More than one by TKxKari224

Chapters

0 - Lets introduce. - Submitted 2008-02-18 Updated: 2008-02-18 - 99 views, 111 words, 0k
1 - I don't understand. - Submitted 2008-02-18 Updated: 2008-02-18 - 84 views, 561 words, 3k
2 - Reunited except for one - Submitted 2008-02-19 Updated: 2008-02-19 - 79 views, 887 words, 4k
3 - Sanomes Arrival, Call 911! - Submitted 2008-02-20 Updated: 2008-02-20 - 80 views, 427 words, 2k
4 - Find the secret, Nao's here. - Submitted 2008-02-22 Updated: 2008-02-22 - 82 views, 1496 words, 7k
5 - Dreams. - Submitted 2008-02-27 Updated: 2008-02-27 - 84 views, 1094 words, 5k
6 - And etcetera - Submitted 2008-03-02 Updated: 2008-03-02 - 85 views, 1857 words, 10k
7 - Someones dying, and its not Sanome. - Submitted 2008-03-02 Updated: 2008-03-02 - 80 views, 1584 words, 8k
8 - We'll spread love. Use your wings. - Submitted 2008-03-03 Updated: 2008-03-03 - 83 views, 1380 words, 7k
9 - Tellin' everyone. - Submitted 2008-03-05 Updated: 2008-03-24 - 85 views, 787 words, 4k
10 - Doppleganger Part I - Submitted 2008-04-27 Updated: 2008-04-27 - 65 views, 1607 words, 8k
11 - Doppleganger Part II - Submitted 2008-04-27 Updated: 2008-04-27 - 68 views, 921 words, 5k
12 - This old Castle - Submitted 2008-04-28 Updated: 2008-04-28 - 71 views, 719 words, 3k
13 - Exploring this Castle - Submitted 2008-04-29 Updated: 2008-04-29 - 66 views, 1701 words, 9k
14 - Theres more at night then jsut wolves - Submitted 2008-04-29 Updated: 2008-04-30 - 66 views, 892 words, 4k
15 - Vamp hunters - Submitted 2008-05-04 Updated: 2008-05-18 - 60 views, 598 words, 3k
16 - Sanome finds a marble! - Submitted 2008-05-18 Updated: 2008-05-18 - 56 views, 841 words, 4k
17 - The big switcharoo - Submitted 2008-05-18 Updated: 2008-06-18 - 69 views, 392 words, 2k
18 - DESTROY anything that looks EVIL. - Submitted 2008-07-06 Updated: 2008-07-06 - 43 views, 968 words, 5k
19 - I want to show you something. - Submitted 2008-07-13 Updated: 2008-07-13 - 40 views, 951 words, 5k
20 - Lets practice. - Submitted 2008-07-19 Updated: 2008-07-19 - 29 views, 730 words, 4k
21 - This could be a problem... - Submitted 2008-07-19 Updated: 2008-07-19 - 34 views, 1300 words, 6k
22 - Don't fight children. - Submitted 2008-07-31 Updated: 2008-07-31 - 31 views, 603 words, 3k
23 - Why won't you stop!? - Submitted 2008-08-01 Updated: 2008-08-01 - 33 views, 1448 words, 7k
24 - Backfired plan: Mallex is here - Submitted 2008-08-02 Updated: 2008-08-02 - 33 views, 880 words, 4k
25 - The kidnapping of Claire. - Submitted 2008-08-27 Updated: 2008-08-27 - 25 views, 1022 words, 5k
26 - Time seemed to stop. - Submitted 2008-09-06 Updated: 2008-09-08 - 25 views, 816 words, 4k
27 - Someone had woken. - Submitted 2008-09-13 Updated: 2008-09-13 - 22 views, 854 words, 4k
28 - Pleae wake - Submitted 2008-09-18 Updated: 2008-09-18 - 19 views, 1398 words, 7k
29 - Merry Christmas you guys. - Submitted 2008-09-29 Updated: 2008-09-29 - 10 views, 507 words, 3k

43 Comments (Most recent 10). Show All

Sep 19, 2008 02:11 AM by: NAERA chapter 28

.......
wow..jin please dont die!
i totally love how you did this chpater so well thought good work gabby! *thumbs up*!!

