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The Melancholy Life of Dante by TheForgotten
Complete View as PDF, Submitted: 2007-12-18, Updated: 2008-01-20, Chapters: 4, Size: 1K, Words: 340, Comments: 29, Views: 319   
Miscellaneous (4762) > Writing (311) > Poetry (120)
Poetry describing my life... Nothing that would matter to you...
Chapters
1 - The Fallen Angel - Submitted 2007-12-18 Updated: 2007-12-18 - 52 views, 145 words, 0k
2 - Death - Submitted 2007-12-27 Updated: 2007-12-27 - 35 views, 108 words, 0k
3 - Left - Submitted 2008-01-20 Updated: 2008-01-20 - 36 views, 33 words, 0k
4 - The Heavens Cried - Submitted 2008-01-20 Updated: 2008-01-20 - 34 views, 54 words, 0k

11 Comments (Most recent 10). Show All
XDarkTinkerbellX's avatar
by: XDarkTinkerbellX on Mar 2, 2008 09:53 AM chapter 0
Dante,...these are beautiful,....
I love them,.....
please write more of them,...
<3 Tink
TheForgotten's avatar
by: TheForgotten on Mar 2, 2008 10:01 AM chapter 0
I will, friend. My quill does not stop.
meray's avatar
by: meray on Jan 30, 2008 06:19 AM chapter 0
the poems are so deep like the black night with no light. when the wolf tries to howl but what will he howl at? if noithing is so pure then what is pure. is something like a rose or a red rose that can only cry with blood? the poems touched me like the sounds of people crying with laughter when people need love i am one of those people who needs love. what love can bring us is only...fear is it that we fear to love?
TheForgotten's avatar
by: TheForgotten on Jan 31, 2008 10:56 AM chapter 0
Love brings so many things..... Fear is among them....
meray's avatar
by: meray on Jan 31, 2008 12:32 PM chapter 0
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meray's avatar
by: meray on Feb 1, 2008 06:18 AM chapter 0
*blushes* then you too seeking love? or are you afraid of whut might become of love? then why do we fear love? is love the time to have happiness or is it to be depressed cuase nobody will love? i too am deppressed but still finding myself in the dark with one a rose that cries blood, or the black rose which also cries blood. cuase nobody loves a deppressed person in there life? or is it that...we can't love?
TheForgotten's avatar
by: TheForgotten on Feb 2, 2008 03:02 PM chapter 0
It's hard to love when you have a heart that doesn't beat....
meray's avatar
by: meray on Feb 5, 2008 10:36 AM chapter 0
especially the ones who can't love proper to trick you
Gardian_of_the_shadow_relm's avatar
by: Gardian_of_the_shadow_relm on Jan 29, 2008 12:57 PM chapter 3
How frustratating.....*hugs* your never really alone, listen with your heart .....man that sounds cheesy. But it's true. ^_^
TheForgotten's avatar
by: TheForgotten on Jan 29, 2008 05:20 PM chapter 0
How can one listen to their heart, if it has no heartbeat...?
Gardian_of_the_shadow_relm's avatar
by: Gardian_of_the_shadow_relm on Jan 29, 2008 12:54 PM chapter 2
Oh man....I feel for ya. thats so sad.....but beautiful poem though.
TheForgotten's avatar
by: TheForgotten on Jan 29, 2008 05:20 PM chapter 0
Thank you....
chaos_kitten8's avatar
by: chaos_kitten8 on Jan 22, 2008 03:17 PM chapter 4
Ohhh...if you knew people up there, then I'm sure they would miss you.

I think this poem is my favorite. ^^
TheForgotten's avatar
by: TheForgotten on Jan 22, 2008 07:27 PM chapter 0
I made not too many friends there.... Although...... I did make what one could consider a friend....... I now remember...... She asked of me to thank Holly.....
mickyD503's avatar
by: mickyD503 on Jan 21, 2008 07:51 AM chapter 1
So... you are earth bound and rejected by heaven and hell, terribly depressing, how can you live your life of despiration?
TheForgotten's avatar
by: TheForgotten on Jan 22, 2008 07:30 PM chapter 0
I do not really live....... I simply exist..... And what I do now..... I simply tend to the empty household that was my parent's.... Care for my mother's roses...... Study in my father's laboratory....... Read in the library....... And write, of course....... Write as they wished of me.......
chaos_kitten8's avatar
by: chaos_kitten8 on Dec 27, 2007 03:37 PM chapter 2
.....so that's what happened to you...your life's more depressing than a Lemony Snicket book... *sigh* I truly hope things will get better for you, Dante...
TheForgotten's avatar
by: TheForgotten on Dec 27, 2007 10:30 PM chapter 0
Thank you.... Though I have never heard of these Lemony Snicket books you speak of.....
chaos_kitten8's avatar
by: chaos_kitten8 on Dec 28, 2007 03:11 PM chapter 0
I had a feeling you didn't.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/A_Series_of_Unfortunate_Events
TheForgotten's avatar
by: TheForgotten on Jan 19, 2008 08:01 PM chapter 0
They do sound rather.... Sad...........
DragonGirl1136's avatar
by: DragonGirl1136 on Jan 23, 2008 09:12 AM chapter 0
Naw, they're awesome! =D
DragonGirl1136's avatar
by: DragonGirl1136 on Dec 21, 2007 07:43 AM chapter 1
...........

*wipes tear from eye* That's incredible. Really deep. *goes to throw away my pathetic poetry*
TheForgotten's avatar
by: TheForgotten on Dec 21, 2007 12:40 PM chapter 0
I thank you as well...
chaos_kitten8's avatar
by: chaos_kitten8 on Dec 21, 2007 05:19 AM chapter 1
This really brings a tear to my eye. Your writing abilities ASTOUND me. I must favorite this! *favityfave* ...I think you need a hug. ^ o ^
TheForgotten's avatar
by: TheForgotten on Dec 21, 2007 12:39 PM chapter 0
Thank you...
swampertgirl0504's avatar
by: swampertgirl0504 on Dec 19, 2007 08:57 AM chapter 1
hmmmm. Deep.
TheForgotten's avatar
by: TheForgotten on Dec 19, 2007 07:42 PM chapter 0
I suppose...
Graceful8Vampire8Godess8's avatar
by: Graceful8Vampire8Godess8 on Dec 18, 2007 08:22 PM chapter 1
Interesting... I like it. But it's interesting :)
TheForgotten's avatar
by: TheForgotten on Dec 18, 2007 08:23 PM chapter 0
Thank you...
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