Will you still be here when the smoke clears?? by DarkRedEye

, Submitted: 2007-05-06, Updated: 2007-05-07, Chapters: 1, Size: 12K, Words: 2437, Comments: 11, Views: 320 Violence: Mild

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Just a story I wrote for Language Arts,its not great but I kinda like it.

11 Comments (Most recent 10). Show All

by: Aqua1 on May 10, 2007 04:40 PM chapter 1

^^ I loved it, its awesome!!!!!!!Have you thought of writing a book?!

by: DragonDragon112 on May 9, 2007 04:34 PM chapter 1

Hmmm, Excelent!
Im gonna fave it cause it might take awwile to finish, But its realy good so far ^^

by: InvaderAmmy00 on May 9, 2007 04:26 PM chapter 1

DAAAAANNNG! thats the shiznit ( wow, that is a vey good story ^^)

by: ChibiLee on May 7, 2007 08:39 PM chapter 1

Wowiez, tis is goooood. Better than my lame stories.

by: Destinythehedgehog on May 7, 2007 07:41 PM chapter 1

Wow!!!

by: Graceful8Vampire8Godess8 on May 7, 2007 07:00 PM chapter 1

OMG :( great job david! but very sad :( *favs*

by: frozen-tundra on May 7, 2007 04:05 PM chapter 1

that was good, so emotional.

by: pizza24 on May 7, 2007 03:53 PM chapter 1

oh that was so sad *crys like crazy*i loved it!u r so awesome at story writing^^ ~favs~

by: PunkWolfGirl on May 7, 2007 02:49 PM chapter 1

WOW Dude..... Im almost crying, man!!! Thats So Sad.... And Deep.... Wow.... Great Job Zack!

by: vesblondie on May 7, 2007 02:15 PM chapter 1

that...wow...
And...sad T-T
...
â¥â¥â¥favesâ¥â¥â¥

by: hirataitokyo on May 6, 2007 08:15 PM chapter 1

wow, that's so good, wow that's really sad, great job on it, very deep and touching I like it ^^ -favs-