Sep 19, 2008 03:09 PM by: TKxKari224 chapter 28

Maybe he will maybe he won't, let's follow his advice too and stay positive. :)

Lol really? Thanks so much! ^^

Sep 20, 2008 06:44 AM by: NAERA chapter 0

yeh totally! go jins advice lolXD

Sep 21, 2008 10:18 AM by: TKxKari224 chapter 0

Sep 13, 2008 01:36 PM by: NAERA chapter 27

"Kotoko sighed and Kaoru and Claire looked at each other"

just to point out i think u got the sentence wroing u wrote that b4 claire woke up ^^
i got confused..lol

aww poor jin i guess u are gng to kill him
aww claire and kaoru!!
AND..hikaga sanome ^^

Sep 13, 2008 02:37 PM by: TKxKari224 chapter 27

Whoopsie! XD I'm such a moron XD Thanks for pointing it out for me ^__^

Does that make you sad? D:

Lol yeah ^^ Couple cuteness <3

Sep 15, 2008 04:54 PM by: NAERA chapter 0

no prob!!

no it just its such a good idea for the story but it makes u symapthiese with the characer

XD

Sep 17, 2008 02:55 PM by: TKxKari224 chapter 0

XD

Really? Well I guess I agree a bit. Makes you be like 'needs more luv..' and all that.. I wonder if anyone will hate me if i really do kill that guy.. I know two people on DA who like him a lot. One even had a dream about him . O.O
But yeah...

Sep 18, 2008 06:39 AM by: NAERA chapter 0

lol seriously!! i had was half asleep and half awake when i almost dreamt of hikaga and sanome XD

jin is cute!! thought lol!!

Sep 18, 2008 12:50 PM by: TKxKari224 chapter 0

lol XD
Aha yeah? I'm having second thoughts now. @_@ I love all the characters so much, and I started getting really attached to them, so it'll be hard, but I will follow through on my plans. XD

Sep 11, 2008 08:44 AM by: NAERA chapter 26

.................YOUR ARE GNG TO KILL JIN.......NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

wow bel! this is awsome seriously to EXTREME lolXD

i love how create the action scenes i suck at them!!..

Sep 11, 2008 01:12 PM by: TKxKari224 chapter 26

XD sorry ^^;
The thoughts are contaminating mah brains! XD

Thanks so much! *huggles*
Aw, I'm sure you don't suck at action scenes D:

Sep 11, 2008 04:05 PM by: NAERA chapter 0

o.o

NOOOOOOO*dramatic anime scene*

meh-_-

Sep 3, 2008 02:47 PM by: NAERA chapter 25

................................

omj.........................

ok i currently speechless.....

Sep 5, 2008 05:17 PM by: TKxKari224 chapter 0

rofl. XD Is that a good or bad thing?

Sep 6, 2008 05:52 AM by: NAERA chapter 0

a freaking good thing..

Sep 6, 2008 09:08 PM by: TKxKari224 chapter 0

aha okay. ^^
I'll try to get to the next chapter soon. :]

Aug 2, 2008 03:33 PM by: NAERA chapter 24

CLAIRE!! he should kidnap her..then we can see kaorus character develop!!

or hmm maybe u should pick someone out the group who u havent mentioned alot about

Aug 2, 2008 03:34 PM by: TKxKari224 chapter 24

Oh! XD

But who haven't i mentioned a lot? D:

Aug 2, 2008 03:40 PM by: NAERA chapter 24

kotoko

Aug 2, 2008 03:41 PM by: TKxKari224 chapter 0

really, i thout she was in it a lot..

Kotoko or Claire, which one should it be.. hmm. XD

Aug 2, 2008 03:47 PM by: NAERA chapter 0

hmmm!!....thats up to U

Aug 2, 2008 03:49 PM by: TKxKari224 chapter 0

ahh XD

Hm, i think it's not gonna be Kotoko, she's already been beaten up by both Sanome and Claire XD

So if it's okay with you, can it be claire? :3

Aug 2, 2008 04:29 PM by: NAERA chapter 0

hey its fine..i forgot about kotoko...then i remebered her!! XD

Aug 2, 2008 04:30 PM by: TKxKari224 chapter 0

lawl XD Okay ^^ Kidnappers get ready! MUAHAH! XD

Aug 2, 2008 07:10 AM by: NAERA chapter 23

o_o...my hikaga..MY BOY *huggles him* oh...

wow this story getting awsome and awsome by each day!!

