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Hospital Induced Sickness by Sliver
View as PDF, Submitted: 2004-08-02, Updated: 2004-08-26, Chapters: 5, Size: 52K, Words: 9566, Comments: 72, Views: 1008   
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Sars and Ecstacy, Do i REALLY have to expalin this one?
Chapters
1 - Awakenings - Submitted 2004-08-02 Updated: 2004-08-02 - 196 views, 2168 words, 12k
2 - Realizations - Submitted 2004-08-03 Updated: 2004-08-03 - 138 views, 2282 words, 12k
3 - Home - Submitted 2004-08-08 Updated: 2004-08-08 - 128 views, 1961 words, 10k
4 - Sickness - Submitted 2004-08-10 Updated: 2004-08-10 - 123 views, 1580 words, 9k
5 - Sex education - Submitted 2004-08-26 Updated: 2004-08-26 - 185 views, 1575 words, 9k

72 Comments (Most recent 10). Show All
FatalFay
Jun 5, 2008 02:41 PM by: FatalFay chapter 0
this story is the best!!!
 
BrazillianPaula13
Mar 17, 2007 12:38 PM by: BrazillianPaula13 chapter 5
This story is soo cool! Why don't you write more? I'm sure other people would love it, too. ^^
*faves*
 
Hieis-true-wife
Dec 30, 2006 01:17 PM by: Hieis-true-wife chapter 5
love it!!! that is all there is to it... hehe IV and Sutcher was funny and the ranting was funny too
 
fuzzy_the_bear
Jul 29, 2006 10:28 AM by: fuzzy_the_bear chapter 5
this is awesome please add more *faves*
 
InvaderRebecca
Jun 9, 2006 01:09 PM by: InvaderRebecca chapter 5
it's great! i love this story *favvaasss*
 
Blood-Thirsty-Kitten
Mar 11, 2006 07:50 AM by: Blood-Thirsty-Kitten chapter 1
DAM! I luv it... pls tell me more... exspecially with Sars and Ecstasy hittin it off... that was pretty intense shoot there...
 
Sasaki
Feb 28, 2006 05:23 AM by: Sasaki chapter 1
ohmygod!
I'm so glad I found this story, I love your work with Hospital introduced sickness!! XD (gah my spelling sucks)
Looking forward for more
 
Sly_Cooper
Feb 20, 2006 09:30 PM by: Sly_Cooper chapter 2
This is really good, I am loving the way you write. *wishes he could write so well, then shakes his head and returns to reality*
Sars is my favorite character, he reminds me of... someone I knew a million years ago.. Well, anyway, 'tis a great story. *thumbs-up*
 
Sly_Cooper
Feb 18, 2006 09:48 PM by: Sly_Cooper chapter 1
This is simply bloody brilliant! Um.. is that a play on words?
*staring at the "She pointed to the dark red puddle that was slowly growing beneath him" part*
If it is, lol.
That's an awesome story! *keep up the good work!
 
i_luv_freckled_pancakes
Feb 17, 2006 10:55 PM by: i_luv_freckled_pancakes chapter 1
thats fucking awsome! *favs*
 
inuyasha902105454
Nov 5, 2005 06:46 AM by: inuyasha902105454 chapter 3
I want to know what whoud hav hapend if her litle sister hadent come home!
 
wolfchick
Oct 25, 2005 09:35 PM by: wolfchick chapter 5
YOU MUST CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS STOREY!! ritalin reminds me of myself....heh i hate things liek that...:P anyways please!!!!! for the love of hail marry continue!!!

**Daray**
 
allergic
Oct 12, 2005 11:28 PM by: allergic chapter 5
Wow. Sars sure does have a bunch of fangirls.. but I have to admit that I like Ritalin just a little bit more than Sars. Anyways, I love H.I.S. and I hope you update soon.
 
final_flash
Aug 29, 2005 01:05 PM by: final_flash chapter 5
0.0

waaa...

i love this story. i can't quite figure out the plot just yet, but i love it.
 
shamenteen
Aug 1, 2005 09:36 PM by: shamenteen chapter 5
I'm not going to kiss your @$$ but I am going to become a fan. Sars is the best hands down. Hope you update soon. Agree with your rant about the human population and all. Hope you update this soon. *favs*
 
ZheMustace
Jul 22, 2005 11:41 AM by: ZheMustace chapter 5
pimp.
 
Areya
May 29, 2005 03:21 PM by: Areya chapter 5
YES ALL
 
Areya
May 29, 2005 03:21 PM by: Areya chapter 5
YES ALL
 
S_dragon_master
May 26, 2005 03:53 PM by: S_dragon_master chapter 5
great story ive been a fan of ur art for ages but i neva read ur storys dunno y i just diddent dwi but anyway i hav now and plzzzz up date this is a great story and far from finished
 
Areya
Feb 28, 2005 08:13 PM by: Areya chapter 5
I WILL Worship!! *Hands and knees and bows up and down* all hale SLIVER! FOR SHE NEEDS TO POST CHAPTER SIX!!!!!!!!
 
