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A big mistake by TKxKari224
Complete View as PDF, Submitted: 2007-08-05, Updated: 2008-07-13, Chapters: 25, Size: 68K, Words: 13681, Comments: 137, Views: 1004   
Anime/Manga (0) > - Original art (6828) > Anime Fantasy (3027)
This is my ORIGINAL story everything is © TKxKari224 except for kaoru, kaoru is © xEmotional and also hikagu is © NAERA
(xEmotional helped me with some of the parts ^^)Claire is © NAERA
Chapters
1 - Introductions - Submitted 2007-08-05 Updated: 2008-07-13 - 86 views, 431 words, 2k
2 - Kaoru's appearence - Submitted 2007-08-05 Updated: 2007-08-05 - 68 views, 412 words, 2k
3 - hikaga the teachers worst nightmare! - Submitted 2007-08-06 Updated: 2007-08-06 - 66 views, 516 words, 3k
4 - detention from a whoopie cushion - Submitted 2007-08-06 Updated: 2007-08-06 - 58 views, 224 words, 1k
5 - The begining of a stalker - Submitted 2007-08-06 Updated: 2007-08-06 - 66 views, 260 words, 1k
6 - New roommate - Submitted 2007-08-06 Updated: 2007-08-06 - 58 views, 401 words, 2k
7 - kaoru has a fanclub! - Submitted 2007-08-06 Updated: 2007-08-06 - 62 views, 284 words, 1k
8 - Kaoru's past - Submitted 2007-08-06 Updated: 2007-08-06 - 58 views, 707 words, 4k
9 - an akward silence - Submitted 2007-08-08 Updated: 2007-08-08 - 55 views, 306 words, 1k
10 - GLOMP! - Submitted 2007-08-10 Updated: 2007-08-10 - 55 views, 617 words, 3k
11 - the big fight and claires arrival - Submitted 2007-08-10 Updated: 2007-08-10 - 54 views, 587 words, 3k
12 - Meeting Claire - Submitted 2007-08-10 Updated: 2007-08-10 - 56 views, 736 words, 4k
13 - a trip to the theater - Submitted 2007-08-11 Updated: 2007-08-11 - 56 views, 617 words, 3k
14 - Sleepover - Submitted 2007-08-11 Updated: 2007-08-11 - 58 views, 599 words, 3k
15 - spin the bottle! - Submitted 2007-08-12 Updated: 2007-08-12 - 57 views, 791 words, 4k
16 - Spying 1 - Submitted 2007-08-20 Updated: 2007-08-20 - 49 views, 530 words, 3k
17 - This ones for all the cookies! - Submitted 2007-08-22 Updated: 2007-08-22 - 48 views, 430 words, 2k
18 - should we even ask..? - Submitted 2007-08-25 Updated: 2007-08-25 - 48 views, 503 words, 2k
19 - Sanome's plan! we go where!? - Submitted 2007-08-27 Updated: 2007-08-27 - 54 views, 653 words, 3k
20 - christmas party setup - Submitted 2007-09-04 Updated: 2007-09-04 - 50 views, 475 words, 2k
21 - the suckiest chapter in the entire world.. - Submitted 2007-09-06 Updated: 2007-09-06 - 47 views, 764 words, 4k
22 - "the fight for our lives!" - Submitted 2007-09-10 Updated: 2007-09-10 - 54 views, 810 words, 4k
23 - a fake!? - Submitted 2007-09-14 Updated: 2007-09-14 - 49 views, 521 words, 3k
24 - hikaga's fight, the girls are in trouble! - Submitted 2007-09-17 Updated: 2007-09-17 - 58 views, 621 words, 3k
25 - Xel's doom, the end *bows* - Submitted 2007-09-23 Updated: 2007-09-23 - 65 views, 886 words, 5k

50 Comments (Most recent 10). Show All
NAERA
Feb 16, 2008 03:03 PM by: NAERA chapter 0
hey u should make a sequel!! to this.

it would explain the characters more!!!
 
