by: TKxKari224 chapter 13

UWAAHH!!!! ^^ ^^ ^^ ^^

Dec 21, 2007 06:57 AM by: TKxKari224 chapter 12

omg! sweet!! :D

Dec 21, 2007 06:46 AM by: TKxKari224 chapter 11

ohh suspence!! :D

Dec 21, 2007 06:24 AM by: TKxKari224 chapter 8

^^ nice

Dec 21, 2007 06:23 AM by: TKxKari224 chapter 7

cool :D

Dec 21, 2007 06:23 AM by: TKxKari224 chapter 6

THIS IS THE BEST!! >.<

Dec 21, 2007 06:19 AM by: TKxKari224 chapter 5

OMGOMG!! i wanna read it all!! :D

Dec 21, 2007 06:13 AM by: TKxKari224 chapter 4

omg!! THIS is sweet!! X3

Dec 21, 2007 05:49 AM by: TKxKari224 chapter 3

haha lions tigers and bears OH MY! ^^

Dec 21, 2007 05:46 AM by: TKxKari224 chapter 2

aww poor lucky!

Dec 21, 2007 05:40 AM by: TKxKari224 chapter 1

oh! ^^

Dec 21, 2007 05:40 AM by: TKxKari224 chapter 0

haha this will be exciting! ^^

Nov 21, 2007 12:03 PM by: mew54 chapter 0

can i ask them on here

Nov 20, 2007 11:48 AM by: AlleyCat17 chapter 15

that ok i don't belme you besides you do have to many people to wright about so i don't mine and i fogive you.

Nov 5, 2007 06:20 PM by: boykingkilla chapter 15

I forgive ya tux, At least i can get some school work done now. Im failing ALGEBRA! I HATE ALGEBRA!

Nov 10, 2007 09:32 AM by: Tuxedo_Mini_Mask chapter 0

I have a D in that class -.-

Nov 23, 2007 09:26 AM by: boykingkilla chapter 0

Me: *smiles* I have an F minus. And im a senior too, But thats ok.

Nov 3, 2007 04:23 PM by: sharp-fang chapter 15

Angel:*crosses arms*Oh sure!Right when I come in you decide to stop writing it!><

Um,Angel calm down,he said he'd finish it...

Angel:I don't care!And Sailor Moon is for girls!><

Angel!Stop being so rude!

Angel:Hmph!*turns head*

I'm sorry about Angel,Tux...T.T

Nov 4, 2007 06:26 PM by: Tuxedo_Mini_Mask chapter 0

angel I'm about to shove you wings up your @$$ and around the corner if you don't shut up...

OOOPS, Sorry about that, it slipped -.-

Nov 4, 2007 06:28 PM by: Tuxedo_Mini_Mask chapter 0

*Crosses fingers behind back* =D

Apr 5, 2008 07:01 PM by: sharp-fang chapter 0

lol.I'll remember to slap her for you.*winks*

Angel:*sticks tongue out at me*

-.-'

Oct 29, 2007 04:07 PM by: Diamond2234 chapter 11

hey in the next chapter can me and Crys trade our Gastly and Shuppet plz? cause i really don't like gastly to tell the truth sorry xD

Oct 28, 2007 12:45 AM by: myartmaybebadbutatleastitry chapter 0

I just read this whole thing, and I'd just like to say it is hilarios! It's okay that you didn't finish it, but I'm curious. Only one of them could be champion, and which one would it be?

Nov 23, 2007 07:04 PM by: Tuxedo_Mini_Mask chapter 0

THANKS! lol I thought about that aswell! I think Anyone could be becuz they each have there own specialness to them!

But I can tell you it's someone who has the respect of everyone, someone who gains so much respect and who trains with one of the 2 Champs of all of Tono... it all comes down to 3 people and only the one with the most training shall prevail!

