Hanyou: tears of blood and flames of darkness by ladychaos

Aug 3, 2008 08:45 PM by: setokaibaslittlesis chapter 14

I forgot to say thank you for sticking Keiko in this.

I feel very special. ^^

Jul 5, 2008 10:14 AM by: QuestionMarks109 chapter 14

Aww♥♥♥ Dei-kun is such a big brother!

Jul 3, 2008 08:57 AM by: HikariYugiYamiAtemu chapter 14

lol, another funny story, keep up the good work! :D and write more! ^^

Jul 2, 2008 08:10 AM by: sweetsacrifice28 chapter 14

Funny ^^

But the last scene was so sweet, especially when Deidara started kicking @$$ for Selina ^^

Jun 27, 2008 10:49 AM by: XtreameAvenger chapter 14

that was one of the best chapters youve written. i loved the last scene deidara knows how to kick @$$ and how to look after hes sister lol.

Jun 25, 2008 11:34 AM by: setokaibaslittlesis chapter 14

Aww..that last scene with Deidara was so cute!

Jun 25, 2008 11:40 AM by: ladychaos chapter 0

thanks, i'm going to be doing a few more flashbacks like that at some point

Jun 22, 2008 01:01 PM by: hflp chapter 14

Cool so far. Very funny.

May 29, 2008 02:11 AM by: Falconlobo chapter 13

nice^^

Apr 6, 2008 01:36 PM by: QuestionMarks109 chapter 13

LMFAOO TAAII!!! That was 2 Cool

Sasuke's Gay
D:!

Apr 7, 2008 06:49 AM by: YuckFou chapter 13

O.o'

Apr 27, 2008 06:20 PM by: QuestionMarks109 chapter 0

O_o; ?

Apr 6, 2008 12:58 PM by: YuckFou chapter 13

KEWL! Thanks Selina. That was a sweet chap.
Course the ending was the best for me! ^___0
You keep them in charater so well. thanx.

Apr 1, 2008 02:29 PM by: sweetsacrifice28 chapter 13

Nice, Nice. =3

lol, Tai.. xD

Apr 1, 2008 12:58 PM by: setokaibaslittlesis chapter 13

Yay! It's Keiko! =D
Thank you so very, very much for including her!
+Faves

Apr 1, 2008 10:32 AM by: hflp chapter 13

Good Chapter. Worth the wait.

Mar 9, 2008 10:37 PM by: YuckFou chapter 0

UPDATE!

Jan 30, 2008 01:09 PM by: AnimeAngel87 chapter 12

D:

COMACOMACOMACOMA

OMG!

Jan 30, 2008 01:11 PM by: AnimeAngel87 chapter 12

Lol@Tai - "...Pervert."

OMG COMACOMA

Is She OKAII?!!!!

Jan 23, 2008 04:46 PM by: Falconlobo chapter 12

wow hope she's oaky

Jan 23, 2008 01:28 PM by: musicismylife chapter 12

Poor selina!!!!!!!!! oh noes!!!!!!!!!

Jan 23, 2008 01:04 PM by: NamidaNara chapter 12

Oh no! Poor Selina! Those people are sooooooo mean! But I adore Jami! Such a sweetie!

I don't think Nara and Iruka like Tai that much...but not many people really like Tai anyway, most likely...

Jan 23, 2008 10:43 AM by: sweetsacrifice28 chapter 12

Awww Poor Selina... D= I hope those people who hurt her choke and DIE. *coughs* Erm, sorry. ^^;;

I hope to see more from you! ^___^

Jan 23, 2008 10:37 AM by: YuckFou chapter 12

That was so awesome! you got Tai and Jami's characters PERFECT! Thank so much. I loved it! specially Tai being an Asshole! xD Hope to see more soon!

