Poem by Axel4eva

, Submitted: 2008-03-06, Updated: 2008-03-06, Chapters: 1, Size: 1K, Words: 62, Comments: 7, Views: 66
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this is just a poem i made up...

3 Comments

by: B on Mar 18, 2008 02:11 PM chapter 1

That was lovely!
wow

by: Axel4eva on Mar 18, 2008 02:11 PM chapter 0

^w^ thank yoo B!!! :D

by: Falconlobo on Mar 7, 2008 02:15 AM chapter 1

nice^^

by: Axel4eva on Mar 7, 2008 02:16 AM chapter 0

^w^ thanx i wrote it about how i was feeling yesterday...

by: Falconlobo on Mar 7, 2008 02:16 AM chapter 0

okay^^

by: punkiemonkie on Mar 6, 2008 02:46 PM chapter 1

Very cute and emotional. ^^ I don't think you need the ellipsis (the "...") after every line in poetry, but heck, what do I know? ^__^ I like the analogies. Good job! ^^

by: Axel4eva on Mar 6, 2008 08:48 PM chapter 0

thanx and yer i no wat elipses means... mah teacher at skool talked about a while ago... anywayz i just put them there coz i felt like it^^