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What I still remember by ZeldaGirl9793
Complete View as PDF, Submitted: 2007-11-13, Updated: 2007-12-05, Chapters: 12, Size: 42K, Words: 9070, Comments: 50, Views: 750   Offensive Language: Mild
Anime/Manga (1) > Naruto series (2780) > Couples/Pairings (2097) > Naruto/Hinata (224)
What if naruto returned in six years instead of two? Naruto relizes that he loves Hinata, so he asks her out, Only to realize that she's Kiba's Fiance. Will she stay faithfull to Kiba, or be with The one person she's wanted her whole life?
Chapters
1 - the boy - Submitted 2007-11-13 Updated: 2007-11-13 - 92 views, 666 words, 3k
2 - The kiss - Submitted 2007-11-13 Updated: 2007-11-13 - 68 views, 969 words, 4k
3 - the promise - Submitted 2007-11-13 Updated: 2007-11-13 - 67 views, 1191 words, 5k
4 - the battle - Submitted 2007-11-13 Updated: 2007-11-13 - 65 views, 821 words, 4k
5 - the embrace - Submitted 2007-11-13 Updated: 2007-11-13 - 64 views, 902 words, 4k
6 - great news - Submitted 2007-11-29 Updated: 2007-11-29 - 56 views, 380 words, 1k
7 - a woman's heart - Submitted 2007-12-02 Updated: 2007-12-02 - 57 views, 1010 words, 5k
8 - goodbye - Submitted 2007-12-02 Updated: 2007-12-02 - 56 views, 1168 words, 6k
9 - The real goodbye - Submitted 2007-12-02 Updated: 2007-12-02 - 52 views, 399 words, 2k
10 - Never an Absolution - Submitted 2007-12-03 Updated: 2007-12-03 - 50 views, 416 words, 2k
11 - Unable to stay, unwilling to leave - Submitted 2007-12-03 Updated: 2007-12-03 - 61 views, 600 words, 3k
12 - Epilogue - Submitted 2007-12-05 Updated: 2007-12-05 - 55 views, 548 words, 3k

25 Comments (Most recent 10). Show All
MaliceKiotsu's avatar
by: MaliceKiotsu on Apr 30, 2008 01:21 PM chapter 3
Ahhhh dude this is like sooo messed up but it is soooo bad ass man.Naruto and Hinata was ment for one another
GreyPichu's avatar
by: GreyPichu on Dec 6, 2007 04:48 AM chapter 12
YEAHS!Ur doing a sasusaku story!i'm SO GLAD!!!i'll be sure to read it too.^^
hflp's avatar
by: hflp on Dec 5, 2007 07:26 PM chapter 12
That was amazing
ZeldaGirl9793's avatar
by: ZeldaGirl9793 on Dec 5, 2007 07:27 PM chapter 0
awww, thanks so much!:-)
cherryblossom93's avatar
by: cherryblossom93 on Dec 5, 2007 07:16 PM chapter 12
OH-EM-GEEEEEEEEEEEE.

You are good at updating. And the epilogue made me smile.

(OMGWTFBBQ. You're doing SasuSaku next. Yesshums.)

This was an awesome story, and I can't wait for your next!

NARUHINA IS TEH SHET!

^.^

And, you get a camel, of course...

*:3
ZeldaGirl9793's avatar
by: ZeldaGirl9793 on Dec 5, 2007 07:27 PM chapter 0
Awww, thankyou so much!!! ^-^
I cant wait to start writing my next X3
And thankyou for all the comments you gave me on this fanfic, they're always so nice XD
and Ha, I like the whole OMGWTHBBQ phrase, very nice!
Yay camel!!!!
*:3
GreyPichu's avatar
by: GreyPichu on Dec 5, 2007 05:49 PM chapter 11
AWESOMENESS!u know, u should make another story similar to this, but with sasusaku in it. that would be SO cool!just suggesting that, though.^^
ZeldaGirl9793's avatar
by: ZeldaGirl9793 on Dec 5, 2007 07:23 PM chapter 0
Awww, thankyou so much!:-)
And you sooo read my mind, lol. I am definatly planning on writting a sasusaku fanfic next! ^-^
And thankyou so much, Your comments are always so nice!X3
puppydog2's avatar
by: puppydog2 on Dec 4, 2007 12:58 PM chapter 11
this entire story is awsome!!!!!!
cherryblossom93's avatar
by: cherryblossom93 on Dec 4, 2007 12:28 PM chapter 11
Yay, a lil' random SasuSaku (you know my obssessions...).

See? Hinata's smarter than you think, Kiba. *blows rasberries*

I love how they yell when they proclaim their love to each other. Very cute.

