Abyss by kyuubi64 - Fanart Central

Chapters

1 - Chapter 1 - Submitted 2008-05-03 Updated: 2008-05-03 - 32 views, 599 words, 3k
2 - Chapter 2 - Submitted 2008-05-03 Updated: 2008-05-03 - 27 views, 600 words, 3k
3 - Chapter 3 - Submitted 2008-05-03 Updated: 2008-05-03 - 29 views, 407 words, 2k
4 - Chapter 4 - Submitted 2008-05-03 Updated: 2008-05-03 - 22 views, 492 words, 2k
5 - Chapter 5 - Submitted 2008-05-04 Updated: 2008-05-06 - 28 views, 630 words, 3k
6 - Chapter 6 - Submitted 2008-05-04 Updated: 2008-05-04 - 26 views, 457 words, 2k
7 - Chapter 7 - Submitted 2008-05-04 Updated: 2008-05-04 - 25 views, 749 words, 3k
8 - Chapter 8 - Submitted 2008-05-04 Updated: 2008-05-04 - 24 views, 483 words, 2k
9 - Chapter 9 - Submitted 2008-05-04 Updated: 2008-05-04 - 25 views, 595 words, 3k
10 - Chapter 10 - Submitted 2008-05-05 Updated: 2008-05-05 - 22 views, 712 words, 3k
11 - Chapter 11 - Submitted 2008-05-05 Updated: 2008-05-05 - 20 views, 447 words, 2k
12 - Chapter 12 - Submitted 2008-05-05 Updated: 2008-05-05 - 22 views, 713 words, 3k
13 - Chapter 13 - Submitted 2008-05-06 Updated: 2008-05-06 - 18 views, 419 words, 2k
14 - Chapter 14 - Submitted 2008-05-09 Updated: 2008-05-09 - 18 views, 421 words, 2k
15 - Chapter 15 - Submitted 2008-05-09 Updated: 2008-05-09 - 16 views, 580 words, 3k
16 - Chapter 16 - Submitted 2008-05-10 Updated: 2008-05-10 - 18 views, 499 words, 2k
17 - Chapter 17 - Submitted 2008-05-10 Updated: 2008-05-10 - 19 views, 475 words, 2k
18 - Chapter 18 - Submitted 2008-05-10 Updated: 2008-05-10 - 15 views, 559 words, 3k
19 - Chapter 19 - Submitted 2008-05-11 Updated: 2008-05-11 - 16 views, 486 words, 2k
20 - Chapter 20- The end - Submitted 2008-05-11 Updated: 2008-05-11 - 18 views, 823 words, 4k

23 Comments (Most recent 10). Show All

May 11, 2008 06:51 PM by: Forestdahedgehog chapter 20

omg,so beutiful*tears come out*such an awsome stry...XD WOOOOOOOOO!!!AWSOME ENDING!and the whole thing was awsmome!i lik the prt were abyssXmarina were kissing and-lol-valor just said "well,it was bound 2 happen"lol XD that ,ade me smile vXD very awsome stry frend XD u should make mor XD

May 11, 2008 06:53 PM by: kyuubi64 chapter 0

May 11, 2008 11:12 AM by: Forestdahedgehog chapter 19

HOLY CRAP!!!!!!!EEEEK!!!!RUN ABYSS!!!OR FIGHT BACK!LAEKO IS NOT BEING A HAPPY PERSDON!!!EPPP!wite m or pweeze =3 X3

May 11, 2008 06:21 AM by: Forestdahedgehog chapter 18

!i wonder if that new guy can b trusted,since he is laekos son....BUT DONT TELL ME YET!me will find out-IN THE NEXT CHAPTAH AS SOON AS U RITE!!!WOOT!!!IO CANT WAIIITTTT!!!!!IT IS GETTING REALLY GOOD THAT ITS SVCARY!*in a good scary way*

May 10, 2008 06:25 PM by: Forestdahedgehog chapter 17

OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMFG!!!!OOOHHHHH GOOOOODDDDDDD!!!THIS ISSSS SOOO GETTING GOOD!!!!MY EYES WERE WIDENING!!!!!THIS STRY IS IN SUUUUUUUUUUUUCCCCCCCCCCCCCHHHHHHH DETAIL!!!!OMFG!!!!PLZ RITE MOR XDits getting relly good XD

