Wow. You're good at that. I also happened to notice the rhyming in it. That's awesome though I'm not sure I understand it because I don't get things like that. Kool though! ^^
wow... for once i really don't have much to say... just that it's probably one of the longest poems i've read here on FAC (not that that's bad), and that i thought it was amazing *faves* very nice!! ^_^