Jan 23, 2008 04:48 AM by: AnimeAngel87 chapter 11

:3

TEEEACH ME THOSE FIIIGHTING SCEEEENES

D:

lol

Awesome Chapter. <3 the Figting

Jan 15, 2008 02:45 PM by: Falconlobo chapter 11

ewww bloody but cool^^

Jan 15, 2008 01:11 PM by: Nekogal411 chapter 11

Whoa! ^^ This is great!

You write good fight scenes!

:3

I need more >w<

Jan 15, 2008 04:25 AM by: musicismylife chapter 11

woot!!!!

Dec 12, 2007 10:00 PM by: HikariYugiYamiAtemu chapter 0

cool story! ^^ your writings improved too! :)

Dec 5, 2007 11:05 AM by: Kouni46892742 chapter 10

Now I must nag...
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YOU LEFT IT AT A CLIFFIE!!!

UPDATE, DARN YOU!!!!
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This chappie was amazin', btw!

Dec 3, 2007 05:01 PM by: Nekogal411 chapter 10

^ ^ Awwwesome! :3

Dec 3, 2007 02:47 PM by: AnimeAngel87 chapter 10

Okai so Like, is the chapter Finish?

If so

OMFG THIS IS THE BEST CHAPPIE EVA!!!! I <3 the way you used the Dialouge and the movments too. Like an Actual Book!

UPDATE SUM MORE SELINA-CHAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dec 4, 2007 02:56 AM by: ladychaos chapter 10

yeah it is finished, i just felt like doing a cliffhanger
thanks^^

Dec 6, 2007 03:18 PM by: AnimeAngel87 chapter 10

^.^

Dec 3, 2007 01:36 PM by: Falconlobo chapter 10

uh oh

Dec 3, 2007 12:04 PM by: sweetsacrifice28 chapter 10

Ohh Kinda suspenceful ^^ I like it!

Please write more!!

Dec 3, 2007 10:47 AM by: KionaKina chapter 10

Finish the chappie!!!

Dec 4, 2007 02:54 AM by: ladychaos chapter 10

the chapter is finished ^_^;

Dec 2, 2007 05:26 PM by: zeldafan92 chapter 8

LOL! Omg their gonna have a hang over for sure! Heh heh, Kakashi *snickers*. Omg they were all hilarious. Again, fricken awesome job! I'm Seriously itching for more ^^

Dec 2, 2007 08:44 AM by: musicismylife chapter 10

ya wat kouni said! *pouts*

Dec 2, 2007 08:23 AM by: Kouni46892742 chapter 10

Arrg!
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Finish the chapter so I can comment!!

Nov 27, 2007 04:29 PM by: zeldafan92 chapter 7

LOL! Marvolous ^__^ Great job on all of everyone's emotions and thoughts. Very well set up plot. Again, one of the best fanfics I've seen. It really does capture the feeling of the show, along with the writers own twist of course ^_____^ can't wait for more. I loved all of the expressions of the students, especially Selina's.

Alekazem: Which btw, you go kick Miho's and Kami's sorry asses in later chapter for me! Stupid plastic bitches... should be nuked off this earth... be better without 'em.

Nov 28, 2007 02:46 AM by: ladychaos chapter 0

Selina: thanks, and trust me Miho will get what's coming to her. lol. oh when i say 'oh Kami' i'm basicly saying 'oh god' since Kami can be translated as god, Kami isn't a character. you see to give it that Japanese feel Chaos decided to use some japanese words....but forgot to add a wordbank at the botowm so sorry it it confused you

what? i got lazy *shrug*

Selina: anyways...as another not out of randomness Reidou-san is japanese for mother so that's why i refer to Sakiko, my foster mother as that

Dec 2, 2007 09:52 AM by: zeldafan92 chapter 0

Ohhhhhhhhhh. That's makes a bit more sense lol! *scratches head* I get confused easliy, i though "Kami" might be the short version of his name or something ^___^" heh heh, my bad

Nov 25, 2007 09:05 PM by: KionaKina chapter 9

kewl!!