May 10, 2008 07:01 PM by: kyuubi64 chapter 0

its supposed to be building suspense for the finale

May 10, 2008 02:10 PM by: Forestdahedgehog chapter 16

HOLY CRAP!!1U HAVE 2 RITE MOR!!!IT IS GETTING REALLY GOOD!!AND EVERY1 IS SO DANG STRONG!!OMFG!!!!RITE MOR!!!!pweeze X3

May 10, 2008 04:30 PM by: kyuubi64 chapter 0

THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

May 10, 2008 05:01 PM by: Forestdahedgehog chapter 0

^-^

May 10, 2008 02:07 PM by: Forestdahedgehog chapter 15

WOOOOOTTTT!!!trhat was a close 1....abyss could of...got hurt if forest didnt show up and stuff XD!!!WOO!!!I AM SO LOVING THIS STORY!!!!

May 10, 2008 02:03 PM by: Forestdahedgehog chapter 14

WOOO!!!YAY SCYTHES!!!!LETS GO KICK BUTT VALOR!!!!

May 6, 2008 04:01 PM by: Forestdahedgehog chapter 13

WOW!!FOREST KICKS BUTT!!!WOOT!!!-that waz an awsome fight!!>:D 0^o^0 very detailed XD cant wait 2 c the others XD very very cool chaptah,mabey fav.chaptah XD rite mor plz XD

May 6, 2008 04:06 PM by: kyuubi64 chapter 0

thank you

May 6, 2008 03:52 PM by: Forestdahedgehog chapter 12

HOLY CRAP!THAT SOUNDS SOO AWSOMEEE!!!eeeeeeee!!IM SO EXCITED!!WWOT!!FOREST IS GONNA B ABLE 2 KICK SO BAD GUY BUTTS WITH THOSE WEAPONS!!!WOOO!!!XD*btw-,mabey,if u want 2,could u draw the weapons?u dont have 2 draw forest,just her weapons,and mabey i might draw them with her XD,but only if u want 2 draw the weapons XD*

May 6, 2008 04:05 PM by: kyuubi64 chapter 0

sure, if i remember that is...

May 6, 2008 04:35 PM by: Forestdahedgehog chapter 0

oh,lol XD-me feel that im asking alot from u*1st adding forest,then asking 4 u 2 give forest a weapon,no drawing a pic.?*if asking u alot of this stuff is bothering u or something,tell me plz,and ill stop*THERE I GO AGAIN!!!lol*

May 6, 2008 04:52 PM by: kyuubi64 chapter 0

um, not really. cuz asking to put an oc in my story made me glad. asking for a weapon didn't really bother me because i was gonna give you one anyway, and asking for a drawing of the weapons once again, makes me glad because i havent had a (kinda) request in a while.

May 6, 2008 04:59 PM by: Forestdahedgehog chapter 0

oh..ok^^ as long as it doesnt bother u XD well,in that case-

can u give me a million dollers?~JK!!!lol

May 6, 2008 05:09 PM by: kyuubi64 chapter 0

lol

May 6, 2008 01:16 PM by: mechadragon13 chapter 5

the sword sound like it has special powers! i wanna keep reading XD

May 6, 2008 03:26 PM by: kyuubi64 chapter 0

wait, make that chapter 16

May 6, 2008 02:41 PM by: kyuubi64 chapter 0

you really wont find out until chapter 14

May 6, 2008 03:49 PM by: mechadragon13 chapter 0

aww man......................... XD

May 6, 2008 01:13 PM by: mechadragon13 chapter 4

oh. now i get it......... GO ABYSS!

May 6, 2008 02:57 PM by: kyuubi64 chapter 0

YEAH!!!!!!

May 6, 2008 01:12 PM by: mechadragon13 chapter 3

whoa wait. who's abyss? what happened to jake?? ya know what, im just gonna keep reading. XD

May 5, 2008 05:53 PM by: Forestdahedgehog chapter 11

OMG!!!NOOO,HURRY U GUYS!GET UP!!!WAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!~write mor plz,it waz getting REALLY good Dx XD

May 5, 2008 03:54 PM by: Forestdahedgehog chapter 10

YESH!!RIGHT MOR!!!WOOT!THEY ALL KICK BUTT!!!WOOT!!-hey,if ya want 2,could u give forest srta lik a special weapon insted of her inverted energy blasts?lik a sword,or katana or something?if ya want 2 though XDBUT RIGHT MOR PLZ!

