Dig Deep by zerotimberwolf

May 14, 2008 04:48 PM by: crystalwindbunny33 chapter 12

God I love this!

May 15, 2008 02:38 PM by: zerotimberwolf chapter 0

You should, it was for you ^^

Apr 30, 2008 06:04 PM by: crystalwindbunny33 chapter 11

i like this now i feel like crying! your poems are awesome man

Apr 30, 2008 06:02 PM by: crystalwindbunny33 chapter 10

this is so cute dude you so rock

Apr 30, 2008 06:00 PM by: crystalwindbunny33 chapter 9

you were depressed when you wrote this one to well it sounds like it

Apr 30, 2008 05:58 PM by: crystalwindbunny33 chapter 8

you should keep going with this one!

Apr 30, 2008 05:57 PM by: crystalwindbunny33 chapter 7

this had to be for someone!!

Apr 30, 2008 06:02 PM by: zerotimberwolf chapter 7

No one in particular

Apr 30, 2008 05:55 PM by: crystalwindbunny33 chapter 6

aaww did you or still like someone?

Apr 30, 2008 05:57 PM by: zerotimberwolf chapter 0

I did at one point...

Apr 30, 2008 05:55 PM by: crystalwindbunny33 chapter 5

this sounds like someone was being used and they were crying out for help

Apr 30, 2008 05:54 PM by: crystalwindbunny33 chapter 4

were you depressed when you wrote this other than that cool!

Apr 30, 2008 05:53 PM by: crystalwindbunny33 chapter 3

DUDE KEEPZ ON GOING WITH THE POETRY

Apr 30, 2008 05:52 PM by: crystalwindbunny33 chapter 2

dude your awesome

Apr 30, 2008 05:51 PM by: crystalwindbunny33 chapter 1

omg this is so cute

Apr 19, 2008 08:55 PM by: wolfspirit94 chapter 11

You are an awsome Poet!,I can only think of poems like that every once in a while.

Apr 19, 2008 08:42 PM by: wolfspirit94 chapter 1

aww that is so sweet!,your really good at poetry!

Apr 5, 2008 08:22 AM by: alex772 chapter 11

zero thats so sad

Mar 30, 2008 08:31 AM by: firetempesttakashi chapter 11

thats is so sad but i love it
and i no so many ppl who could relate
even me at times

Mar 31, 2008 02:23 PM by: zerotimberwolf chapter 0

thats what I was going for

Mar 26, 2008 01:02 PM by: vash13 chapter 11

Man I fell your pain brother.

Mar 24, 2008 07:13 PM by: aeris7dragon chapter 11

sad!!!!!! I luvvers it, zero-chan!!!

Mar 24, 2008 07:11 PM by: aeris7dragon chapter 10

Exactly!!!!! ^^ I agrees!!!!!!

Mar 24, 2008 07:10 PM by: aeris7dragon chapter 9

awww sad......that's how i feel sometimes........

Mar 24, 2008 07:09 PM by: aeris7dragon chapter 8

Awwwww how cyoot!!!...have I said that before?

I luvvers it!!!!!!!!!!

Jan 19, 2008 05:33 AM by: finalfantasy chapter 0

wow...ur such a good poet!^^

i only write random free verse stuff...for some reason, i just cant get words to match up. -_-

Jan 2, 2008 07:14 PM by: firetempesttakashi chapter 10

wow that really good love it and so true

Dec 22, 2007 07:41 AM by: alex772 chapter 9

yay good poem

Dec 1, 2007 03:48 PM by: alex772 chapter 8

Zero omg that was so beautiful

Dec 1, 2007 07:43 PM by: zerotimberwolf chapter 0

alex omg thanks lol

Nov 4, 2007 06:17 PM by: FreezingRain chapter 7

aww, if only i could write poetry that good. i tried, once, but i accidentally threw away the folder it was in and when i tried to remember it i had to fill in alot of stuff with different words cause i couldn't remember the original ones. ~.~ it was pretty good at first though, if only i could remember it. *sigh*

