Abyss (part 2) by kyuubi64

Chapters

1 - Chaptah 1!! - Submitted 2008-06-08 Updated: 2008-06-08 - 40 views, 912 words, 5k
2 - Chaptah 2! - Submitted 2008-06-10 Updated: 2008-06-10 - 29 views, 639 words, 3k
3 - Chaptah 3!!! - Submitted 2008-06-11 Updated: 2008-06-11 - 30 views, 419 words, 2k
4 - Chaptah 4!!!! - Submitted 2008-06-11 Updated: 2008-06-11 - 33 views, 464 words, 2k
5 - Chaptah 5!! - Submitted 2008-06-12 Updated: 2008-06-12 - 30 views, 372 words, 2k
6 - Chaptah 6!!!!!!!!! - Submitted 2008-06-13 Updated: 2008-06-13 - 28 views, 561 words, 3k
7 - CHAPTAH 7!!!!! - Submitted 2008-06-17 Updated: 2008-06-17 - 30 views, 572 words, 3k
8 - CHAPTAH 8!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! - Submitted 2008-06-19 Updated: 2008-06-19 - 25 views, 503 words, 2k
9 - End of part 1 (Chapter 9) - Submitted 2008-08-27 Updated: 2008-08-27 - 13 views, 729 words, 4k
10 - Chapter 1 (of part 2) - Submitted 2008-08-29 Updated: 2008-08-29 - 11 views, 421 words, 2k
11 - Chapter 2 - Submitted 2008-08-30 Updated: 2008-08-30 - 12 views, 468 words, 2k
12 - Chapter 12 - Submitted 2008-09-01 Updated: 2008-09-01 - 11 views, 404 words, 2k
13 - Chapter 13 (VERY VIOLENT) lol - Submitted 2008-09-05 Updated: 2008-09-05 - 6 views, 724 words, 4k
14 - Chapter 14 - Submitted 2008-09-06 Updated: 2008-09-06 - 9 views, 549 words, 2k

17 Comments (Most recent 10). Show All

Sep 7, 2008 11:47 AM by: Forestdahedgehog chapter 14

O_______O WOA.....thts lik...shocking.....BUT AWSUM XD WOOT

Sep 6, 2008 06:10 PM by: Forestdahedgehog chapter 13

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO DX MOR!!!!WOOT >W< lol...pit had his neck broken O____O woah,tis is a berry violent chAWSUM

Sep 6, 2008 06:44 PM by: kyuubi64 chapter 0

bwahahaha! told ya!

Sep 2, 2008 05:32 PM by: Forestdahedgehog chapter 12

O__O oh god...THIS IS INTENSE!!!I CANT WAIT 4 NEXT CH.!!!!>O<\m/ GO ABYSS I GUESS....er...well,idk if abyss being angry and deadly is a good thing..buut...WOOT!!KICK THEIR BUTTS ABYSSS WOOOOT*glomps him*>W<

Aug 31, 2008 11:15 AM by: Forestdahedgehog chapter 11

no..no..NO WAY!!!!GAHH MARINA DIED!!!O______O NOO DX AAAAAHHHH*runs in circles*O_O ;_; not marina.......ABYSS AND HEER LOVED EACHOTHER DXXXXXXXX

Aug 31, 2008 11:53 AM by: kyuubi64 chapter 0

I KNOW!!!!!!!!! but you totally shouldve known. i foreshadowed so much in the last chapter. especially when i said "either one could die tomorrow" and guess what? marina died the next day! hahahaha im so crazy... and dont worry, im not gonna kill everyone off

Aug 31, 2008 05:43 PM by: Forestdahedgehog chapter 0

yeahh...thts true...GAH DX it still so shocking thoooo!!!!but r u sure ur not rllyy gonna kill every1 >o> lol jk xD..well,i cant wait 4 the next ch.still!!>W<

Aug 31, 2008 06:00 PM by: kyuubi64 chapter 0

:) dont worry, i wont... or am i?... hahaha no im not

Sep 1, 2008 09:24 AM by: Forestdahedgehog chapter 0

O______O lol xD

Aug 30, 2008 06:49 AM by: Forestdahedgehog chapter 10

O_________O..WOAH...this... raef does not sound lik a good person..HE KILLED THE CLASS o_e....well...lets c wat happens next-XD WOOT