Oct 26, 2007 02:30 PM by: cooleo chapter 15

IT'S ALRIGHT! I don't mind!

rock lee: JOIN ME IN A YOUTHFUL YOUTH HUG OF YOUTH!

me: *grabs tranquilaizer* LEE!

lee: *backs up against wall* sorry

me: okay! :P

Oct 18, 2007 02:51 PM by: Diamond2234 chapter 12

sorry Tux i can't read all of it cause of the tornado forming right now baibai :x

Oct 17, 2007 03:25 PM by: Symphoniaprincess101 chapter 15

i fogive you tux^^and besides you might hate me in the story your sis Dana is writing about the mistery scouts that she leaves you in suspen alot "Reghi Leighe(Teao)II"*cough*CSS*cough*^^'

Oct 18, 2007 04:36 PM by: Tuxedo_Mini_Mask chapter 0

lol YOU!!! *Points at you dramatically* CRIMSON SUN!!! Lol, YOU KILLED THE MONSTER THAT I WANTED REVENGE ON!!! AND YOU KEEP INTERUPTING MY BATTLE!!!

Lol Jk, I think it's awesome that you decided to Join! Oh and you should also check out my story "Quest of The Silver Crystal", Same Scouts and Everything, lol well except crimson sun and the other one... lol Ohh well, You should read it lol, Mine is a completely different Storyline though lol

But I will be looking for new sailor Scouts for Season 2! lol

Oct 20, 2007 05:20 PM by: Symphoniaprincess101 chapter 0

sign me up for seson 2 lol

Oct 20, 2007 05:43 PM by: Tuxedo_Mini_Mask chapter 0

Lol You'll have to do that =D but don't forget, The season Isn't over yet but it will be and I'm not sure I'm taking scouts YET lol

But I will for sure on monday =D lol if not tuesday

Oct 7, 2007 04:23 PM by: Kouni46892742 chapter 0

UUUPPPDDDAAATTTEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Sep 2, 2007 10:15 AM by: boykingkilla chapter 0

You never updated... FEEL THE WRATH OF DANCING PNJ TIME BIRDO! *shoots a dozen egg's at you and they all hit you in the face.*

Sep 26, 2007 03:03 PM by: Symphoniaprincess101 chapter 0

that has to hurt serves you right for not updateing lolXD

Sep 1, 2007 06:36 PM by: sharp-fang chapter 0

More chapters!Add more chapters with my Angel in them!=P

Oct 2, 2007 12:32 PM by: mew54 chapter 0

stop nagging!i wasnt talking to you i was talking to my cousin

Nov 3, 2007 04:24 PM by: sharp-fang chapter 0

I am your cousin,silly.=P

Aug 21, 2007 08:44 AM by: AlleyCat17 chapter 14

wow awesome chapter and you did a really great job on it.and i hope you update soon please.

Aug 13, 2007 03:24 PM by: boykingkilla chapter 0

UPDATE, OR FEEL THE WRATH OF DANCING PBJ TIME BIRDO!

Aug 13, 2007 11:00 AM by: Diamond2234 chapter 10

hmmm lets see Meditet,Gastly,and Piplup ..... okay....Meditet:Focus,Gastly:ghosty,and Piplup:...........Hydro XD lol sucky names i know.

Aug 13, 2007 02:50 AM by: PunkWolfGirl chapter 0

Update.... NOW!!!

Aug 12, 2007 03:46 PM by: boykingkilla chapter 0

Update update UPDATE!

Aug 10, 2007 07:13 PM by: Kouni46892742 chapter 0

Update, DARN YOU!!!

Aug 5, 2007 07:26 AM by: Symphoniaprincess101 chapter 0

9 People^^

Aug 5, 2007 06:31 AM by: PunkWolfGirl chapter 14

*Ninth Comment* LMAO!!!! THAT IS THE FUNNIEST STORY ON HERE IVE EVER READ!!!! ROFLMAO!!! -Cough Hack Cough- Anyway.... Yes... I LOVE This Story!!! ^^ Do You Already Have The Next Few Chapters About Them Figured Out...? Cuz I Have An Idea.... >=D The Shadeshink's Name Is Indeed Shadow. ^^ You Nailed The Whole Chapter!!! LOVED IT!!! Awesome Work!!! KEEP IT UP!!!! -Explodes-

Alsooooo... It Took me Like An Hour To Read This!!!! LMAO!