Aug 2, 2008 10:58 AM by: TKxKari224 chapter 23

Hehe. :3 They just need some love! XD

Really? You think? :D That makes me really happy to hear! ^_^

Aug 2, 2008 03:23 PM by: NAERA chapter 0

yeh!!*huggles them*

Aug 2, 2008 07:03 AM by: NAERA chapter 22

o.o ..no must no who it is...

hikaga jin NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

Aug 2, 2008 10:58 AM by: TKxKari224 chapter 22

Hehe, you'll find out soon. ^_^
I know, i didn't even know it would be them at first then i was like 'ohh!'
XD

Aug 2, 2008 03:23 PM by: NAERA chapter 0

Jul 22, 2008 10:02 AM by: NAERA chapter 21

O3O........he must've have heard 0_0////!!

awwwwwwwwwwwwww

bunny hikaga

Jul 22, 2008 05:16 PM by: TKxKari224 chapter 21

Heehee XD

May~beeee ;D
We'll see in the next chapter, lol

Jul 24, 2008 01:57 PM by: NAERA chapter 0

aww man!

i hate waiting!! >^<

Jul 15, 2008 03:47 PM by: NAERA chapter 19

...............omg gabby this rocks!!
seriouslY!!

aww that was cute hikaga and sanome spent some time together!! awwwwwwwwwww >w<

Jul 15, 2008 03:49 PM by: TKxKari224 chapter 19

Haha thanks :)

Lol yeah, i wanted to make them spend some time together since the only time they did was when they were in the castle XD

Jul 15, 2008 03:44 PM by: NAERA chapter 18

omgomgomgomgomg!!! o_O..

Jul 15, 2008 03:48 PM by: TKxKari224 chapter 18

lol XD

Jun 10, 2008 02:55 PM by: NAERA chapter 17

HAHAH OMG I LOVE THIS ONE!
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wow,,0_o..whoa that would be werid if that happen in real life..

Jun 18, 2008 08:20 AM by: TKxKari224 chapter 17

XD

Omg! It would be totally weird! XD but kinds fun too >:3

Jun 18, 2008 11:28 AM by: NAERA chapter 0

XD

i would so like to swap with a famous person..heheheh or maybe someone close to the jonas bros or antic cafe..

heheh u and shou..

Jun 18, 2008 03:14 PM by: TKxKari224 chapter 0

ahh! *melts* Trading places with Shou! I would die! :D

But then he would die D; Noes! I would die when i got back to my body! XD

Gosh, it would be so much fun to sing infront of so much people! :D
With a voice like Shou's i mean. XD
What about you? :D Would you like to sing in front of people? :)

Jun 20, 2008 07:39 AM by: NAERA chapter 0

oh yeh totally..i would so love to be in rock oband or jrock band..

Jun 10, 2008 02:54 PM by: NAERA chapter 16

oooooooooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhh...oh oh sanome!!

Jun 18, 2008 08:20 AM by: TKxKari224 chapter 16

lol, XD

May 18, 2008 11:13 AM by: ChemBox chapter 16

Hohoho.
This is getting prtysrs. <<ha, betcha don't know what htat means.

May 18, 2008 11:14 AM by: TKxKari224 chapter 16

lol i bet i do, i think it means pretty serious! OHOHOH

May 18, 2008 10:01 AM by: ChemBox chapter 15

Ahah, awesome shiz.
It's getting goood!
Icannotsrslywaitforthenextchapterlikeomg. 'Cause you already told me all about it :D it'll be superb.

May 19, 2008 02:02 PM by: TKxKari224 chapter 0

lol yeh, it'll sure be an aweosme one XD

May 9, 2008 04:39 PM by: NAERA chapter 13

OOPS I DID FORGET THIS CHAPTER *slaps self*

man u such a good author...cnt wait to see your books publsihed..more that one sequel form big mistake written by gabriella alfarlk (is that how u spell ur second name??..)
best selling book!!!

May 9, 2008 04:55 PM by: TKxKari224 chapter 13

lol s'okay! XD

Squee! HAving one of my books published would be a dream come true *sighs dreamily* I will one day :)

May 9, 2008 05:27 PM by: NAERA chapter 0

it totally would and it will dnt lose hope!! my young friend!!

May 9, 2008 04:18 PM by: NAERA chapter 15

.whoa short.. i wanna join in..lol

May 9, 2008 04:20 PM by: TKxKari224 chapter 0

i think you missed a chapter? 'exploring the castle?'