Aug 30, 2008 12:01 PM by: kyuubi64 chapter 0

roflmao

Aug 29, 2008 01:14 PM by: Forestdahedgehog chapter 9

woah...tht was lik..freaking...kick @$$!!!!!woah!!and end of part!!!>W< squueeee!!!cant wait 4 prt 2!!!!woot!!!XDif there is gonna b one 0_o >w< lol*tear of joy* awsome with the detalis still,and...well,with everything XD im sho happeh tht ur back on writing!!!WOOT XD

Aug 29, 2008 03:44 PM by: kyuubi64 chapter 0

and btw, i dont mean theres gonna be another story or something when i say end of part 1. i mean part 1 of this story

Aug 31, 2008 11:11 AM by: Forestdahedgehog chapter 0

oh,ok,lol...so then...hm....WOOT

Aug 29, 2008 02:37 PM by: kyuubi64 chapter 0

of course theirs gonna be a second chaptah!!!!!!! and it just so happens that i have nothing better to do this weekend!!!!!!!!!!! YAY

Jul 24, 2008 03:18 PM by: Forestdahedgehog chapter 0

hey,when ish u gonna FINISH WRITING THE NEXT CH.?!?!?!?I WANTS 2 REEEAADD IITTTT XD lol,kk u can take ur time XD

Jun 19, 2008 08:53 PM by: Forestdahedgehog chapter 8

COOL!!A TALKING SWORD!!I HAS 2 GET ME 1 OF THEM!!!!*starts looking on ebay*awsome ch.!!rite mor plz!

Jun 17, 2008 12:08 PM by: Forestdahedgehog chapter 7

.......HOLY CRAP!!!THAT WAS GETTING LIEK REALLY AWSOME!!!I was like,NO PIT DONT REALLY KILL ABYSS!!!(and that sword u gave pit,sounds liek,really awsome!!)and then that wolf came,and i was lik,woah,pit ur really in for it!!!and..wow..RITE MOR!!!!\m/>w<\m/

Jun 17, 2008 12:14 PM by: kyuubi64 chapter 0

hehehehe i appreciate your support

Jun 17, 2008 12:55 PM by: Forestdahedgehog chapter 0

lol,ur welcome^^

Jun 15, 2008 08:35 PM by: kyuubi64 chapter 0

MUAHAHAHA!!! its not even half way into the story!

Jun 16, 2008 10:06 AM by: Forestdahedgehog chapter 0

WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

Jun 15, 2008 08:28 PM by: Forestdahedgehog chapter 6

OOOHH!!THIS IS GETTING GOODD!!!!!!ME CANT WAIT 4 NEXT CHAPTER!!AND YESH!PIT IS IN THEIR!!WOOT!!

Jun 15, 2008 08:25 PM by: Forestdahedgehog chapter 5

WOAH!!SOO GOOOD!!!WOOT!!

Jun 12, 2008 11:03 AM by: kyuubi64 chapter 0

Jun 12, 2008 06:56 AM by: Forestdahedgehog chapter 4

WOAH!!!HOLY CRAP!!!IT WAS LIK GETTING GOOD!!!!!I WAS LIK,oh wat does she c??AND THEN IT STOPPED,AND I WAS LIK,NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!ME HAS 2 C WAT IT WAZ!!!!IT WAS GETTING REALLY GOOD!!!WITE MOR AND NO I DIDNT PUT SUGAR IN MY CEREAL OR ORANGE JUICE*shifty eyes,while twitching*

Jun 11, 2008 07:18 PM by: Forestdahedgehog chapter 3

WWWWWWWWOOOOOOOOOTTTTTTTT!!!!!SSSOOOO CCCCOOOOLLL!!!those demon dogs sound AWSOME!!!RITE MOR PLZ!

Jun 11, 2008 07:15 PM by: Forestdahedgehog chapter 2

OMG!!!SOO COOOLLLL!!!!YYYYAAAAYYY!!!THIIISSSS STTTRRRRY KICKS BUTT!!*literally,lol*WOOOOOOOOTTTTTTTT!!!SO AWSOME!

Jun 10, 2008 07:33 PM by: Forestdahedgehog chapter 1

OMG!!!SOOO COOOLLLL!!!!

random~i have a new oc named pit,he ish a vampire XD lol..just some randomness^-^'''