Aug 5, 2007 04:18 PM by: Tuxedo_Mini_Mask chapter 14

YAY!!! someone else finaly commented!!! and yeah, its very long!*Imagion how long it took me to write it?*

But yeah, the next chapter *which Will be added either tomorrow or the day after that, depends on if I'm on* will be Lucky, Mili, Kara, and Mocha's Story =D and then after that I will just keep going till everyone is at the 5th or 4th gym and THEN I will add the group chapter and then I will add chapters up untill the next group chapter and then after that the movie Event! lol I'm open to your Ideas =D

and did you read all the chapters to the other story =D lol you have alot of catchin up to do, and untill I know that you and Sasukesgirl have read it then I'm not gona add a chapter to that lol

Aug 3, 2007 04:22 PM by: Tuxedo_Mini_Mask chapter 14

lol 8??? SO CLOSE! but not close enough!!! 8 out of 20 people?!? I'M NOT POSTING THAT CHAPTER UNTILL ATLEAST 9 OF YOU COMMENT!!

Aug 3, 2007 06:40 AM by: Aquaberry15 chapter 14

OMG that was funny! XD I coulden't stop laughing, you my sir are the best at writing pokemon OC stories! XD *starts coughing from laughing*

Aug 1, 2007 04:20 PM by: boykingkilla chapter 14

OMG, FUNNIEST THING EVER!

Aug 1, 2007 02:27 PM by: FallOutGirlAARHinder chapter 0

im sorry but i cant get over this

WHAT THE HELL U MADE ME GO OUT WITH CHRIS!!!!!!!!!!! EVEN THOUGH IT WAS JUST SOMTHING TO GET THE CROWD AWAY FROM U!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MAN ARNET U LUCKY!!!!!!!!!!!!!*sends out Gustyeon*

Dana- Gustyeon use Steal Wing on Leo!!!!!!!!!

Gustyeon- *cunfussed* Gus????? (what)

Dana- Just do it!!!!!!!!

Gustyeon- *does steal wing and it hits u and leaves a cut around ur waist* Gusty!!!!!!!(yeah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!)

Aug 1, 2007 09:58 AM by: Symphoniaprincess101 chapter 14

*singsong voice*Somebody's Jelous^^*normall voice*Awsome^^

Aug 1, 2007 08:53 AM by: katara719 chapter 14

Nice! Great addition to the story. :D
~katara

Jul 31, 2007 08:40 PM by: cooleo chapter 14

sweet.

Jul 31, 2007 07:41 PM by: Kakashizfangirl1234 chapter 0

hey count me in i love all sorts of poke'mon i can help out since my pikachu dose not mind at all.
age 12 + name C
gender female
futer poke'mon chimeko, pipplup,evee, lucario,prishun,pikachu
favorit poke'mon prishun
items in bag basics ,camra, paper,and a egg of a prishun.
clothes: a white t-shirt old dark green jeans with extra pokets.complet with camo bandana.
eys + hair e:light ice blue h:brunet
skin: cream
persanality:out going, gental an frendly.
summery for story: she left home the next day after her mother got sent to the hospitl. laving whith her pikachu in tow to fo fill her dead boyfriends dream. and find true love in a cross over.ps kakashi from naruto

Jul 31, 2007 07:23 PM by: Kakashizfangirl1234 chapter 0

hey count me in i love all sorts of poke'mon i can help out since my pikachu dose not mind at all.

Jul 31, 2007 05:56 PM by: Kouni46892742 chapter 0

FUNNEH! UPDATE MORE!

Jul 31, 2007 05:54 PM by: FallOutGirlAARHinder chapter 0

LOL!!!!!!!!!!!THAT WAS HILARIOUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

sorry i didnt comment earlier i had interuptions through it. but i dont wear dresses O_O i freaked my out when u said that. remember im a tomboy.

yet in the next chappy can i ride my Absol or Gustyen since in this were stronger and got more pokemon?

but that was hilarious!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!and it was my fav group for this story!!!!!!!!Chris is hilarious and Crystal is jeolous so it makes it perfect. Roybin is a laid back person like me. And Angel is flirtatious!!!!!!!I wonder what she seec in Chris??????????O_O it freaks me out though

Jul 31, 2007 05:07 PM by: sharp-fang chapter 14

Yeeey!I love it!You got Angel perfect!^-^
But Sparx talks remember?^^
But he only says Jooo! when he attacks!^-^

Jul 31, 2007 05:14 PM by: Tuxedo_Mini_Mask chapter 14

Yeah I know, It's just I wasn't sure if I could let your Pokemon talk and not everyone elses lol ^^'

Thanks for reading!!! =D and for the comment =D

Jul 31, 2007 08:53 AM by: mew54 chapter 11

im going to kill you.thats not my type*eyes turn red*

Jul 31, 2007 02:15 PM by: Tuxedo_Mini_Mask chapter 11

3 things...

