Ruby Red by dancing_thru_life

Chapters

1 - Encounter - Submitted 2007-07-04 Updated: 2007-07-04 - 58 views, 1274 words, 6k
2 - Dragon - Submitted 2007-07-04 Updated: 2007-07-04 - 55 views, 749 words, 3k
3 - Impenetrable - Submitted 2007-07-16 Updated: 2007-07-16 - 53 views, 787 words, 4k
4 - Luce - Submitted 2007-07-17 Updated: 2007-07-17 - 50 views, 1040 words, 5k
5 - Lycanthropy - Submitted 2007-07-22 Updated: 2007-07-22 - 53 views, 810 words, 4k
6 - Father - Submitted 2007-07-23 Updated: 2007-07-23 - 48 views, 1037 words, 5k
7 - Odd - Submitted 2007-07-26 Updated: 2007-07-26 - 46 views, 887 words, 4k
8 - Fear - Submitted 2007-08-02 Updated: 2007-08-02 - 47 views, 991 words, 5k
9 - Smile - Submitted 2007-08-05 Updated: 2007-08-05 - 47 views, 692 words, 3k
10 - Insensitive - Submitted 2007-08-09 Updated: 2007-08-09 - 45 views, 1032 words, 5k
11 - Split - Submitted 2007-08-10 Updated: 2007-08-10 - 39 views, 1046 words, 5k
12 - FBI? - Submitted 2007-08-10 Updated: 2007-08-10 - 42 views, 1075 words, 5k
13 - Oliver Finn - Submitted 2007-08-12 Updated: 2007-08-12 - 43 views, 1473 words, 7k
14 - Scars - Submitted 2007-08-14 Updated: 2007-08-14 - 47 views, 996 words, 5k
15 - Run - Submitted 2007-08-17 Updated: 2007-08-17 - 40 views, 776 words, 4k
16 - Retro - Submitted 2007-08-20 Updated: 2007-08-20 - 37 views, 1019 words, 5k
17 - Lies - Submitted 2007-08-25 Updated: 2007-08-25 - 31 views, 940 words, 4k
18 - Blind - Submitted 2007-09-02 Updated: 2007-09-02 - 32 views, 902 words, 4k
19 - Realization - Submitted 2007-09-11 Updated: 2007-09-11 - 33 views, 734 words, 3k
20 - Intrusion - Submitted 2007-09-17 Updated: 2007-09-17 - 27 views, 1420 words, 7k
21 - Unchained - Submitted 2007-10-10 Updated: 2007-10-10 - 26 views, 811 words, 4k
22 - Fever - Submitted 2007-11-04 Updated: 2007-11-04 - 26 views, 1141 words, 6k
23 - Regret - Submitted 2007-11-18 Updated: 2007-11-18 - 20 views, 811 words, 4k
24 - Disbelief - Submitted 2008-01-17 Updated: 2008-01-17 - 19 views, 1099 words, 5k

22 Comments (Most recent 10). Show All

Dec 15, 2007 11:47 AM by: summerstorm chapter 23

YAY!
I'm caught up!
I <3 this story.
Please keep updating!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Nov 5, 2007 03:11 PM by: rosecrow13 chapter 22

I'm still reading! So, the plot thickens...

Aug 25, 2007 08:12 PM by: rosecrow13 chapter 2

I usually don't like writings that mix Dragons and Vampires, but you have done it very nicely.

Aug 15, 2007 05:07 PM by: summerstorm chapter 14

Whoa! He doesn't bleed? Disturbing...!
Yay. Sera and Gabriel are free - sort of. Though Sera is now switchblade-less. (And she has a lipring. Yuck. *mutters* I'm oddly grossed out by liprings.) Anyhoo...another good chapter! I can't really think of any suggestions at the mo. It seems pretty good to me. :)

Aug 13, 2007 01:44 PM by: summerstorm chapter 13

Wow...your alter-ego is a man, Danni...an odd vampire man. Why am I not surprised? lol ;)
YAAAAAAAAAAAY for yet another suspenseful chapter! There is more blood and occult-ness and teenage angst and random sexual tension and disturbin' Luce-ness and spiffy character stuff and mystery and bloodstained pretty Goth/Punk/Emo/Lolita outfits than I can comment on! lol You've outdone yourself. Me likes it. :D lol
Ella <3

Aug 13, 2007 01:46 PM by: summerstorm chapter 0

And, oh yeah, I forgot the stammering. Lots of spiffy stammering, too.