Nenshou_Nai_Kon
Feb 19, 2005 12:17 PM by: Nenshou_Nai_Kon chapter 5
-__- I want to slap VR I hate smartasses but sadly i am one of them. I don't act it though. If you met me you'd think i was a dumd idiot retard ,but if you saw my reportcard you'd be suprised at the results. By the way I worship you , but i kiss no @$$. others kiss mine, but not the other way around.Oh yeah and RITALIN ROCKS @$$!!!
 
Talin
Feb 16, 2005 05:10 PM by: Talin chapter 5
I read this whole story and it was really good! I loved it so much I added it to my favorites, I hope you still update, even thought you've left....If you do I will be very happy!
 
sars_is_my_friend
Feb 2, 2005 02:39 PM by: sars_is_my_friend chapter 5
c'mon.....Sars is the sexiest one of them all! He's mine! *grabs Sars and bares fangs* So back off!
 
sars_is_my_friend
Feb 2, 2005 02:39 PM by: sars_is_my_friend chapter 5
c'mon.....Sars is the sexiest one of them all! He's mine! *grabs Sars and bares fangs* So back off!
 
sars_is_my_friend
Jan 31, 2005 03:02 PM by: sars_is_my_friend chapter 5
*clinging to the computer monitor screen thing* must..........read........more..........ABOUT SARS!sorry, got a little carried away...duh you did. shut up! no! then leave me alone. I don't think i will*throws a chair*Okay, then.....
well, write some more!
 
KichigaiNeko-Chan
Jan 8, 2005 01:48 AM by: KichigaiNeko-Chan chapter 5
Meh is learning!
 
Rei_Anul_Sama
Nov 26, 2004 06:58 PM by: Rei_Anul_Sama chapter 5
MORE!!!!!

GO RITALIN!!!!!

He's right about how humans should just die off...but about the rest, i'm not so sure...
 
demonsaintdante
Nov 14, 2004 10:06 AM by: demonsaintdante chapter 5
Why girls go after the one that is willing to kill them without a thought it beyond me. 0_o.

=and i think VR Jays idea would work better like this.=

The human anatomy does nothing for me…I find absolutely no excitement in grinding my sweaty body against someone else…” He turned to leave

The human form does nothing for me…I find absolutely no excitement in grinding my sweaty body against someone else…” He turned to leave
 
VR_Jay
Nov 7, 2004 02:59 AM by: VR_Jay chapter 5
Incorrect, mskchick, Ritalin is *not* yours. You see, Ritalin is a fictional character created by the twisted mind of our dear Sliver. He exists on paper alone. Therefore, it is both impossible and improbable for you to have any sort of relations with him, sexual or otherwise, as you so adamently seem to think.

On a different note, I find Ritalin to be a most facinanting character. More in depth than your others. That little speach he gave really meshed well with the personna you were trying to create. Couldn't have done it better myself. One thing to say is watch the repetition of certain words. Example:

”The human body does nothing for me…I find absolutely no excitement in grinding my sweaty body against someone else…” He turned to leave.

Instead of saying body twice, try useing another word like "form".

”The human body does nothing for me…I find absolutely no excitement in grinding my sweaty form against someone else…” He turned to leave.

Meh, just a suggetsion, and feel free to smack me if you see fit.
 
VR_Jay
Nov 7, 2004 02:37 AM by: VR_Jay chapter 3
Puting Sars in a fetal position was a nice touch. Gives you whole new outlook on sexual roles.
 
VR_Jay
Nov 7, 2004 02:24 AM by: VR_Jay chapter 2
Awww, how insightful. I think Ritalin’s just a dick. ^^
 
mskchick
Oct 22, 2004 07:08 PM by: mskchick chapter 5
p.s. Ritalin is MINE *grabs him and runs out of fanart right in to a tree*@_@
 
mskchick
Oct 22, 2004 07:04 PM by: mskchick chapter 5
noooooooooo this can't b the end KEEP GOING PLEASE!!!!!!!! ur stories r the BOMB!!!!!!!
 
demonsaintdante
Oct 5, 2004 03:20 PM by: demonsaintdante chapter 5
"Out of all the times you screamed my name...I enjoyed the last one the most.”
-Ritalin

Love the story keep it going.
Exstacy kicks @$$... she has to be my favorite character.

You know your getting to popular when annoying fan girls start going after you art.
 