TKxKari224
Feb 16, 2008 03:05 PM by: TKxKari224 chapter 0
zomg!! YEAH!!!!!!!! >.<

THAT WOULD BE FREAKING AWESOME!! O.O *explodes* omg! seriously i love this idea!!1 am going to do it!!! :D

I wonder how i should start though..and will they be older, hmm...these are the things a writer needs to think of XD
 
NAERA
Feb 16, 2008 03:08 PM by: NAERA chapter 0
u should do it that they had to leave the schoool and went there own separate ways. until they had to come back for a start of a new session..but one of them turns evil..but who???

if need help..dnt mind to help out ^______^
 
TKxKari224
Feb 18, 2008 07:58 AM by: TKxKari224 chapter 0
omg yeah!!!!! X3

One of them should turn evil >:3

but who, your right, who...hmmm

i think it should be one of these people:

Jin
Sanome
Hikaga

Then they could be all like: oh noersh!!

They the rest could try and save the one who turned evil!! OMG OMG!! im dying here! this is gonna be GREATT!!!
 
NAERA
Feb 18, 2008 08:13 AM by: NAERA chapter 0
lol noo dont die!!
 
u need to write the story first before u die!! lol jk!!
 
yeh.... hmm but who??????
 
TKxKari224
Feb 18, 2008 08:14 AM by: TKxKari224 chapter 0
XD yeh! ^^

Lol yeah, thats the trouble :P

And ive alrady got one chapter up of the new one!! XD
 
NAERA
Feb 18, 2008 08:17 AM by: NAERA chapter 0
lol seriouusly whoa!! that was fast!!
 
post it post it!!
 
TKxKari224
Feb 18, 2008 08:17 AM by: TKxKari224 chapter 0
SQUEE! ^^ i did! :D :D

omg! im so excited!! XD
 
NAERA
Feb 18, 2008 08:20 AM by: NAERA chapter 0
*zooms of to read it*
 
TKxKari224
Feb 18, 2008 08:21 AM by: TKxKari224 chapter 0
:D
 
NAERA
Sep 24, 2007 03:08 PM by: NAERA chapter 25
HAHHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHA
 
OMG THATS WAS AWSOME WAIT....................................................
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
nNOOOOOOOOOOOO ITS FINISHED IT CNT BE * CRIES*
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
*CLAPS* BRAVO I MEAN BRAVA GABBBBBY I LOVED THAT STORY!!!
 
TKxKari224
Sep 24, 2007 03:09 PM by: TKxKari224 chapter 25
THANK YOU!!! *hugs* i loved it to *tear* but im planning on drawing scenes out of it ^^
 
NAERA
Sep 24, 2007 03:32 PM by: NAERA chapter 0
awsome!!!!!!!!!!!
i wanna help out!!!!1
 
TKxKari224
Oct 2, 2007 04:09 PM by: TKxKari224 chapter 0
yay ^^ thats awesome! :)
 
xEmotional
Sep 23, 2007 05:24 PM by: xEmotional chapter 25
whoooooo :]
kaoru is so great !
 
TKxKari224
Sep 24, 2007 12:33 PM by: TKxKari224 chapter 25
xD is that all ur gonna sy!? lol.
 
gaaralover1
Sep 17, 2007 07:08 PM by: gaaralover1 chapter 5
Awesome.. What school do these people go to?
 
TKxKari224
Sep 18, 2007 11:51 AM by: TKxKari224 chapter 0
the school in the clouds or something like that XD ^^
 
NAERA
Sep 17, 2007 03:18 PM by: NAERA chapter 24
WWWWWWOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWW
MORE MORE
 
 
GO HIKAGA THE POWER OF YOUTH
 
hikgaga= wtf
 
TKxKari224
Sep 18, 2007 11:50 AM by: TKxKari224 chapter 24
heh heh xD
 
xEmotional
Sep 17, 2007 02:56 PM by: xEmotional chapter 24
uh oh, spagettio :o
 
TKxKari224
Sep 18, 2007 11:51 AM by: TKxKari224 chapter 0
yuppers ^^
 
NAERA
Sep 14, 2007 01:21 PM by: NAERA chapter 23
noooooooooooooooooooooooo i must know *dies*
 
TKxKari224
Sep 16, 2007 11:51 AM by: TKxKari224 chapter 23
lol
 
xEmotional
Sep 14, 2007 12:51 PM by: xEmotional chapter 23
it's .. XEL . lolol rofl omg lol ahaha lmao ahaha lol omg rofl .
just kiddin' .
 
NAERA
Sep 11, 2007 02:48 PM by: NAERA chapter 22
ZOMG THIS SOOOOOOOO ROCKS!!!!!!!!!!!!! SQUWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
 
PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!
 