Aug 11, 2007 08:48 AM by: summerstorm chapter 12

Ooh, the drama! What else can I say? lol
For some reason I got a kick out of Sera being dressed all fancily to go on a mission...she's, like...a semi-goth/punk FBI agent.
I hope Sera's okay! :(
My one suggestion for this chapter is that you extend the scene where Sera first sees Luce - as in, maybe have more detail about Sera's walk towards that area and Luce's appearance. Maybe?
Anyway, you're updating faster than I can read! :o lol I love this story!
Ella ;)

Aug 11, 2007 08:38 AM by: summerstorm chapter 11

Yeah, I was noticing your characters stammering a lot too!
Luce is still getting creepier...and creepier...and creepier...
Good chapter. :D

Aug 10, 2007 09:37 AM by: summerstorm chapter 10

Ooh, the drama!

I like this one a lot too! Since there's not another chapter for me to hurry off to, I'll stay to make a suggestion - the dialogue in this chapter is good again, but it's kind of hard to tell for sure who's speaking at some points. I mean, I can figure it out, but it would be nice if you could add some more clues in various spots.

By the way, I really like the idea that pureblood vampires are warm to the touch and changed vampires are cold...it's like a mix of lore between Twilight and HP with your own twist or something! lol Nice job. Update again soon!

Aug 10, 2007 09:31 AM by: summerstorm chapter 9

Jeeze! The plot THICKENS evne more. If possible, I am now even MORE afraid of Luce, so kudos to you...lol

Great suspense and dialogue...this story is rather addictive!

Aug 10, 2007 09:27 AM by: summerstorm chapter 8

Intensity! Drama! Sexual tension! This chapter has it all! And I'm not going to say much more because I now must go read on!

Aug 5, 2007 05:02 PM by: _theater_freak_147 chapter 5

lol Yay! So does that mean she's going to turn into a werewolf then? Dun dun dun. lol

Jul 29, 2007 01:33 PM by: summerstorm chapter 7

Wow, I actually kind of like Damien and Odin now. They seemed demented, but quirky and not really particularly evil anymore. Just kind of...selfish and controlling. But charming nonetheless, Damien especially.

However, I'm more afraid than ever of Luce! Lordy! She's so creepy and evil and...creepy! But I'm happy that Jem is now on the right side of the fence. Goooood Jem. I knew he had it in 'im. Great chappie; sorry it took me so long to review! Post again soon.

<3 Ella

Jul 24, 2007 10:16 AM by: summerstorm chapter 6

Wow, that is a really, REALLY depressing past; ='( Good job. It's nice to hear from Gabriel again.

"The moon was full that evening, as if it had eaten one too many hamburgers." LOL!!!!!! I found this laugh-out-loud hilarious, for some odd reason...I guess because I sort of took it as a pun...HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!! It's just so...random....yay. Lol!

Jul 22, 2007 04:56 PM by: summerstorm chapter 5

Haha. Wow, Juliet certainly has got guts. It's funny, coz I'm not used to reading about heroines like her. My initial impression of her was that she was more meek and bookish, but she's proved me wrong. I like this chappie. Update soon, please!!

Jul 17, 2007 05:43 PM by: summerstorm chapter 4

Awesomeness! Are you going to continue updating GP or just continue the story here?

Jul 17, 2007 05:26 PM by: _theater_freak_147 chapter 4

lol Yay!!! That's so cool!

Jul 17, 2007 05:14 PM by: _theater_freak_147 chapter 3

lol Yay! I love this story! And yes, do not forget about your other story! I want to know what happens!

Jul 17, 2007 09:26 AM by: summerstorm chapter 3

Jeeze, Danni, your characters are all creepy! But I like this chapter. It's good in its creepiness. Odin is a very interesting person. I'm curious about (and slightly creeped out of) him.

List of Danni's characters Ella is scared of:
LUCE!
Jem (kinda)
Belle (kinda)
creepy twin maids at Belle's dad's house
Damien
Odin

Tell me if I've forgotten any. There are so dang many I'm sure I have. And btw, writing this list makes me remember, don't forget to update Golden Pentagram too!!!
Ella <3

Jul 5, 2007 10:00 PM by: _theater_freak_147 chapter 2

Dun dun dun...lol I love this so much!!! Write more soon please!!! ^^

Jul 5, 2007 09:57 PM by: _theater_freak_147 chapter 1

AHHH!!! I MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!!! THIS IS AMAZING!!

Jul 5, 2007 08:00 AM by: summerstorm chapter 2

Oooh, he's a dragon! Weird. The plot thickens...!
"Suddenly, Odin was seeming a whole lot nicer." lol
Love it. Update again soon!
:D Ella

Jul 4, 2007 04:44 PM by: summerstorm chapter 1

Wow! Okay, before, your story was really good; now it's awesome. I love it. I feel a lot more connected to Juliet, and the new details are great! Awesome job. (That was a quick rewrite, too. How'd you do it so fast? 0.o)

Okay...now that you have your first chapter perfected...
WRITE ANOTHER ONE SO I CAN KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!! lol

<3 Ella =D