Naruto:Last Year of Middle School by eelchic

Jun 20, 2008 12:49 AM by: kogalover2013 chapter 20

love it

Jun 20, 2008 04:27 PM by: eelchic chapter 0

Thanks!!^-^ missed u where have u been??lolz

Jun 24, 2008 07:49 PM by: kogalover2013 chapter 0

idk i found this 1 site deveant art with bad stories u should chek it out

Jun 25, 2008 08:45 PM by: eelchic chapter 0

Oh actually I have an acount on their I read my cuz's art well more like comics but still...I only go their for the fan art lolz

Jun 25, 2008 11:12 PM by: kogalover2013 chapter 0

me 2 my buds r here

Jun 13, 2008 07:49 PM by: zerotimberwolf chapter 20

This is going to be SOOOOOOOOOO funny I can tell

Jun 14, 2008 09:04 AM by: eelchic chapter 0

Yeah it is....the reaction will be priceless!

Jun 13, 2008 07:43 PM by: erandor3 chapter 20

OH NOES HTEY GONNA TORTURE THE BOYS!why is it most girls r so evil....not including u eelchic ^^; ur not evil

Jun 14, 2008 09:01 AM by: eelchic chapter 0

aawww thanks =) but my brothers have a second opinion on that,lol! well most girls like to get back at guys 1 cuz they like em 2 cuz they started it 3 which is most popular cuz its fun lol,but the revenge wont be very drastic,just funny,and the guys will prob get the girls too! so it will be funny! again thanks ^-^ i dnt think im evil just 2 little nusinces think that...lol

Jun 25, 2008 08:42 AM by: erandor3 chapter 0

lolz *hug*=3

Jun 25, 2008 08:46 PM by: eelchic chapter 0

lol thanks *hugs back* ;)

Jul 1, 2008 11:17 AM by: erandor3 chapter 0

so u have any idea when the next chapter might be up?

Jul 1, 2008 12:05 PM by: eelchic chapter 0

soon i hope my bros have been starting up alot of trouble so ive been busy wit babysitting,but im starting the next chapter 2day

Jul 7, 2008 06:10 AM by: erandor3 chapter 0

kewl cant wait for it =3 oh and if u want u can put Erandor in your story all you have to do is ask =3

Jul 7, 2008 01:33 PM by: eelchic chapter 0

thanks! ill keep that in mind when i get writters block new characters always help,lolz

Jul 17, 2008 05:08 AM by: erandor3 chapter 0

Yeah you can put him as the boys friend from back where they moved from and he moved there to for his families butchery and that he could hang out with them from that point on =3

Jul 17, 2008 05:12 AM by: erandor3 chapter 0

and he also works at the butchery since it runs in the family =3 lols im so smart oh oh oh i has an idea!you can make it so that a couple fo the boys and girls go to pick up some meat for their family and Erandor turns around and then then he gets glomped by naruto if u need a refrence pic of what he looks like just go to my favorites =P and yes you will have to keep his tail and dog ears those run in the family also =3 but idont care what you will make him wear as long as its cool

Jul 17, 2008 11:32 AM by: eelchic chapter 0

um I'll try 2 write that into the next chapter but I'm trying 2 type and its not relly working out so well cuz it sort of hurts since I sort of broke my left ring finger but i'm gunna try this weekend. but ur idea is helpful it mite not come up next chapter but proboly the next cuz I've had some plot ideas.But thanks so very much for helping me out I really appreciate it.

Jul 18, 2008 05:02 AM by: erandor3 chapter 0

no problem do i get a reward of some sort o.o?

Jul 19, 2008 08:37 PM by: eelchic chapter 0

how do u want rewarded?? a cookie maybe or watever

Jul 23, 2008 05:56 AM by: erandor3 chapter 0

idk u pick how ot reward me =3

Jul 23, 2008 06:36 PM by: eelchic chapter 0

no i dont know how so u can choose your own reward

May 10, 2008 08:51 AM by: darksasuke chapter 1

love it!!! you should so keep writing. from one Naruto fan-another!!!