May 5, 2008 04:05 PM by: kyuubi64 chapter 0

i was gonna give everyone their own weapons (which explains why everyone is gaining new powers and weapons almost every chapter)
forest was gonna get her weapon in two chapters. and dont worry, im planning to have two chapters done before tomorrow.
but i dont want to spoil anything so im just gonna shut up

May 5, 2008 04:42 PM by: Forestdahedgehog chapter 0

oh,ok XD woot woot!

May 4, 2008 07:24 PM by: Forestdahedgehog chapter 9

awwwwwwww,i lik the ending XXD writ mor plz XXD

May 4, 2008 03:05 PM by: Forestdahedgehog chapter 8

HOLY SHIZNITS THIS STRY IS AWSOME XD wwoooot!!thanx valor 4 saving forest XD-rite mor plz XD

May 4, 2008 03:22 PM by: kyuubi64 chapter 0

valor: you're welcome

me: Thank you

May 4, 2008 05:59 PM by: Forestdahedgehog chapter 0

whoot!

May 4, 2008 12:38 PM by: Forestdahedgehog chapter 7

COOL!!RITE MOR!PLZ!!!HAHAHA TAKE THAT U MEANIES!GO ABYSS!

May 4, 2008 12:49 PM by: kyuubi64 chapter 0

thanks

May 4, 2008 11:25 AM by: Forestdahedgehog chapter 6

YESH!!!FOREST KICKS butt!!!WOOT!!GO FOREST!!yay XD u rule!!thanx 4 adding her in there!!very descriptive!!woot!!!this stry is awsome XD rite mor plz XD ALOT mor XD cant wait 2 c mor XD*btw-is she gonna b in the next chapter-just wondering-*

May 4, 2008 11:29 AM by: kyuubi64 chapter 0

whenever other characters are in my stories, they usually stay for the whole story, and sequels too. the only reason why i wouldn't keep them in is if they die (dont worry, that wont happen), or if i get bored with them. (thats probably not gonna happen either)

May 4, 2008 11:47 AM by: Forestdahedgehog chapter 0

oh,lol

May 4, 2008 11:55 AM by: kyuubi64 chapter 0

im already about halfway done with the next chapter. It's kinda weird because the ideas just dont stop, and i have no idea how they come together like this.

May 4, 2008 11:58 AM by: Forestdahedgehog chapter 0

lol

May 4, 2008 04:41 AM by: Forestdahedgehog chapter 5

WOOOO!!!!T ABYSS AND MARINA KICK BUTT!!!!AND THE SWORD SOUNDS SO FLIPPIN COOL XD-could u add forest in it pweeze?*puppy eyes*unless u cant-its ok XD

May 4, 2008 09:44 AM by: kyuubi64 chapter 0

of course! i needed some new characters. and youve been really supportive, so you deserve it

May 4, 2008 11:26 AM by: Forestdahedgehog chapter 0

yay XD

May 4, 2008 04:37 AM by: Forestdahedgehog chapter 4

WOOOO!!GO ABYSS!!KICK THEIR BUTTS!

May 4, 2008 04:34 AM by: Forestdahedgehog chapter 3

awwwwwwww,very descriptive!especially with jake fighting the golem!

May 3, 2008 08:01 PM by: Forestdahedgehog chapter 2

very cool-right mor plz

May 3, 2008 08:08 PM by: kyuubi64 chapter 0

im already workin on it
(at this rate, im gonna be done with the story by monday)

May 4, 2008 04:34 AM by: Forestdahedgehog chapter 0

wow XD

May 3, 2008 02:27 PM by: Forestdahedgehog chapter 1

VERY VERY COOL XD rite mor plz

May 3, 2008 06:27 PM by: kyuubi64 chapter 0

thank you so much! that has encouraged me to write more!!!

May 3, 2008 06:33 PM by: Forestdahedgehog chapter 0

yesh rite mor!

May 3, 2008 07:46 PM by: kyuubi64 chapter 0

ive got the next chapter up. yay!!!

May 4, 2008 04:34 AM by: Forestdahedgehog chapter 0

YAY