1.What are you talking about???

2.It's not you, it's your character

3. WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT?!?

lol, seriously

Jul 31, 2007 05:08 PM by: sharp-fang chapter 0

She's talking about how you made her character drown...lol

Jul 30, 2007 08:47 PM by: PrincessThug chapter 0

dis is cool man

Jul 30, 2007 10:27 AM by: Symphoniaprincess101 chapter 0

ppls guess what?^^it's the 30th^^

Jul 31, 2007 02:17 PM by: Tuxedo_Mini_Mask chapter 0

Yeah =D and guess what?!? the first chapter of many will be added!!! but They will be submitted VERY SLOWLY!!! lol

Jul 21, 2007 09:27 PM by: Tuxedo_Mini_Mask chapter 13

OHHH NOOO!!! it's already past the 20th! Okay, My internet may not be fixed yet, but I can still type on it. SOOO I Am going to right each chapter untill everyone is Past the 7th gym and ON their way to the 8th! that meens waaaay more then 5 chapters will be added.... More like5 and then 1 more *A group one* then I'll Add about 2 too 3 more and then their will be ANOTHER group one and then 1 more, and then the movie event =D........ Or I will Just Clump then all together and just add 5 really long ones.... lol either way, the Movie Event will be Ready to Type by the 30th *If my INternet is fixed by then -.-* lol

Jul 23, 2007 02:04 PM by: boykingkilla chapter 0

Please hurry, I have good news. My fursona is finally drawn, If you want a link to see him then just ask me.

Jul 23, 2007 09:46 AM by: Symphoniaprincess101 chapter 0

all right but make it fast i'm anxious here^^

Jul 17, 2007 07:12 PM by: Tuxedo_Mini_Mask chapter 13

RRRRGGGG!!! 2 things Ya'll! 1, my internet isn't Fixed yet and my bro's PC doesn't have MS WORD!!! -.- this is not fair
and even if my internet was fixxed I still have to submitt some Pictures for the new Tono Region Pokemon =(!!!

Jul 19, 2007 11:18 AM by: boykingkilla chapter 0

You can submit the chapters by using adobe reader i think, That is what i did at an afterschool club once.

Jul 21, 2007 06:06 AM by: Symphoniaprincess101 chapter 0

that's cool i think u can do that too my cousin once did that with a different website once^^

Jul 16, 2007 06:21 PM by: Tuxedo_Mini_Mask chapter 0

O my god... My Internet is STILL broken, the Wire's didn't connect to my computer. But if my computer is not fixed by tomorrow then I will try to get the chapters over to a disk and add them on my bro's computer. SORRY EVERYONE!!!

Jul 18, 2007 11:33 PM by: boykingkilla chapter 0

Just take your time.

Jul 17, 2007 09:35 AM by: Symphoniaprincess101 chapter 0

it's ok like i said take all the time u need^^

Jul 15, 2007 08:29 PM by: mew54 chapter 13

can my oc star be in it too.my cousin drew it and i dont want to be banned from here

Jul 16, 2007 06:31 PM by: Tuxedo_Mini_Mask chapter 13

NO!!! You can't have 2 OC'S in the story! lol Sorry but No!, and why would you get banned? did you submit her picture on your name? if so.... DELETE IT!

Jul 15, 2007 04:21 PM by: Tuxedo_Mini_Mask chapter 13

I'm SO SO SO SO SO SORRY!!!! but my computer's internet is down *I'm on my brothers right now* and it's been down for a Really long time, BUT I do have the chapters on MY computer. Tomorrow the dude will be here to drill a hole threw my floor and stick a cable up it and attach it to my computer so it will work. I'm really sorry! Please don't hate me or this story =D

I'm going to go edit a chapter so it will apear to be updated *It seems that thats the only time people look at the story*

Jul 16, 2007 11:48 AM by: boykingkilla chapter 0

Dont worry bout it, Im just glad that you havent forgotten about us. Oh btw, When is the dancing with the anime stars thing gonna start? ( Im a DEDEDE!)