May 10, 2008 09:04 AM by: eelchic chapter 0

Thanks! I proboly will...

May 4, 2008 02:08 PM by: kogalover2013 chapter 19

awsome ur story not only rocks but is geting very intresting james and naruto cant wait lol

May 4, 2008 05:37 PM by: eelchic chapter 0

thanks & thanks but not many people comment so I'm not sure if that many people like it.& it'll just keep getting more interesting with those 2!

May 5, 2008 09:11 PM by: kogalover2013 chapter 0

yay

May 4, 2008 01:39 PM by: kogalover2013 chapter 18

awsome

May 4, 2008 04:37 PM by: eelchic chapter 0

thanks! =)

May 4, 2008 07:26 AM by: sailoraqua13 chapter 19

I likes it! ^^

May 4, 2008 08:51 AM by: eelchic chapter 0

Thanks!^^

May 4, 2008 04:41 AM by: erandor3 chapter 19

XD "and no do not believe it."XD

May 4, 2008 09:21 AM by: eelchic chapter 0

^-^ Yeah maybe they should or maybe they shouldn't believe it lol! who knows?lol

May 2, 2008 08:58 PM by: zerotimberwolf chapter 19

Nice update looking forward to the next

May 3, 2008 08:04 AM by: eelchic chapter 0

Thanks! hopefully it'll be up soon!

Apr 29, 2008 03:59 PM by: sailoraqua13 chapter 18

Hey, that little fact I told u about Reiko, I have a funny feeling your going to put something like that in your next chappie. R u?

Apr 29, 2008 04:12 PM by: eelchic chapter 0

Thanks!! and Maybe... u'll just ahve to wait and see! but it mite or mite not be in the next chapter,idk,it depends on how everything goes.=)

Apr 29, 2008 04:48 PM by: sailoraqua13 chapter 0

Coolness! ^^

Apr 27, 2008 04:12 AM by: erandor3 chapter 18

WATER GUN WAR WOOHOO!*pulls out super soaker*YEEEEEEEEEHAAAAAAAAAW >:D

Apr 27, 2008 09:52 AM by: eelchic chapter 0

lol my bros have a bunch of those and I have one,water gun wars are awsome exept when they teams up against me,lol,but its still fun cuz I get the hose!*squirts you with my supersoaker* HA!

Jun 13, 2008 07:44 PM by: erandor3 chapter 0

NOES! AHHHHHHHHH NO FAIR!DX i wasnt ready :P

Jun 14, 2008 07:11 PM by: eelchic chapter 0

thats what makes it fun!! ^^ ;p lolz

Apr 26, 2008 06:21 PM by: zerotimberwolf chapter 18

Shikamaru was trying to play Mr.Smooth lol

Apr 26, 2008 06:23 PM by: eelchic chapter 0

yeah he was!lol

Apr 25, 2008 02:43 AM by: erandor3 chapter 17

*still spazing out on red bull*OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.......................chicken wings....spicy flavored =P

Apr 25, 2008 04:41 AM by: eelchic chapter 0

Omg those are the best kind!lol

Wait for it wait for it......SKITTLES!!!!! lol

Apr 27, 2008 04:05 AM by: erandor3 chapter 0

I DRINK HOT SAUCE :D...no seriously i drink hot sauce sometimes XD

Apr 27, 2008 09:58 AM by: eelchic chapter 0

Well Hot Sauce is tasty by its self! specially the Habinaro Tabasco Sauce,lol! but its even better on buffalo wings!^-^

Apr 28, 2008 03:00 AM by: erandor3 chapter 0

YAY HOT SAUCE *drinks hot sauce*YAY!.....HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT!*runs around*AHHHHHHHHHHHH!ok i feel better now X3

Apr 28, 2008 04:23 AM by: eelchic chapter 0

lol! =)

Apr 24, 2008 02:53 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 17

I'm kinda like Hinata with the athletics thing, lol.