Dec 22, 2007 10:30 PM by: zerotimberwolf chapter 0

yeah I hate it when that happenes

Nov 4, 2007 06:11 PM by: FreezingRain chapter 5

Yeah this is one of my faves too

Nov 2, 2007 06:19 PM by: firetempesttakashi chapter 7

awww so sweet

Oct 21, 2007 09:04 AM by: FreezingRain chapter 1

how sweet.;-)

Oct 21, 2007 10:54 AM by: zerotimberwolf chapter 0

thanks

Oct 18, 2007 06:20 PM by: alex772 chapter 7

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Oct 21, 2007 10:54 AM by: zerotimberwolf chapter 0

ops sorry about that 0_0'

Oct 18, 2007 06:25 PM by: zerotimberwolf chapter 0

well thank you very much

Oct 21, 2007 12:06 PM by: alex772 chapter 0

0_~

Oct 17, 2007 02:47 PM by: aeris7dragon chapter 7

aww how sweet!

Oct 17, 2007 02:47 PM by: aeris7dragon chapter 6

I dont kno.

Oct 17, 2007 02:46 PM by: aeris7dragon chapter 5

ya we ALL hav demons somewhere...hey u dont hav 2 make it rhyme, ya kno.

Oct 17, 2007 04:07 PM by: zerotimberwolf chapter 0

i know

Oct 17, 2007 02:45 PM by: aeris7dragon chapter 4

ooh...depressing. kuhl!!!

Oct 17, 2007 02:44 PM by: aeris7dragon chapter 3

aww i luv luv poems!!!! but could u try doing longer poems?

and i forgot what a haiku is. can u remind me, pwease?

Oct 17, 2007 02:43 PM by: aeris7dragon chapter 2

is it just me or is this a despair poem?

its good either way, tho!

Oct 17, 2007 05:56 PM by: zerotimberwolf chapter 0

now I wouldnt say that. these are just based off of childhood pain

Oct 17, 2007 06:31 PM by: aeris7dragon chapter 0

oh i see! ya i could relate...or i would if i hadnt subconsciously repressed my memory...

Oct 17, 2007 06:36 PM by: zerotimberwolf chapter 0

it would be hard for me to do that

Oct 17, 2007 06:44 PM by: aeris7dragon chapter 0

well this stuff happened about ten or so years ago...

Oct 28, 2007 06:13 PM by: zerotimberwolf chapter 0

oh ok

Oct 17, 2007 02:43 PM by: aeris7dragon chapter 1

wow this is good...so you liked my poems?

Oct 24, 2007 07:27 PM by: zerotimberwolf chapter 0

yeah I did and still do

Oct 25, 2007 04:25 PM by: aeris7dragon chapter 0

SQUEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Oct 17, 2007 11:21 AM by: xkaitlyn25x chapter 5

now this one is probably one of my favorites they are all my faves but this sounds somewhat like someone i knew a long time ago before he died.....=[

Oct 17, 2007 11:28 AM by: xkaitlyn25x chapter 0

he died at 14...... demons remind me of him because he had such a bad past his name was Kevin Willow Daniels i knew him since 1st grade to 6th his past was so horrible because his father and mother both died in fact i am tryin to make a story about him...... then his foster parents abused him and he died from his foster father shooting him with a shotgun and he ran and was blinded by it and he almost survived but ..... you will find out in the story..... it makes me so sad because he was soo nice and smart and he was really really good looking and cute!!!=[

Oct 21, 2007 09:07 AM by: FreezingRain chapter 0

Kaitlyn what is your problem, you say every boy you used to know is cute

Oct 17, 2007 11:34 AM by: xkaitlyn25x chapter 0

he didn't have any other family both his mother and father were only childs and his granpa and grandma an great aunt and uncle hadc already died..... he was alone but he was one of my best friends.....

Oct 17, 2007 11:32 AM by: zerotimberwolf chapter 0

thats something nobody should go through =(

Oct 17, 2007 11:23 AM by: zerotimberwolf chapter 0

who?

Oct 17, 2007 11:31 AM by: xkaitlyn25x chapter 0

kevin daniels {yes his middle name is willow it was originally adam but he didn't like and changed it for his parents....}

Oct 17, 2007 11:33 AM by: zerotimberwolf chapter 0

dealing with someones death is not easy

Oct 17, 2007 11:35 AM by: xkaitlyn25x chapter 0

ya..... especially since he was so kind and caring of others...