Nov 25, 2007 05:43 PM by: sweetsacrifice28 chapter 9

Great Chapter! ^____^

Yay ferret! >w<

Nov 25, 2007 12:07 PM by: Falconlobo chapter 9

cool is it really a ferret^^

Nov 25, 2007 10:53 AM by: AnimeAngel87 chapter 9

Nara's Home Town Awesome!!!

Can't wait fer more!!!

Nov 25, 2007 10:52 AM by: Kouni46892742 chapter 9

Awesome chappie!!!

Nov 21, 2007 06:54 PM by: zeldafan92 chapter 6

Lol! Perefect description of teen behavior and mixed with the Naruto storyline ^_~ Great job again wanting more each time i read it. It's almost addicting lol!

Nov 21, 2007 06:40 PM by: zeldafan92 chapter 5

Omg! I love it. The emotion i get from this is amazing. Great story plot too, one of the more in depth fanfics I've read that included OCs ^__~ Serious great job i can't wait for more.

Nov 18, 2007 10:37 AM by: dddarkdragon chapter 8

haha funny and wicked chapter
cant wait to see even more

Nov 16, 2007 05:10 PM by: KionaKina chapter 8

LOL! They're all drunk! *Falls over laughing*

Nov 16, 2007 03:39 PM by: AnimeAngel87 chapter 8

XD

Can't Touch This

Nov 16, 2007 02:22 PM by: Falconlobo chapter 8

LOL^^ funny

Nov 16, 2007 02:07 PM by: musicismylife chapter 8

omg rofl "im too sexy for my shirt" imaginary box:sandwich:pothole!!!! this is what beer does to you children....hiccup....

Nov 16, 2007 02:03 PM by: musicismylife chapter 7

KILL MIHO!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG SHE REMINDS ME OF A STUPID IRIOT @ MY SCHOOL NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! aaaaaahhhh the horror!!!!!!! BRAINFREEZE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! O.O

Nov 16, 2007 01:59 PM by: musicismylife chapter 6

school lol

Nov 16, 2007 01:55 PM by: musicismylife chapter 5

this story soooooo ROX MY SOX!!!!!!!!WOOT!!!!!

Nov 16, 2007 01:52 PM by: musicismylife chapter 4

AWESOME!!!!!!!

Nov 16, 2007 01:50 PM by: musicismylife chapter 3

KEEP IT UP WOOT!!!!! SEXY CHAPTER AGAIN!!!!!!! lol im hyper and bored!!!! lalalalalallala ^^

Nov 16, 2007 01:13 PM by: musicismylife chapter 2

prince albert+toilet=lol

Nov 16, 2007 01:11 PM by: musicismylife chapter 1

AWESOMELY SEXY!!!!!! LOL i call everything sexy

Nov 16, 2007 12:41 PM by: Kouni46892742 chapter 8

Hehehehe....

Nov 16, 2007 12:24 PM by: Nekogal411 chapter 8

Lol! ^^ Sweet chapter selina-chan! probley one of my faves.

Nov 16, 2007 12:14 PM by: sweetsacrifice28 chapter 8

lol xDDD Funny Chapter!
Kakashi seems scary when drunk... .____. >w<

Anyways, Keep up the good work can't wait to see the next chapter!

Nov 12, 2007 10:26 AM by: Falconlobo chapter 7

cool^^^ nice job

Nov 12, 2007 08:04 AM by: AnimeAngel87 chapter 7

Yay! We Get Sakiko!

>:( Miho. I Dun Like her. LETS KILL HER!!!

Nov 11, 2007 12:52 PM by: KionaKina chapter 7

GAH! Evil dog is on my team!!! ...wait... *Evil smirk* I can really have fun with this...

Update

Nov 11, 2007 09:37 AM by: Nekogal411 chapter 7

Poor kaori and akane, POOR SAKIKO T_T evil miho..

