hey why not lol but seariosly yea ur poetrys great

yes, i will.

take it from me, i know exactly how you feel.  I once was the same way. I was heading down a very dark path, eventually leading to my horrible bloody death, and spend eternaty in hell, but guess who saved me?  No one in this world could've saved me from myself, no one, but one person above me did. and now i have a new happiness that i've never felt before.
anyway, this is a good poem, i just want you to know that God doesn't allow things to happen to you to torture you.  I was taken away from my home and my parents are dead, well, my mom is in a nursing home but pretty much dead. I was taken away from everyting i loved, but i found something better than i could have ever owned. I realized God wanted better things for me so that's why he did what he did to me. i've had a rough childhood.

Yeah.....Il save you...</3

ooo this one is my favorite!!!  I like it alot...no...I love it alot *faves*  *I faved a few others but my comp is slow so I can only comment a few of them lol*

Wow, this is amazing! It's sad but great.

I think this is your best one yet!



But don't wait to be saved. Save yourself. That's all we can do in this world.

wow. i cant believe you wrote that.
i think that i would save you. but im not able too.
and, i answered after reading ^^; couldn't help it..

That hits a spot for me....

and yes I'll save you just as I have for others.

D: I'll save you!!! *grabs a vine and swings randomly around* D:< AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRUUUUUUUUUUUUUGGGGGGAHHHHHH!!!!!

;D GREAT NEW POEM!

i like this because it reminds me of me...i don't think this is very good, only because i think its AWESOME! ^_^

i like this.it goes deep in you.good job!

Truly deep...Some parts of this poem relates to my personal life ... and how i reach out to this poem. I love this.

here's another one...