Pain by bookworm369

, Submitted: 2007-11-03, Updated: 2007-11-03, Chapters: 1, Size: 1K, Words: 129, Comments: 13, Views: 232
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XD Definitely not one of my better works...but its ok...comment please^^

11 Comments (Most recent 10). Show All

Nov 13, 2007 02:23 PM by: Invader_Mira chapter 1

Oh wow. I think I'm in love! -huggles u- I wish I could things like this....I'd be famous by now! XD

FAVS***

Nov 6, 2007 06:47 PM by: wolfmoon chapter 1

Yuo aren't suicidal are you?

Nov 6, 2007 07:30 PM by: bookworm369 chapter 0

and what if i am? o.O...(no...not yet)

Nov 5, 2007 03:56 PM by: uchihagirl chapter 1

amazing as always ^^ *huggs yet again*

Nov 5, 2007 02:44 PM by: KelekiahGaladrian chapter 1

Ouch. That held a lot of emotion. But ouch. I like it though. Good job!

Nov 4, 2007 08:35 PM by: unknownangel chapter 0

its good...but ur right, not ur best...sorry...

Nov 4, 2007 01:20 PM by: DawnAngel chapter 1

God! you're good at this stuff!!
I loved it... you know what you're doing so keep at it!
=3

Nov 4, 2007 06:59 AM by: eriepilot44 chapter 1

that is verry talented.

i am in awe.

Nov 4, 2007 06:38 AM by: LoveWolves chapter 1

Cool I love it ^^

Nov 3, 2007 06:19 PM by: sexxygirl93 chapter 1

wow greatness like allways big bruder
love all the pain its like i Feel wat ur saying
*xHUGGx*

Nov 3, 2007 06:08 PM by: Blackwolfmoon chapter 1

very nice J.T very nice

Nov 3, 2007 06:07 PM by: YoriXYamiForever chapter 1

I love it! As usual! ^^ It reminds me of Hades's pool of souls. Full of feeling and pain (no pun intended) Keep it up! More! ^^