United Paths Of The Wolves by FallOutGirlAARHinder

May 29, 2008 06:03 PM by: WolfAngel chapter 15

SURPRISE?! *runs around in a circle like a wolfy* I CAN'T WAIT!!!

May 28, 2008 08:13 PM by: Star29818 chapter 15

SURPRISE! i will not nag, i will not nag... well, awesome chappies, cuz, keep 'em coming!

May 28, 2008 03:23 PM by: WolfAngel chapter 12

Neo is taking over after Yakumi! Lol!

May 27, 2008 05:27 PM by: Star29818 chapter 12

1: B
2: C
3: A
4: B (never watched the actual show that much, so i wouldn't know...)
5: B (duh! gotta be there for my cuz!)
6: well... i guess A
7: A (well, she is...)
8: B
9: A
10: both A and B *grins* I DEMAND YOU KEEP WRITING!
11: i like it, but i have to agree with WolfAngel that it doesn't really fit the wolf thing... still like it though...

May 27, 2008 05:30 PM by: FallOutGirlAARHinder chapter 12

ur the one that helped me decide this Coco! But I was thinking of changing it sooner or later...not sure...

May 26, 2008 10:55 AM by: WolfAngel chapter 12

Also, I have a question...can I add a minor character without it being a mate for Yakumi?

May 26, 2008 10:58 AM by: FallOutGirlAARHinder chapter 0

Yes, u can.^^ But can u try an avoid Skyflyers, please? I have alot of wolves in that pack that will have a part.

May 26, 2008 11:19 AM by: WolfAngel chapter 0

Awesome! Here she is...she has a western name if you don't mind...

Name-Jay

Whats your fur color(yes ANY color)-Top layer of fur is gray and bottom layer is white. Black surrounds both eyes and covers the top of her nose.

Eye color-Dark Silver

Personality-If you've ever read Twilight, then she has an attitude like Edward Cullen. Her mood always changes, so she can be happy then be angry, then sad and bored.

Which pack are u from-Minor pack, Stargazers.

Gender-Female

Whats your role in your pack-Sort of the comedy relief in the pack due to her mood swings. Also known to play with her prey when engaged in combat.

May 26, 2008 11:28 AM by: FallOutGirlAARHinder chapter 0

LOL. Thing is, I already have a minor wolf named Jay. He is in the Stonepaws pack.

I like it. But my idea to pair Yakumi with Neo was too have the minor wolf and Yakumi fall in love. But later the minor wolf dies and Neo realizes how much he loves Yakumi. So somehow they pair up. But the thing is, is the name of the wolf and the gender. Dont get me wrong, I do like it. But this was my idea of getting those two together.

May 26, 2008 11:40 AM by: WolfAngel chapter 0

Okay...I'll think of something...give me a moment to respond back...

May 26, 2008 11:44 AM by: WolfAngel chapter 0

Name-Kris (You can always change it if you already have the name)

Whats your fur color(yes ANY color)-Top layer of fur is gray and bottom layer is white. Black surrounds both eyes and covers the top of his nose.

Eye color-Dark Silver

Personality-If you've ever read Twilight, then he has an attitude like Edward Cullen. His mood always changes, so he can be happy then be angry, then sad and bored.

Which pack are u from-Minor pack, Stargazers (Can always change)

Gender-Male

Whats your role in your pack-Sort of the comedy relief in the pack due to his mood swings. Also known to play with his prey when engaged in combat.

P.S. Same as above, but with a different name and gender...Hope you like the change...

May 26, 2008 12:06 PM by: FallOutGirlAARHinder chapter 0

Ok! That'll do! I'll get it ready for whenever the 2nd season roles around! Thanx so much!

May 26, 2008 12:17 PM by: WolfAngel chapter 0

No problem and I can't wait 'til the next chapter comes out!

May 26, 2008 12:18 PM by: FallOutGirlAARHinder chapter 0

Trust me...I'm trying to make it as long as possible. And lots of drama. Cause like...Yakumi is still cranky

May 26, 2008 12:28 PM by: WolfAngel chapter 0

Lol.