TKxKari224
Sep 11, 2007 03:08 PM by: TKxKari224 chapter 22
xD
 
xEmotional
Sep 10, 2007 05:18 PM by: xEmotional chapter 22
oh mah gawd .
kaoru is so cool, its not even funny .
 
TKxKari224
Sep 11, 2007 11:55 AM by: TKxKari224 chapter 0
xD
 
NAERA
Sep 6, 2007 02:45 PM by: NAERA chapter 21
noooooooooooo must noo the next chapter * dies *
 
TKxKari224
Sep 10, 2007 12:17 PM by: TKxKari224 chapter 0
lol
 
NAERA
Sep 5, 2007 02:41 PM by: NAERA chapter 20
hahha awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!! maybe a crossover from my stories ooooooooo dark hes come to get revenge!!!!!!
 
TKxKari224
Sep 5, 2007 03:36 PM by: TKxKari224 chapter 0
XD
 
xEmotional
Sep 4, 2007 08:42 AM by: xEmotional chapter 20
lol oh my .
is it a dead person ? risen from the grave to eat brains ?
juust kiddin'
 
TKxKari224
Sep 4, 2007 08:43 AM by: TKxKari224 chapter 0
..ew...
 
xEmotional
Sep 4, 2007 02:48 PM by: xEmotional chapter 0
haha, blehhhhhhh 1! write more
 
TKxKari224
Sep 6, 2007 02:40 PM by: TKxKari224 chapter 0
yaya
 
NAERA
Aug 28, 2007 04:41 PM by: NAERA chapter 19
SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!! *RUNS AROUND IN CIRCLES* AHHAHAAHHA ME ENJOYED THIS CHAPTER!!
 
TKxKari224
Sep 4, 2007 07:13 AM by: TKxKari224 chapter 19
XD i enjoyed writing it ^^
 
xEmotional
Aug 27, 2007 12:34 PM by: xEmotional chapter 19
write more .
now .
seriously .
im bored.
and .
i wanna read .
more .
k?


YOU MADE A LIL MISTAKE !
 
TKxKari224
Aug 27, 2007 12:38 PM by: TKxKari224 chapter 19
i know! u told me just now oK EVER1 DISREGARD THE FACT THAT CLAIRE IS IN JINS ROOM AND SHE SAID SHE WAS IN THE CAFETERIA!!
 
xEmotional
Aug 27, 2007 12:39 PM by: xEmotional chapter 0
ohahoha .
okay, seriously .
write more .
what else is there for you to do ? NOTHING !
 
xEmotional
Aug 25, 2007 02:25 PM by: xEmotional chapter 18
lol xD

what did he whisper to arina's ear ?
 
TKxKari224
Aug 25, 2007 02:27 PM by: TKxKari224 chapter 0
lol i dont think you wanna know xP

chibi terra: translations she dosnt know either

me: hey i do to!..maybe..possible...probabley..
 
xEmotional
Aug 25, 2007 02:28 PM by: xEmotional chapter 0
c'mon gimmeh a hint .

i wanna know .

was it nasty ? lol jkjkjk !

but seriously, i want to know ,
was it about my little boy creation ? -kaoru-
 
TKxKari224
Aug 25, 2007 03:19 PM by: TKxKari224 chapter 0
*anime sweatdrop* ummmmmmmmm........hmm it was something about kaoru?
 
xEmotional
Aug 25, 2007 03:20 PM by: xEmotional chapter 0
tell .. me .. or il run over and beat you up ! XD
jk .
but honestly, i wanna know !
 
TKxKari224
Aug 25, 2007 03:22 PM by: TKxKari224 chapter 0
i dont know what it was L:L
 
xEmotional
Aug 25, 2007 03:23 PM by: xEmotional chapter 0
-sigh-

fine !

but why'd she go 'EEEW!'
 