Jul 17, 2007 09:34 AM by: Symphoniaprincess101 chapter 0

the what now?_?

Jul 16, 2007 10:08 AM by: Symphoniaprincess101 chapter 0

As long as the story continues take all the time u need^^

Jul 15, 2007 04:37 PM by: katara719 chapter 0

That's ok. Take your time. ^^ I look forward to the next chappies, though.
~katara

Jul 15, 2007 10:34 AM by: boykingkilla chapter 0

WHEN IS THE NEXT CHAPTER GOING TO BE UP?

Jul 14, 2007 11:42 PM by: sapphirestar7789 chapter 13

sweet!

Jul 14, 2007 11:42 PM by: sapphirestar7789 chapter 12

i have no idea what pokemon i have. me confused!!!

Jul 14, 2007 11:40 PM by: sapphirestar7789 chapter 11

awww..i wanted a shuppet.

Jul 14, 2007 11:38 PM by: sapphirestar7789 chapter 10

i don't know my team yet... =(

Jul 13, 2007 11:54 AM by: AlleyCat17 chapter 13

yeah i can't wait for those chapters.but manily the one that has my team on.

Jul 9, 2007 03:44 PM by: Symphoniaprincess101 chapter 13

I CAN'T WAIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!^^ ^^ THIS IS GETTING AWSOME^^OW i went to the beach today and i gaot sunburned for the 1st time so it hurts alot i can bearly move let alone thisT^T

Jul 8, 2007 05:30 PM by: boykingkilla chapter 13

WOOT, I CANT WAIT to see what happens to my character. ( I have a weird feeling that your going to make my character get knocked out. If that happens then oh well right?)

Jul 8, 2007 03:33 PM by: katara719 chapter 13

COOL! I can't wait for more chapters! ^^ Even though Avery isn't in the story yet, I still thoroughly enjoy reading all of the chapters. :)
~katara

Jul 8, 2007 03:43 PM by: Tuxedo_Mini_Mask chapter 13

Thanks and she as well as Angel and Jordan should be in at least one of the chapters and if not then they will for surely
Be in the next one =D

Jul 9, 2007 05:43 PM by: katara719 chapter 0

Cool! Thank ya! ^^
~katara

Jul 8, 2007 03:17 PM by: PunkWolfGirl chapter 13

WHOOOOOOOOOOOO! Can't Wait! x3 That's Just Gonna Totally RAWK!!! =D

Jul 8, 2007 03:35 PM by: Tuxedo_Mini_Mask chapter 0

YEAH!!! and it's Easier to write about one group. I will be able to type a whole lot faster! I meen, All I gota do is read my notes, and parts of chapters I've already written and role with it! =D

Jul 8, 2007 02:39 PM by: wolf-girl-ghost chapter 12

YAAY I so luv ninetails! >w<

Jul 8, 2007 02:18 PM by: wolf-girl-ghost chapter 13

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTA!!!!!!!! X3333

Jul 8, 2007 02:41 PM by: Tuxedo_Mini_Mask chapter 13

I'm glad you are exited I know I am!!! alot is going to happen! most people will be at the 4th gym by the end of the chapter! =D

Jul 5, 2007 08:08 PM by: FallOutGirlAARHinder chapter 8

MOVIE EVENT!!!!!!! YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i wonder what will happen i cant wait now

Jul 5, 2007 08:48 PM by: Tuxedo_Mini_Mask chapter 0

I HAVE to get all of the chapters in before the Movie evenwhich reminds me... CHAPTER MAN! to the rescue!!

Jul 6, 2007 02:30 PM by: boykingkilla chapter 0

Will we need to draw our characters for the movie? Cause i suck at drawing humans.