And I would've done the exact same thing with that guy! #1 rule, don't accept candy from strangers no matter how yummyful it looks. XD lol. haha. And your dress is Beautiful, dah-ling!

Apr 24, 2008 03:00 PM by: eelchic chapter 0

Yeah it will be funny I'm sorta going for a Bella moment,lol!

Yea that is wat my mommy taught me never talk to strangers I just said no thanks and me & my friend ran into a store,my mommy is so proud,lol,although my friends keep making fun of us sayin u little girls want some candy,its funny,cuz we're like no fank you,but I know just run in a store otr scream pervert or help.

And thanks I relly love it I've already planned everything out exept who I'm going wit,lol!I'll have to work on that,lol!

Apr 25, 2008 06:12 AM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0

lol, yay for Bella moments!

ya, my 7th grade year, we had an actual class about that kinda stuff. true, it was like once a week, but they made us watch these videos made for 1st graders. we were just like, 'We've been told all this stuff sice we could talk.' XD

Hopefully it'll all get planned out soon. =D

Apr 25, 2008 12:41 PM by: eelchic chapter 0

Yeah was it D.A.R.E cuz we've been having that since like 4th grade its uper stupid!

I do hope it gets figured out soon,but all the guys in my grade are either jerks or uber ugly!so maybe they're be a HOT tranfer student next year,lol,I can only hope!

Apr 25, 2008 01:54 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0

we had D.A.R.E. in 5th grade. It was something different in 7th. Just the teachers freaking out for some reason...lol.

haha, pretty much somes up the guys I know, too.

Apr 24, 2008 02:45 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 16

omg! I totes act like that when i'm hyper! And i laugh so hard for like 15 minutes traight, and then my friends will be like, 'Thank God!' and then I'll start laughin again! XD haha, yay for an awesome chapter!

Apr 24, 2008 02:51 PM by: eelchic chapter 0

I know I was like that in Social Studies this morining I was like wait for it wait for it then SYRUP! Thanks so much!!=)

Apr 24, 2008 03:00 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0

haha, yay for being hyper! XD and especially during class!

Apr 24, 2008 03:55 PM by: eelchic chapter 0

Go Hyperness!lol

Apr 24, 2008 02:38 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 15

haha, this party is gonna be great! =D

Apr 24, 2008 02:48 PM by: eelchic chapter 0

yeah it is!!!

Apr 24, 2008 02:40 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0

and I can't beleive some 10 year olds hit on you! I just would've been like, um, ya, no.

Apr 24, 2008 02:50 PM by: eelchic chapter 0

I know we were like um yah ok no thanks bi! then we walked away and started laughing our heads off!it was cute that they tried but I have a brother that age just thinking about makes me sick,lol,10 year olds r immiture 2!!lol

Apr 24, 2008 02:57 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0

haha, i know. My friend's bro is 10, and that would be sickening. XD

Apr 24, 2008 02:33 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 14

Sasuke is really over protective. just cuz one guy is like that doesn't mean every other guy on the planet is. *shakes finger at Sasuke*

Apr 24, 2008 02:47 PM by: eelchic chapter 0

Yes yes Sasuke!lol most guys aren't jerks,lol!

Apr 24, 2008 02:56 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0

lol. =D

Apr 24, 2008 02:25 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 13

yay for sleepovers!! =D lol.

Apr 24, 2008 02:46 PM by: eelchic chapter 0

Slumber Parties are da Bestest!!!lol

Apr 23, 2008 06:03 PM by: kogalover2013 chapter 0

omg so awsome and i <3 dats song there goese the song

Apr 23, 2008 06:05 PM by: eelchic chapter 0

lol I know its so them! & i luv the song its so romantical!well in my opinion.thanks!