Sweet chappie! ^_^

Nov 11, 2007 09:31 AM by: sweetsacrifice28 chapter 7

Poor Kaori, Akane, and Sakiko...They get evil Miho on their team O___e

Great Chapter Anyways! Can't wait for more! ^__^

Nov 11, 2007 09:29 AM by: Kouni46892742 chapter 7

Poor Kaori and Akane....KICKÂ MIHO'S BUTT!!!

Nov 7, 2007 01:30 AM by: Falconlobo chapter 6

cute coed slumber party lol^^

Nov 6, 2007 07:28 PM by: KionaKina chapter 6

KAWAII!!! ^_^

You really did an aweosme job here. I love how it hints at all the pairings

Nov 6, 2007 03:00 PM by: sweetsacrifice28 chapter 6

Well done, It's great Selina saved Sasuke from drowning
:D I can't wait to read more ^^

Nov 6, 2007 02:54 PM by: sweetsacrifice28 chapter 5

Awesome Chapter! >w< Poor Iruka, O_O being teased about liking Dani xD

Nov 6, 2007 01:49 PM by: NintendoQueen chapter 6

awww, cute ^_^

Nara is so adroable because hse's so shy. She's like another Hinata. ^_^

Nov 6, 2007 12:32 PM by: AnimeAngel87 chapter 6

Niiiiiiice chap

I saw the Itachi thing on Youtube once It was Hilarious wanna see it?

Nov 6, 2007 12:47 PM by: ladychaos chapter 0

sure^^

Nov 6, 2007 11:37 AM by: dddarkdragon chapter 6

another great chapter and its cool that selina saved sasuke i cant wait to read more

Nov 6, 2007 10:07 AM by: Falconlobo chapter 5

cool and cute

Nov 6, 2007 08:20 AM by: dddarkdragon chapter 5

another wicked chapter.
keep workin on em

Nov 6, 2007 07:15 AM by: AnimeAngel87 chapter 5

This Chap Rox! Akane says Bish alot O.O

x]

Niiiiice chappie!

Nov 6, 2007 06:28 AM by: KionaKina chapter 5

Yay! i loved it. ^_^

And YAY! I am not being forced to discriminate Selina! *Happy*

Update soon pwease

Nov 6, 2007 06:07 AM by: Nekogal411 chapter 5

^_^ Awesome chappie! you really rock at writeing selina-chan! ^^

Nov 1, 2007 12:10 PM by: sweetsacrifice28 chapter 4

Man, This keeps getting better and better! Keep up the good work ^^ (loves the detail)

Oct 30, 2007 02:29 PM by: zeldafan92 chapter 4

Awesome ^^ i can't wait for more ^^

Alekazem: I love the detail with all the pain and gore ^__~ can't wait to read more of that.

You're doing great so keep going *thumbs up*

Oct 30, 2007 01:32 PM by: AnimeAngel87 chapter 4

O.o darkness Trauma Nice Chappie!!!!!!!!!!

DEIDARA NIISAN!!!

Dei: O.o
!

Oct 30, 2007 10:53 AM by: KionaKina chapter 4

Oh! Thank you so much for including me! *Hugs* And for making Hinata my guide ^_^

But I know Selina is not a monster! and Kaori does too!

We do not judge!!! Either you show us proof or we have a personal knowing of the person!!!! ...besides, Seline's ears are kewl

Oct 30, 2007 10:20 AM by: Falconlobo chapter 4

man i hate lairs can't spell

Oct 30, 2007 10:16 AM by: Falconlobo chapter 3

cool^^

Oct 30, 2007 10:12 AM by: Falconlobo chapter 0

LOL Prince Albert In The Can^^ nice punniness^^

Oct 30, 2007 10:11 AM by: Falconlobo chapter 2

cool^^

Oct 30, 2007 10:09 AM by: dddarkdragon chapter 4

another great chapter the pain and darkness was described amazingly i cant wait till you add more

Oct 26, 2007 08:45 AM by: Kouni46892742 chapter 0

Add a new chappie soon!!