May 9, 2008 04:39 PM by: NAERA chapter 0

oWo i did!!

May 9, 2008 04:20 PM by: TKxKari224 chapter 15

May 9, 2008 04:18 PM by: NAERA chapter 14

vampire vampire whos the vampire

plex= did someone say vampire *shows teeth*

May 9, 2008 04:19 PM by: TKxKari224 chapter 0

lol vampires are cool ;3

May 9, 2008 04:40 PM by: NAERA chapter 0

totally i wish i was a vampire!!

vampires are teh love and they are hot o_0 there either classified as emos too. sometimes .=.

May 9, 2008 04:16 PM by: NAERA chapter 12

AWW CLAIRE AND KAORU FOREVER!! MAN!! AWW KAWAII..

why why does everending of a story have to be sad sometimes!!

May 9, 2008 04:18 PM by: TKxKari224 chapter 12

lol yeah! ^_^

lol, cuz i an't let them stay happy, doi XD Its jut too nice XD

May 9, 2008 04:14 PM by: NAERA chapter 11

0__0..whoa how can u not remeber killing somebody then hurtin ur friend o_o claire u werid

claire= HEY!!

May 9, 2008 04:16 PM by: TKxKari224 chapter 11

xD We all have our weird moments XD

May 9, 2008 04:12 PM by: NAERA chapter 10

omg omg claire..0__0 whoa..

May 9, 2008 04:13 PM by: TKxKari224 chapter 10

lol yeap...

Apr 30, 2008 03:01 PM by: ChemBox chapter 14

vampie ;]]

May 1, 2008 08:08 AM by: TKxKari224 chapter 14

lol oh yeah.

Apr 29, 2008 12:15 PM by: ChemBox chapter 13

Apr 30, 2008 06:15 AM by: TKxKari224 chapter 13

;P

XD

Apr 28, 2008 04:01 PM by: ChemBox chapter 12

hahaha ;]

Apr 28, 2008 04:08 PM by: TKxKari224 chapter 0

>:D XD

Apr 27, 2008 10:56 AM by: ChemBox chapter 11

oh wowwww.

Apr 28, 2008 03:55 AM by: TKxKari224 chapter 11

yup.

Apr 27, 2008 09:48 AM by: ChemBox chapter 10

HOSNAP!

Apr 27, 2008 09:49 AM by: TKxKari224 chapter 10

yups

Apr 27, 2008 08:10 AM by: ChemBox chapter 9

haha, that was so confusing. [remember?!?!!?!?]

May 9, 2008 04:07 PM by: TKxKari224 chapter 0

lol XD

Mar 28, 2008 09:32 AM by: NAERA chapter 9

wtfs a doppleganger??
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awsome gabby this storys excellentyyyy
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keep up the good work!!

Mar 29, 2008 07:09 AM by: TKxKari224 chapter 9

Thanks!

Lol and a doppleganger is like another one of you who is totally opposite ^^

Mar 30, 2008 07:09 AM by: NAERA chapter 0

yeh sure go ahead... this will make things intersting for claire and kaoru...

Apr 2, 2008 12:47 PM by: TKxKari224 chapter 0

hehe yeah ^^

Mar 4, 2008 09:26 AM by: NAERA chapter 8

hooray sanomes awake sanomes awake!!

Mar 4, 2008 01:51 PM by: TKxKari224 chapter 8

heehee ^^

I've already got the perfect idea for when the other find out! :D

Mar 4, 2008 09:21 AM by: NAERA chapter 7

0___0
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whoa
naera= HIKAGA!!
hikaga *whimpers* SANOME WAKE UP!! *shakes her*
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wow it was abit ...WOW but awsome!!!

Mar 4, 2008 01:48 PM by: TKxKari224 chapter 7

yay thanks! :D

Lol don't worry Hikaga, you'll get a surprise soon :)

Mar 4, 2008 09:17 AM by: NAERA chapter 6

omg omg omg...o__o

Mar 7, 2008 08:18 AM by: TKxKari224 chapter 6

hehe..

Mar 3, 2008 05:36 PM by: xEmotional chapter 8

oh mon du

Mar 3, 2008 05:47 PM by: TKxKari224 chapter 0

definately :p

Mar 2, 2008 03:19 PM by: xEmotional chapter 7

:o *_*

Mar 2, 2008 03:29 PM by: TKxKari224 chapter 0

hehe??