Apr 23, 2008 06:09 PM by: kogalover2013 chapter 0

i bets its embarressing thought i whould kick dat guys @$$ myself lol

Apr 23, 2008 03:24 PM by: zerotimberwolf chapter 17

I like this a lot

Apr 23, 2008 06:04 PM by: eelchic chapter 0

Thanks!=)

Apr 22, 2008 06:22 PM by: sailoraqua13 chapter 17

I love it! ^^ And to tell u, if u ever wanna see somethin' funny, take Reiko to a beach where's there's really dark, spooky cavern she'll go all brave mode and wanna go in then as soon as somethin' spooky happens she gets really freaked! ^^

Apr 22, 2008 07:15 PM by: eelchic chapter 0

Thanks!!^^ and that does sound funny!!=)

Apr 22, 2008 01:12 PM by: erandor3 chapter 16

YAY I LOVE THE RANDOM GAME!POTATOES! *is spazzing out on red bull*

Apr 22, 2008 04:03 PM by: eelchic chapter 0

OMG French Fries!!!lol omg I just had a Red Bull me & my friend went to see Prom Night its better to be hyper than scared but it didn't relly work,lol!Syrup*still hyped up on Red Bull and a giant triple choco chip cookie*lol

Apr 25, 2008 02:36 AM by: erandor3 chapter 0

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! EVIL MONKEY IN MY CLOSET!*shoulder cracks*OW dangit this stupid shoulder wont sto hurting T_T

Apr 25, 2008 05:17 PM by: eelchic chapter 0

HEY HEY HEY!!! THAT SUX HOPE IT GETZ BETTER! ;)

Apr 19, 2008 09:57 PM by: kogalover2013 chapter 16

omg omg omg omg awsome im lik really hyper lololololololololÂ myÂ did my nails and im lik really hyper lolololololol i hart random bojangles or wat eveÂ i love naruto im watchin it right now lololololololololo anyways bye

Apr 20, 2008 07:20 AM by: eelchic chapter 0

OMG me to well when I wrote this atleast!OMG my aunt does nails 2 but she lives in Las vegas!I dont watch Naruto I read watch the japanesse then started the manga!lol bojangles r very funny but when im giggly my awsome cuz u turned me 2 Naruto says Banana and I crack up laughing.lol so thanks 4 commenting!^^

Apr 21, 2008 04:27 PM by: kogalover2013 chapter 0

bananas lolololol i <3 choclet

Apr 21, 2008 04:28 PM by: eelchic chapter 0

ME 2!!!lol

Apr 19, 2008 07:52 PM by: zerotimberwolf chapter 16

The suger part was funny and Nruto costomising that surfboard was a good appology

Apr 20, 2008 07:12 AM by: eelchic chapter 0

Thanks I thought the sugar would be fun it was!Thanks yeah customizing is such a sweet thing to do!

Apr 19, 2008 06:30 PM by: sailoraqua13 chapter 16

Yea! I love it! ^^
Reiko: MORE RED BULL I LOVE RED BULL!!!!!!!!!!!

Apr 19, 2008 06:34 PM by: eelchic chapter 0

I no Red Bull ir like my whole thing on my myspace lol! its like in my pic and I put Red Bull 4 my name lol!

Apr 17, 2008 02:31 AM by: erandor3 chapter 15

pretty good :P

Apr 17, 2008 08:43 AM by: eelchic chapter 0

thanks!=)

Apr 14, 2008 12:53 PM by: zerotimberwolf chapter 15

I cant wait for that party!

Apr 14, 2008 01:09 PM by: eelchic chapter 0

yeah the beach party should be very interesting!

Apr 13, 2008 09:13 PM by: nextguardian chapter 15

Great chapter. I can just imagine some poor fanboy drooling over this chapter, lol! And, SUUUURE, Hinata, you hate Naruto (rolls eyes).