May 26, 2008 10:54 AM by: WolfAngel chapter 12

1-B
2-B
3-B (Darn my romantic side)
4-B (Make this story different from the actual show)
5-B (I got my own character in it!)
6-A and B (Too much romance can be bad for you, :P)
7-A *cough, cough*
8-B (Builds character, but sometimes she does it a little too much)
9-B
10-A *cute wolfy face* (Gotta love me!)
11-Unique, but doesn't really go with the whole wolf thing... though, later on if you're planning on adding something about a raven or such, it'd make sense then...

~*~WolfAngel~*~

May 26, 2008 10:59 AM by: FallOutGirlAARHinder chapter 0

Thankx for participating. I am still working on the next chapter.

But I have an idea for Yakumi and Neo romance, if u wanna hear please tell me.

May 26, 2008 11:10 AM by: WolfAngel chapter 0

Oh, I WANNA HEAR, I WANNA HEAR!!! *jumps up and down in computer chair like a little girl* PLEASE?!

May 26, 2008 11:26 AM by: FallOutGirlAARHinder chapter 0

I'll tell u in the comment above

May 9, 2008 03:44 PM by: WolfAngel chapter 11

Wow, this is getting intense, please continue!

Apr 30, 2008 04:26 PM by: WolfAngel chapter 10

Nice, I like it! Was the thing about Neo and Yakumi, foreshadowing? Lol, I can't wait for the next chapter.

Apr 29, 2008 05:05 PM by: Star29818 chapter 10

loved it cus! get the next one up soon!

Apr 29, 2008 03:23 PM by: sailoraqua13 chapter 10

I like it!! Which wolf's chapter is next?

Apr 29, 2008 03:25 PM by: FallOutGirlAARHinder chapter 0

ummmmmmmm.....Good question...^^'''' Not sure...still thinking it out...Do u want a hint of what the next chappy is about?

Apr 29, 2008 03:28 PM by: sailoraqua13 chapter 0

Yeah, spill! ^^

Apr 29, 2008 03:31 PM by: FallOutGirlAARHinder chapter 0

Well...! They head back to Celticlast, ONLY to figure out that some men and occasional women r kidnapping strays and using them as food, item transportation, etc. Then Crystal gets kidnapped. ALONG with the crazy wolf we all know and love, NEO!!!!!!! So its gonna kind of be a fanfic of them, or a WHOLE LOTTA Mitsukai!

Scarlette? Not sure...she may have small parts until they finally run into her...

Apr 29, 2008 03:34 PM by: sailoraqua13 chapter 0

COOLNESS! ^^

Apr 29, 2008 03:35 PM by: sailoraqua13 chapter 0

R u gonna put it up tonight? My next SMD chappie will b up either tonight or early tomorrow afternoon! ^^

Apr 29, 2008 03:39 PM by: FallOutGirlAARHinder chapter 0

umm.....no...It will be to much to do, and I just got home from the Doctors...so nope..

Apr 29, 2008 03:47 PM by: sailoraqua13 chapter 0

Ok, I can accept that! ^^ Just try and put it up tommorow! ^^

Apr 29, 2008 03:49 PM by: FallOutGirlAARHinder chapter 0

It depends...Cause 2morrow I have church...and 2night is the results show for Dancing With The Stars! And Christan De La Fuente Better be alright!!! And not be booted off! Cause that would mean for the past 3 weeks my fav couples had gone home!!

Apr 26, 2008 07:49 AM by: WolfAngel chapter 9

Aw, poor Lush. And I really liked the beginning, that was cute. :D

Apr 26, 2008 06:33 AM by: WolfAngel chapter 8

Zip it! lol, I love that part. xD

Apr 26, 2008 06:28 AM by: WolfAngel chapter 7

Awesome!

Apr 25, 2008 07:56 PM by: Star29818 chapter 9

NO! LUSH! *sniffs* poor Lush and Suki... UPDATE!!! and i promise i'll try and write the next THATR chappie :D

Apr 26, 2008 11:56 AM by: FallOutGirlAARHinder chapter 0

I'm working on the next chappy right now...

Apr 25, 2008 07:51 PM by: Star29818 chapter 8

Cool chapter... Off to read the next one!

Apr 25, 2008 07:47 PM by: Star29818 chapter 7

Cool! *giggles* Get up, Runt! i liked that.