Mar 2, 2008 01:23 PM by: xEmotional chapter 6

He's so cool :D

Mar 2, 2008 01:35 PM by: TKxKari224 chapter 0

lol sure! XD

Feb 29, 2008 03:33 PM by: NAERA chapter 5

whoa.. lots of violence!..never knew u had it in u..
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awsome..

Mar 2, 2008 10:16 AM by: TKxKari224 chapter 5

heh, thanks :)

I was just super mad at my brother that day, cuz he slammed the door into my face for no reason, and it really hurt! >.<

Feb 27, 2008 03:42 PM by: xEmotional chapter 4

OH SNAP ! WHAT BE GOIN' AWNNNNN ? :o

Mar 2, 2008 10:13 AM by: TKxKari224 chapter 4

lol, you'll soon find out! :D

Feb 24, 2008 12:38 PM by: NAERA chapter 4

whoa must find out what the purple dust is!!!!!!
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wow this was long chapter!!
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yay for new characters
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lol loved the auditionin 4 the play bit!!
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good work gabbby chan keep it up!!

Feb 24, 2008 12:40 PM by: TKxKari224 chapter 4

lol yes we must! XD
lol yeah it was pretty long, this idea kept stretching though xD
lol yup! newbies are da bomb! XD

lol yeah the audition part was fun to write XD

thankies naera-chan! ^^

Feb 21, 2008 08:21 AM by: NAERA chapter 3

Â o__0 sanome..omfg!! WHAT.. A ...*cnt think of anything* uhh..bad person
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she told kotoko to kill no way!!! 0_o

Feb 21, 2008 12:57 PM by: TKxKari224 chapter 3

yeah...shes turning more evil than I had even expected, they better get on helping her and NOW!\

:]

Feb 20, 2008 12:01 PM by: xEmotional chapter 3

what a freak D:

Feb 20, 2008 02:04 PM by: TKxKari224 chapter 3

i know T.T

Shes gone insane D:

I'm not likin' her 'tude!

>.<

Feb 19, 2008 06:03 PM by: xEmotional chapter 2

oh. mon. doodle.

intense-if-y-ing.

Feb 20, 2008 08:10 AM by: TKxKari224 chapter 0

lol thanks! XD

Feb 19, 2008 03:16 PM by: NAERA chapter 2

omg omg so much to take in between all these characters!!
i need to draw hiakga older now!!
oh and claire too.
u should draw everyone!1
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WHERE SANOME!!!

Feb 19, 2008 05:41 PM by: TKxKari224 chapter 2

XD yeh, :)

I do need to draw everone XD

All older! XD im gonna start the next chapter now!! :D its called 'Sanome's arrival' XD

Feb 19, 2008 08:04 AM by: NAERA chapter 1

OMG OMG
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wow i kinda forgot have the characters most of them want to get kaoru lol!!
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awsome gabby keep writing more!!

Feb 19, 2008 08:07 AM by: TKxKari224 chapter 0

yay! ^^ I'm glad you like it! :D

So , did you already notice the change in sanomes personality??

Feb 19, 2008 08:19 AM by: NAERA chapter 0

ofcourse she was like grr i was like eek!!

there alot of difference u can tell shes changed from bein a lil sweet girl to ..mysterous mean ..umm chick!! hehehe
me scared of her!!
how can she say who cares for her friends i was like 0__0

Feb 19, 2008 12:08 PM by: TKxKari224 chapter 0

i know >.<

shes so bad!! I wonder what'll happen when her friends see her now O.o

im already working on it now :)

but theres gonna be some trouble ! >.<

Feb 18, 2008 04:14 PM by: xEmotional chapter 1

omg kaoru *___* he's so cool it's insane; I would totally marry him .
Lol; I suck .

Anyways; nice chapter ~~ :D can't wait for moooooooore .

Feb 19, 2008 07:56 AM by: TKxKari224 chapter 0

yay! ^^

Feb 18, 2008 08:19 AM by: NAERA chapter 0

OMG YAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
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MORE MORE
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YAY SEQUEL!!
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hikaga= creator of me shut up!!
naera- sorry.
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*runs of screamin sequel.... then explodes!!

Feb 18, 2008 08:20 AM by: TKxKari224 chapter 0

SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!! ^^

:D

OMG! YEAH!!

Sanome: wait?? theres another one?

me: HECK YEAH!

XD

lol dont explode!! X3