Apr 14, 2008 04:19 AM by: eelchic chapter 0

Thanks! and yeah sure she doesn't like him thats why she blushes when hes around!lol thanks again!^^

Apr 13, 2008 07:18 PM by: kogalover2013 chapter 15

o iwant to see prom night 2 lol anyways awsome fic

Apr 14, 2008 04:18 AM by: eelchic chapter 0

yeah me 2 sorta! thanks!

Apr 13, 2008 06:07 PM by: sailoraqua13 chapter 15

Coolness! ^^

Apr 13, 2008 06:30 PM by: eelchic chapter 0

Thanks!^-^ I thought it was good and it should i worked all day on it!lol =)

Apr 13, 2008 11:56 AM by: sailoraqua13 chapter 0

PLEASE ADD A NEW CHAPPIE!!!!!!!!!! TTTT____TTTT

Apr 13, 2008 12:06 PM by: eelchic chapter 0

I am I am,I'm writting right now!

Apr 13, 2008 12:07 PM by: sailoraqua13 chapter 0

Ok! ^^

Apr 12, 2008 04:24 AM by: erandor3 chapter 14

nice chappie :D

Apr 12, 2008 07:41 AM by: eelchic chapter 0

Thanks!^-^

Apr 6, 2008 06:06 PM by: kogalover2013 chapter 14

omg i cant wait
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Apr 7, 2008 04:21 AM by: eelchic chapter 0

Thanks the outfits will be something! & the beach party will be AMAZING!lol ^-^

Apr 6, 2008 06:06 PM by: kogalover2013 chapter 14

omg i cant wait
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Apr 7, 2008 04:19 AM by: eelchic chapter 0

thanks! thanks! =)

Apr 6, 2008 05:51 PM by: kogalover2013 chapter 13

AWSOME

Apr 6, 2008 05:54 PM by: eelchic chapter 0

thanks!^^

Apr 6, 2008 01:55 PM by: zerotimberwolf chapter 14

Too...confusing...head...hurts...

Apr 6, 2008 02:13 PM by: eelchic chapter 0

whats so confusing? :(

Apr 6, 2008 01:47 PM by: sailoraqua13 chapter 14

YEA!! I love it! Thanks for adding the next chapter! :3
And because u did, I'll wait patiently for the next chappie! :3

Apr 6, 2008 02:13 PM by: eelchic chapter 0

ok thanks!lol

Apr 6, 2008 02:40 PM by: sailoraqua13 chapter 0

Yous welcome! ^^

Apr 6, 2008 11:19 AM by: erandor3 chapter 13

took pretty long for u to make this chappie

Apr 6, 2008 11:22 AM by: eelchic chapter 0

geez it was one day late I had it up yesterday!,lol, the swings have a hold on me,lol, I was at the park all day!,lol

Apr 6, 2008 09:56 AM by: sailoraqua13 chapter 0

Will u please add 1 more chappie 2day? Guess what? I'M STARTING A NARUTO FANFIC!!!! :3

Apr 6, 2008 10:01 AM by: eelchic chapter 0

Kool I'll check out your fic and maybe another chapter after I get back from the park,I want to see the hot guys again lol,no I'm taking my little bro so i'll c if I can add another chapter,but I have been having a little bit of writters block so i dont know how good it will be!

Apr 6, 2008 09:24 AM by: sailoraqua13 chapter 13

Coolness! Is Reiko going to b at this sleepover? Oh, and if she is, let's just say Deidara is always after Reiko because, well, in my story after Itachi killed the entire clan he took her to the Akatuski hideout as a captive and Deidara, did, some things to her (Sine this is a whole different concept of Naruto u can use this reason or another reason I don't mind! :3) and she's terrified of him. She would kill him if she didn't get scared every time he showed up. The only one's besides Itachi who know what he did to her are Sasuke, Hinata, and Naruto. So, PLEASE LET HER COME TO THE SLEEPOVER AND STICK THAT LITTLE FACT SOMEWHERE IN THE STORY!!!!!!! TTTT_TTTT