Apr 25, 2008 03:26 PM by: sailoraqua13 chapter 9

I love it! ^^

Apr 24, 2008 05:21 PM by: sailoraqua13 chapter 8

I love it!! ^^
Whats it-
ZIP IT! ^^

Apr 24, 2008 05:35 PM by: FallOutGirlAARHinder chapter 0

Sorry its short though...I'm getting bad about that. But hey! An updates an update!

Apr 24, 2008 07:21 PM by: sailoraqua13 chapter 0

Yea! ^^ And I don't mind if its short! ^^

Apr 22, 2008 05:42 PM by: sailoraqua13 chapter 7

I love it! ^^

Apr 20, 2008 09:35 AM by: MarieBlack07 chapter 0

wow this is a great story....wish I new about it before it was too late

Apr 19, 2008 06:43 PM by: Tuxedo_Mini_Mask chapter 0

OKay, this may be takin a little to Sailor Moony... But I had an idea so I ran with it.

Name- Bathasar

Whats your fur color(yes ANY color)- Dark Blue *may appeard as Black*

Whats ur sign and where is it located on ur body(one spot)- A Crescent Moon on his forehead Like this girl. an image

Not like this an image

Eye color- Green

Personality- Funny, and kind to everyone. Very Loyal. But very flexable.

Which pack are u from- I'd rather Not Have one. My Mother is from the Moonlight Pack. But I am not excepted there.

Whats your human appearance- Blond Hair, With A Crescent Moon hiding under it.A Blue Gene Jacket over top of a white T.

Gender- Male

Whats your role in your pack-
You pick.

Other Info: He Is Half Wolf and Half Dog. When Ever there is a new moon, He can Not hold his Human form. Instead of his mark being hiden, like with other wolf traits, His crescent Moon Stays on his forehead EVEN IN HUMAN FORM. His Mother was killed before he could get to know her, But She Left him a Lunar seed. It is left in a small amulet,which is held around his neck. Though He is unable to Open it's seal becuz he Is Only Half Wolf.

Apr 19, 2008 06:45 PM by: FallOutGirlAARHinder chapter 0

That sounds so much like my fav character on the show, Blue!!! Ur in! I'll get u in asap

Apr 19, 2008 06:52 PM by: Tuxedo_Mini_Mask chapter 0

lol really? Cool

EXCEPT my character KNOWS he is half wolf, and trys to master wolf abilities.

Apr 19, 2008 06:53 PM by: FallOutGirlAARHinder chapter 0

Ok^^, I'll get that straight in the story! XD!

Apr 19, 2008 06:56 PM by: Tuxedo_Mini_Mask chapter 0

YAY!

Apr 19, 2008 06:58 PM by: FallOutGirlAARHinder chapter 0

Hey, last year when I was swimming at night with my bro and somebody else(cant remember). My lil bro tried howling but only had barks as a reply. But then I showed him how it was done. And a wolf howled back at me! It was so kool!

I'm gonna do it when the dogs r barking, cause that means they c a wolf. How I know is cause they dont bark at cars. And I'm talking about every dog on the road too!

Apr 19, 2008 07:07 PM by: Tuxedo_Mini_Mask chapter 0

lol thats really cool ^^

Apr 19, 2008 07:37 AM by: Star29818 chapter 6

two more? wow, you're on a roll. yep, Lush and Suki rule... but there was one itsy bitsy thing: you coulda made Ayita tease the Wolves she faught with insults, like i put in her info, but that's okay. i stillÂ liked all the barbaric stuff. GOOD JOB!!!!! next chapter up soon, kay?

Apr 18, 2008 05:09 PM by: WolfAngel chapter 6

Lol, "Now find boy!" I laughed so hard when I read that! LMAO! Great job too! I love it and can't wait for the next chapter!

Apr 18, 2008 05:10 PM by: FallOutGirlAARHinder chapter 0

Thankx! I'm glad u enjoyed it^^

Apr 18, 2008 05:01 PM by: sailoraqua13 chapter 6

Coolness! ^^

Apr 18, 2008 05:02 PM by: FallOutGirlAARHinder chapter 0

Yeah, sorry it wasnt long enough, but hey I added 3 chappies 2day so that should be enough. R u almost done with those chappies for SMD?

Apr 18, 2008 05:27 PM by: sailoraqua13 chapter 0

Well, my cuz just got here and were celebrating her birthday so probably not! ^^

Apr 18, 2008 05:28 PM by: FallOutGirlAARHinder chapter 0

ok, i understand. Tell her i said happy B-day for me would ya?