Can't wait for the final installment!!!

^.^
ZeldaGirl9793's avatar
by: ZeldaGirl9793 on Dec 4, 2007 02:04 PM chapter 11
haham i know, very random, right?
I was like "hmmmmm, I must make a very random twist that no one will think of" But i have a feeling this was a little too random though.... lol
And thankyou very much :-)
Woah, it smells like rasberries!
cherryblossom93's avatar
by: cherryblossom93 on Dec 4, 2007 02:33 PM chapter 0
Hahahahaha.

Funny.

^.^
cherryblossom93's avatar
by: cherryblossom93 on Dec 3, 2007 06:01 PM chapter 10
Aw. Naruto's totally gonna crash the wedding last minute and win lil' Hina's heart.

...D-R-A-M-A-!

Teehee. Update soon, dearie.

^.^
puppydog2's avatar
by: puppydog2 on Dec 3, 2007 04:19 PM chapter 10
more more more!
GreyPichu's avatar
by: GreyPichu on Dec 2, 2007 06:25 PM chapter 9
oh my god i thought this ended the story, but i guees u said there are a couple more chapters.YEAH!^^cant wait
GreyPichu's avatar
by: GreyPichu on Dec 2, 2007 06:21 PM chapter 8
OMG!This chappie was SO sweet!loved it way too much!
ZeldaGirl9793's avatar
by: ZeldaGirl9793 on Dec 2, 2007 07:07 PM chapter 8
aww, thankyou :-)
cherryblossom93's avatar
by: cherryblossom93 on Dec 2, 2007 05:48 PM chapter 9
Suspenseeeeeeeeeee. EVIL.

Hee, awkward turtle time. *makes akward turtle*

Anyways. Poor Hina-chan, stuck in the middle. Hope she gets out okay.

Update sooooooooon.

^.^
cherryblossom93's avatar
by: cherryblossom93 on Dec 2, 2007 05:46 PM chapter 8
Aw. Sweetness.

Ha, Naruto used pink highlighter. And drew hearts.

...He MUST be in love.

^.^
cherryblossom93's avatar
by: cherryblossom93 on Dec 2, 2007 05:43 PM chapter 7
Choices, choices.

Ha, love Naruto's little solo there. Very nice.

Off to the next!

^.^
ZeldaGirl9793's avatar
by: ZeldaGirl9793 on Dec 2, 2007 07:05 PM chapter 7
aww, thankyou! :-)
Kouni46892742's avatar
by: Kouni46892742 on Dec 2, 2007 02:40 PM chapter 0
These last two chapters were amazing!!!
ZeldaGirl9793's avatar
by: ZeldaGirl9793 on Dec 2, 2007 04:28 PM chapter 0
aww, thankyou:-)
cherryblossom93's avatar
by: cherryblossom93 on Nov 29, 2007 06:06 PM chapter 6
Ha, can't wait to read about the partyyyy.

Naruto should totally try and sneek in. Cute chapter, post the next up real soon!

^.^
gaaralover1's avatar
by: gaaralover1 on Nov 13, 2007 04:25 PM chapter 5
Crap... Now I wanna cry...................
ZeldaGirl9793's avatar
by: ZeldaGirl9793 on Nov 13, 2007 04:29 PM chapter 0
aww, lol, dont cry X3
thankyou for the comment!:-)
Kouni46892742's avatar
by: Kouni46892742 on Nov 13, 2007 04:20 PM chapter 0
Poor Hina-chan!

Wish I could help!
 
Amazing chappie!!
ZeldaGirl9793's avatar
by: ZeldaGirl9793 on Nov 13, 2007 04:29 PM chapter 0
aww, thankyou so much!:-)
cherryblossom93's avatar
by: cherryblossom93 on Nov 13, 2007 04:19 PM chapter 5
My, my... Men are so... possessive.

Poor Hinata. So confusing, these boys are.

Mixed signals, much?

Another awesome (and fast) update. Woot.

^.^
ZeldaGirl9793's avatar
by: ZeldaGirl9793 on Nov 13, 2007 04:22 PM chapter 5
Amen sista! boys are possessive. lol X3
thankyou so much again. I love getting comments, I thought my writing sucked X3
MaliceKiotsu's avatar
by: MaliceKiotsu on Apr 30, 2008 02:10 PM chapter 5
Hell no your writting is some of the best i have ever seen in my whole life of reading fanfics. Kudos
cherryblossom93's avatar
by: cherryblossom93 on Nov 13, 2007 04:25 PM chapter 0
Too modest. XP

You are a much better writer than you give yourself credit for. I, however, can say that I suck. But you can't say that you do. Because you don't.