Apr 6, 2008 09:59 AM by: eelchic chapter 0

ok ok ok I alread yhave her going there thats her escape from the drama!! u'll c & I'll make Dedra a creepy stalker thats why Sasuke is always so protective! I'll make it work!^^

Apr 6, 2008 10:21 AM by: sailoraqua13 chapter 0

Yea! I love that! :3

Apr 6, 2008 11:22 AM by: eelchic chapter 0

good I thought you might!:)

Apr 6, 2008 11:46 AM by: sailoraqua13 chapter 0

^^

Apr 6, 2008 06:41 AM by: zerotimberwolf chapter 13

haha I like scary movies because I love seeing peoples reactions during the scary parts lol

Apr 6, 2008 06:48 AM by: eelchic chapter 0

yeah not so much for me my friend likes to drag me to them our next scary movie is Prom Night,yeah I'll be one of those people screaming bloody murder and jumping in my seat,lol!

Mar 31, 2008 02:04 PM by: pinkEnVxo chapter 0

so sweet amd check out my stories and poems 2!!!

Mar 29, 2008 10:00 PM by: GreyPichu chapter 12

oh my gosh i really like this story! :]

Mar 30, 2008 05:33 AM by: eelchic chapter 0

Thanks!!! =)

Mar 29, 2008 04:40 PM by: kogalover2013 chapter 12

omg soooooooooooooooo awsome

Mar 29, 2008 04:47 PM by: eelchic chapter 0

Thanks!!^^

Mar 29, 2008 04:21 PM by: kogalover2013 chapter 11

awsome dats while i take 4 evea 2 read mine to extend da sericese
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Mar 29, 2008 04:26 PM by: eelchic chapter 0

I know but when I tried that the suspence killed me and i just had to read it!lol >.< =)

Mar 29, 2008 01:28 PM by: zerotimberwolf chapter 12

dude that was freaking awesome how Naruto flattened that guy out! it gives me all kinds of great ideas

Kibas a dog man (yes the pun was intended lol) I wonder if hes gonna try to pull anything

Mar 29, 2008 01:39 PM by: eelchic chapter 0

I hope you don't get any ideas from the attacker dude... I hope the idea is to save a girl,its very heroic,girls love it!,lol!

Oh Kiba might since ya know its Sasuke's younger sis I might have to put some drama in there!,lol!

Mar 29, 2008 11:50 PM by: zerotimberwolf chapter 0

oh dont worry i got the general idea and I cant wait for more

Mar 30, 2008 05:35 AM by: eelchic chapter 0

ok good and yes new chapter proboly Friday or saturday!

Mar 29, 2008 11:39 AM by: sailoraqua13 chapter 12

Oh how cute! :3

Mar 29, 2008 11:48 AM by: eelchic chapter 0

Oh yah Thanks!! ^^ ;)

Mar 29, 2008 11:06 AM by: winxgirl21 chapter 12

yay for Naruto saving Hinata, and yay for Neji and TenTen getting together! =) awesome chapter!

Mar 29, 2008 11:11 AM by: eelchic chapter 0

Thankys!! =) and Yeahness for the new couple Nejten and the new forming couples and for the Naruto savy Hinata!!,lol

Mar 29, 2008 01:30 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0

yay! NaruHina is awesome! =)

Mar 29, 2008 03:02 PM by: eelchic chapter 0

yeah NaruHina & EdwardBella!! lol!! XD those my 2 fave couples well my top 2!!

Mar 30, 2008 03:38 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0

lol, edward and bella forever! =D

Mar 30, 2008 03:46 PM by: eelchic chapter 0

yeah yeah!! Bells and Ed!!lol they are 2 b wed,so awsome!!
Alice is so going to go over board with the wedding like Bella's B-day!,lol I can't wait 4 Breaking Dawn its too long its 124days i don't think I can stand the wait!

