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The Melancholy Life of Dante by TheForgotten
Complete View as PDF, Submitted: 2007-12-18, Updated: 2008-01-20, Chapters: 4, Size: 1K, Words: 340, Comments: 29, Views: 383   
Miscellaneous (5017) > Writing (311) > Poetry (123)
Poetry describing my life... Nothing that would matter to you...
Chapters
1 - The Fallen Angel - Submitted 2007-12-18 Updated: 2007-12-18 - 64 views, 145 words, 0k
2 - Death - Submitted 2007-12-27 Updated: 2007-12-27 - 49 views, 108 words, 0k
3 - Left - Submitted 2008-01-20 Updated: 2008-01-20 - 52 views, 33 words, 0k
4 - The Heavens Cried - Submitted 2008-01-20 Updated: 2008-01-20 - 45 views, 54 words, 0k

11 Comments (Most recent 10). Show All
XDarkTinkerbellX
Mar 2, 2008 09:53 AM by: XDarkTinkerbellX chapter 0
Dante,...these are beautiful,....
I love them,.....
please write more of them,...
<3 Tink
 
TheForgotten
Mar 2, 2008 10:01 AM by: TheForgotten chapter 0
I will, friend. My quill does not stop.
 
meray
Jan 30, 2008 06:19 AM by: meray chapter 0
the poems are so deep like the black night with no light. when the wolf tries to howl but what will he howl at? if noithing is so pure then what is pure. is something like a rose or a red rose that can only cry with blood? the poems touched me like the sounds of people crying with laughter when people need love i am one of those people who needs love. what love can bring us is only...fear is it that we fear to love?
 
TheForgotten
Jan 31, 2008 10:56 AM by: TheForgotten chapter 0
Love brings so many things..... Fear is among them....
 
meray
Jan 31, 2008 12:32 PM by: meray chapter 0
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meray
Feb 1, 2008 06:18 AM by: meray chapter 0
*blushes* then you too seeking love? or are you afraid of whut might become of love? then why do we fear love? is love the time to have happiness or is it to be depressed cuase nobody will love? i too am deppressed but still finding myself in the dark with one a rose that cries blood, or the black rose which also cries blood. cuase nobody loves a deppressed person in there life? or is it that...we can't love?
 
TheForgotten
Feb 2, 2008 03:02 PM by: TheForgotten chapter 0
It's hard to love when you have a heart that doesn't beat....
 
meray
Feb 5, 2008 10:36 AM by: meray chapter 0
especially the ones who can't love proper to trick you
 
Gardian_of_the_shadow_relm
Jan 29, 2008 12:57 PM by: Gardian_of_the_shadow_relm chapter 3
How frustratating.....*hugs* your never really alone, listen with your heart .....man that sounds cheesy. But it's true. ^_^
 
TheForgotten
Jan 29, 2008 05:20 PM by: TheForgotten chapter 0
How can one listen to their heart, if it has no heartbeat...?
 
Gardian_of_the_shadow_relm
Jan 29, 2008 12:54 PM by: Gardian_of_the_shadow_relm chapter 2
Oh man....I feel for ya. thats so sad.....but beautiful poem though.
 
TheForgotten
Jan 29, 2008 05:20 PM by: TheForgotten chapter 0
Thank you....
 
chaos_kitten8
Jan 22, 2008 03:17 PM by: chaos_kitten8 chapter 4
Ohhh...if you knew people up there, then I'm sure they would miss you.

I think this poem is my favorite. ^^
 
TheForgotten
Jan 22, 2008 07:27 PM by: TheForgotten chapter 0
I made not too many friends there.... Although...... I did make what one could consider a friend....... I now remember...... She asked of me to thank Holly.....
 
mickyD503
Jan 21, 2008 07:51 AM by: mickyD503 chapter 1
So... you are earth bound and rejected by heaven and hell, terribly depressing, how can you live your life of despiration?
 
TheForgotten
Jan 22, 2008 07:30 PM by: TheForgotten chapter 0
I do not really live....... I simply exist..... And what I do now..... I simply tend to the empty household that was my parent's.... Care for my mother's roses...... Study in my father's laboratory....... Read in the library....... And write, of course....... Write as they wished of me.......
 
chaos_kitten8
Dec 27, 2007 03:37 PM by: chaos_kitten8 chapter 2
.....so that's what happened to you...your life's more depressing than a Lemony Snicket book... *sigh* I truly hope things will get better for you, Dante...
 
TheForgotten
Dec 27, 2007 10:30 PM by: TheForgotten chapter 0
Thank you.... Though I have never heard of these Lemony Snicket books you speak of.....
 
chaos_kitten8
Dec 28, 2007 03:11 PM by: chaos_kitten8 chapter 0  
TheForgotten
Jan 19, 2008 08:01 PM by: TheForgotten chapter 0
They do sound rather.... Sad...........
 
DragonGirl1136
Jan 23, 2008 09:12 AM by: DragonGirl1136 chapter 0
Naw, they're awesome! =D
 
DragonGirl1136
Dec 21, 2007 07:43 AM by: DragonGirl1136 chapter 1
...........

*wipes tear from eye* That's incredible. Really deep. *goes to throw away my pathetic poetry*
 
TheForgotten
Dec 21, 2007 12:40 PM by: TheForgotten chapter 0
I thank you as well...
 
chaos_kitten8
Dec 21, 2007 05:19 AM by: chaos_kitten8 chapter 1
This really brings a tear to my eye. Your writing abilities ASTOUND me. I must favorite this! *favityfave* ...I think you need a hug. ^ o ^
 
TheForgotten
Dec 21, 2007 12:39 PM by: TheForgotten chapter 0
Thank you...
 
swampertgirl0504
Dec 19, 2007 08:57 AM by: swampertgirl0504 chapter 1
hmmmm. Deep.
 
TheForgotten
Dec 19, 2007 07:42 PM by: TheForgotten chapter 0
I suppose...
 
Graceful8Vampire8Godess8
Dec 18, 2007 08:22 PM by: Graceful8Vampire8Godess8 chapter 1
Interesting... I like it. But it's interesting :)
 
TheForgotten
Dec 18, 2007 08:23 PM by: TheForgotten chapter 0
Thank you...
 
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