the forbiddin love of seperate clans by hinaXsasuke4eva

Dec 3, 2007 04:49 PM by: hinaXsasuke4eva chapter 4

hey guyz...i messed up and only got this much on.

Nov 23, 2007 06:40 PM by: Kohakucrazy chapter 3

WAAAAHHH!!! * Runs away crying* You're a meanie ya know that? But still..it was good..

Nov 17, 2007 05:34 PM by: GreyPichu chapter 3

YEAH!!!!I love this story so much! and u made that idea sound totally awesome! it kills me and i gotta know what happens next!...I can't wait!^^

Nov 17, 2007 05:35 PM by: GreyPichu chapter 0

if u need an idea, i'll be thinking for one.^^

Nov 18, 2007 09:29 AM by: hinaXsasuke4eva chapter 0

thx

Nov 17, 2007 04:34 PM by: hinaXsasuke4eva chapter 3

speial thanks to GreyPichu ....please help me with the next 1....except for what happens at the very beginning

Oct 23, 2007 05:30 PM by: gaaralover1 chapter 2

Awesome story.... But why Sasuke Uzumaki? Why not just Sasuke? I dun get that..

Oct 28, 2007 02:58 PM by: hinaXsasuke4eva chapter 0

i waz afraid negji would ask

Oct 22, 2007 04:38 AM by: GreyPichu chapter 2

i love this story!so glad it was updated.i think i may have an idea so ill PM you.

Oct 22, 2007 03:18 PM by: hinaXsasuke4eva chapter 0

yea...srry it took so long.i fractured my elbow,so i can't type as fast

Oct 26, 2007 09:07 PM by: GreyPichu chapter 0

u really dont have to apoligize for a medical injury.besides,it really didnt take too long for u to update.btw,does ur elbow feel better then it may have before?

Oct 28, 2007 01:33 PM by: hinaXsasuke4eva chapter 0

no...its really killing me!
my neice slammed a 2X4 on it

Oct 21, 2007 10:06 PM by: hinaXsasuke4eva chapter 2

HEY! I MISSPELLED SOMETHING AGAIN!
Later that day,after Sasuke got worn out from protecting her,hinmata said..
ITS REALLY...
Later that day,after Sasuke got worn out from protecting her,hinata said...

Sep 27, 2007 03:51 PM by: GreyPichu chapter 1

awesome!cant wait for another chapter!

Sep 26, 2007 04:47 PM by: hinaXsasuke4eva chapter 1

HEY GUYZ!I KNOW THERE'S A MISPELL.
Sasuke anted to sleep, IS REALLY
Sasuke wanted to sleep.

Sep 22, 2007 10:48 AM by: angelfox chapter 0

there isnt a chappy yet, but when there is, tell me! ^_^

Sep 26, 2007 04:49 PM by: hinaXsasuke4eva chapter 0

i finished chapter 1,but read mi comment to it