Jul 6, 2007 06:51 PM by: Tuxedo_Mini_Mask chapter 0

No, But you can if you want... it's not an ACTUAL "movie" movie, It's just a movie event, Where I write the movie script and you read it =D but for the Theme song crap I will be useing EVERYONE'S best Pokemon art!!!! =D

Jul 6, 2007 09:36 PM by: boykingkilla chapter 0

Oh k, That means that im gonna need to start doodling some new pokemon then. :)

Jul 5, 2007 04:28 PM by: Tuxedo_Mini_Mask chapter 0

I just added a chapter to "Pokemon: The Twin Legend" now i've gota add a chapter to this 0.0 2 of em!!! you all should really check out the twin legend! its about the Tono Region... It would really mean a lot to me if you all read it... =D

Jul 4, 2007 08:19 PM by: Tuxedo_Mini_Mask chapter 0

RRRGGGG.... THUNDER!!! This is making me Really mad! everytime I try to add a chapter something comes up... well Nuthing else is going to EVER come up!!! I am going to add a chapter tomorow morning *if I am inable to add one tonight becuz Of the Thunder* AND I will also add one in the Afternoon and the day after that I add another THEN we will go on schedule from then! I am SO sorry for all the Delaying, IT WILL NOT HAPPEN AGAIN!!! and if it does I am LETERLY going to TYPE ALL the chapters a Head of time! well hope I can add a chapter, well bye =D

*At least I might be able to add a short 400-500 Word chapter on the story "Pokemon: The Twin Legend" You all should check it out, it's about the Tono Region*

Jul 5, 2007 11:47 AM by: boykingkilla chapter 0

Man Tux, There has been alot of things happening to all of us. Today i woke up with a rock in my throat and puked out nothing but hot air and a little phlem. ( stupid heat barfing...) I had a headache last night cause of the fireworks... And the only good thing out of it is that DemiAmoremon and Reelomon are back together and i found a wifi access point in my grandparents house. ( ARRRRGH, I hate my grandparents cause they ALWAYS ARGUE!)

Jul 5, 2007 01:54 PM by: Tuxedo_Mini_Mask chapter 0

lol well I have a lot of catching up to do with this story... CHAPTER MAN TO THE RESCUE!!!! *Goes to add chapters*

Jul 5, 2007 09:25 PM by: boykingkilla chapter 0

Me- *smiles stupidly* Here, let me help you with those. *i turn into my super saiyin 4 form* *I woosh off to help you with the chapters.* XD

Jul 5, 2007 09:46 PM by: Tuxedo_Mini_Mask chapter 0

I'm gona need al the Help I can get... Maybe it wouldn't take this long to add a chapter if there weren't so many People in it o well ALOT is going to change after the Movie event... ALOT lol

Jul 6, 2007 05:16 PM by: boykingkilla chapter 0

I could help you if you want, The only thing is that i would have to email you the stuff that i write. I have your email so that isnt a problem, The big problem is that i have the mid-state fair coming up and gotta get ready to show my market goat.

Jul 4, 2007 12:32 PM by: Tuxedo_Mini_Mask chapter 0

DANGIT!!! Yesterday when I was writing the chapter my mom made me get off so she could defrag and clean my computer and it's files!!!! now the only Thing I can do is add a chapter today tomorrow and the next day, and then GET BACK ON SCHEDULE!!! lol it's going to be a long sleepless and Stressful week for me =D

Jul 2, 2007 11:57 AM by: Tuxedo_Mini_Mask chapter 0

No chapter will be added today, Yesterday I had a Family thing I had to and Today I have a doctors Appointment and will be un-able to add the Chapter today, BUT tomorow I will TRY to type up both the new chapters and maybe even have them Both in one =D

Oh well Gota go to the doctors!! bye everyone =D

Jul 2, 2007 02:26 PM by: boykingkilla chapter 0

I hate going to the doctor, The reason is that im afraid of needles. 9 Yes i know, NEEDLES? He is a little scaredy cat.) I am seriously afraid of them so i dont get my vaccines when i need to and just get sick and let my immune system take over.

Jul 2, 2007 03:24 PM by: Symphoniaprincess101 chapter 0

i hate needles too but when i have my dad and my music there with me i hardly ever feel it.AWWWW MAN NO NEW CHAPTER TO DAY TTTTT^TTTTT

Jul 2, 2007 11:56 AM by: Sasukesgirlfriend chapter 12

I LIKE IT!
But I'm getting confused. Was Mili suppose to have the ekans or me?
*all dizzy looking*

Jul 2, 2007 12:05 PM by: Tuxedo_Mini_Mask chapter 0

Ohh crap, I got the names mixed up in that One part... But Yeash You caught the ekans =D Heres the section

Kara: *Creeped out* but-

Mocha: I know You Probly Wanted it, But I like it. I think it's Cute

The Pokeball stopped shaking and we all know what that meens....