Apr 18, 2008 05:39 PM by: sailoraqua13 chapter 0

Ok I will! ^^

Apr 18, 2008 02:51 PM by: sailoraqua13 chapter 5

Oohhhh, were stalking her! ^^

Apr 18, 2008 02:52 PM by: FallOutGirlAARHinder chapter 0

thats if u can find her...Besides...u may get killed from being annoyed by a wolf mood swing...who knows? I dont...

Apr 18, 2008 02:45 PM by: sailoraqua13 chapter 4

Love it!
"Just a litle longer" sounds just like her! ^^

Apr 18, 2008 02:40 PM by: sailoraqua13 chapter 3

Yea, we do! ^^

Apr 18, 2008 02:42 PM by: FallOutGirlAARHinder chapter 0

I dont! I know it all! Its Scarlette that needs to learn something!

Apr 18, 2008 01:23 PM by: Star29818 chapter 4

nice... *giggles* it's Lush! anywhoses, good job, loved it! can't wait for the next chapter!

Apr 18, 2008 02:38 PM by: FallOutGirlAARHinder chapter 0

dont forget Suki! I wovs lions...and tigers...and panthers...and any big cat...any cat...almost every dog....AND WOLVES!

Apr 18, 2008 01:12 PM by: WolfAngel chapter 5

Wow...that was unexpected. I especially liked the barbaric part! Finally some blood and guts! Lol, me likie! Good job!

Apr 18, 2008 02:39 PM by: FallOutGirlAARHinder chapter 0

Yeah, I had to update it from mild violence to moderate its so bad. But wut was unexpected?

Apr 18, 2008 02:43 PM by: WolfAngel chapter 0

Scarlette mating with Neo...that was really unexpected.

Apr 18, 2008 02:46 PM by: FallOutGirlAARHinder chapter 0

Yeah...I didn't expect me to put that either...But u gotta think. Shes old, there isn't a alpha male, and shes not a mother. And to top it off shes the last of her family. She has to carry on the family name, without some alpha male there...Its confusing, just ponder on it for a bit...

Apr 18, 2008 03:05 PM by: WolfAngel chapter 0

Yeah, I never really thought about it...I really love your writing style, so please continue to amuse me!

Apr 18, 2008 03:06 PM by: FallOutGirlAARHinder chapter 0

Trust me I will...I'm thinking there could be over 50 chapters when this story is complete. So look forward to a new chapter everyday. And I may add another 2day, but don't get your hopes up!

Apr 18, 2008 03:13 PM by: WolfAngel chapter 0

Kewl, that'd be awesome, but too late! My hopes are already up! Lol, and I read a lot anyway, so don't worry about it being too long! xD

Apr 18, 2008 03:15 PM by: FallOutGirlAARHinder chapter 0

Ok^^, I'm not working on it now, I'll probably work on it when I'm done watching this Wolf's Rain episode...

Apr 18, 2008 01:05 PM by: WolfAngel chapter 4

Interesting...I like it, so keep up the good work!

Apr 18, 2008 03:53 AM by: WolfAngel chapter 3

Lol, I love it! Yakumi never ceases to amuse me! I roll my eyes all the time too, and my friends get really annoyed by it. It's pretty funny actually and ironic that Yakumi does it too. Nice job and can't wait for the next chapter!

~*~WolfAngel~*~

Apr 17, 2008 09:49 PM by: Star29818 chapter 3

alright, Ayita has arrived! i like how you did her, btw. very cool. awesome chappie, get the next one up soon!

Apr 17, 2008 04:03 PM by: sailoraqua13 chapter 2

Woh...Amazing! ^^ Hey, have u decided if your gonna use those two male wolves I created yet?

Apr 17, 2008 04:18 PM by: FallOutGirlAARHinder chapter 0

lets give it 4 more days. Hey have u heard anything from Leo-kun yet?

Apr 17, 2008 04:37 PM by: sailoraqua13 chapter 0

Okay! And no, but since today is the day he promised to update he beter get on soon! -_-+

Apr 16, 2008 05:59 PM by: WolfAngel chapter 2

Dang, that was good! Yakumi is mysterious. I like it. But I wonder, if she has a son, then who is the father...? Dun, dun, DUUUUUUUUUUUUN! lol, good job though!

