A Metaphor of Life by Hinata102

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A Metaphor of Life by Hinata102

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, Submitted: 2007-12-11, Updated: 2007-12-11, Chapters: 1, Size: 1K, Words: 125, Comments: 7, Views: 179
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I wrote this a long time ago so ya here it is I don't really have any experience I haven't read this in a while so I don't really know what to think about it if you have any suggestions for me to rewrite this poem in any other way please do so

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1 - A Metaphor of Life - Submitted 2007-12-11 Updated: 2007-12-11 - 33 views, 125 words, 0k

4 Comments

Dec 25, 2007 12:45 PM by: BoReDdUdE chapter 1

thats very good

Dec 25, 2007 02:47 PM by: Hinata102 chapter 0

thanx

Dec 12, 2007 07:19 AM by: Hinata102 chapter 0

your first comment!!!!!

Dec 11, 2007 05:42 PM by: Kyonkichis1Kitty chapter 0

That's realld good, Hinata! ^-^ Did I read this last year?

Dec 11, 2007 08:49 PM by: Hinata102 chapter 0

ya baka GAH!that sentence sounds weird!I DONT LIKE IT!!! maybe i should delete it...

Dec 11, 2007 10:20 PM by: Kyonkichis1Kitty chapter 0

wat sentence ur just scared caz i actually complimented you

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