*:3 (camel with a flower)
ZeldaGirl9793's avatar
by: ZeldaGirl9793 on Nov 13, 2007 04:31 PM chapter 0
lmao, thankyou very much but u are crazy, woman! you are an AMAZING writer, seriously, even nathan and the camel think u rock!
*:3
cherryblossom93's avatar
by: cherryblossom93 on Nov 13, 2007 04:34 PM chapter 0
*huggies*

(Not the diaper brand, I swear. That would just be weird.)

*bows ridiculously low* I AM UNWORTHY OF THE CAMEL'S PRAISE.

...right. Anyway.
ZeldaGirl9793's avatar
by: ZeldaGirl9793 on Nov 13, 2007 04:39 PM chapter 0
lmao, ur so silly!! XP
*huggies* but hey, i like diapers too...lol
*:3
cherryblossom93's avatar
by: cherryblossom93 on Nov 13, 2007 04:41 PM chapter 0
Silly isn't the word for it.

I think they call it shizophrania, where I go to see the nice people in the white coats.
ZeldaGirl9793's avatar
by: ZeldaGirl9793 on Nov 13, 2007 04:48 PM chapter 0
lmaoo, do the people in white coats give you cookies?
cherryblossom93's avatar
by: cherryblossom93 on Nov 13, 2007 04:49 PM chapter 0
No.

Only oddly shaped candies. That make me tired.

They taste funny.
ZeldaGirl9793's avatar
by: ZeldaGirl9793 on Nov 13, 2007 04:52 PM chapter 0
lmao, haha! candy...interesting
gaaralover1's avatar
by: gaaralover1 on Nov 13, 2007 03:39 PM chapter 4
HURRY IT UP WILL YA!!!!!
ZeldaGirl9793's avatar
by: ZeldaGirl9793 on Nov 13, 2007 04:19 PM chapter 0
kk, lol X3
I just added chapter five. ^-^
Kouni46892742's avatar
by: Kouni46892742 on Nov 13, 2007 03:38 PM chapter 0
This is amazing!!
 
The last chappie kinda made me wanna cry, but this story is beautiful!

When will you update again!?
ZeldaGirl9793's avatar
by: ZeldaGirl9793 on Nov 13, 2007 04:19 PM chapter 0
Aww, thankyou so much! ^_^
I just added chapter five a few minutes ago ^-^
cherryblossom93's avatar
by: cherryblossom93 on Nov 13, 2007 03:13 PM chapter 4
Mm. *stomach growls* Hungry for more.

Someone's true nature comes out in stressful situations. Like Kiba. Meanie. Eat dog food. XP

Naruto would never insult someone like that. Not willingly, anyway.

Update soon, pwetty pweeze.

^.^

*faves*
ZeldaGirl9793's avatar
by: ZeldaGirl9793 on Nov 13, 2007 03:19 PM chapter 0
lmao, i kno. kiba is a butt head in this chapter! X3
i am actually working on the next chapter right now, i might have it up tonight ^_^....i hope

lol, thankyou so much again
cherryblossom93's avatar
by: cherryblossom93 on Nov 13, 2007 03:06 PM chapter 3
Aw, I heart awkward love triangles. *nods head*

And this is one of my favorites. Any other pairings appearing in here? Maybe a smidge of ShikaTem, or ChoIno? An OC for Sai (er... if he's even here in this universe...)

*coughs* I feel so demanding.

^.^
ZeldaGirl9793's avatar
by: ZeldaGirl9793 on Nov 13, 2007 03:16 PM chapter 0
thankyou, actually, i might sove some choino, or shikatemi, i'm not sure yet :-) but I'm so happy u like it ^_^
cherryblossom93's avatar
by: cherryblossom93 on Nov 13, 2007 03:02 PM chapter 2
Sneaky, sneaky, Naru-chan...
cherryblossom93's avatar
by: cherryblossom93 on Nov 13, 2007 02:58 PM chapter 1
And, finally, Naruto and his oblivious self has eveolved. A little late. (bum bum BUM)

OM-EM-GEE, I would type more, but my beloved little puppy just attempted to rip my arm off by latching onto my BRUISED hand (Dani hit me with the remote, and HARD) with her evilly sharp teeth and tugging like there's no tommorrow. And now it's more than a little sore. Ouchies.

Loving it so far, and glad you're writing again. Off to the next chapter!

^.^
cherryblossom93's avatar
by: cherryblossom93 on Nov 13, 2007 02:59 PM chapter 0
Evolved, I meant EVOLVED. Stupid keyboard.
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