Oct 17, 2007 11:36 AM by: zerotimberwolf chapter 0

my father was like that

Oct 17, 2007 11:38 AM by: xkaitlyn25x chapter 0

thats nice to here you seemed to be like that nice and all

Oct 17, 2007 11:39 AM by: zerotimberwolf chapter 0

yeah he was my best friend

Oct 17, 2007 11:46 AM by: xkaitlyn25x chapter 0

was...? i am sorry did something.... happen??? sorry if i am bringing something you don't want to talk about.... you don't have to!...=[

Oct 17, 2007 11:56 AM by: zerotimberwolf chapter 0

he died a few years ago but I'm fine now. I understand death

Oct 17, 2007 12:03 PM by: xkaitlyn25x chapter 0

o i am so sorry....
how old are you now???

Oct 17, 2007 12:03 PM by: zerotimberwolf chapter 0

15

Oct 17, 2007 12:06 PM by: xkaitlyn25x chapter 0

oooooooooo just wonderin just cause... i still feel sad for you though...

Oct 17, 2007 06:37 PM by: zerotimberwolf chapter 0

cause what?

Oct 17, 2007 12:36 PM by: zerotimberwolf chapter 0

no its ok dont be

Oct 17, 2007 11:19 AM by: xkaitlyn25x chapter 3

wow this si cool!!!=]

Oct 17, 2007 11:18 AM by: xkaitlyn25x chapter 2

i really like this you should really be a poet!!

Oct 16, 2007 04:15 PM by: alex772 chapter 3

deep go deepper if u dare

Oct 16, 2007 07:38 PM by: zerotimberwolf chapter 0

why would I dare

Oct 18, 2007 06:22 PM by: alex772 chapter 0

THE DEEPER YOU GO THE MORE STRONGLY YOU FEEL
its not a bad thing but it gets you some times

Oct 22, 2007 07:03 PM by: zerotimberwolf chapter 0

oh trust me Ive been digging

Oct 23, 2007 03:52 PM by: alex772 chapter 0

oh how deep do u plan on going??
don't get lost in the forest of memories you may lose yourself

Oct 23, 2007 05:11 PM by: zerotimberwolf chapter 0

but one can always find refuge in the lake of guidance=)

Oct 24, 2007 02:19 PM by: alex772 chapter 0

your learning quick for some one who is just starting to dig deep
maybe i'll have to start a story of peoms?

Oct 24, 2007 07:28 PM by: zerotimberwolf chapter 0

XD

Oct 24, 2007 04:28 PM by: zerotimberwolf chapter 0

maybe

Oct 16, 2007 04:15 PM by: alex772 chapter 2

my past is a daze as i such for u
hahah you good

Oct 14, 2007 01:47 PM by: xkaitlyn25x chapter 1

awwwwww thats so sweet.......... who is your Sapphire eyed angel
Â you should be a poet!!!!o.O O.o

Oct 14, 2007 01:53 PM by: zerotimberwolf chapter 0

I wrote this for one of my old girlfriends

Oct 14, 2007 01:54 PM by: xkaitlyn25x chapter 0

awwww thats so cute!!!! you seem very nice
you are a terrific poet!!!X3

Oct 14, 2007 02:11 PM by: zerotimberwolf chapter 0

well thanks

Oct 9, 2007 02:30 PM by: firetempesttakashi chapter 1

thats so awsome

Oct 9, 2007 03:12 PM by: zerotimberwolf chapter 0

thanks

Oct 3, 2007 04:59 PM by: alex772 chapter 0

my idea's great if my friends fight i'm first thing they fight over

Oct 3, 2007 04:35 PM by: alex772 chapter 1

very good !!!
< whose eyes shine as brite as the moon above my head and a touch so smooth it would make you sigh the touch of your lips brush my cheek tell me is this love >
its one of my old ones maybe you could add to it.

Oct 3, 2007 04:50 PM by: zerotimberwolf chapter 0

not a bad idea