TKxKari224
Aug 25, 2007 03:28 PM by: TKxKari224 chapter 0
because you know hikaga he prolly said i know whats in your nose or something!
 
xEmotional
Aug 25, 2007 03:29 PM by: xEmotional chapter 0
rofl .
okay okay, now i will stop bothering yeh .
lol it was fun >.<
 
TKxKari224
Aug 25, 2007 03:35 PM by: TKxKari224 chapter 0
haha *sarcasim laugh*
 
NAERA
Aug 25, 2007 10:17 AM by: NAERA chapter 18
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
I CNT WAIT!!!!! MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPINS
 
 
TKxKari224
Aug 25, 2007 11:27 AM by: TKxKari224 chapter 0
lol itll come soon ^^
 
xEmotional
Aug 23, 2007 09:41 AM by: xEmotional chapter 17
ohohoho ! XD
 
NAERA
Aug 23, 2007 08:32 AM by: NAERA chapter 17
^^ hhehehehehehehe
 
awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I LOVE KAORU!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!! HE ROCKS
 
xEmotional
Aug 22, 2007 06:38 AM by: xEmotional chapter 16
haha, what an excitingly cheerful story .
 
TKxKari224
Aug 22, 2007 06:39 AM by: TKxKari224 chapter 0
lol
 
NAERA
Aug 20, 2007 01:41 PM by: NAERA chapter 16
omg this sooooooooo rocks!!!!!!!!!!! gabby-chan ^^
 
TKxKari224
Aug 22, 2007 06:22 AM by: TKxKari224 chapter 16
thhnx ^^ im adding another one now ^^
 
Hayley864
Aug 19, 2007 05:59 PM by: Hayley864 chapter 5
pft. detention's only like 5 seconds..
 
TKxKari224
Aug 20, 2007 11:21 AM by: TKxKari224 chapter 0
lol i had to make it interesting XD
 
Hayley864
Aug 19, 2007 05:56 PM by: Hayley864 chapter 3
baha. jin is so annoying to poor kaoru.
 
TKxKari224
Aug 20, 2007 01:05 PM by: TKxKari224 chapter 0
heehee its because he thinks there best buddies XD well they kinda are friends tho... hmm XD
 
Hayley864
Aug 19, 2007 05:52 PM by: Hayley864 chapter 2
bahaha. yay kaoru :D
 
NAERA
Aug 12, 2007 12:13 PM by: NAERA chapter 15
OMG OMG OMG *faints*
 
 
PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
xEmotional
Aug 12, 2007 12:08 PM by: xEmotional chapter 15
XD
you were begging for help :]
You:: "WHAT DO I WRITE NOWWWWWWWWW !!!"
Me:: "GET A LIFEEEEE!"

JKJK .
anyways, yeah, YAY, next chapter, things will start to heat up . hehehe .
 
TKxKari224
Aug 12, 2007 12:10 PM by: TKxKari224 chapter 0
u turd!
 
xEmotional
Aug 12, 2007 12:12 PM by: xEmotional chapter 0
ew gross word XD :P
 
Hayley864
Aug 19, 2007 05:44 PM by: Hayley864 chapter 0
baaahah. adriana. you make me laugh
 
xEmotional
Aug 20, 2007 08:38 AM by: xEmotional chapter 0
lol hayley . :P
 
NAERA
Aug 12, 2007 10:32 AM by: NAERA chapter 14
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
REALLY OMG CNT WAIT!!!!!!!!!!!!*JUMPS UP AND DOWN* CONTINUE CONTINUE PPLEASE THE SUSPENCE IS FREAKING KILLING ME!!!!!!!!!!!
 
TKxKari224
Aug 12, 2007 12:04 PM by: TKxKari224 chapter 0
lol its continued now ^^
 
NAERA
Aug 20, 2007 01:41 PM by: NAERA chapter 0
ok ^^
 
xEmotional
Aug 11, 2007 07:50 PM by: xEmotional chapter 0
im gonna help you make claire and kaoru's little 'thing' PERFECT its gonna be SO HOT .
well .. not 'hot' but i mean .. 'cute' yup yup ..
-heheheeeeeee-
 
TKxKari224
Aug 12, 2007 08:42 AM by: TKxKari224 chapter 0
calm down ull freak everyone out XD
 
xEmotional
Aug 12, 2007 10:25 AM by: xEmotional chapter 0
ohoho .
:] seriously . You're stuck .
 
xEmotional
Aug 11, 2007 07:49 PM by: xEmotional chapter 14
OMG OMG IM SO EXCITED I CAN BARELY BREATH !
 