Mar 29, 2008 10:59 AM by: winxgirl21 chapter 11

haha, I loved the guys having to wear the ribbons! XD so funny.

Mar 29, 2008 11:03 AM by: eelchic chapter 0

Thanks! I thought would be funny!

Mar 29, 2008 01:13 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0

it was. lol.

Mar 29, 2008 01:15 PM by: eelchic chapter 0

thanks lol!

Mar 28, 2008 07:06 PM by: erandor3 chapter 12

nice chapter! but i want to tell u something really cool.
at school me and my friends who really like anime formed a group called the narutards(no offence intended to the show) any ways we all get nicknames of naruto characters we will probably cosplay at anime conventions,but in your story wen it said reiko's date was kiba made me blush a little because in the narutards i am known as kiba XD

Mar 29, 2008 07:33 AM by: eelchic chapter 0

Thanks!^-^ Wow thats so Awsome no people at my school like anime and stuff,and omg thats so cool that kiba was in here and ur sorta kiba! =) Kool club! Thanks for telling me!^^

Mar 29, 2008 07:51 AM by: erandor3 chapter 0

no problem but i just wish u went to my school, indian creek junior high in the eighth grade XD then u could join the naruttards XD

Mar 29, 2008 08:18 AM by: eelchic chapter 0

Yeah that would be kool! me too! I go to stupid Harrison! No fun there! lol

Mar 29, 2008 03:02 PM by: erandor3 chapter 0

XD tell ur parents to let u go to indian creek!and if u do go to indaina creek look for a guy in the eight grade named tyler sheftick,or wen im in high school next year in the ninth grade XD

Mar 29, 2008 03:13 PM by: eelchic chapter 0

Yeah I wish my parents would never let me well my mommy would shes just kool like that,lol,she would even let me be homeschooled or go to watever school I wanted but my dads just a pig headed jerk! he never lets me do anything,like I'm not allowed to date til I'm 30 psh like thats gunna happen!but my point is love too,but can't! i'll be there in Spirit though,lol! XD

Mar 29, 2008 03:18 PM by: erandor3 chapter 0

TILL UR 30?now thats just wrong but oh well i hope u sort that out with ur parents and that u might just come to indian creek junior high

Apr 4, 2008 04:09 PM by: eelchic chapter 0

Yeah it is relly outrageous! but thats just his opinion and my mom said I can date as long as I dont do anything,lol,yeah rite like I'm gunna do anything,I hope someday day I get to,maybe in high school! lets hope,lol! until then I'll be there in spirit,lol!

Apr 5, 2008 09:51 AM by: erandor3 chapter 0

yea but still not the same XD

Apr 5, 2008 10:20 AM by: eelchic chapter 0

yeah still not the same in being there!:(

Mar 23, 2008 06:59 PM by: zerotimberwolf chapter 11

Shikamaru sounded like how I would react about the ribbons lol...and I wonder what James would contribute to the plot...

Mar 24, 2008 12:48 PM by: eelchic chapter 0

Yeah most guys I know do the same!lol...oh maybe he might make a certain character jealous,hes not a main character just a little jealous tention!lol

Mar 25, 2008 03:18 PM by: zerotimberwolf chapter 0

reeeeaaly...

Mar 25, 2008 03:33 PM by: eelchic chapter 0

yes reeeeaaaly!,lol ^^

Mar 23, 2008 07:17 AM by: erandor3 chapter 11

nice chapter^-^

Mar 23, 2008 07:29 AM by: eelchic chapter 0

Thankums!!! =)

Mar 22, 2008 10:02 PM by: sailoraqua13 chapter 11

Nice! :3

Mar 23, 2008 05:20 AM by: eelchic chapter 0

Thank you!!! =)

Mar 22, 2008 09:25 PM by: nextguardian chapter 11

lol, I feel sorry for the guys, with ribbons in their hair and all. Shikamaru's reaction was perfect, lol!

