An Xmas Gift Leads To Love For Big Cheese And Polly by Falconlobo

by: artismyLife on Jan 12, 2008 07:07 PM chapter 1

great story! ^_^

**artismyLife**

by: FreeBird77 on Jan 11, 2008 12:19 AM chapter 1

Dancing and kissing...I think I know where this is going. LOL

by: marisa937 on Jan 6, 2008 10:41 PM chapter 1

cute^^sweet job=3

by: alchemest1 on Jan 5, 2008 05:23 PM chapter 0

Awww. Very cute story. it was very good.

by: HikariYugiYamiAtemu on Jan 3, 2008 12:20 AM chapter 1

cool story! ^^

by: taurus92 on Jan 2, 2008 08:56 PM chapter 1

everybody these days has a bad childhood D:
poor things
"Big Cheese Santa Can't bring people that would be like kidnapping." <-- my favorite line 8]
that was a really cute story. â¥

by: flammingcorn on Jan 2, 2008 01:46 AM chapter 1

You always have such sweet stories! ^_^ And always leave to many of these: ^_^

by: phjasmine on Jan 2, 2008 01:26 AM chapter 1

aww so cute, loved it

by: Sahrahedgehog on Jan 1, 2008 09:45 PM chapter 0

Cute!!! very awesome story!!^^

by: SwordMaster1 on Jan 1, 2008 11:51 AM chapter 1

cute story

by: InvaderAmmy00 on Dec 31, 2007 06:31 AM chapter 1

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY

by: ginathehedgehog on Dec 30, 2007 04:18 PM chapter 1

Awwww, so cute! Nice story ^^

by: sadakoachan on Dec 29, 2007 04:52 PM chapter 1

awww so cute ^_^

by: AnimeAngel87 on Dec 29, 2007 12:54 PM chapter 0

<3

That was So cute ^_^

by: Sutaru on Dec 29, 2007 12:26 AM chapter 1

so awesome!^^

by: darc on Dec 28, 2007 06:49 PM chapter 1

Awww... that's so sweet. Cheers me right up. Excellent story! :]

by: PhantomSpiderpig on Dec 27, 2007 10:00 PM chapter 1

Aww that's sweet and really good so cute :)

by: PrincessFatCat on Dec 27, 2007 08:02 PM chapter 1

Aw so sweet!!! ^___^

by: firetempesttakashi on Dec 27, 2007 05:22 PM chapter 1

awww so sweet and romantic love it

by: shinigami8912 on Dec 27, 2007 04:58 PM chapter 0

cute^^ nice christmas story

by: alitta2 on Dec 27, 2007 07:14 AM chapter 1

Very nice and so romantic! A good story for Christmas! Great job!

by: subculturalgirl113 on Dec 27, 2007 01:10 AM chapter 1

awwww how romantic i love the ending such a good story i love it!

by: Zenshii on Dec 27, 2007 12:03 AM chapter 0

aww how sweet! omg I love it!! X3 you're a very good writer!

by: Neopetgirl on Dec 26, 2007 09:19 PM chapter 1

Wow,that was nice of Polly! Good thing she decided what she did,if she hadn't the ending wouldn't have resulted this cute and romantic! Awww :D Nice! :D

by: FullMoonRose on Dec 26, 2007 05:48 PM chapter 1

awww that story is so wonderful.......... i wish that could happen in real life.....i love it

by: Morpher on Dec 26, 2007 05:04 PM chapter 1

Nice story! an very cute!^^

by: ARCHERcat on Dec 26, 2007 01:52 PM chapter 1

yaaaaay cute!! lol :3
poor jerry lol XD i want some crow stew!! yay!! lol XP

by: sisaTao on Dec 26, 2007 07:15 AM chapter 1

Aw, sweet! Nice job.^_^

by: ladychaos on Dec 26, 2007 04:29 AM chapter 1

awesome!
it's cute and sweet

by: WH2007 on Dec 26, 2007 12:50 AM chapter 1

Awesome story. Well done!

by: Tala777 on Dec 25, 2007 09:58 PM chapter 1

awesome, awesome, awesome and cute and very awesome :3

by: FirePhantom24 on Dec 25, 2007 09:47 PM chapter 1

Very cute. Nice story. ^^

by: AnimeX on Dec 25, 2007 09:19 PM chapter 1

awwww.. that was a really cute story!! ^____^
nice job