TKxKari224
Aug 12, 2007 08:44 AM by: TKxKari224 chapter 14
lolz
 
NAERA
Aug 11, 2007 10:56 AM by: NAERA chapter 13
oooooooh i agree with emotional. gez my girl blushes alo *aaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwww*
 
TKxKari224
Aug 11, 2007 01:33 PM by: TKxKari224 chapter 13
okok guys lol
 
xEmotional
Aug 11, 2007 01:50 PM by: xEmotional chapter 0
XD !
 
xEmotional
Aug 11, 2007 09:52 AM by: xEmotional chapter 13
HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH
You made my lovley kaoru sound like a MEANIE !
you have to make him and claire get together in the next chapter ! OKAY ! YA !
 
TKxKari224
Aug 11, 2007 09:49 AM by: TKxKari224 chapter 13
heeheee heee
 
xEmotional
Aug 10, 2007 02:40 PM by: xEmotional chapter 12
ya, sister . continue !

-i also freak out and fall to the ground-
 
TKxKari224
Aug 10, 2007 03:59 PM by: TKxKari224 chapter 0
lol
 
NAERA
Aug 10, 2007 02:44 PM by: NAERA chapter 0
^^
 
NAERA
Aug 10, 2007 12:51 PM by: NAERA chapter 12
CONTINUE CONTINUE U MUST ITS KILLING ME NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I MUST KNOW!!!!!!!!!!!! WHAT HAPPENS BETWEEN CLAIRE AND KAORU. *freaks out and falls to the ground*
 
TKxKari224
Aug 10, 2007 03:59 PM by: TKxKari224 chapter 0
hhahaha im writing
 
NAERA
Aug 10, 2007 12:48 PM by: NAERA chapter 11
ohhhhhhhh kl i cant write fighting scenes *pouts* AWSOME
 
xEmotional
Aug 10, 2007 02:39 PM by: xEmotional chapter 11
XD i definetely enjoyed writing it XDXD
 
NAERA
Aug 10, 2007 02:45 PM by: NAERA chapter 0
awsome i need tutorials  on how to write them
 
xEmotional
Aug 11, 2007 08:30 AM by: xEmotional chapter 0
XDXD
 
NAERA
Aug 10, 2007 12:46 PM by: NAERA chapter 10
YAY CLAIRE
 
NAERA
Aug 8, 2007 09:59 AM by: NAERA chapter 9
hahaha keyblade
 
omg did kaoru laugh
 
TKxKari224
Aug 10, 2007 08:01 AM by: TKxKari224 chapter 9
i know rite! how scary XD jk
 
NAERA
Aug 10, 2007 08:22 AM by: NAERA chapter 0
sooooooo hate demyx (um why am i writing this here!!!!)
 
 
 
TKxKari224
Aug 10, 2007 08:24 AM by: TKxKari224 chapter 0
lol i dont know XD but i totally agree! he should go accidentally fall off a cliff then jin should pop in and kill him again with his keyblade XD
 
NAERA
Aug 10, 2007 08:31 AM by: NAERA chapter 0
hahah yeh!!!!!!!! then get flushed away.  THEN WE SHOULD SAY DANCE WATER DANCE muahhahahhaa
 
TKxKari224
Aug 10, 2007 08:33 AM by: TKxKari224 chapter 0
oh totally (LOL)
 
NAERA
Aug 10, 2007 08:42 AM by: NAERA chapter 0
^^ muhahahha(inner goodside = dnt u 2 feel any sympathy for him)
HELL NO *PUSHES HER AWAY* MUHAHAHHA DIE DEMYX DIE
 
TKxKari224
Aug 10, 2007 08:44 AM by: TKxKari224 chapter 0
lol demyx should totally fall off the cliff it would be great if he rly did that way we'd never have to battle him again! MUAHA
 
NAERA
Aug 10, 2007 01:22 PM by: NAERA chapter 0
yeh i tried beating him again and i was so close!!!
inner self= u were so not.
i was too i had killed those three light bar things then the stupid 10 min things come!!!!!!!! there should be a option that lets u skip the battle!!!! after like 10 tires caus i think i have done 20
 
TKxKari224
Aug 11, 2007 09:50 AM by: TKxKari224 chapter 0
i so agree i tried like 240 times!