Mocha: YES!!! I GOT AN EKANS!!!

Kara: *Murming* 0.0 Yeah, And You can Keep it...

Jul 2, 2007 11:48 AM by: Sasukesgirlfriend chapter 11

NNNNNNNNNNNNNIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIICCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE _._!!!

Jul 2, 2007 11:50 AM by: Tuxedo_Mini_Mask chapter 0

thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu =D

Jul 1, 2007 03:38 PM by: AlleyCat17 chapter 10

oh and teddarisa(i don't care how to spell it) can be female and her name is kira.

Jul 1, 2007 03:41 PM by: Tuxedo_Mini_Mask chapter 0

GREAT =D

Jul 1, 2007 03:30 PM by: AlleyCat17 chapter 10

my new pokemon can be a boy and his name can be flame.(houndor).

Jul 1, 2007 03:39 PM by: Tuxedo_Mini_Mask chapter 0

cool =D

Jul 1, 2007 11:03 AM by: AlleyCat17 chapter 12

that is a great chapter and i got 3 pokemon now yeah.but i can't belive im and the others are going to lose in the next chapter.*crys*

Jul 1, 2007 01:02 PM by: Tuxedo_Mini_Mask chapter 0

ohhh and nick name your new Pokemon and TELL me on CHAPTER 10 =D

Jul 1, 2007 12:58 PM by: Tuxedo_Mini_Mask chapter 0

lol Now just think at what you could lose at... You could loose at a race or at a 3 way battle againist some Jerks or you could lose at a gym battle lol, You never Know =D

Jul 1, 2007 09:42 AM by: boykingkilla chapter 12

Dude, THIS WAS SO FRIKING HILARIOUS! =D

Jul 1, 2007 01:05 PM by: Tuxedo_Mini_Mask chapter 0

I know *pops Collar* lol

Jul 1, 2007 06:22 PM by: boykingkilla chapter 0

Are you going to do the same thing in the next chapter? (I mean the humor as well as action and flirting lol.) I might make a Sailor moon oc, But if i do he is going to be a character that starts of evil and gradually turns good.

Jul 1, 2007 08:18 AM by: cooleo chapter 0

cloud may be the runt, but he will grow strong! *does rock lees fire eyes*

Jul 1, 2007 01:03 PM by: Tuxedo_Mini_Mask chapter 0

lol

Jul 1, 2007 07:29 AM by: PunkWolfGirl chapter 12

YEAH! Kool Chapter! ^-^

Jul 1, 2007 01:35 PM by: Tuxedo_Mini_Mask chapter 0

Thank you

Jun 30, 2007 06:39 PM by: cooleo chapter 12

thanks! you had my group win AND indiyay was the most extrodinary! cool!

Jun 30, 2007 08:18 PM by: Tuxedo_Mini_Mask chapter 0

No Problem!!! Besides I felt Sorta Bad for Cloud, After all he was the Runt of the Litter, And I wanted him to be special... Lol after all The Only Indiyay Worth While would be the Domenate Indiyay, Which Belongs to Mili...

It was Born with Potenal, Unlike Most Indiyay That Have to Work for their Power... Like How The Team of Indiyay Trainers had to Train Their Indiyay Just to be able to use a Small *None full* Version of Hydro Pump... But The domenate Indiyay Is Born with Hydro Pump... It's Distend For Greatness, It even Learns it's Own attack "Water Destiny"... Lol and The Runt of the Litter is Expected To be the Weakest of them All...No matter how long they Train!!!

Jun 30, 2007 05:09 PM by: FallOutGirlAARHinder chapter 12

O.O seriously how many times is she going to kiss him on the previews]

BTW i think Robyn, diamond and chris r my fav group on here

brb

Jun 30, 2007 05:52 PM by: Tuxedo_Mini_Mask chapter 0

lol COOL! But I'm the writer and I can't have Favorite

Jul 1, 2007 11:38 AM by: boykingkilla chapter 0

I agree with aaaar, How many times WILL robyn kiss my character? lol. I have been listening to the old old OLD pokemon the first movie soundtrack that i found in the draw on my bed. IT IS SO AWESOME THOUGH IT IS OLD!