Oct 20, 2007 10:56 AM by: NAERA chapter 3

SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEÂ KKKKOOOOOLIO
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me is so favin this

Oct 20, 2007 10:55 AM by: NAERA chapter 2

oooooooooooooooo.............
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MORE MORE

Oct 20, 2007 10:55 AM by: NAERA chapter 1

AWSOME
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Â -SKIPS to next chap-

Oct 13, 2007 09:42 AM by: Kouni46892742 chapter 3

Aww. Poor Selina! If Nara was a bit braver she'd stand up for you! But then again, she was teased too...so maybe that isn't so smart...

Oct 13, 2007 05:38 AM by: dddarkdragon chapter 3

another well done chapter cant wait to see more.
keep at it

Oct 12, 2007 02:31 PM by: Nekogal411 chapter 3

Sweet chappie selina-chan!

Oct 12, 2007 01:39 PM by: sweetsacrifice28 chapter 3

Aww, Poor Selina! :/ Great Chapter though! ^^

Oct 12, 2007 01:32 PM by: AnimeAngel87 chapter 3

XD lol that was a kewl Chappie. Inuyasha

u shpuld've put someone stupidly saying

"PUT U AND SASUKE TOGETHER! U GET EMOYASHA!"

x]

Oct 2, 2007 09:13 AM by: hornetthehedgehog chapter 1

this is good i hope im in it!!! lol

Oct 2, 2007 07:47 AM by: zeldafan92 chapter 2

Awesome chapter! ^_~ great story line. I can't wait to read more of it. Again, i love your writing.

Alekazem: Alcohol does the craziest things LOL

Oct 1, 2007 04:58 PM by: Nekogal411 chapter 2

XD Lol prince albert...Good job! ^^

Oct 1, 2007 01:07 PM by: AnimeAngel87 chapter 2

Prince Albert

x]

Oct 1, 2007 01:06 PM by: AnimeAngel87 chapter 1

Kewl Chappie!!!

Oct 1, 2007 12:06 PM by: sweetsacrifice28 chapter 2

This is great!

Tee hee ....Prince albert in the toilet...

Oct 1, 2007 12:05 PM by: sweetsacrifice28 chapter 1

Wow.
This is amazing! I can't wait to read more! ^_^

Oct 1, 2007 12:00 PM by: Kouni46892742 chapter 2

That's amazing!! Heh, Prince Albert in the toilet....funneh....real funneh...

Oct 1, 2007 09:35 AM by: dddarkdragon chapter 2

thats amazing. as always i enjoy to see and read alot more.
the title made me laugh also :P

Sep 30, 2007 06:37 AM by: RaptorMaster chapter 1

wow this is well written

Sep 29, 2007 07:30 AM by: zeldafan92 chapter 1

Wow, that tugged at some strings... very emotional and great writing too. i can tell even though you are already good at writing, you get better each story you make ^^ Just thought I'd throw that out.

anyway, i can't wait to read more of the story, really, it sounds like it's gonna be great. I also can't wait to see how the rest of the character react to Selina and how the story is going to form.

Alekazem: Bah bah bah Kristian, you talk to long. (Me: HEY!) ^^ We're excited for the next chapter ^^ keep up the good work *thumbs up* poor Selina though...

Sep 27, 2007 04:05 PM by: rainbowfox16 chapter 1

tear* i sooo know what she means. black sheep...i liked the story. i'll definately read more.

Sep 27, 2007 11:47 AM by: Falconlobo chapter 1

cool^^

Sep 27, 2007 10:39 AM by: dddarkdragon chapter 1

that was amazing.
i cant wait to see more amazing written work from you.
Good job.

Sep 27, 2007 10:39 AM by: dddarkdragon chapter 0

story added to faves btw