~*~WolfAngel~*~

Apr 16, 2008 03:59 PM by: sailoraqua13 chapter 0

Attention all people wit ocs in here! The new chappie will not b up until tonight bcause FallOutGirlAARHinder has to go to church! ^^

Apr 16, 2008 03:57 PM by: sailoraqua13 chapter 0

There ya go, two male wolves! ^^
I hope that works for u! ^^

Apr 16, 2008 03:59 PM by: FallOutGirlAARHinder chapter 0

Thankx i'll put them into use if no guy joins^^

Apr 16, 2008 03:59 PM by: sailoraqua13 chapter 0

Ok! ^^

Apr 16, 2008 03:57 PM by: sailoraqua13 chapter 0

Name-Bikou

Whats your fur color-Sandy brown

Whats ur sign and where is it located on ur body-Moonlight

Eye color-Green

Personality-He's really happy and outgoing

Which pack are u from-Moonlight

Whats your human appearance-He has sandy brown hair, around 5'2, wears blue jeans, a silver short sleeved shirt, and a gold jacket over.

Gender-Male

Whats your role in your pack-Major attacker

Apr 16, 2008 03:53 PM by: sailoraqua13 chapter 0

Name-Chishio

Whats your fur color-Blood red with a black splotch over his right eye

Whats ur sign and where is it located on ur body-A sun on his forehead

Eye color-Black

Personality-Timid and drawn back unless he's arouna Mitsukai

Which pack are u from-Bloodshed

Whats your human appearance- 6'0, he wears a simple pair of jeans with rips in the kness, a white t-shirt, tennis shoes, red hair, black eyes, and he always wears a hat.

Gender-Male

Whats your role in your pack-He's a defender, he usually defends the younger wolves in the pack.

Other info: He's in love with Mitsukai, even though he knows he isn't suppoused to b, and Mitsukai is in love with him as well, at one point both leaders of the packs find out and corner them while their together. The leaders tell them to get away from each other. They both refuse to and he ends up getting hurt to protect Mitsukai. He stays in the pack, but eventually they get back together with permission from the leaders of the packs. ^^

Apr 16, 2008 03:32 PM by: sailoraqua13 chapter 0

Ya know, I could always whip up a couple of guys with my brilliant story writing mind... *Is already thinking stuff up*

Apr 16, 2008 03:47 PM by: FallOutGirlAARHinder chapter 0

well if Leo doesnt join and no guys want to join...u can help me with it.

Apr 16, 2008 03:23 PM by: WolfAngel chapter 1

That's really good! I liked it, and I can't wait for my character to join in!

Apr 16, 2008 03:24 PM by: FallOutGirlAARHinder chapter 0

Trust me shes in the chappy that im almost done typing.

Shes more of the leader kind but still...shes really mysterious

Apr 16, 2008 03:25 PM by: WolfAngel chapter 0

YAY! That's how I intended her to be! And I can't wait!

Apr 16, 2008 03:10 PM by: Star29818 chapter 0

Name- Ayita

Whats your fur color(yes ANY color)- midnight blue, with black paws and ears

Whats ur sign and where is it located on ur body(one spot)- a black star on herÂ backÂ right pawÂ

Eye color- blue, though they turnÂ darker when she's angry or afraid

Personality- hyper, energetic, young. Very talktative, and enjoys teasing and pranking her friends.

Which pack are u from- Sanddunes

Whats your human appearance-Â She's about 5'3, with shoulder-length black hair with a dark blue tint to it with a blue bandana, blue eyes, she wears a pair of blue jeans with holes in both knees, and a blue t-shirt with a black star on it

Gender- Female

Whats your role in your pack- a fighter. she enjoys taunting her enemies with insults and teasing.

Apr 16, 2008 03:12 PM by: FallOutGirlAARHinder chapter 0

It reminds me so much like Toboe! And I love the name! Ur in!

Apr 16, 2008 02:46 PM by: WolfAngel chapter 0

Name-Yakumi

Whats your fur color(yes ANY color)-Midnight Black

Whats ur sign and where is it located on ur body(one spot)-A red lightning bolt over her left eye.