Jul 1, 2007 01:04 PM by: Tuxedo_Mini_Mask chapter 0

lol i loved the first sound track :)

Jun 30, 2007 05:54 PM by: FallOutGirlAARHinder chapter 0

i know

sucks dont it

Jun 30, 2007 04:46 PM by: Symphoniaprincess101 chapter 12

This is awsome^^Talk about a big Onix O.O

Jun 30, 2007 04:31 PM by: Aquaberry15 chapter 12

OMG I loved this chapter, Kenshin is my man/scyther! ^^

Ms. Bigmouth, yep that sounds like me and Robyn! XD I do have a big mouth.

Jul 1, 2007 01:53 PM by: Tuxedo_Mini_Mask chapter 0

TY =D

Jun 30, 2007 04:08 PM by: Tuxedo_Mini_Mask chapter 12

Sorry it took so long I was up till 6am Trying to finish it and ADD it *I spent like an hour trying to add it*... But my Internet was down last night... HOPE YOU LIKE IT =D

Jun 30, 2007 01:00 PM by: cooleo chapter 0

ohh...then thanks!:)

Jun 30, 2007 03:33 AM by: PunkWolfGirl chapter 0

I Would Like My Oddish To Be Called Dishy xP If It's A Boy Or A Girl I Dont Care! Lol. And My Nidoran♂ To Be Called... Fang ^^

Jun 30, 2007 04:09 PM by: Tuxedo_Mini_Mask chapter 0

okay tell me on chapter Ten So I can look back on it as a refrence *Sorry lol*

Jun 29, 2007 06:36 PM by: boykingkilla chapter 10

I would like my nidoran(f) to be named cassidy while my Electrike i would like to name Johnny.

Jun 29, 2007 06:16 PM by: cooleo chapter 0

ahhh...wellwynuts pretty good, but I wanted the chingling..ah well, win some lose some :)

Jun 30, 2007 11:52 AM by: boykingkilla chapter 0

Why do i sense the "wynut always comes out of its pokeball whenever it wants to" feeling? Is it because im still laughing at team rocket for their mistakes?

Jun 29, 2007 06:44 PM by: Tuxedo_Mini_Mask chapter 0

lol NAAAH!!! the Reason I didn't give you Chingling is becuz Wynut is Sillyer!!! and you character and Wynut are a Silly team =D I Chingling was cute but not Silly Enough for your Character! infact the second I Saw Wynut In my Pokebook it Reminded me Of your Character SOOO...I added him to your Pokemon Team =D!!!

Jun 29, 2007 11:45 AM by: Symphoniaprincess101 chapter 10

i'm going to name my Requelia "Relia" and my Azuril "Misty"

Jun 29, 2007 02:19 PM by: Tuxedo_Mini_Mask chapter 0

cool Names =D

Jun 30, 2007 03:41 PM by: Symphoniaprincess101 chapter 0

thank you^^

Jun 29, 2007 11:40 AM by: Symphoniaprincess101 chapter 11

This getting awsome^^Btw I like geting wet and if my friends are in trouble i would sacrafice my new clothe to help them out anytime.

Jun 29, 2007 03:09 PM by: Tuxedo_Mini_Mask chapter 0

I sure hope so :D lol but your character was mad and she wanted to here Lily ask her for help on the INside, and when Lily asked, No Wait... BEGGED for help it was sort of like an apologie to Kim. Lol I know, -.- Everything always has to have a deepper meening lol

Jun 30, 2007 03:42 PM by: Symphoniaprincess101 chapter 0

u r funny^^and so true everything has to have a deeper meaning^^

Jun 29, 2007 09:55 AM by: DivineNightshade chapter 5

man TMM ur such a good writer!

Jun 29, 2007 02:21 PM by: Tuxedo_Mini_Mask chapter 0

Ty LOL YOur only on chaptet 5? ll you still have 6,9,and 11 lol Looks like someone has a reading list for this summer =D

Jun 29, 2007 06:30 AM by: Aquaberry15 chapter 10

Ma Bellsprout is Casey and my Scyther is Kenshin. ^^

Jun 28, 2007 04:03 PM by: DragonDragon112 chapter 11

LoL! I like this chapter ^^

yay! me caught a Poliwag! =D

Jun 28, 2007 05:01 PM by: Tuxedo_Mini_Mask chapter 0

YAY!!! and did you read Chapter 9??? You caught another Pokemon there too =D