Dion_Michaeline
Sep 12, 2004 07:15 PM by: Dion_Michaeline chapter 5
u kick @$$!! please write more!!
 
necromancer_boy
Sep 9, 2004 12:48 PM by: necromancer_boy chapter 5
AAHH! i need closure AGAIN! And my needle doesn't work!
Eliza: that's cause you've built up a resistance to sedatives.
Me: And why did you not see fit to tell me this?
Eliza: it was funny to watch you freak out.
Me: Tolstoy!
Tolstoy: Oh, god, you built up a resistance again? *sighs*\
me: I'm surrounded by the dead and THEY CAN'T HELP ME!
 
hard_rocker
Sep 3, 2004 08:16 PM by: hard_rocker chapter 5
wow. this chapter was short, but it was good. anyways. ritalin's wrong. ecstacy isn't a whore she's awesome lol. ok well keep up the good work and make more... i'll defiently worship you... but i'm am NOT kissing your @$$. lol. keep it up!!!
 
Shikikami
Sep 2, 2004 11:07 AM by: Shikikami chapter 3
i like it yet my brain is still empty of ideas for a story do u think u can help me i have charechter i added two more check um out
 
Shikikami
Sep 2, 2004 10:51 AM by: Shikikami chapter 2
I think Ritalin is just lonly and feels that he can only trust himself beacause of past expieriences
 
Shikikami
Sep 2, 2004 10:34 AM by: Shikikami chapter 1
i so toatally love it i was wondering how they got thier names now i can possibly start my own story maybe i will siriouslly need help, but thats whats school is for one more week and and im an official 6th grader yay for me!
 
Dion_Michaeline
Sep 1, 2004 01:07 PM by: Dion_Michaeline chapter 5
^.^!! YES!! I CAN FINALLY COMENT!!!! lol im ok i think ....ne way keep updating!! O.O must have more....
 
ratbrat
Aug 29, 2004 04:57 PM by: ratbrat chapter 5
mmmm ritilan is growing on me......hes soooooo....perfect.....not like i think sars is perfect....like the way you make ritilan think...its...soo perfect......mmm......yes...he is growing on me.......they do always go after the pretty ones.......



jessica eh? well...ok then....

more my friend...supply my drug...
 
Vendetta
Aug 29, 2004 01:22 PM by: Vendetta chapter 5
Whoot whoot, the familiar 'Love = Bullshit' rant. I didn't get the first part, but I guess I didn't need to keep... Now, just to wait for the next chapter.
 
Demon_Rune
Aug 28, 2004 01:04 PM by: Demon_Rune chapter 5
That was well...interesting. Never stop updating. Even if it takes awhile to do. Don't stop!
 
Koolkat6968
Aug 27, 2004 06:29 AM by: Koolkat6968 chapter 1
awesome!
 
Furby_Killer
Aug 26, 2004 03:36 PM by: Furby_Killer chapter 5
RITALIN IS SO RIGHT!!!Go him!!!!! MWHAHAHAHHAHA! great chappy....... gret story.... go you , you rock! ^^
 
EddyBones
Aug 26, 2004 02:04 PM by: EddyBones chapter 5
OOOOO.....YUMMY CHAPTERNESS!!!......i like chapters....and no....i will not worship you and/or kiss your @$$......i dont like touching ppl....ever

GO RITALIN!!!!!
 
HieiandJ-chan
Aug 26, 2004 08:39 AM by: HieiandJ-chan chapter 4
great story sliver!!!!!!!y'know i was just thinking about it and the you make sars talk sorta makes him seem to have an english accent. Does he? I was just currios.seeya!!
 
Demon_Rune
Aug 13, 2004 07:22 PM by: Demon_Rune chapter 4
Ya, know...for some strange reason, this reminds me alot of my life. I wander why?
 
Black_Crow
Aug 12, 2004 07:28 PM by: Black_Crow chapter 4
I'm LUVS this story! Sars oddly reminds me of my own boyfriend, 'cept he don't wear skirts. That's probably only because I live in the deep south and the school board's a bunch of redneck loonied who can't handle different people. Oh, well. Looking forward to the next chapter.
 
Vendetta
Aug 12, 2004 11:40 AM by: Vendetta chapter 4
Hmm... Ritalin's got a dirty little past, now dosn't he? Yeah, good story. *two thumbs up*
 
sum1whosnvrthere
Aug 11, 2004 09:08 PM by: sum1whosnvrthere chapter 4
I love your story! It's so... whats the word... interesting!! I COME BEARING GIFTS!! *hands Ecstasy a whip and bozooka* the bazooka is for fangirls! *hands Sars, a... um... uh... a ton of dog collars, and skirts* *hands silver grenades and ice cream* Heh heh!! have fun!! *goes on killing rampage with sniper rifles in hands*
 
EddyBones
Aug 11, 2004 01:52 PM by: EddyBones chapter 4
i agree with with furby_killer,GO YOU GO!!!!! AND GO SARS!!! A WINDOW CANT BEAT YOU!!!! EEEEHAAHH!!!!!....im a retard
 
ratbrat
Aug 11, 2004 09:54 AM by: ratbrat chapter 4
*cries silantly for Ritalin* aww i feel sooo sooo horroibly bad for him.....*hugs him although he would prolly kill her* whaaa!! i feel sooo bad!!! i totally understand why you did it ritilan!!! i do!!! WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!
 
