a forbiden love by dingocat

Chapters

1 - in the begining - Submitted 2008-03-09 Updated: 2008-06-28 - 66 views, 206 words, 1k
2 - the next day - Submitted 2008-03-09 Updated: 2008-06-28 - 47 views, 265 words, 1k
3 - the leter - Submitted 2008-03-09 Updated: 2008-06-28 - 39 views, 138 words, 0k
4 - The dance - Submitted 2008-03-09 Updated: 2008-06-28 - 46 views, 156 words, 0k
5 - FOOLED YOU! - Submitted 2008-03-09 Updated: 2008-03-09 - 43 views, 99 words, 0k
6 - The new chao - Submitted 2008-03-10 Updated: 2008-07-19 - 51 views, 69 words, 0k

17 Comments (Most recent 10). Show All

Jul 19, 2008 07:03 AM by: ShadowMoondancer92 chapter 6

Hehe... thats funny... Fury: hehe... (running in circles like an idiot chasing her tail)

Jul 19, 2008 07:15 AM by: dingocat chapter 6

Maddie: whao i'm getting dizzy

Jul 18, 2008 08:01 PM by: ShadowMoondancer92 chapter 6

Hehe ur story is funny... i like it... it would be funny if fury showed up and did or said something stupid...

Jul 19, 2008 05:56 AM by: dingocat chapter 6

well its up dated!

Jul 12, 2008 11:08 AM by: shadowpiplup chapter 0

OMG OMG OMG THAT IS AWESOME!

Jul 12, 2008 12:12 PM by: dingocat chapter 0

thanks

Mar 19, 2008 02:36 PM by: dingocat chapter 3

well she isn't being mean shes just fed up with more ppl liking shadow

Mar 15, 2008 05:52 PM by: Shademaster12345 chapter 6

OMG EGGY! *has a chao egg of my own it hatches* EGGMAN?!? HOW'D YOU GET IN THERE!

Eggman: who is this eggman u speak of? i am clearly as chao...i mean CHAO CHAO! *COUGH HACK* hurts my throat

-_-; *drops him and walks off*

lolz random that would b sooo funny if that happened...

Mar 15, 2008 05:51 PM by: Shademaster12345 chapter 5

AWW MEANIE I WAS CRYING DX i thought it was over...

Mar 15, 2008 05:50 PM by: Shademaster12345 chapter 4

WHAT NOOO DX THE END CURSE THOSE WORDS FOR EXSISTING...

Mar 15, 2008 05:49 PM by: Shademaster12345 chapter 3

LOLZ OMG shade isn't that mean though..shed say..oh really and sigh XD

Mar 15, 2008 05:48 PM by: Shademaster12345 chapter 2

AHAHAHA SHADE IS LAZY LIKE ME!!! AHAHAHAHAHA

Mar 15, 2008 05:46 PM by: Shademaster12345 chapter 1

MUST READ MORE ZOMG

Mar 9, 2008 01:30 PM by: Forestdahedgehog chapter 5

XD u fooled me XPi thought u finisheed da story and i waz lik nooooooooooooooooXD

Mar 9, 2008 11:56 AM by: TheSpeedKing chapter 0

LOOOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVVVVVVEEEE IIIIIIIIIIIIITTTTTTTTXD

Mar 9, 2008 11:56 AM by: Forestdahedgehog chapter 4

XD!!!!wait,its over?NOOOOOO DX PLZ RITE MOR DX XD good story though ^^ faves

Mar 9, 2008 11:47 AM by: Forestdahedgehog chapter 3

XD YAYZ FOREST IS IN IT XD XD XD

Mar 9, 2008 07:47 AM by: Forestdahedgehog chapter 2

XD THATS SOOO FLIPPIN AWSOME XD XD XD XD,could u put forest in your story*puppy eyes*plz?^^lolz and mak mor XD

Mar 9, 2008 07:45 AM by: Forestdahedgehog chapter 1

XD YAYZ AWSOME STORIE XD IM A GONNA READ MOR

Mar 9, 2008 07:36 AM by: mew54 chapter 2

coool nice*favs*