Chibi: shes not kidding

Alex:yeh i watched her XD (brother)
 
NAERA
Aug 11, 2007 10:52 AM by: NAERA chapter 0
 i knopw ur pain dudette but nowi have provided u with my skills hope it helps
 
xEmotional
Aug 7, 2007 08:45 AM by: xEmotional chapter 8
ohohoooooooooooooooooooo this was one of the best chapters, but i think the chapter with the fanclub was best XD
 
TKxKari224
Aug 7, 2007 08:56 AM by: TKxKari224 chapter 0
lol yteah that one was histarical!
 
NAERA
Aug 7, 2007 04:55 AM by: NAERA chapter 8
omg wow hes hes no wonder hes cute ^^
 
TKxKari224
Aug 7, 2007 08:56 AM by: TKxKari224 chapter 0
lol yeah my sisters character if very attractive she says XD
 
NAERA
Aug 7, 2007 09:24 AM by: NAERA chapter 0
hey what about my character hikaga
 
TKxKari224
Aug 8, 2007 09:19 AM by: TKxKari224 chapter 0
what do u mean?
 
NAERA
Aug 8, 2007 09:58 AM by: NAERA chapter 0
is he no attractive *inside laughing my head off*
 
TKxKari224
Aug 10, 2007 11:27 AM by: TKxKari224 chapter 0
nonononno he totally is!!
 
NAERA
Aug 10, 2007 01:23 PM by: NAERA chapter 0
^^
 
NAERA
Aug 7, 2007 04:55 AM by: NAERA chapter 7
i wanna be in his anclub except not be like sakura and ino . maybe secret admire hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
 
TKxKari224
Aug 7, 2007 08:55 AM by: TKxKari224 chapter 0
lol
 
NAERA
Aug 7, 2007 04:54 AM by: NAERA chapter 6
yay new character!!!!!!!!
 
TKxKari224
Aug 7, 2007 08:55 AM by: TKxKari224 chapter 0
yuppers ^_^
 
xEmotional
Aug 6, 2007 01:44 PM by: xEmotional chapter 5
LOL
nice nice
 
TKxKari224
Aug 6, 2007 01:45 PM by: TKxKari224 chapter 0
lol
 
NAERA
Aug 6, 2007 01:30 PM by: NAERA chapter 5
ARINA HUH!!!!!
 
AWSOME JOB
 
TKxKari224
Aug 6, 2007 01:38 PM by: TKxKari224 chapter 0
lol it keeps going! ^^ heehee
 
NAERA
Aug 6, 2007 01:28 PM by: NAERA chapter 4
OH GO MY BOY ^^
 
TKxKari224
Aug 6, 2007 05:00 PM by: TKxKari224 chapter 0
lol theres gonna be more about him ^^
 
NAERA
Aug 6, 2007 01:27 PM by: NAERA chapter 3
OOHHHHHHHHHHHH HIKAGA ^^ AWSOME KEEP GOING
 
angelfox
Aug 6, 2007 11:42 AM by: angelfox chapter 1
HATE MR. KIP! >.<
 
TKxKari224
Aug 6, 2007 01:35 PM by: TKxKari224 chapter 0
lol
 
xEmotional
Aug 5, 2007 06:18 PM by: xEmotional chapter 2
one big PARTY ! lol i told you to write that XD

anyways , hurry up and make my man a STAR! jkjk . write more though . and make more characters .
and make some have a crush on my man
 
TKxKari224
Aug 6, 2007 09:58 AM by: TKxKari224 chapter 0
i made her now it arina time oh stalker! haha
 
TKxKari224
Aug 6, 2007 08:36 AM by: TKxKari224 chapter 0
i will i will
 
xEmotional
Aug 6, 2007 08:52 AM by: xEmotional chapter 0
bwahahahahahaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa :]
 
NAERA
Aug 5, 2007 06:05 PM by: NAERA chapter 2
ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh must have more
when is hikaga gonna come??
 
TKxKari224
Aug 6, 2007 08:35 AM by: TKxKari224 chapter 0
in ch. 3 ^^
 
NAERA
Aug 5, 2007 04:03 PM by: NAERA chapter 1
ohhhhhhhhhhh i love it love must continue
MUST have NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!
 
TKxKari224
Aug 5, 2007 06:03 PM by: TKxKari224 chapter 0
lol
 
xEmotional
Aug 5, 2007 02:42 PM by: xEmotional chapter 1
someone has a CRUUUUUSHHHIE!
XD
 
TKxKari224
Aug 5, 2007 03:58 PM by: TKxKari224 chapter 0
lol wait and seeee
 
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