Eye color-Dark Blue

Personality-Distant, easily ticked off, quiet. Sometimes known as the "secret weapon" in the pack. When ticked off, she shows her true colors.

Which pack are u from-Ashsky

Whats your human appearance-Long straight black hair with red tips, dark blue eyes, 5'5", alsmot like a doll body and face, wears jeans, rock t-shirts, and skater shoes (DC's, Vans, etc.)

Gender-Female

Whats your role in your pack-Usually the attacker in the pack or the last resort in attack. Her aim is deadlier compared to everyone else's and is terrifying when ticked off.

Apr 16, 2008 02:50 PM by: FallOutGirlAARHinder chapter 0

thank u for joining^^. Umm I hope u dont mind but I also need you to take the role in being a alpha male's daughter and mother in Ashsky. Is that ok with u?

Apr 16, 2008 03:00 PM by: WolfAngel chapter 0

Yeah, that would work and I'm glad that you accepted xD. And that sounds pretty interesting to me. I like how it sounds. You make a good story writer :D.

~*~WolfAngel~*~

Apr 16, 2008 03:02 PM by: WolfAngel chapter 0

Also, you are welcome to change her if you want. I don't mind.

Apr 16, 2008 03:03 PM by: FallOutGirlAARHinder chapter 0

I'm not! I like her how she is. But I will give her a nickname later in the story. And thankx for thinking im a good writer. It means alot

Apr 16, 2008 03:09 PM by: WolfAngel chapter 0

Oh, you're welcome, but if you ever want to, you have my "permission" to change her a bit. xD Thanks.

~*~WolfAngel~*~

Apr 16, 2008 03:10 PM by: FallOutGirlAARHinder chapter 0

ok thankx...But I doubt I'll change her though...nothing seems wrong.

Apr 15, 2008 05:15 PM by: sailoraqua13 chapter 1

Woh...AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait for the next chappie! ^^

Apr 15, 2008 05:34 PM by: FallOutGirlAARHinder chapter 0

Yeah I'm sure u cant...The next one is gonna have you mostly in it though...and im not gonna tell u wut happens so dont push it...hehehe

Apr 15, 2008 05:37 PM by: sailoraqua13 chapter 0

Ok I'll wait, but will it b put up tonight? And wat does the A/N mean? (Srry, always never known wat that meant ^_^U)

Apr 15, 2008 05:47 PM by: FallOutGirlAARHinder chapter 0

not 2night cause i have 2 go...It probably will be 2morrow. Umm...check in on mom and c if shes own. I gave her a comment about the story but after that i havent checked in. Or gotten an email

well ttyl. Ill probably will be on 2night so if not night night

Apr 15, 2008 05:48 PM by: sailoraqua13 chapter 0

Ok I can accept that! ^^

Apr 14, 2008 04:28 PM by: sailoraqua13 chapter 0

Name-Mitsukai (It means Angel)

Whats your fur color(yes ANY color)-Light purple with a green stripe down back.

Whats ur sign and where is it located on ur body(one spot)-A leaf on her left shoulder

Eye color-Silver

Personality-She's usually happy at times, but most of the time she's drawn back and reserved and just about everyone hates her because she has a power inside her of some sorts that no one can explaine.

Which pack are u from-Ashsky

Whats your human appearance-She is about 5'2, and has light purple hair with green highlites (Yes her fur style matches her hair style! ^^), has silver eyes, and wears a pair of black jeans with chains hooked to the pockets, a purple tank top, and a black jaket over it (Kinda creppy I know! ^^)

Gender-Female

Whats your role in your pack-She dosen't really have one, she usually scouts ahead of the group when their traveling, and if they have to fight, she's really big on attacking! ^^

Apr 14, 2008 04:49 PM by: FallOutGirlAARHinder chapter 0

O.O beautiful! Guess what?!!?!? Ur all signed up and ready too go! Now we need just a few more ppl.

Apr 14, 2008 06:03 PM by: sailoraqua13 chapter 0

Yea!!!! ^^

Apr 15, 2008 01:37 PM by: sailoraqua13 chapter 0

Oh, a little fact about Mitsukai I forgot to mention:
That unspoken power of hers, its released when her eyes turn gold, which is only when she's angry or scared.

Apr 15, 2008 03:14 PM by: FallOutGirlAARHinder chapter 0

ok^^