Furby_Killer
Aug 10, 2004 07:25 PM by: Furby_Killer chapter 4
THIS STORY'S SOOOO GREAT!! IT ROCKS!!! GO YOU!!!
 
Furby_Killer
Aug 10, 2004 07:18 PM by: Furby_Killer chapter 3
This story's awesome!! I did that with a straw once....
 
PirateQueen
Aug 10, 2004 07:19 AM by: PirateQueen chapter 1
Yes, yes i am liking this alot, poor Sars is acting like a wimp! XD I knew this would be good because your characters are good, but this is being cool, carry on!

Ps: You do NOT SUCK! ^_^
 
Sliver
Aug 9, 2004 10:16 PM by: Sliver chapter 3
Porno fest???

HA!

..hardly...
 
Vendetta
Aug 9, 2004 08:25 PM by: Vendetta chapter 3
Wooo... a porno-fest...
 
ratbrat
Aug 9, 2004 10:08 AM by: ratbrat chapter 3
yay!! i loveth it!! woot awesome job my allmighty awesomeness!!!! *&steals sars* mine!! mwhahaha!! i [L.O.V.E.S.A.R.S] EEEEE sars!! wheeewhoooo!!!!
 
Sliver
Aug 9, 2004 09:11 AM by: Sliver chapter 3
uhh..sure...


Human sacrifices are not nessisary Xp
 
Des_the_healer
Aug 7, 2004 01:05 PM by: Des_the_healer chapter 2
All right! You made it a story! I love it!
 
Furby_Killer
Aug 6, 2004 09:52 PM by: Furby_Killer chapter 2
Your story kicks @$$, ALREADY. It's gonna be great, I can already tell. Go you. ^-^
 
Vendetta
Aug 6, 2004 08:01 AM by: Vendetta chapter 1
Oooh... squee. This is turning out to be interesting, indeed.
 
demon_loki
Aug 5, 2004 02:31 PM by: demon_loki chapter 2
loving the story so far....ive been looking forward to reading this for awhile because i love sars and ecstasy....its wierd because as im reading this the two of them seem more and more like me and my boyfriend...except that i dont do drugs and we arent quite as dirty as they are in your fanart...anyway...loving the story...especially ritalin...hes an awesome dude....puppy thingy...very good very good
 
Inus_lover
Aug 4, 2004 04:02 PM by: Inus_lover chapter 1
HORRAY!!!!!! MORE STUFFS TO READ!!!!!!! I SO LUV THIS!!!!! *adds to favs.* WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
SarsAndRum
Aug 4, 2004 12:55 PM by: SarsAndRum chapter 2
I just saw you wrote a story about Them and I must say I'm already hooked. Your skills at writing are wonderful and you can really see how the characters act. I must say I really like this Ritalin. Do you have a picture of him? I'll have to go check and see. ^_^

Wonderful story miss Sliver. Truely is.

Can't wait to read more!
 
ratbrat
Aug 4, 2004 10:37 AM by: ratbrat chapter 2
eee im soooo loving this!! you are soo great at this!! were do you come up witht hte ideas!?!? oh yes i am working on a story too!! bee looking for it!!Ritalin thinks sars is coot!! i like that!! mwhahaha!! more more!! its like a drug..for me at least!! *hugs her allmighty ruler sliv**gets her insane look* more......
 
Sumari_Kitsune
Aug 3, 2004 07:11 PM by: Sumari_Kitsune chapter 1
Wonerful! I hope you continue soon! That was a great, seriously one of the best stories I've read!!!!
 
Magical_Stan
Aug 3, 2004 10:54 AM by: Magical_Stan chapter 1
Batman...this is a cool story. o_O
 
ratbrat
Aug 3, 2004 09:55 AM by: ratbrat chapter 1
omigod!! this kix!!! write more my great all mighty ruler goddess thing!! i love it!!*is obseesed**needs to print it out* wow!! poor lil sars!! i feel sooo bad for him!!*huggles the poor lil sars* and omigod!! ecstacy has a boyfriend.....a B.O.Y.F.R.I.E.N.D. other than sars!!! wow...tell me they find out their real names!! tell me!! i wanna know sars'!! and ecstacy didnt need to say sars was adorable!! i knew that!!! keepppp going...or i will ramble on forever!!!!
 
bishyboylover
Aug 2, 2004 06:11 PM by: bishyboylover chapter 1
HAHAHAHA!!!!Sars is acting like such a baby!!!HAHAHA!!!!Awesome!!!Hope u continue!!!
 
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