Mar 23, 2008 05:23 AM by: eelchic chapter 0

Yeah,that would be kind of embarassing,and ya it was he didnt relly have a choice so sarcasim was his only weapon!lol

Mar 17, 2008 09:13 PM by: sailoraqua13 chapter 10

Great chappie! :3

Mar 18, 2008 04:15 AM by: eelchic chapter 0

Thanks! XD

Mar 16, 2008 11:07 PM by: rlkitten chapter 2

I love Ino and Tenten's comments ^^

Mar 17, 2008 04:31 AM by: eelchic chapter 0

Yah i thought those might be funny!!lol ^^ Thanks

Mar 16, 2008 10:51 PM by: rlkitten chapter 1

Sweet ^^

Mar 17, 2008 04:30 AM by: eelchic chapter 0

Thankys!! =)

Mar 16, 2008 10:49 PM by: rlkitten chapter 0

lol, seems quite nice so far ^^ Almost sounds like my own mornings xD

Mar 17, 2008 04:29 AM by: eelchic chapter 0

Thanks and lol!!!^^

Mar 16, 2008 08:22 PM by: nextguardian chapter 10

Great chapter, the plot's really coming together! lol, good for Hinata, trying to make herself better!

Mar 17, 2008 04:29 AM by: eelchic chapter 0

Thankums,ya I think it is,and yah she will be more outspoken when they are done with her,lol!!!

Mar 16, 2008 12:33 PM by: zerotimberwolf chapter 10

Good chapter it was well worth the wait.

Mar 16, 2008 12:35 PM by: eelchic chapter 0

Thank you and Thanks!!

Mar 16, 2008 12:10 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 10

Yes, Twilight is the best book ever!! =) =) lol.

Awesome chapter! Haha, Hinata's gonna be shocked to find the outfit Sakrua shoved in the tote.

Mar 16, 2008 12:31 PM by: eelchic chapter 0

Thank you!!! Oh yes she will!!! I hve twilight insperations for that one !!!lol >=)

Mar 16, 2008 04:35 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0

haha, oh noes! Is Sakura going to pull an Alice?

Mar 17, 2008 04:12 PM by: eelchic chapter 0

YaH she is!! lol,oh have you read Stephenie Myer's rough draft for the prom on her website it has more details on Roaslie and Alice getting Bella redy,fuuny and Edwards reactin! Oh and also on the Twilight part of the website of FAQ it has her and Alice's dress,so awsome!!!

Mar 17, 2008 04:43 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0

really? I haven't been on lately, and i never did finish exploring it so...to the website! lol.

Mar 16, 2008 11:51 AM by: kogalover2013 chapter 10

awsome dude i luv it good idea putting nejten first i cant wait 2 see whos next

Mar 16, 2008 11:58 AM by: eelchic chapter 0

thank you!! and yup i thought it would b easier to get another couple not sure which but another couple with this couple!!

Mar 16, 2008 12:04 PM by: kogalover2013 chapter 0

i think naruhin buts dats my opinon i think its good to save sassuk 4 last lol

Mar 16, 2008 12:06 PM by: eelchic chapter 0

I don't know yet mayb,a couple will happen at the ballet or something like that!!! hhmmm?

Mar 13, 2008 09:39 PM by: nextguardian chapter 9

Lol, THE sad eyes are the ultimate key to winning parents over, lol. Great chapter!

Mar 14, 2008 07:44 AM by: eelchic chapter 0

Thanks!!Yeah they ecpecially when added with a depresed voice like 'oh i dont know what i want to do' thats works perfectly on my dad my moms imune she just likes my friends ,lol

Mar 12, 2008 02:59 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 9

great chapter! Can't wait to see how everything goes. =)

Mar 12, 2008 03:11 PM by: eelchic chapter 0